Mannan ff :Behind The Bench updated part 2 on pg.2 on 24/05

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys I ,Prishita,in front of u all with my first ever ff with love manan and I hope u all like this...

Part 1

Manik Manik ...,.. Whole crowd is cheering for the best of best.

Manik is the best basketball player of his team. He is a student of Warrior high. The match is going on between Warrior's & Zavire's. The match is being held in Delhi.

Manik had an image like a flirter. He never had a true love .But he has a girlfrnd name Soha.

Warrior s are losing the match becoz Manik was trapped in a traffic jame due to which he was not able to play .The coach of his team asked :-

Coach: - Where the hell is Manik??????????????????

Cabir: - Sir tension vension nakko WO aata hi hoga.

Coach: - Cabir main kaise tension Na loon main use yahan khelne ke liye laya hoon ghumne firne ke liye nai.

Cabir: - Sir ...

(Cabir was just going to complete his sentence then only Harshad interrupted)

Harshad: - Sir hum Manik ke bina bhi jeet sakte hain

Coach: - But kaise Harshad? Jab yahan captain hi nai hoga to team ka kya hoga????????

Harshad: - Sir Sirf Manik hi to nahi acha basketball player hai we are very good than him...

Coach:- Wo toh dikh hi raha hai .

Harshad:- But sir ...

Cabir: - Harshad Maine tumhe kitni baar kaha hai hi jab 2 bade baat kar rahe ho tab chote tang nai adate

Harshad: - OOO! Shut up Cabir

Coach: - Now u both shut up and socho kya kiya jaye. Match khatam hone mein bas 15 minutes baaki hai aur hame jietne ke liye kam se kam 5 baskets chahiye ...

Cabir: - Sir Aapko sochne ki koi zaroorat nai hai...

Coach: - kyun??????????

Cabir: - Kyunki sir hamare hero ne entry le liya hai ...

As soon as Manik enters, the whole crowd started cheering with more energy...

Coach: - Manik tum kahan the itna time?

Manik: - Woh sir u know Na traffic

Coach: - Ok jao and game KO hila do...

As Manik enters in the basketball court in 13 min he did 5 baskets & it was impossible for opposite team to do 2 baskets in 2 min.

And the match was won by Warrior's ...

When the match was over Manik & Cabir were talking:-

Manik: - I wish ki yahan Dhruv bhi hamare saath hota hai Na...

Cabir: - Haan yaar uska agar leg Na fracture hua hota to aaj WO bhi hamare saath khel raha hota ...

Flash back...

Manik:-Buddy kya tu PLSS jaa kar meri car se guitar le aayega?????????????

Dhruv: - Haan bilkul, Manik

Manik: - Thanks buddy...

When Dhruv was crossing the road then only ek car wala aaya aur use thok diya ... due to which his leg got fractured ...

End of flash back ...

SO guys how is the ff I just hope u liked it ...

friends please i need help in mannan banner ... can any body make it for me ... pulezzz ...

please add me in your buddy list for pm ...

thank u friendsss ...

part 2 updated on pg.2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice concept
Waiting for nandu's intro
Pls update soon

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Congo girl 4 new story its so gud plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So guys I am here with my new part

Part 2

Next part: - entry of nandini murty...

Manik: - Yeh sab meri wajah se hua hai agar Maine use USS din guitar lene nai bheja hota to aaj Dhruv ke saath ye sab nai hua hota...

Cabir:- Manik tu bhi jaanta hai isme teri koi galti nai hai .

Manik :- Nai Cabir is mein saari galti meri hi hai

Cabir :- Acha Manik let's change the topic na .

Coach:- Very gud Manik aaj tumne dikha diya ki mera tumhe captain banana ka decision bilkul sahi tha ...

Manik:- Thanx coach .

Then coach arrived .

Manik ;- I am very excited to meet fab 3.

Cabir:-Me tooo yaar.

Harshad:- Aaj to tumne dikha diya ki tum ache ho lekin next time tum dekh lena ,coach will make me the captain not uuu

Cabir:- Harshad maine tumhe kitni baar kaha hai hi jab 2 bade baat kar rahe ho tab chote tang nai adaate...

Harshad:- Oh just shut up Cabir ??????????

Manik :- U shut up and just go frm here ...

(harshad phone ranged )

Harshad:- Aaj to tum bach gaye Manik lekin next time u will pay for it ...

Mani:- O just shut upu idiot and go frm here ...

Then Harshad had gone frm there...

Manik ;-Iss Harshad ki to main ...

Cabir:- Manik Manik chod na yaar who aadat se majboor hai .Hum kyun apna uski wajah se mood kharab kar rahe hai.

When Manik and Cabir reached to Dehradun airport there they saw fab 2.

