we belong to each other..!! imp note on 76 - Page 44

Originally posted by: Toshna_1522

Sowwiieee again...waise i had a million dollar smile wen i saw ur pm...:). Love u soo much kiara...u continued this one too!!!
Loved the update!! Each part has its own beauty!!! U widout missing any line any emotion pen down evrythin so perfectly!! Kiara...i tell u..ur a super talented gal!!! Just awesome!! Love u loads!!
"BEAST has engulfed the BEAUTY within him and it waw mesmerising"...i so love this line!!!
The care YuvNil has towards manik...actually evry1 of his family(heavenly 7 n navbhini) care fr him a lot!! Hw yuvi n fenil were asking cabir to take care of manik n nt to let him break again...really heart touching...
Anaya..manik's sister..gosh! This ws hurtful!! If i cud ever go inside tv screen or the mob screen na..first wt i wud do ws kill nyonika the bitch!! Ofcourse not kishwer marchant bt killing nyonika wud b a good deed of mine!!! Huhh...hw cn someone b so mean...!!!????? Just loved how u wrote it!! U always write wt u've felt ir witnessed in ur life na kiara..it directly comes frm ur heart gal...n i love it this way!!
Nandu consoling manik aftr dat emotionall recall...i really love the love between these two!!
Corridoor scene...idk how much i loved it!!! Gal...first u made me cry..then u made me laugh!! Hats off to u gal!! Manik just pulled dat bitch's heels..n she fell...dat was freaking awesome!!!
MaNan cutie-putie romance...nandini murthy dessert is vry tasty...frm where do u think these lines han?? I loved dat scene too...
The announcement!! Gosh! It just left me completely blown away!! Great idea kiara!! Heavenly 7 navbhini performing 2gther...!! This will surely be an epic!!! Eagerly waiting fr the day v get read the ROCK CONCERT!!
THE MENDED HEARTS! I cant get enough of lovin u kiara!! Gal...u hav a specialized brain!! U described that lines!! Her fireflies and his stars,guiding light,pure heart,miss.perfectionist,fairy,princess,best friend,baby doll and the LOVE OF HIS LIFE!! Great thinking kiara!!! I just love this chapter to the core!! As this chapter is close to ur heart...now i somehow feel its close to me also!! Idk..bt i feel so!!
Love it love it love it!!!
Thnxxx fr d pm..angry wala also:)
update soon!! Love u fr continuing We Belong To Each Other...love u loads!!!
Keep writing keep smiling be happy n always stay blessed!!:)

Originally posted by: Toshna_1522

^^kiara!! Itna huge reply fr my 2 cmnts!!! Hehe..u being late than me...ur angry pms always bring smile on my face:)
heart pains gal!! I feel somethin heavy on my chest!! Heart touchin/breaking incidents happen in life...they are unexpected...hope n wish u get all d happiness u deserve!! Same to ur bestie!!
So whatever u said..in short is u love what u write!!! Nice...appreciate it:)
u'll do better then..but its beyond perfect now!! Then it will cross limits of perfection!! Hahah..
No sticking to current track..m sure i'll b havin tears in my eyes...i cant bear 2day's epi..no i cant c him like dat!! U kno i ws crying silently(so dat no1 hears me)...
Ok ok enough of this emotional track!!
Stick to ur ff!!
Love u!!
Sorry fr those harsh kinda words(my earlier cmnt in this page)...i ws frustrated actually...
U too bring a SMILE on my face:)

Okay, firstly hello everyone!! Yeah I know you all are really pissed off on me.. Like seriously how can I? How can you do this Kiara? 15 long days and no updates...

Uff... m so bad! So daggers, guns, bombs everything I mean every damn thing you can throw on me for being so late. Okay no excuses this time but kya karu..

Acha leave all this and let us all see what I have written to compensate your wait..

Hmmm...

Chapter 11:

Part A:

"Maaannikkk, did you hear it? Oh man! Like seriously vegas? Ahhh I feel like screaming...", said an overjoyed Mukti after jumping on Manik hugging him. "Oh meri gadhadhari Bhim, you are already screaming now what tumhe yahan ke glasses todne hai", said an irritated Cabir. "Oh joker, tu to chup hi reh and tu khus nahi hai kya?", asked Mukti breaking her friendly hug. "han Cabir, tu khus nahi hai kya?", questioned Manik. "Arre guys, take a break. Of course main khus hun but zaruri nahi hai na ke main meri khusi Mukti ke jaise define karu", said Cabir in teasing way enough to irritate Mukti.

