MaNan SS:The Wish-Ch 9A/Pg 13/22 Sept

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey people,
I am falaq,you must not know me because this is my first fiction here,and i am new to this IF, and I've seen a lot of fiction,because of which I have got an inspiration to write My first Short Story named "The Wish"
I've not read many shots so I am not aware if this story resembles with any other story,so don't blame for that stuff,you may just simply say it.
As I don't have much of awareness about how to tell you about my updates,just buddy me,cos it will be easier for me to work with that.

This story will be a very slow story which will be quite long,and I may even take long breaks to complete it up,but I hope its enjoyable,and you may need to tolerate me for this.


index

Chapter1
Chapter2
Chapter3
Chapter4
Chapter5
Chapter6
Chapter7
Chapter8
Chapter 9A




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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1
"NOT AGAIN !"Mukti screamed,again for the third time,in a minute itself;"I can't actually tolerate this rainy weather again,its pathetic"
"Mukti,darling,please don't be like this,no one likes rain,you shouldn't scream like a boy,be like a lady"Aliya said,while she was putting her foundation.She was extreeemly girly,and never did tomboyish things like Mukti.
"Stop it guys...and jahan tak,its about rain,Manik LOVES rain"Cabir taunted waiting for Manik's frustrated expressions.

Cabir was the one who loved to tease people,and see their most frustrated looks.Even though he had his bad sides,his good sides,always reflected towards his friends,especially Manik.

"Cabir"Manik said,and showing that cabir can't actually provoke him.
"Manik"
"Cabir"
"tu...why are you so damn frustrating bro..you dunno anything about rain,i just love them,but it doesn't mean that i am a girl then...look mukti"
"manik rehnede,mukti,aur woh bhi ladki ?! are you kidding me ?"
"kya cabir...mein teko ladki nahi ladki nahi dikhti hun...do i look like a boy ?" Mukti slowly came towards Manik,as though she was gonna kill him"
"accha accha theek hai...sorry maate (mom)"He joined his hands in a hilarious manner and went toward Manik.
"ok guys i need to go now...need to see dhruv,anyone's coming with me?"aliya asked
"um...mein aati hun" mukti came towards aliya,and kept her right hand on aliya's shoulders"
"theek hai manik fir mein bhi ghar chalta hun...mom wait kar rhi hongi"
"cabir aaj mene teri sacchi dosti dekh li hai...mushkil wakt mein bhi dost ka saath chodd deta hai tu"Manik tried to blackmail cabir,with his cute looks.
"ai..manik tu konsi MUSHKIL probs mein aa gya hai"
And he left Manik speechless.
"okay yaar manik i seriously need to go,,,tera drama baadmein dekhunga"
"theek hai...aaj kal tu blackmail bhi nahi hota hai"
"bye"
Manik was left alone,he had to surely go somewhere now,his car was still,and he was listening to one of his fav songs in his car.

After a while,he went to a pani puri store,the rain had stopped,but the minute he lifted his pani puri,rain started and everything was destroyed including his pani puri.Everyone was in a rush,but our dear Manik,who loved rain so much,was trying to get wet totally,until his eyes went on his batchmate,Nandini Murthy.

That's it for Part one,I hope you guys like it.Will surely continue if I get a good response.
-Falaq






Edited by Myrah_Sarah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Humzy

nice start

cont soon

Thank you dear 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONIAGHOSH

awesome start

continue soon

Thanx
will continue tomorrow
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Posted: 10 years ago
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First attempt doesn't seems like
It was aweaome 😉
Welcome to the manan world🤗
And thank for d update
Update soon😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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chalo isme manik like rains instead of stars accha hai congo for the new story update soon :-))
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you everyone for your lovely comments ! :*
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Part 2

Nandini Murthy was an introvert girl.She was not like other girls,who used to be trying to seduce boys.It was an accidental case,that she was in a place like SPACE.The main reason to be there was her brother,whose treatment took most of the money earned by her grandmother,and at a place like SPACE,where she was getting a scholarship,she couldn't get a chance to reject it,but who knew how much she had to suffer.
Manik and Nandini were rivals,since the day she entered in the college.Even though,Manik had stopped bullying her,she always used to try getting rid of him in some or the other way.
That day,23 August 2014,when Manik had his first gaze towards Nandini in the rain,he was surprised,he had never seen her like this.He had never shown interest in her,before like this,but sometimes,rain can do a special magic over a person.
He went to her,slowly,waiting for her to see him,before he reaches to her,but NO,she was the great girl,who never showed any interest in boys.
"Hey."Manik,tried to talk to her.
Nandini,didn't reply.
"you...what are you doing here ?"
"None of your business"She said,still not looking at him for one time,but recognizing the voice.
"ARE YOU gonna REPLY ME ?"He took both of Nandini's shoulders and squeezed them,and the umbrella in Nandini's hands fell down.
And now,both of them were literally,getting wet.
"acch..hh.aa,i am waiting for my cha...aa..c.hi"She stammered.
Manik was not less than a ghost in her life,that is why she prevented going towards him,and never actually tried to get provoked by his dangerous stunts.She was very careful with him every time,but sometimes,she couldn't endure her pain.
"why is THE GREAT NANDINI MURTHY afraid of her GREAT MONSTER MANIK now ?"
She didn't reply,she was already shivering,and was getting very cold.But that wasn't the only reason,she was even afraid of Manik,and goosebumps used to come throughout her body,whenever she used to talk to him.
Manik suddenly felt Nandini's skin,his devil face turned into a sympathetic look.
"Nandini..are you fine"He was generous this time,but Nandini couldn't realize this.
"bas..you go,i will be fine"Her speech showed,how sick she felt from the inside.
"you need to come in my car...abhi"He looked at her,up to down.
"I will not come in y..o..ou..u..rrr car at all"
"I am not asking you,I am telling you to be there."He walked away,without getting a reply from her.
But Nandini didn't come.She was still like a pole.She bent a little to take her umbrella,but fell down,and the water splashed,and made a big noise.
Manik could hear her,he turned himself 180 degree,and saw her.
She was almost gonna faint until he came towards her,and gave his hand,but how in the whole heck could she accept it ?
She still did not think of Manik as a person who could help someone,and who has a good side.You know like the people say,"The first impression is the last impression".The same case was with Nandini,what she thought was is,that if Manik will give her his hand,then he will surely put her down.She used to get nightmares about these sort of things.
Finished this part :)
I am trying to make the parts bigger.
Hope you all like this.
Buddy Me If You Want PMS
-Falaq

Edited by Myrah_Sarah - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww such a lovly chapter nandu stuck between mind and heart.plzzz update asap and thanks 4 the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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aaww poor nandu its too awesome thnx for the pm dear cont soon

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