Manik & Nandini-Stars & Fireflies Part 56 on Page 145 - Page 38

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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey when you will update the next part
ur story is awesome
can't wait update fast please please
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Read it in one flow and man it just left speechless ,I mean I stated reading from first chapter and stopped at the thirtieth chapter in a flow .
Seriously the story,it's characters and especially the emotions reflects the immense maturity of you as a writer .
I have become a fan of yours ,
love you yarr a lot .
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry for being absent again.. I m down with viral so couldn't come online...
First of all a big big thank you to all of you for giving this story 1 million plus views.. This is such an achievement for me..

I would like to thank everyone even the silent readers who read and appreciated this story so much and made Stars and fireflies a part of their lives...

Thank you all...

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: CROCKOMICHI

Wow i was expecting this only. But i am angry with u i am in love with your ff from the first time you had started writting it and i alwsys comment or like your updates but u have never pm me plz pm me next time.




I am sorry gal if i missed you in Pm i'll make sure i won't this time...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: haritha2108

heeyyy the way ur taking story is awsomeee manik finally broke up this nyonika evil thoughts dunno what alia will do manik will aoon realises what feelings are awsomeee update thnku for pm keep writing sry i have prob in commenting that is why im not commenting for every upddate sry load of luv


Thanks a ton girl for all the love you've given to this story.. Aage loads of drama and fun in store I hope you'll like it...keep loving it...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: apps33

wwooaahhh finally the most awaited day is here

finally d grand brk up

n finally he has started listening to his heart n started thnkin abt himself rather dan only thnkin abt his frns

bt i dnt understand dat
is dat bimbo alya really dat dumb dat evn after gettin the truth out dat too loud and clear...dat he doesnt love her
yet she listened to dat neonika
like rerally

i just hope she doent do sumtgn stupid to hurt nandini again
coz if she does sumthn dis tm denm sure evn god cant save her frm d wrath of the monster


n as i said i had always been waiting for dis
n aftr finally gettin it in a grand way i m definetly lovin it

u r awesome grl
cont soon wll b curios to kno wat happens nxt



Wow just wow your comments are always such fun and pleasure to read.. Yes the most awaited day is here Manik and Alya break up.. And yes Alya can't think beyond Manik so she's being dumb

Love ya loads for your your love for story...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aavani

beautifully penned...!!!!
finally manik and alya's relation is over...!!!
hoping that soon manik will realize his true love for nandini...
thanks a lot for the pm
continue asap
take care



Thanks a lot for your love it means a lot to me.. keep those beautiful comments coming..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: -Appsy-

Oh my goodness. You left me dumbstruck, I swear.
I read entire 30 chapters in one go, I couldn't afford to leave reading them midway. But seriously, this FF makes me feel so good. I feel engrossed and captivated. This seems real as I could picturise it in front of my eyes. Thanks for this amazing story, makes me feel so happy.
Do update soon.



Thanks a ton gal.. I just feel so overwhelmed by your comments just amazing.. thank you for loving the story so much...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angel98

OMG... thats what I was expecting from you...
I love you for this...
Alya and manik's breakup...
And glad manik know that because of alya's words nandini ignoring him...
Last line was my fav... " In your dreams"...
You r superb...

Thanx for pm..

Keep writing...
Stay blessed...

LOVE,
AAROHI...



thanks Aarohi for such wonderful lines.. "in your dreams" is classic Manik Malhotra where no one can beat him...
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Manik & Nandini - Stars & Fireflies 31



Alya was left fuming with anger spitting venom...After Manik left she too left the room without speaking to anyone.. "I don't believe Manik and Alya broke up.." Mukti said.. "Whenever I looked at them I felt hope that one day even I will get my happy ending.." "Then you were looking at the wrong couple for hope.." Cabir said.. "Manik and Alya were never an 'always & forever' couple.." Cabir said.. "Have you ever seen Manik going crazy for Alya for being passionate about her..I mean insane..He was never in love with her and Alya has to accept it before she's destroyed.." Cabir warned Mukti about the dangerous consequences Alya's obsession with Manik could have..

