MANAN FF - BEYOND LOVED (DISCONTINUING) - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
It was just an amazing update dear
Acceot my buddy request
And do pm me next time if possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it's amazing...plzzz pm me whenever u update it..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry guyzz for the lage update I.was a bit buzy enjoy reading

CHAPTER 4

Manik was sitting in his balcony tuning his guitar when suddenly his phone beeped he saw message from an unknown number he opened it and a smile crept on his face the message was from none other than nandini he replied immediately

Hey how are you? And no need to say thanks-manik

One the other hand nandini was thinking whether she did right or not by messagin him 'did I do right by messaging aiyappa what he might be thinking aiyoo' she mentally slapped her 'arey y am I getting tense maine sirf ek thank yiu message th bheja hai ' and that time her phone beeped she got happy looking at the message and replied
I'm fine. And u deserve a thank you :)-nandini

Achaa okay but u wanna thank me then say it in my way*wink* -manik

Okay tell me what I have to do-nandini

Woahh I'll tell u later frst u recover-manik

Okay. Now u sleep u hv school tomorrow-nandini

Yeahh bye gn sd tc-manik

Bye gn sd tc:)-nandini

They both were smiling and blushing unknowingly though there talk was a formal one but still they liked with that thought both dozed off into deep sleep.

Next morning at school
Manik came and went to his class and met his friends

manik:hey guyzz wassup

dhruv:hey buddy

manik:where's everyone?he said finding no one except dhruv

dhruv:woahh cabir has gone to meet navya and aliya mukti on their way

manik:navya se milne ?kyu? he said surprisingly

dhruv:woahh cabir navya ko nandini ke baare me bataane gaya hai

manik:ohh acha he smiled hearing nandini's name

On the other side in navya's classroom
cabir:navya he said from a distance as she was with her friends

navya:haa bolo she said coming towards her a bit surprised as cabir never talks to her

cabir:aaj nandini school nahi aayegi

navya:kyu? kya hua she said worriedly

cabir:wohh she got a cramp in her leg

navya: hey matarani wohh thik th haina

cabir:haa whh thik hai with this he left widout giving her any chance to speak further

navya: ye puri baat sune aisa ho ni sakta she said to herself and sat on her bench

Cabir: subah subah nandu ke wajah se uss madhubala ki shakal dekhi padi be kept on blabbering while walking in the corridor

manik:cabir he shouted from he saw him walking towards the corridor he thrned back

cabir: haa manik bol

manik:kya badbada raha hai subah subah

cabir:kuch nahii

manik:acha chal theek hai and they walked towards their clssroom and sat on the last bench asusual mukti aliya and dhruv also joined them aliya nd mukti sat on one bech in front of them and dhruv wid some other guy beside them the finished their lectures and now it was their games period so they headed towards the ground they were standing near the wall
manik:guyzz let's do something tomorrow as we hv a holiday

aliya:yeahh let's party

mukti:that's an awsome idea

manik:yeahh waise be its so long we haven't partied together

aliya:yeahh okay then my place

manik: no let's do it ay my place

dhruv:okay buddy

cabir:guyzz u all party I won't be able to join u
he said a little lost

manik:cabir tu party ke liye mana kar raha h baat kya hai? he said sbockingly as cabir never says no to parties

cabir:woahh mujhe kal nandini ke ghar jaana h shaamko uske saath rehna hai

mukti:ohh tabi th tu aur party ke liye mana aisa kabi nhi ho sakta

manik was thinking something and then he said immediately
manik:arey th ek kaam kar tu usey b le aa wat say guyzz

aliya:yeahh cabir bring her wid you as she might be getting bored sitting at home

mukti:yeahh that's a good idea

cabir:okay guyzz par agar wh nahi maani toh

manik:arey me useey bat karta hu aur waise party mere yaha hai so me khud usey invite karunga

cabir:arey waah manik tu th boht smart hogaya he said mocking him and everyone laughed

manik:very funny cabir with that they all headed towards their class and attnded next of the class manik was happy as nandini wud also be there wid them and with that they finished their classes and headed towards their home

At Nandini's house
Nandini woke late as she didn't had to go school she saw the clock and it was 12pm and she was like aiyappa me itna der kaise so gayi and she walked to her washroom to get a bath now her leg was a bit fine and now she waz able to walk but not properly she was taking bath when she heard the door bell she thought' iss wakt kaun aasakta hai ohh haa maya kaki hogi her maid' she wrapped herself in a towel with her body wet and water droplets falling on her body with hair in.a messy bun she walked out of her room to open the door she opened the door and shocked to see the person standing

Sorry guyzz for this cbotu update but will compensate tomorrow by uploading next part early only wid manan scenes and plzz like and comment if h liking it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Must be Manik :P ... Update soon :D
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25
Amazing update
I read in one update soon
Loved ur story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update it has to be manik and he will be stunned to see her in towel and water dripping all over

Continue soon can't wait for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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super amazing concept..
show.bubbly childish nandani nd.mature sensior manik.. if ur going to show separation.. nd after separation rude nandani.. nd lil change.manik.
u understand na what I'm trying to.say??
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: masoomii

super amazing concept..
show.bubbly childish nandani nd.mature sensior manik.. if ur going to show separation.. nd after separation rude nandani.. nd lil change.manik.
u understand na what I'm trying to.say??



I knw wat u wanna tell but its something different coz over here love is not gonna happen soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Guyzzz whoever wants a pm buddy me and I'll send them okay next update by today afternoon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Awesome update dea. ..
Continue soonnn
If possible pm me nxt time

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