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hola ky2ians😃
moi back with yet another attempt on the current CaVya situation !!
there's CaVya ...
then there's Harshad!!
and ofcourse..Raghav!!
can things ever get more complicated!!
lets explore!!
scroll down for the OS!!
Love
Rads😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
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BYZANTINE
all through my life I craved for ..
someone who'd understand me..
for who I am...
someone who'd know ...
what to say..
when to say...
cheer me up ...
when I was upset ..
I finally found HER...
But its complicated!!
*********
he's every girl's dream,
he's handsome,
he's cool,
he's caring,
he's selfless...
he handles situations like no other..
yet..
its complicated!!
*********
He'd recently lost his job, unknown to his buddies...except that special one..
he lovingly called Madhubala!!
Life was suddenly no bed of roses...it was complicated...
he had responsibilities he couldn't just run away from ,he was no longer the cool Cabir ...who would at the end of the day...lay down in his mother's lap and have no worry in the world...
things had changed ..times had changed and so had he...
he remained the Cool Cabir on the outside ...
but was still shattered on the inside...
he still remembered those dark phases ...
wherein he'd been heart broken..
unaccepted ...
unwanted...or so he thought until his friends made him realize that it was otherwise...
and then there was her...
His Madhubala...
that one girl who understood him like no other...
how she could tell what was in his mind was beyond him...
but somehow it felt right...
sharing things with her..
discussing his problem...
and just when he thought things were finally falling into place...
he ran into HIM!!
That one guy...
who 'd turned his life upside down...
who'd taught him life was way beyond his world of whims and whimsicals...
who's sudden disappearance from his life...
had made him...The Man...he now was..
who could stand on his own 2 feet!!
but now the situations were different...
he'd evolved ...
was he ready for this blast from the past?
talk about COMPLICATED!!
*********
Life had taught her a lot of things...
gone was the filmy Navya with her filmy Dreams..
gone was the Navya who's life Revolved around her Harshad ji!!
she'd evolved ...now that he was back!!
strangely enough ...it didn't bother her any more!!
that life within her ...had given her strength to withstand it all...
and Cabir had been a huge supporting pillar..
she admired the fact that despite their disagreements and their complications...
he was forever dedicated to her needs ...
ever so caring and gentle in his own twisted way...
but she was still a teen...
and people all around suggested her to give that life away...for adoption...
it was a logical thing to do...
undoubtedly...but no one understood the fact that she'd gotten attached to him/her already!!
was she ready for all that was coming in the future for her?
she wasn't sure ...
but she had faith!!
**
as the dark clouds gather around...
I keep looking for the silver lining...
and hope to succeed...
as I have the will...
and I will find the way!!
as
Edited by ..Enamour.. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its nice reallyyy nice..!!! 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice one radzz
i jus lovee CaVya now and the bonding they share👍🏼
amazingly penned down👏👏
loved itt very much😊
Edited by Anapneo3003 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Radz!!
you have no idea how much I loved this OS...
Let's start with the poem. ?.You have no clue how much I asked that poem in the beginning...
I loved both the individuals point of view also...It was so wonderfully typed away you have no idea. ?...
write more you should know I crave for your writing...
regards
safrena
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrettyAaShu

Its nice reallyyy nice..!!! 👍🏼

I am glad u liked it dear😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sherma

well written superb😊

I m glad u liked it dear😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -ScaredAngel-

Radz!!

Partner🤗
you have no idea how much I loved this OS...
u did?😃
Let's start with the poem. ?.You have no clue how much I asked that poem in the beginning...
I loved both the individuals point of view also...It was so wonderfully typed away you have no idea. ?...
awwwie..u always leave me speechless😳
write more you should know I crave for your writing...
will do...soon😉
regards
safrena

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello yaar..!😛
First of all, thanks for writing this. I really liked it a lot. I loved the way how you have written Cabir's and Navya's situation... This is too good..!😛

Keep writing more and more on CaVya...😳

And yeah, thanks for the PM!😃

-Arthy.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ah, this was so good!
I hope Cabir does realize that Navya is there for him, that she's a willing listener, someone he can share his problems with.

I hope he apologizes soon. Coz while I get he was frustrated and so ended up taking it out on Navya, there is no saying HOW she'll take it. I hope she stays strong, instead of crumbling.

*sigh*

I loved how Cabir's thoughts progressed in this!

Well written, Radsy! 🤗

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