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Posted: 10 years ago
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{Part 7}

*

Manik had almost finished his mission.The medicine was almost in Nandini's mouth,and she was totally unconscious,until this very second,when she actually felt the essence of the medicine perfectly in her mouth.

Nandini's eyes were opened wide.It was a 'WTH' reaction for her.Obviously,it would have been for anybody.Where was she ? What was she doing here ? Is she sleeping here ? Was she unconscious or did something happen ? And most of all what the...what was MANIK MALHOTRA doing here ? Sitting beside her,truly close,touching her face,and making her dissolve the medicine...what was this going on ?!

It was hard to remember what happened last to her !!

She quickly sat up,and was sitting there now,though she had dissolved the medicine,it was a little spilled on her mouth.

"What...wha..tt...what...are YOU doing here in the whole heck ?" Nandini noticed Cabir now.

Manik absolutely did not know what to answer.He was shocked,even though he knew that she would wake up,he did not know,that how could she wake up this early ? He was speechless.He looked at cabir in the hope,that he would be giving a reply to Nandini,but NO,he did not say anything.The most awkward situation in his life probably

"woh...i mean..ki...woh...hum...tum..baarish...road...fever...cabir..." He looked at Cabir again,stammering,and truly feeling 'helpless'

"kya Manik...what are you saying SAY it clearly,so that I can understand"Nandini asked.

"dekho...its not like anyth"He was stopped.

"Nandini,you are at my place right now !"Finally Cabir dared to say something.

Fab 5 was known for their bullying,and strength,but they had never ever brought a girl in any member's house ever.But sometimes,you just have unexpected turns in life,you can never imagine that they can happen.

"Okay,so I am at Cabir's place,but who brought me here...why am i here ?"Still muddled.

"Nandini shanti rakho...hum sab batate hain"Cabir tried to make a little peace for her.

"ab bas...mein laayo hun tumhe yahan...okay ? any probs ? i don't think you should be having..right ? cos i was the one who carried you to my car...because you had almost fainted...and you know tum kitni moti ho ? no one can imagine you like this !" It was clear that it was the END of manik's patience level.He said,everything in one go,not leaving any moment for Nandini to speak again,but then he stopped for a moment and...

"What the...mein...aur moti...? tumhe mein kya dikhayi deti hun ? what do i look like to you ? a dinosaur...? i never knew you'd say such a thing ? No,actually I knew,too obvious...kisne bola tha tumhe..who had told you to lift me up ? Gosh...did you lift me and...oh no... have you ever imagined mujhe kitna bura lagega...how bad am i gonna feel,if you will hold me ? you never imagined this right ?"It was time for her to say something now probably.

"what ? what did you just say ? you are gonna feel bad that I had lifted you up ? you dunno,but girls die for this...!"They did die for this,every girl wanted Manik to do this."ek toh bhalayi ka zamaana hi nahi raha hai...first of all i help you,then you,on your own,are saying ridiculous things about me ?! now,i know,how you feel about me in your mind"

"yeah this is how i do feel about you,but may i know how in the heck it matters to you Mr.Manik ?"

It shouldn't have.Shouldn't.Then why ? Was it a misunderstanding ? No,it shouldn't have been one,then how come did he say this ?
Nothing short of misery for a person,that too one of the most popular guy in the whole college.
Manik had absolutely no words,it was worse than the last time.Truly.He wished that it won't have had been.The problem would have simply solved if he had left her there alone.Why was she mattering him even at that very moment ? But for every problem,there is a "bhai".

"yaar,what the heck are you guys fighting upon ? Nandini,i dunno and i don't wanna know about how you feel,and Manik I dunno how you ended up with this,but Nandini,he genuinely cared for you and brought you here ... right Manik ?"Teasing mode ON.Check ?

"what did you say...no not at all...i don't care for her...yeh toh bad humanity ke liye tha...just because i knew ... i would have been the ultimate culprit if i won't have brought here"

"oh..so i get to know why you brought me here...because you would have been the culprit if anything happened to me right ?"Nandini asked in curiousity.

"yeah.right.absolutely.how can you ever imagine anything else ? oh i know nandini likes me,she has got attracted from this hot-mess am i wrong ?"

Arggghhh...how could he say this ? and...why in the hell did she say that ? oh my gosh...she was truly gonna die !

"stop it guys,say sorry to each other now"Cabir tried to stop the fight.

"Do I look like a kid to you Cabir ?"

"yeah me as well ? we are not kindergarten students now ! i am not gonna aplogise"

"neither i am"

"accha theek hai yaar...nandini,its already past two now,you can sleep here,i and manik will sleep next room...kay ? drink the medicine if you feel bad again...i am saying it just for your sake kay ? not mine !"

Nandini didn't say anything,and both boys left.

*

They were both settled now,and were in the same room.

"manik,ek baat puchu ?"

"tu itni formality kabse karne lag gaye bhai ?"

"accha then...do you actually feel for nandini ? ya fir... "

*****


Finished this part.Longish.Conversations.Sensations.

Will update If i get good response

Buddy Me If you want PMS.

