Manik & Nandini-Stars & Fireflies Part 56 on Page 145 - Page 47

Originally posted by: haritha2108

wowww manik came to knw finallyy
but nandini didnt wish manik
manik ka best birthday tho hona hi tha coz the fst person he saw when he opened hos eyes was his star
completely loving it
cant wait to know what will happen
what hell talk to nandinii
continueee sooon dear

Originally posted by: aavani

wow...finally manik found his sweet stranger...
loved the whole part...!!!
u penned it so beautifully
but again this alya is creating problems...hoping that in birthday bash manan will clear all misunderstandings...
thanks a lot for the pm
continue soon
take care

Originally posted by: apps33

Woaahhh ... Again uh nailed it...

D day cudnt get ny better fr manik...

Aftr all his day has started to d most beautiful sight he cud have eva wshed fr his lady love... Urf his stranger...nandu.. Dat too rght in his arms...

N i must say dat alya has an amazingly bad no no worst timing...

Damn i mean... D kiss miss in d show arent less dat she had to spoil it in dis one too...?

Ahh...shes soo annoying

I hate her...

Frget dat...

Bt d bst part was wen his tube light brain again did wonders...hahaha...

He finally realised who his stranger actually is...

Now its gonna b evn more fun...

Bt i felt bad fr poor nanadu... She might b really so much hurt

Manik better make it up for it...

Actually I kno ders no need to say dat...i have complete faith in him... N now dat he evn knos dat nandu nlh is his stanger... No doubt he his gonna have d bst birthday of his life...

I m just sooo xcited for his birthday at d beach house... m damn sure its gonna b soo romantic...

Just like ua other ff;-)

Actually sorry dat i didnt comment der bt d thng is i didnt had tm...was in a hurry... N according to d sizzlin hot update u had gvn needed ample tm to comment... So ill sure get back der...

Bt comin to dis... M soo eagerly waitin for d nxt update now...

Plz cont soon

Originally posted by: arshuaar

amazing update...
beautifully penned...
manik finally found his stranger...
as always DJ rocks...
waiting for Manik's birthday & Manan moments...
pls update next part soon...

Originally posted by: Sanskruti16499

Hiii

It is beautiful update

After coming from clg I opened my account nd saw PM of Star nd fireflies nd I swear

Literally I was dancing

Haaa

I know I'm behaving like stupid but when it came to MANAN then there will nothing to me nd I think same thing is also apply to you

Thanks for wishing me

I know this is imp yr for me nd I tried to balance Study nd MANAN

Nd somewhere I succeed it

Now coming to MANAN

Wow finally Manik came to know about his STRANGER

I hope soon everything will be fine

I make sure that u will proud on me soon

I'm waiting for nxt update

Eagerly

I think There confession should be done soon mostly in Party

Thanks for PM

Nd one request plz birthday party wala part write long plz

KEEP SMILING ND WRITING BEAUTIFUL UPDATES

TAKE CARE SOON UPDATE NXT PART

LOTS OF LOVE,

SAMRUDDHI

Originally posted by: cute-aly

Originally posted by: sosweetsumi

manik first please ask forgiveness from nandu then become happy
hating alya now
love the part
please do continue
bye sumi

Manik & Nandini - Stars & Fireflies 34

Manik's 19th birthday turned a lot more special.. he found her, he found her stranger.. He kept on smiling for no reason.. "Ladoo.. are you ok?" DJ asked knowing very well that her grandson can't be better then this.. "Ok.. DJ I am great..awesome..I mean it was her all this while it was her right next to me.." Manik said.. For the first time Manik's happiness overpowered him, he could not speak,he didn't wanted to speak, he just wanted to enjoy and relive the moment of finding her..

As they all drove to college DJ sat next to Manik, forcing Alya to sit back.. The entire time Manik was driving a sweet smile played on his lips reminiscing the moment when he saw the anklet.. Alya saw Manik smiling from the mirror and took it in a wrong way.. She built up her hopes at the wrong place in a wrong way by thinking this smile was for her..

