Manan SS: Tum Mile Chp24A,B&C/Page141 - Page 75

awesome part...loved it a lot
finally mayank chapter closed...thanks for that..
manan hospital scenes...true passionate love...beautiful and cute couple...!!!
loving this manan a lot...
nandini is such a sweet heart...loved her dream ...ha ha ha
u penned both chapters so perfectly...!!!
thanks a lot for the pm
continue asap
take care

with love
aavani

Yaaarrr u r awesom balkei even beyond loved it
Initially it was emotional later it was romantic every thing was portrayed so perfectly
U always surprise me alwaysss
And yes since 20 chapters hogei next wala should be with some passionate intimate scenes like really ahmmm types ;P :***
Read kerne mein itna time nhi lagta jitna likhnei mein lagta hei dil kerta read kertey he rho :****
And ramadhan mubarik to u too

I know m late...!! Sorry...
but m glad that uh ended d chapter of mayank...
n d cute romance of manan is agn back..
D childish behaviour of nandu n manik's care towards hr ws superb...
willing to see scenes like these more n more
keep writing 😊
continue soon 😊

hiii...im a g8 fan of ur writing...u have a g8 writing skills...

Wow nandu is a cutie seriously i love this part

Amazing.. I loved it... And Disney land valances thing was superb... Thanks for pm😛

Amazing update
Very emotional loved it
Continue soon

awesome update
finalyy creepy mayank role ended
cont sooon
loved manan scenes a lot

u r amazing yaar as always...
Mayank is out yuppie
ohho Manik k liye nandu ka bhaag milakha awsm 😉
Manan romance doctor teasing to manik all were awsm
Happy Ramadan to u dear...
congrats only in 20parts u cross 100pages...
Congrats yaar..keep writing
update soon waiting for nxt 😊
lv u tc keep smiling 😳