"Okay guys, enough of all this let's celebrate what say?", asked Alya. Listening to party everyone started hooting and praising Alya for a wonderful idea but, the two souls looked at each other cause they were in dilemma. Nandini has already invited Manik and Saturday is the only day they can be together so she was confused as to what does she do now? She can't say no to her friends nor can she ruin their Saturday and her train of thoughts was interrupted by a call and the caller id showed CHACHI. "Guys, excuse me it's chachi", saying this she excused herself.

On call,

Nandini: Han Chachi bolo..

Chachi: Nandu, Manik ne bataya ke kya khayega wo?

Nandini: Chachi wo..

Chachi sensed a tensed Nandini and asked: Kya hua Nandu?

Nandini described the whole incident and Chachi felt bad for MaNan but she immediately came up with an idea.

Chachi: Nandu, let us do this... bring everyone to our house for party and then they will leave early as they know Chacha Chachi needs to sleep early and you both can have your lone time.

Nandini was overjoyed with the idea and she thanked Chachi zillionth times.

Shanno ji- Nandini Chachi, you all might be thinking how come she is so open about MaNan's relation, right? It's because she understands them, she knows that Manik will never leave her side and moreover she understands the generation they are leaving in. obviously she is not aware of the hot romance they are involve in but she knows that Manik will never leave her side. He will be there for her to protect her when she falls, to guide her when she is lost and to be with her always. And the incident of the past she can trust Manik blindly..

FLASHBACK **

"Nandini tum niche jao I want to talk to Manik akele main", said an angry Chachi when she found Manik in Nandini room. Even though Manik was sleeping on couch Chachi was upset because it was all hidden from her and moreover they just started dating. "Chachi but WO let me explain ", said a scared Nandini. "Nandini maine kaha na niche jao", this time her voice was much firm that she had to leave and as soon as she left Manik said, "Chachi aisa kuch bhi nahi hai jaisa aap samajh rahe hai, han main yahan aata hun roz just to see Nandini and I always sleep on this couch. Chachi aap please galat mat samjho Chachi wo I like watching her sleep she looks like a baby. Usne mujhe bht bar mana kia but main hi stubborn tha. Chachi please" he spoke all of this in a breath. For the first time in life, Manik Malhotra was scared not because he was caught but because he was afraid to lose her but what Chachi said did froze him on his place, "Manik beta, main isliye gussa nahi hunk e tum yahan ho... gussa toh main hun hi nahi but I am hurt cause tum logo ne mujhse chupaya. Manik beta tum pe main bht trust karti hun and main yeh bhi jaanti hunk e tum kya kehna chahte ho, I trust you both isliye main waise kuch samjhi nahi thi na aisa samjhi hun but main hurt hun cause tum logo ne mujhe nahi bataya. Manik beta maine kabhi bhi tumhe ghar aane se nahi rook to tum mujhe bolte to main isliye bhi shayad nahi rokti cause I trust you both. But agar tumhe kisine dekh liye hota bahar se toh? Kya tumhe lagta hai wo believe kart eke aisa kuch nahi hai? Manik hum kitna bhi bol de ke society doesn't matters to us but somewhere it does. They are always waiting for a topic to gossip and when they get it they will speak shit about it and no one is interested in listening the truth or justification cause all of us want drama in our life. Think wisely before you act", said Chachi in a most understandable tone. "and darwaze pe mat khadi re hander aaja and dono taiyar hoke niche aajana", said Chachi to Nandini when she was peeping from the door. Chachi was leaving when she turned and said again, "and yeh nahi tha ki mujhe pata nahi tha but I was waiting for you to tell. I am not only a mother to you both but I am a friend too. Aur han yeh jo kuch nahi hua humare bich wali line hain na yehi bhi mujhe pata hai kitne din rahegi. I understand we all grow up and we do need an "ACT" to show our love and I even trust you both but there is an appropriate time for all this. Have that complete trust on each other and let ur relation progress and always remember the good and bad consequences. Coz jitna mere hath main hoga utna hi main rok paungi, pyaar baya karne se nahi rok sakti par use nibhana bhi tumhe hi hoga and now stop blushing ke Chachi ne green zandi de di. Get ready and come downstairs and Han aur ek bat, Manik next time permission leke darwaze se aana ", said Chachi leaving the duo in the room all embarrassed and shy.

Six months passed away of this incident and after this incident Manik use to visit murthy's place only on Saturday asking an official permission to stay with Nandini. But things evolve and so did their relation and this naughty secret is safe only till MaNan. And moreover Saturdays and Sundays Chacha Chachi doesn't stay at Murthy's Place they stay at their new house in colaba.

FLASHBACK ENDS **

"Nandini kaha khoyi ho?", asked Manik after he saw her smiling alone holding her phone and breaking her trance she said, "kahi nahi let's go". "Okay, so guys Chachi gave this rocking idea of us celebrating with her at my place what say?", everyone started jumping with joy but a pair of hands dragged her to a corner and she knew these was coming.

