!! MANAN ff !! selfish and selfless* ( LINK TO THREAD 2) - Page 46

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Posted: 10 years ago
It was just simply fab
Yar seriously u write so so gud
Nd i just luved their outfits and the color combination
hats off to u girl u are simply awesome
And plss continue soon m waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mishi where's the next part dear waiting my nights are incomplete now a days without reading ur ff today am gonna work it up by reading previous ones but please post the next one soon😭😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zooni.shah

Mishi where's the next part dear waiting my nights are incomplete now a days without reading ur ff today am gonna work it up by reading previous ones but please post the next one soon😭😊


Oh I am so sorry sweet heart... Now I was working on banner pics for the ff...I will be updating in morning...sorry
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome amazing... It's getting damn interesting... Waiting for ur next soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update.manik trying to control hinself & thr fights so cute.and thr expresion while aryamaan dancing with mukti ...:) :)
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: mishshergill


Oh I am so sorry sweet heart... Now I was working on banner pics for the ff...I will be updating in morning...sorry

No prob sweety I will wait and I have full faith in uh n dat my wait will be worth reading the next part😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Here comes my chapter...dedicated to all beautiful commenters of my ff...you are really great motivation..

Sorry network probs..will edit later...uploading now ...

Sowieee!!!!!

Chapter 14 - DARMIYAAN

After cutting the cake . everyone relished the cake.
Manik came out of crowd and started looking for Cabir.
Seeing manik approaching towards him, Cabir practically ran towards kitchen and called out for Navya.
"Navya!!! Please get the dinner served so that all these hungry junkies can leave as early as possible" said Cabir loud enough for manik to hear and confusing her.

Before manik could walk towards Cabir,

"Rockstar!!!!" he heard a sweet beautiful excited voice which grabbed his attention.

He turned around and found a cute pretty girl walking towards him in a white beautiful frock which made her look like an angel. Manik's lips automatically curled in a sweet smile.

"You are manik, right!!!" Said the girl standing near manik and looking up as if looking at top of qutabminar. To ease her effort manik gentle picked her up to make her come at her face level.

"Yes, I am manik. how do you know me?" Asked manik sweetly.

"Who doesn't knows you...you are dada's best friend... And
Mom's partial enemy as you ragged her on first day of her collage...actually I love you for that as no one can withstand her not even Dada..." Manik was confused as he was not able to make out whom she is taking about but still kept a smile intact.
"You know ...I am biggest fan of your's ..." Said girl stretching her arms both sides as far as much as she could which made manik smile even wider in surprise.
" I everyday watch your concerts with my Dada... You are the real rockstar..." Said girl smilingly , satisfied with what she said.

"I am flattered...well ...you haven't introduced youself sweetheart"

"Oh my manners" said girl dramatically snapping her forehead making manik's eyes go wide in amusement.

"Hi... I am jiya dhawan urf junior madhubala ... Daughter of Dada and senior madhubala..." Said jiya cheekily.
Before manik could ask further jiya said
" Rockstar!! I have been searching for you for so long... I need your help right now... "

"Yes your highness! " said manik.

Manik and jiya reached the living room finding nandini arguing with a small cute boy.

"See love, I know you are the best dancer..." Said the boy strictly to nandini.

"But nikhil, baby how can I dance with some one else than my hot boyfriend" said nandini with puppy face

Manik's eyes came out of socket as he heard word boyfriend. His blood boiled at the thought of her dancing with some jerk.he was bought out of thoughts by a sudden yell near him.

"Niku... Here is my warrior... He has accepted the challenge and will win it too... Right Rockstar!!!!" Said jiya to manik. But manik was still trying to understand the increasing cast in his life plot.

"Yes my nandu ...is ready too for the dance...and will show stars to your Rockstar...Right love!!!" Said nikhol throwing a look at nandini like DARE- YOU- BACK -OFF.

"No...please!!!!" Pleaded nandini slowly.

