Modern fairy tale ### manan Chapter 15 (part 1)page 69 - Page 9

It was nyc... and i dont say anything because i know you r a good writer and u know what u r writing... and i trust u that u maintain their trust part because for both of them the first thing for any relationdhip is trust...
Thanx for pm...
Waiting for what u have hidden in your mind for us nxt...

Chapter 6 (Third part)

Next morning Nandini work up with red, swollen eyes walking to kitchen for water. Navya was already in kitchen. She saw towards Nandini eyes and shouts "What happened to your eyes"? Were you crying last night, tell me right now. Nandini don't want to tell navya anything about last night. She makes excuse that because of changing weather she got eye infection that why. She put eye drops already.Navya agrees to this thing because she got eye infection whenever weather changes.So,they decided they will have day off from college.Nandini text manik "Good morning".But still there was no message from manik last night.So,she just put her phone aside and both of them just talk and watch movies.

Manik home: Cabir throw water on manik face and manik shouts cabir what the hell you are doing.Cabir "Dude you have any idea where are youright now.We travel from falls to back home Toronto.You were so heavy to carry and you still have no sense. You were sleeping like 11 hours."And your phone was ringing.I think it's Nandini, she called me too. Talk to her.Manik then remembers what happen last night and he suddenly pull cabir to bed and told him detail of last night and Nandini love confession.Cabir was happy and said "You are lucky to get Nandini,she is very pure at heart and soft soul."But mani told that he told he is not ready for all these responsibilities and relation.Cabir shocked and said "Manik,stop being jerk,don't take love for granted.She loves so much that she make first move and you broke her heart.He kick his ass and said You are big fool I have ever seen in my life and leave."Manik thinks if I am not ready,I will not force myself.He check the phone there were messages from Nandini but he didn't reply to her and get ready for college.

Otherside cabir was thinking whether he should talk to Nandini about this or no. But instead of Nandini he called navya whose number he got from manik cell. Navya pick up the call and ask "Who's this"?Cabir "That asshole who still got your number".Navya guess it in moment and shout "Cabir,you are stalking me".Listening to cabir name nandini looks towards navya and signs her to ask where manik is?. Navya asks him that where is manik.Cabir got hint it must be Nandini who is asking,he don't want to tell truth and said "He is till sleeping".Nandini thought many be that's why he is not replying to her.Then cabir talked with Nandini and suddenly mani shouts from back "Cabir lets go to college".Cabir suddenly cuts the phone and Nandini understand that manik is avoiding her.She didn't let any sad or anger on her face and navya and Nandini continue on their own things.Whole day her phone was in her hands waitimg for text but not a single message from manik.

This happens for one week. Every morning Nandini would text him and wish morning and same she do in night.But she never got any reply. So,one day she said to herself Stop now.She will not text him anymore,If he is not replying then she is forcing herself on manik.So,she stop texting him but she will still ask sometimes from cabir or mukti.Cabir and navya starts talking now and cabir would usually ask about Nandini.But Nandini never let know navya about her problem with manik.If navya would ask her about manik,she will make an excuse that he Is busy or she is bored ,not interested in talking with him anymore.Navya sense something wrong but then she leaves it because Nandini is changed snd she always smiles and not letting anything to lose her temper.

Otherside manik still talks to some other girls on dating site and he thinks about Nandini sometimes when there is no one to ask whether he eats or he went to college but he never text her back.Cabir never told him anything that he talks to navya or Nandini.Manik would flirt with other girls and these days he is talking to some girl online from same city Toronto.He told it to cabir and cabir said "Yeah.Good for you." Once Nandini an dnvay went to Toronto to meet abhi,navya post it on social site also so that manik can meet them.Nandini also called him but there was no reply ever from other side.

For 1 month there was no contact between manik and Nandini.Nandini become busy in her life and manik become busy in his life. But still Nandini always read her old conversation with manik and always stop at sending him text. Sometimes she will sit alone and thinks about all good moments with him.She will look at his eyes in pictures.

One afternoon Nandini and navya were sleeping when Nandini phone was beeping continuously.She suddenly woke up and with his sleepy eyes she grab the phone and checked her inbox.It was a long message very long message from Manik. Suddenly her eyes opened up and she read "Hey how are you.I miss you.I miss talking with you.I don't know whether I deserve your sorry or no,Whetehr I deserve you or no.But I realise I was just scared of relationship,but when I stop talking with you,there was no one to wake me up in morning,Nobody ever asks me whether I had food or no."And most important thing I want to talK you,may me after this you don't wan to talk with me ever.When I didn't talk with you,I talk with one other girl online for 1 month."So, its upto you now,if you don't want to talk with me,its okay.It was all my fault to let you go.I was fool enough to leave you.I am telling you all everything because I want to start a new,honest relationship with you.

Nandini just smiled at his long message and replied "Okay".

So,guys last part of chapter for you all. I am gonna sleep now..Tc.nd do like and comment on this one and lemme know how story is going..

Awsumm update... liked it

Ch 6 last part...amazinggg

finally he got a piece of mind

loved it update soon

This is so cool :)) !! You penned it so well! Eagerly waiting for the next update!! :D

i don understand nandu..why she is so silent and juz toleratin all this..and juz going outta her way and textng him..

don't mind but m mot liking it nandini is tolerating all dis why???plz bring aryamaan back with positive chac n plz let not manik win over nandini so easily now its ur wish wht to do as its ur story update soon

Yes agreed to all why nandini is so weak u didnt portrayed like naive girl pls let manik suffer little he should not get nandini so easily after he flirted with other gal and had timepass with other coz heis not sure he can get into relationship its a crap thing u cant play wih gals feeling just like that ,that gal is waiting for him she should not get this insult comon being g a gali know how does it feel u r awesome writer loved tour writing so much but again I m telling u that u portrayed in modern manner let it be modern way obly gal should not suffer they should pay back give respect gain respect thx dear sorry if any of my comment hurts you or any1

hey that was really awesome...by the way ,the ending msg was frm manik only na...dont tell me dat cabir had done something!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😉