Soon they all reached college to find all his friends were waiting for Manik with another cake... They all were shocked to see Alya getting down from Manik's car.. Maukti and Dhruv were happy thinking they made up but Cabir gave a questioning look to DJ as what's this happening.. DJ gestured him to ignore.. Soon Fab5 gathered in their music room to cut Manik's birthday cake... "So Manik and Alya you two made up.. awesome.." Mukti said.. "Wooo Mukti who said we are back together?" Manik questioned her.. "Mukti we are done for good ok.. We are just friends now.. I value our friendship very much and I expect Alya also will honor it.." Manik clarified the doubts which broke Alya once more..

As Fab5 were busy in their own celebrations a delivery boy walked in with huge boxes.. They all looked at each other amusingly.. Cabir opened the boxes to find clothes and accessories for the evening party.. "Oh toh Nandini took care of this as promised.." cabir said.. "Imagine that girl is planning Manik Malhotra's party..It will be a disaster.." Alya started off again.. Manik let out a huge laugh leaving everyone confused.. "There you go Alya..Now you all know the reason why Alya and I broke up, why our relationship went dead.. Her insecurity.. You are just so negative Alya about everything that you just don't even try to look for good.." Manik said.. "you know what why am I even telling you..just chuck it.." Manik took his box and walked out.. Even Cabir followed him...

DJ was sitting in her music room tuning the veena when Cabir walked in and closed the door.. "What's up partner?" DJ greeted him.. "Aree wassup ****o! yeh Manik ko kya hua.. Horlicks zyada pee liya kya.." Cabir burst into laughter.. "Shut up Cabir..Khabardaar mere ladoo ke baare mein kuch bola toh." DJ said.. "Oh partner your ladoo is turning extra meetha..kya chal raha hai?" Cabir questioned.. DJ narrated the entire morning incident how Manik found out that Nandini is the girl, his stranger.. "Arre waah then toh fireworks aaj party mein.." Cabir was too excited..

He went straight to Manik "So what's the plan Manik?" "What plan?" Manik asked.. "Come on Ladoo don't act innocent ladoo.. I know ki you know that Nandini is your stranger but does Nandini know.." Cabir pulled his leg and Manik blushed "OMG Manik Malhotra is blushing.." Cabir was surprised.. "No plan.." DJ interrupted their talk.."What?" They both were shocked... Yes Manik has make her love him for what he is.. Show her who you are, win her heart.. Great love stories are where people won battles for love.. You have to win her heart Manik the way she won yours and the way its going its not that difficult.." DJ said.. "I agree with you.." Manik said much to everyone's surprise..."Nandini will fall in love with me.. She sees Manik whom no one else can see and soon she will love that Manik and till then thi is gonna be with me.." Manik looked at the anklet and said.. He kept the anklet very carefully back in his jacket, he wanted to keep it safe till the day when he would express his love to her...

Soon the evening arrived and everyone was headed to the beach house for the best birthday party ever.. Mukti and Alya arrived together and of course they didn't like the dress Nandini sent so they altered it as per their choice which meant too short from everywhere.. "I thought the theme was masquerade medieval ball and people in that era never wore this..Should use brains some times girls.." DJ teased them.. "DJ please they are my friends.." Manik said.. he looked dapper in his royal blue and white prince suit. he looked every bit a show stopper.. "My my someone's looking handsome.." DJ said.. "Happy birthday beta.." She wished him again and left to check arrangements.. "Wow Manik you look handsome.." Mukti said as she hugged him...

Soon the party started, everyone picked up a mask of their choice.. Manik choose a mask matching to his outfit and finally it was time to cut the cake but Manik was unwilling to do so.. All through the party even among his friends he was feeling lonely because Nandini hadn't arrived.. He remembered how sad she was in the morning and his heart began to sink.. "What if she doesn't come..No no I'll go to her then.." He was self talking.. "She will come.." DJ said... "in fact look there she is.." and Manik looked in the direction of her hand and was mesmerized by what he saw.. Manik thought it was a real king's ball and he could see Cinderella walking in with all her beauty and grace...

Nandini walked in wearing a cream white ballerina gown with gold work..It was a full sleeved nett gown with a flowing train..Her hair was neatly tied in a loose back bun which let hair fall all over her face and her neck, her big gold crystal earrings were shining like stars but the most beautiful part was her smile which she flashed when Cabir went to greet her and give her a mask...

End of part 34