"Scared, Miss Murthy!... Are we?" He asked smirking and moved closer to nandini and they made their way slowly towards the floor.

"No" She replied quickly.

"Then why are you trembling?"

"I'm not."

"Sure, you aren't," He said a little sarcastically. "My arm is just on vibration mode and it's making you shake along with it."

"Will you keep your sugar coated sarcasm within you otherwise I am leaving.." Zoya muttered just loud enough for his ears.

"If you say so!!" Said manik.
Nandini fumed and She was just about to take a step away from manik when she felt his hand close over hers, stopping her from moving.

Lafzon se jo tha pare
Khaalipan ko jo bhare
Kuchh to tha tere mere darmiyaan
Rishte ko kya mod doon
Naata yeh ab tod doon
Ya phir yoon hi i chhod doon, darmiyaaan
Benaam rishta wo..
Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo
Ho na sake jo bayaan, darmiyan
Darmiyan Darmiyan
Darmeyaan Darmeyan
Kuchh to tha tere-mere darmiyaan..

Next thing she knew, manik had pulled her towards him, her body crashing into his due to the suddenness of it all. Her eyes widened as she turned her head towards manik , and at about the same time she felt a tug at her hand.
Her heart skipped a beat when he placed his hand on her waist and moved her closer. She gulped and placed her hand on his shoulder and looked down while her left hand was already entwined with his right hand. He looked into her eyes while nandini sighed sadly when she heard the lyrics of the song played by the DJ . she kept on looking at random people instead of looking at him and began to slow dance with him avoiding manik's intent eyes on her.

Oh it's a special feeling
These moments between us
How will I live without you

Aankhon mein tere saaye
Chahoon to ho na paaye
Yaadon se teri faasla haye
Jaake bhi tu na jaaye
Thehri tu dil mein haaye
Hasrat si banke kyun bhala
Kyun yaad karta hoon
Mit-ta hoon banta hoon
Mujhko tu laayi yeh kahaan

Benaam rishta woh..
Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo
Ho na sake jo bayaan darmiyaan
Darmiyaan Darmiyan
Darmiaan Darmeian
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan

He ran his hands slowly over her shoulders before coming down and catching her slender waist. He picked her up from her waist to which nandini opened her arms sideways and throw her head back in pleasure. He bought her down as nandini and manik's eyes met as her body sensuously slipped down manik's front.
Nandini sadly looked away a little while controlling her heartbeat when she noticed his eyes full of emotions. Manik's tighten his dip on her waist .Nandini looked straight towards manik. She couldn't take it any more she moved away

Hard for us to say
It was so hard for us to say
Can't close a day by day
But Then the world's got me in way

Chalte thay jinpe hum-tum
Raaste woh saare hain gum
Ab kaise dhoondein manzilein
Raatein hain jaise maatam
Aate hain din bhi gumsum
Roothi hain saari mehfilein
Itna satao na, yoon yaad aao na
Ban jaaye aansoon hi zubaan

Manik tried to stop her but got his fingers entangled with her back blouse and ended up untying the dori of her blouse.
Nandini's eyes widenend in shock. She rushed backward to crash her back in his front and it seemed like another step of dance.

"You pervert!!! What the hell is wrong with you...if you had to untie it then what you pretended to tie it at first place...aiiappa!! What I am gonna do" said fuming nandini
"You really have a bad habit of assuming thing on your own..hav'nt we?" Said manik lowering his head towards nandini's ears. Nandini jerked her head up realizing that manik said exactly the same words which she had told him on their breakup time




Benaam rishta woh...
Benaam rishta woh, bechain karta jo
Ho naa sake jo bayaan darmiyaan
Darmiyaan Darmiyan
Darmeyaan Darmeyan
Kuch toh tha tere mere darmiyaan
Haaye..
Darmeyaan Darmiyan
Darmiyaan Darmeyan
Kuchh toh tha tere mere darmiyaan.