Although Mukti still found it hard to believe that Alya and Manik broke but she did agree to speak to Alya to break her delusion about Manik and avoid any harm to Fab5.. As Mukti and Dhruv walked to look for Alya Cabir texted his partner about the latest development and left to work on his secret project with his miss Navya..

Meanwhile in DJ's office DJ and Nandini were working on Manik's birthday plans.. Nandini said "DJ should we organize a theme party?" "Wow awesome.. Kaise kar leti ho tum yeh Nandu.." DJ exclaimed "but what theme?" "Hmm.." Nandini thought for some time and said "Victorian masquerade ball.." "Awesome and epic.." DJ exclaimed and they both started working on the details.. Nandini requested for additional help and DJ readily agreed to giver her man Friday Cabir..


Just as DJ was praising Cabir in front of Nandini persuading her to hire him as her assistant, her phone beeped.. She looked it was Cabir's text... "Manik and Alya broke up.. Actually Manik broke up with her.. Congrats partner half the battle won..." The text read... "Hayee ne.. tere muhh mein ghee shakkar.." DJ shouted leaving Nandini scared... "What happened? Is all ok.." A clueless Nandini asked.. "Ok.. Things cannot get better then this.." DJ held Nandini's arms and started twriling her around.. But soon DJ was left breathless as she was an asthma patient.. She collapsed on the couch panting and short of breath leaving Nandini scared..


"DJ please calm down.. Oh aiyappa what should I do.." A shaking Nandini spoke as she tried to get her breathing to normal.. DJ asked her to get the inhaler from the bag, she was panting and sweating while gasping for breathe.. A scared Nandini ran for the bag and took the inhaler and gave it to DJ.. After some time she returned to normalcy but was weak.. She opened her eyes after a long time to see a weeping Nandini who as soon as saw she's okay hugged her.. "You should be careful DJ.." Nandini said.. "Arre I've become old beta..Its ok.." DJ replied.. "No its not ok.. There's still someone who needs you Manik..You've to take care of him.." Nandini said with a hint of sadness in her voice.. DJ took nandini's face in her hands and said "Manik doesn't need me any more Nandini... He found you.." and she kissed her forehead.. Just as DJ was talking to Nandini Cabir walked in.. DJ asked him to help Nandini he readily agreed..


Soon DJ left and it was all Nandini and Cabir.. Nandini explained the concept of the party to Cabir and first they decided on the dress code and invites.. Soon they started sending evites to everyone for the party informing them of the venue and the other details.. And soon they started working on the other details.. Cabir took the responsibility of the catering and Nandini took the responsibility of decoration and cake.. Before leaving for catering arrangements Cabir looked at Nandini and said "Manik needs you Nandini..He has been in a dark place for a long long time..You are the only ray of light, his only hope.. He is not.." "I know Cabir.." Nandini cut him in between.. "I know he hides behind this mask of a stone faced boy..Manik has a heart of gold who lives for others first and not for himself.." "Wow no wonder Manik fell for her.." Cabir smiled and mumbled and left to see the party arrangements and Nandini started to work on her part..


Manik was lying near the pool looking at stars and lost in his thoughts.. He hasn't see Nandini the whole day or heard her voice.. He wanted to tell her about his break up with Alya and much .. A huge sound of drums broke his thoughts.. He came down to see DJ dancing.. "Oyee ladoo.." She hugged him as soon as she saw him.. "You have made me the happiest person in this world..You gave me the best gift on your birthday..." She kept on dancing... "What gift.." An confused Manik asked while ordering the drummers to leave.. "Uff Manik your and Alya's breakup.." DJ winked.. "I am so so happy.." "DJ I broke from my girl friend of 6 years and you are happy.." Manik said.. "As if you are not.." DJ replied.. "Don't pretend ladoo I know you are very very happy and dying to tell this to Nandini.." Dj hit the bulls eye.. Manik smiled as soon as she heard her name.. "Where's she.." He asked.. "She's busy?" Dj replied "But I was right.. Alya is a nice girl but not for you and the one whose for you is well you know..Now go get her.." DJ said and walked off.. "I will DJ.. I will get her.." Manik spoke to himself as he saw DJ walking off and thought about Nandini..

End of Part 31..

Ciao...Love..

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