"Are you insane? First of all its Saturday so Chacha Chachi Risabh they would be at colaba and its our night Nandini", cribbed Manik like a 2 year old kid complaining to his mom. Nandini snaked his arms over his neck which was a complete shock to Manik. "Stop cribbing like a baby Manik, baby karne ki age hai and tum khud baby ho rahe ho hawww very bad!", answered a bold Nandini and Manik was taken aback by her answer. "Ehem ehem, am I dreaming or are you saying all this in real?", this were the only words Manik managed to speak. Nandini pinched him hard to make him realize he is not dreaming "ouch, are you made?", was an agitated response of Manik to the sudden pinch. "I am just making you realize you are not dreaming Mr. Malhotra", said Nandini teasing him by caressing the back of his ear which she knew ignites sparks in his body. "Acting smart Miss Murthy?", asked Manik holding her deadly close to him by her waist to which Nandini replied, "Am born smart, Mr. Malhotra" and her answer made her even more closer to him. "then where did you smartness go when you were inviting our friends at your house when you know it's our night" said irritated Manik and she replied "I have made plans Mr. Malhotra and it won't fail... Chachi and I are smart don't worry and Chachi will leave after our friends leave and Chachi said she will make bahana that Chachi Chacha are at home they might sleep early and when our friends leave she will leave too and then we can be alone". "Oh, smart han chalo to let's go", Manik was leaving when she held his hand pulled him close to her and again Manik mouth turned an O' to her response which says, "and yes Manik Malhotra you are calling your dead today wait and watch", she said so seductively licking his ears in between and when she saw his mouth turned into an O' she went to his lips and sucked his lower lip seductively and kissed him and left the place. Manik was standing there trying to get a grip on what happened a minute earlier. He had never seen her so bold and he was thinking and talking to himself, "Manik I seriously feel you are calling your dead today cause she seemed to be spelled by some romantic fairy".

"Manik chale ab", asked Mukti breaking his trance and they all departed for their home and Manik went to drop Nandini.

In car,

"Nandini wo, umm I mean", Manik was actually stammering while talking to her and she was actually enjoying it. It seemed liked a role reversal for her and she moved towards Manik and Manik trying hard to concentrate while driving. She came more close near his eyes and her breath was making Manik lose his control and she said, "Abhi toh Maine sirf bola hai toh tumhari halat hai, m afraid what you will be when the night comes" and after finishing the statement she kissed Manik's neck almost giving him a love bite and Manik applied a sudden break. "What is wrong with you Nandini I would have lost the balance" said Manik a little agitated now so Nandini stopped her tantrums and sat quietly and thought of switching on the radio but to her luck and Manik's dismay the radio supported her completely.

Khwaab hoon

Main toh makhmali..

Palkon mein le ja mujhe

Maine diya mauka tujhe ajanabi

Hosh mein

Aaye naa abhi

Ik duje mein hi kahin

Khoyi rahe teri meri zindagi..

Khamoshiyan dhadkanon ki

Suna.. jaa

Jane kya hona hai kal

Aa zara

Kareeb se jo pal mile

Naseeb se

Aa jaa..

Manik changed the song but it actually seemed today was the death of Manik

Ang laga de re
Mohe rang laga de re
Ang laga de re
Mohe rang laga de re

Main toh teri joganiya
Tu jog laga de re

Jog laga de re
Prem ka rog laga de re
Main toh teri joganiyaan
Tu jog laga de re

Manik was trying hard to cope up and once again he changed the song and all the while Nandini was just laughing..

Meri jazbon ki jo bhi halat hai
Wo samjh lo na bin kahe

In labon se kahon
Jo armaan hai
Barso yeh honth chup rahe

Thandi thandi agan hain
Meethi meethi chubhan hai
Jhudti jhudti hai tujhse aas

Bheki bheki hai raatein
Mehki mehki hai saansein
Rehna rehna tu dil ke paas

Teri baahon mein rahat hai
Teri zulfhon mein jannat hai
Meri itni si hasrat hai
Gale lag na na jaa

Manik was regretting his luck and now when he changed it was an big O' to both of them but Nandini was just loving it...

Kundi mat khadkao raja
Seedha andar aao raja
Phool bicha perfume laga ke
Mood banao taaja taaja
Kundi mat khadkao raja
Seedha andar aao raja..

Manik decided it was better to off the radio as he has had enough of this control. If he would have been alone right now he would have eaten her lips but for a change he was feeling shy and this was hard for him to digest. He dropped Nandini and while he was leaving he heard a tap on his window, "tonight you will b surprised and it would be the most memorable day I promise", she said it so seductively and kissed his cheeks and went it.

It was hard for Manik to control all the emotions and at the end waiting for her and meeting her.