manan ff :Once in a lifetime (chapter 5 pg 7) 6july - Page 3

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awesome update
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Nice update continue soon...waiting for the surprise eagerly
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Chapter 4

Manik and nandini enter the villa the hall is decorated with manan pics which looks very beautiful there was a projector and in front of that sofa where manan were sit Wight now and manik on the projector and manan video start with first meet
Manik: you know nandini when i was bang with you naa in that bus i don't knw why i catch your fireflies i really don't know because i never help anyone i hate to help peoples i am really a monster but you make me manik you are angel nandini seriously ilove u soo much i love you
Nandini : aww manik well i love you more more more and more..and hug him and kiss on his temple manik hug her back and they are sitting at same position nandini's head on his chest and hi s head on her .and second pis college entry
Manik : you know when i saw you first time i feel something different But that time i don't understand anything just only because of your best friend navya.she broke my guitar, then our hate session, i have done lots of mistake ( with baby face)
Nandini: hehehee manik i told you naa you and me are not perfect but when we are together na everything is super perfect.wese manik our hate session is also awesome right
Manik: yep nandini its awesome our mud fight
Nandini : and store room
Manik : haaan store roon one little RAT hhahaahaa
Nandini start beating him lightly and he is continue his laughter
Manik : achaa ok now i m keep quite finger on my lips but he got some idea with wink
Manik; nandini no i am not keeping quite
Nandini why look
Manik :i keep quite only when you put your finger on my lips
Nandini: is i have any other option
Manik: do you need any option
She shook her head in yes
Manik with happy face yaah nandini even you have a better or i will say best option to keep me quite
Nandini with what look
Manik: really tumhe samjh nai aaya
Nandini: no
Manik: ok i will show you
He starts cupping her face and move towards her face nandini feels shivering by his touch she is lost on him both closed their eyes and their lips touched each other manik pulled her close and start kissing her passionately. She too responded with equal passion.he bite her lower lip which made her moan.her hand on his hair pulling him more close.which made him more crazy and wild.but now they are out of breathing so they aparted and resting their forehead on each other and then hug each otherand watch the whole pics together with remembering their movement spent together.
After that manik take her to terrace where so many fireflies kept in the jars and there are so many jars make structure like a house a small house.
Nandini get ready to go in our future.he said
Manik this is beautiful these fireflies and stars always shine i said
For us he completed the sentence
Hmm i said
Soo nandini just assume this ( poiting towards boundary created by fireflies jar shows like roon) is our small house which became home when you are with me . this is our hall .and this is our kitchen where mostly maids are allow to cook but sometimes i want to eat the best food of my life he said while kissing her hand which is made by my shining star's hand.she just smiling by listening his talk and blushing hard by his talks. And manik continue with next room that is dining
Yeeh this is kind of my favourite place nandini because you know naa i m big foodie and this is the rule of our home is only you feed me with your hands and i feed you okay soo be ready mrs malhotra. He said
She is just blushing and said would be
Haan its okay naa would be mrs malhotra. He said
So next room i said
Tumhe badi jaldi hai next room ki what is your intension with smrik he said
Woo mee wooh woo i said
Woo mee woo what me toh our music room ki baat kar raha tha tumne kya soocha haan he said
Wait a second tum wo sooch rahi thi wo cheee nandini seriously wo he said
Nandini is blushing feeling shy and said aaiiaypaa why why always you do this to me i said to myself
He start laughing and said hold on hold on now my and your favourite place our bedroom right nandu He said
Yes i said ( i know he is trying to tease me )
Ooohh really he said with wide eyes he didn't accepted this boldness
I love this bold nandu he said
What do you mean by bold i love this room because here i sleep peace fully this is our roon na toh every one love their room waaait a second you think that cheee manik you think that like seriously that cheee i said with same tone and same smrik
Now his face is like her blushing and shying
And nandu starts laughing


So this is chapter 4 i hope you all like it plz tell me if i do mistake and thankyou all for comments and liking and reading my story
Thanks alot

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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is really awesome 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update
early waiting for further parts
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I loved how Nandini did that Chee thing to Manik. Tit for tat :p
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Yes we love it plz cont soon👏
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This is just lovely... love their past talks and the room visits... so adorable... great job

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