There they saw Mukti & Alia were waiting for them ...

Manik:- Guys I am very happy to see u but where is dhruv ???????????

Mukti:-Manik tu yeh kya keh raha hai Dhruv yahan kaise aa sakta hai ??

Manik:- Ya ri8 main toh bhul hi gaya tha...

Cabir:- Guys tumlog toh mujhe bhul hi gaye yaar main bhi yahan hoon ...

Mukti:- Hum tujh jaise kamine frnd ko kaise bhul sakte hain.

Alia:- Mukti is ri8 Cabir .

Cabir:- Let's have a hug...

{Then they have a fab 4 hug)

Mukti:- Not bad Manik yune toh bht acha khela itna toh main aur Alia bhi nai acha khelte girls team mein

Alia:-Manik mere paas tere liye ek surprise hai ...

Manik:- kya ?????????

Cabir:- Yaar main bhi toh wahan se aaya hoon toh mere liye surprise nai hai.

Mukti:- Waise tere liye kyun Manik ne ye match jitaya hai toh tere liye kyun ???/

Cabir:- Yaar maine bhi yeh match jitaaya hai toh pjir mere liye kyun nai...

Mukti:- Arre chal chal tu ro mat tere liye bhi hai . Chal chal

(Then Mkti and Alia took them to parking lot and there she opened the doorand guess what)

Manik:- Dhruvvv????????????

Cabir:- Kya Dhruv ?

Manik:- Dhruv tere leg theek ho gaya thank god I was so worried????????

Dhruv:- Manik tu tension na le mera leg theek ho gaya hai ...

Cabir:- Arre yaar aaj poora din yehi nikalna hai ????Manin bht thak gaya hoon ????????

Mukti:- Haan yaar tum log bht thak gaye hoge ????

Cabir:- Yaar Manik tune kaha thajab tak poora fab 5 saath nai hoga tab tak we will no have party lekin abhi to poora fab 5 saath hai to tab to we can now party na .

Manik:- Lekin tune to kaha tha ki tu toh thak gaya hai?Cabir:- Yaar tum log ko toh pata hai ki when it comes to party then Cabir is always ready ...

Mukti:- Chal chal nautanki

( Then they had all night party at Manik s home. Next day in the mrng in the front of whole assembly Manik was honoured for winning the match . On that day only Nandini joined her new basketball team in warrior high . She and Navya was new to the team .They both joined the team in class 8 and at that time whole fab5 was in class 9 .When Nandini& Navya joined the team they had a good relation with Mukti &Alia . But Nandini at that time don't like Manik because she always teases her . All the members of her team call her butter even Manik . One day When Mukti and Manik were talking Nandini felt a little jealous . She don't know why but she also knew that Manik was in relation with Soha and she hates her .But Soha was very bad girl she was dating Manik and one more boy . When Manik knew this he said to Soha:-

Manik ;-Soha tmne mujhe dhoka diya ut Why???

Soha :- Listen Manik I don't wanna keep relation with u

Manik :- Do u know wat soha we are over tumhari jaisi characterless ladki maine aaj tak nai dekhi . Just get lost

On that day only There was a bday party at Mukti's home .

Manik :- Happy bday Mukti.

Mukti :- Thank god Manik atleast tu aa toh gaya mujhe to laga ki tu uss Soha se brkup karne ke baad aayega hi nai.

Manik :- Leave it Mukti she was a passing cloud . Wo aai aur chali gayi .

On that party Nandini and Navya were also invited to the party . On that day Nandini was wearing white long top and black jeans and she was looking very hot .When Manik saw her he said to Cabir :-

Manik:- Yaar kitne hot lag rahi hai .

Cabir:- Tu sudhre ga nai na . Yaar aaj hi tera brkp hua hai aur aaj hi tu Nandini par line aar raha hai . Yaar kch to sharam kar .

Manik:- Kya karoon yaar ye dil hai ki manta nahi .

(At the time of cake cuuting Nandini and Manik both were staring at each other .After cake cutting they both had a cake fight

Manik realizes that he had feelings for Nandini and Nandini too decided that she also had feelings for Manik then they had watr fight and after sometime party was over .

Next day coach made an important announcement :-

Coach:- Nandini

Nandini :- Yes sir .

Coach :- U are the captain of girls team

Manik was very happy for her

Next day Manik s team and nandini's team went for cluster in delhi

Next part :- Manik s confession

Sooguys how is this part .I hope u liked it

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u lavina1612 and humzy[I][/I]
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Lovely update
Plz nxt prt update soon...
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Where r u ?😭 we r eagerly waiting ! Please update soon and lamba wala 😆
please continue the story ! At least for us !

The story is amazing and new please !!

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