manan ff :Once in a lifetime (chapter 5 pg 7) 6july

Hello people i m unnati and i am very new to forum. This is my first ff and here i m trying to write on manan' s life after passing from space. And plzz advance sorry for grammatical and spelling mistake.please forgive me for that .As i knw i m weak in grammar.

PROLOGUE
So in my story nandini is 23 and she join FAB 5 as lead singer (female). Every member of fab5 were very happy bcoz nandini join fab5. And she is now carer of fab5 she loves them so much and vice versa. Now the fab5 became famous , they are conducting concerts ,making albums . and manik is feeling like 'me ab apne paro pe khada ho gaya hu'. He is an awesome businessman too. And everything is perfect these days. And now thinking to propose nandini for their wedding.

What say guys should i continue or not???
Plzz comment and give me advice

wlcm dear nd Congo 4 new story sounds interesting continue soon

Yay it will be fun if u add all rasams maza ay ga haldi ki rasam mehndi sangewt schadi and all

Chapter 1

Malhotra mansion
Manik is sleeping only wearing his jeans becoz they(fab5 and nandini ) reached mumbai late night because of attending party.
Manik's phone start ringing with name flashed My shinning star.
He picked the call and said gud morning sweetheart with a sleepy and sexy voice
Nandu - gud afternoon mr manik malhotra
Manik - ohh shit i am late again
Nandu- yes ...!!
Manik- i m sorry nandu ..just wait i will be there in half an hour
Nandu want to say something but manik cuts the call, aayii appa ye ladka kab sudhrega
Chachi- jb tu mrs manik malhotra ban jayegi tb
Nandu - chaaachiii ( with blushing)
Chachi - achhaa nandu ( with teasing mode)
Nandu - isse pehle aap mujhe tease karo me rishabh se milke aati hu

Manik reached nandini's house
Chachi opens the door
Manik - hello chachi
Chachi - hello beta aao andar aao
Manik - hi buddy( and give a side hug to rishab)
Rishab also hug him and start talking to him by gestures
And leave from there

At manik's car
Manik - i am sorry nandini , me pakka kl se jaldi uthuga and yaa me tumhari sari baat manuga promise
Nandini is smiling on his innocent , kid type of behavior and kiss his cheek he is just smiling - aww my baby.manik u knw 5 saal pehle na me ye sooch bhi nai sakti thi ki monster manik ka ye cute side bhi hoga
Manik - nandini 5 saal pehle toh tum ye sooch bhi nai sakti thi that u love me like this .and monster manik ka romantic side cute side se bhi achaa h
And stop the car and tilled towards nandini to kiss and give a peak on her lips
And continue driving with talking to nandini and stopped car at shopping mall and buy some gifts for cavya ( navya's daughter)as today is her birthday and then reached to cabir's house .

Cabir house
Navya opens the door and hug nandini. And say ohh nandini tumhare sath tumhara rakshrsh bhi aaya h
Cabir - wo toh aayega hi na ye dono love birds hamesha favicol laga ke ghumte h
Manik gives what is this look and then see cavya - hey princess happy birthday
Cavya- thankyou bf
Nandini - navya- cabir-manik- BF
Cavya - yes BF mom jb me badi ho jaugi na toh manik se shadi karugi
Manik - ok princess but what about your nandini maasi .is she okay with our marriage?
Cavya - off course.ab toh nandini massi badi ho gai hai toh ab toh wo apne boyfriend se shadi karlegi na ..nandini is blushing high and turned her face down to hide
Manik- ohh that means you really want to marry me by seeing nandini and now nandini is turn her face towards manik with wide eyes and manik gives smile her and again she start blushing and he turn his face towards cavya
Cavya- yes

And manik kiss her on her cheeks
Cavya said - manik mujhe kiss mat karo jb boy girl ko kiss karta h na toh baby ho jata h
Everyone was shocked and start laughing loudly
Navya- hey mata rani yeh sab tumhari wajah se hua h pointed towards cabir
Cabir who couldn't control his laugh- meri wajah se
Navya - haan tumhari
Cabir- ohh hello madhubala ji me cavya ko ese bold jokes nai sikhata
Manik- areee navya cabir ki beti h toh bold jokes toh uska right h kyo cabir
Cabir - while giving hi-fi yo bro
Nandini - shut up guys , cavya tum mete sath chalo see there is a gifts for you
Mukti - haan nandini tum cavya ko andar le jao warna cavya hume puri biology explaine kar degi hahaaa

Evening ( cavya's birthday party at 5 star hotel)
The theme of the party is fairytale. The party place is looks like a castle beautifully decorated. and cavya is wearing baby pink gown looks like a real princess and all the girls wearing gown and boys tagxedo.and enjoing the party mean while their was a persons who is lost in his thoughts and smiling with some excitement that is noticed by cabir and said kya baat h majnu manik itna muskura kyo raha h
Manik hugs him and said nothing bro just planning something
Cabir- ok ok toh matlb ab nandini ko me officially bhabhi bol sakta hu right
Manik- right with smirk


Promo -manik proposes nandini for their marriage.



Chapter 1

It's awesome ! 👏

awsm start

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Awesome Continue soon pm me if u can

Thanks everyone for comments and for read the story i surly update it tomorrow

Love it...really cute start👍🏼