Nandini could speak anything .manik pushed her away again and this time she came crushing into his chest while looking into his eyes. Holding his shoulders, she slowly wrapped her arms around his neck while he pulled her closer, holding her from from her back blouse closely so that it remains at it's place and it is not visible to anyone. and all this while nandini was drowning deep in his eyes.

"You trust me? " said manik in mist husky voice.

"No!"Nandini snapped.

"Good to hear that..." Said manik sarcastically.

He twirled her around all of a sudden to make sure no one can see her anymore and pushed her away still holding her hand. She gulped when her back touched his front this time when he pulled her closer. She closed her eyes and shivered with the feeling that he was so close to her while he inhaled the smell of her hair and moved toward her ear.

"You trust me?" Asked manik again seeing the effect on nandini. She slightly nodded.
Manik twirled her round so that they are of
Off stage and manik pulled her in nearby room.

Manik shut the door and turned around facing the door ( what the hell manik!!! Get a grip on yourself...don't let her effect her...she will think I am still not over her... I have to not fall for her again...but as far I can see she still is affected by me)

Nandini turned around to find what has caught manik up...she was shocked to see manik standing facing his back towards him.

"Excuse me! Tie it" snapped nandini angrily.

Manik smirk as a idea popped in his mind.
He turned around and walked slowly taking calulative step which made nandini nervous.

He turned nandini around and put her hairs or other side of shoulder sensuously.
Nandini felt his fingers lightly grazing her back. As he caught hold of her dori. Her breath caught in the throat. She closed her eyes, not breathing as she felt manik tying it up with excruciating slowness which created havoc in her stomach. He was so slow that she could fell his breath on her neck.

Making her skin tangle tantalizingly. She felt weak at her knees as he pulled the knot tightly with gentle pull, small gasp left nandini's mouth. Manik smirked at effect he has on her...
(Indeed ... Feelings are mutual) manik smiled at the thought.

He bent down towards nandini's ear and said" you too are still not over me...are we?" Said manik in most husky voice as nandini jerked her head to look straight in manik's eyes.

Koi nahi hai kamaree mein,
Kya hassen mila hai pal,
Ajj shararat karne do, Kam baki karye ge kal!!!!

Mukti sang mockingly as she and Cabir found them in an intimate scene.
Cabir gave the background music gesturing as if playing drums.

Manik and nandini looked thee other side as they span aside due to sudden teasing. Nandini turned crimson as she heard the song... She rushed out of the room leaving manik , Cabir and mukti there.

"So manik, what was going on" asked mukti mocking with naughtiness.

"Hmm... Nothing, she just needed help...soo" manik stammered

"Help!!" Said mukti with wide eyes as if it was most shocking thing ever heard by her. " if you say so...but why you don't say anything when I lied out there that cake was your idea"

I was just about to snap back... But she looked at me with such emotion... That I don't had heart to break her heart ... I couldn't think of anything at that time... So I don't say anything and went with the flow"

"So you are not angry at nandini for what she did with you" asked mukti .

"mukti !! It was one of a teen age relation...one of my mery fling...and You are talking about something around 7 years ago...come on mukti" said manik.

(Lier lier !!!! Pants on fire) his brain screamed.

"Of you say so!!!" Said Cabir as if giving up as manik is not going to bend so easily and walked out but was stopped by manik.

"Cabir, we need to talk" said manik seriously making Cabir gulp in terror.

...----------------------------------------------------------------------------------please do leave you comments below...( lambaa lambaa)

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Thanx a lot for bearing my ff and flattering me with your comments...

Please buddy me for further updates...

Love u ...
Mishaa

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Posted: 10 years ago
Beat update till now!!
The hotness of MaNan bowls us over!!!
You are so getting better day by day!!
Loved the teasing and the kid's part too!!
Add some more MaNan and Kids part.. It becomes so cute!!
:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
why manik don't know jiyacabir you are gone
manan scene was damn good
Loved it
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