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-Falaq


Edited by Myrah_Sarah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
Super funny n cute loving it
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
Loved it
Update the next soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was very nice update
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you @kirankusum and @vynashvivaiga <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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will continue this shot in a lil time :)
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This amazing SS has gotten paused for too long! Please continue again!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Cooldude101

This amazing SS has gotten paused for too long! Please continue again!😃

yep I would be continuing it surely soon :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 8...

"So,Manik do you like Nandini" Cabir asked after all that had happened today.
"What ?"Manik thought that he had heard something wrong,but he hadn't.
"Manik,do you like Nandini ?"Cabir repeated.

Manik burst out into laughter."Cabir,do you seriously think so...? do you ? i never thought like you'd think about this...do you like nandini...i don't find any other reason that why you'd be asking such sort of an obnoxious question from me"

"WHAT ? Manik,lets sleep !"
"OH lord...you seriously like Nandini ? Do you ?"
"Manik,lets sleep..and i don't like Nandini...i was planning for your love story and instead you are up to mine ? you knew right ? you knew that i was a gay and you can still ask such a question...i didn't expect that you'll be thinking like this"Cabir was angry this time,and who wouldn't have been,it was a disastrous experience for him already.

"Cabir,tu gussa hai kya mujhse ?"Manik asked,getting an ignored reaction.
"Cabir"
"Cabirrr..."And he said this a billion times more.

Cabir ignored again,switched off the lights and laid down on his bed.
"Hey cabir...tu itna hafa hai mujhse ?"Manik showed his puppy face which was not even visible."theek hai i am sorry"


*


It was early morning,when Manik woke up because of a strange sound.He moved out of his room,and went in front of the door where he saw Nandini,with her bag,fully ready to go in a suspicious way.
She wanted to go by not disturbing any of the boys.
"Nandini..are you going ? what's the time right now ? is your fever ok ?"He yawned and asked her,still looking sleepy.
"sshh...cabir is still sleeping na ? my amms says never to disturb a person who is sleeping even if he is your enemy"She whispered.
"what ? do you remember such stuff even at 5:30 at night"
"i don't have time for such stuff,i need to go or my chachi is gonna kill me"
"now don't tell me that you've never been out ever for a whole night before asking your chachi...right ? you are already eighteen"

Nandini was embarrassed,cos she had never hanged out for a whole night before this day.
She swallowed her saliva,feeling pity for herself.

"What ?! omg,have you never..i mean never did such a thing ?"He laughed."I am hanging out with F5 since I was twelve..no...eleven,and you are eighteen !" Manik did not notice but Nandini felt really humiliated again,and her face was all red.

"You know Manik Malhotra,I just hate you for this reason,you just disturb me every time,you are such a bothersome kid"Nandini bursted out.
"Kid ? Am I a kid ? Do I look you like a kid ? Look who is saying,the woman who has not even had a night out with her friends..look at yourself nandini murthy before commenting me"

Nandini's eyes were red,and her face felt more hot than before.Manik actually noticed Nandini's eyes,and they had an eyelock.They both were looking into each other's eyes,while Manik could see how sick Nandini was.
He came closer to her,and had almost touched one of her shoulders' until she removed his hand from her hot hand.

Manik felt the lightest essence of her hand and could clearly see that she was still having fever.Her touch was worse than yesterday,her soft hands were not looking tender now.
"Nandini...you...you are burning"He was concerned.
"So what ? Why do you care ? Who are you to look whether I am burning or not ?! just mind your own business and keep humiliating me again"The tone of her voice had a high pitch but was slowly getting lower and lower.

She kept her hand on her larynx and it was feeling hotter than anything.

"See I told you,you should have listened to me earlier...lemme see how's your fever and whether we need to go to the doctor or not"
Nandini took a step back,not letting Manik touch her.
She started to say something,but her voice was not coming out because of high cold and fever,and it hurted even more.

"Nandini,are you okay ? Don't make a fuss and let me do what I want to do..."
He took another two steps towards her and touched her forehead,which was burning like anything.
"o my gosh,we immediately need to do something...should I call cabir ? no,how would he know..should i call the doctor or the ambulance ... no that won't work out either...then should i take your temperature ? yeah...but we dont' have the medication still ... right ? oh no...this is taking so much of time..i don't even know what to do...i am gonna die... nandini you are okay na..don't get unconscious again..go rest on the bed...no how can you go...the fever will increase..."
Nandini had never seen Manik in such a panic where he couldn't do anything...a little bright smile appeared on her face and she kept her hand on Manik's arm slowly.

*


So,I am coming after so many months,i apologize for this.I've a speciality of leaving things like this,in a suspense...you know...i hope u all liked the part.Will continue the next part soon,if i get a good response,and this time I am surely gonna update in less than a week.
Buddy me for PMS




Edited by someonelikeyou- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey hi!!!
I just got a your pm...god know how u know me
I read it a bit...its interesting...
Kinda liked it...
Have bookmarked ...
Will read it ASAP...


STAY HAPPY STAY BLESSED...
MISHSHERGILL

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