Modern fairy tale ### manan Chapter 15 (part 1)page 69 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys i am unable to send pm to people who are not in my buddy list..I am trying to send but something like spam is showing up.So , i am really sorry For this.
And if you guys want you can buddy me for updates..
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wow awsm one i knw manik make it up for nandu and she forgive him soon... I hope soo there is some MANAN moment and tysm sweetie for this part and pm... love you...
and yeah I'm waiting for night
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Wow...Awsumm
Their first meeting... superbb
Hope manik mke it for nandu...n she forgive him soon...
Loved it
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Update soon
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Awesome amazing update continue soon
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Love it...can't wait to see how he makes it up to her...
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super awesome loved it

they r just so cute
but worried about soha being in the story

i hope she don't put her nose in their relation
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wow awesome
love it
continue soon
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Read all the parts in one go.
Its awesome. Continue soon
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hey dear.
i am sorry for not commenting on ur FF , as i was busy

coming to the update
loved it
nandu scared of darkness aww
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Chapter 6:

Abhi and Nandini reach home and abhi tug Nandini into bed and went to his room.Nandini lying down in her bed playing with her phone and she was checking old conversation with manik.She was thinking why is she feeling jealous of that girl,It doesn't matter to her whether she is her girlfriend or wife or anything at all. They guys are just friends.She was just collecting all memories from today night,in jealousy she went into dark room and how she hold onto manik tightly .She thinks how this guy comes into her life and the walls he was having around her heart, how slowly he remove the wall and enters into her heart.She starts feeling something different when she talks with him and she cant get over his eyes all the time.She wants to talk with him but something is not allowing her.She knows there is only place where she can clear herself out.She messaged manik"Meet me at island in 30min".She slowly slip from house without disturbing anyone.

She reach the island dipping his feet into water and looking at sky full of shining stars.Manik puts hand on her shoulders.She said "Sit manik "Manik and Nandini were now sitting and looking at water.Then manik said "So,whats my punishment For today."Nandini replied "Its not your fault.It was mine."Manik can sense something wrong in her voice,she was disturbed.He asked "What happened to you?"Is something troubling you.?Nandini said "Manik I told you about my life in start.Before you came into my life,I was cold hearted,bitch,rude and shut down every single people from my life.My family,I have seen broken relations in my family.it was only money always,love at second place that makes me shut down my heart from people.I develop fear in my heart that all relationship end at bad note.No one can have ever happy family.Then I got one broken relationship that broke me all along my soul."Then you came into my life,I talk with you,I feel better and I share everything with you.You broke my walls around my heart and it allows light into my life again.But I don't know something is stopping me to move ahead with you.I don't know what is that ?"Manik was just listening to Nandini and silently and replied "Nandini I don't know or may be I am not sure that we are good friends or more than friends.But I know one thing my day starts with you and ends with you.For me you smile,is important.I have money but may be not much as your father.But I know I will never ever let you feel all that again whatever you feel in past.I will be with you in all stages of life."And that girl is not my girlfriend .She is mukti friend who is just after me.Nandini smiled at this.

Nandini then said "Can I ask you something?" Manik "Yeah always ask me "! Nandini "Do you ever visit to falls". Manik "Yeah most of times".Nandini"Were you the one who hold one crying girl and reassure her."Manik was shocked and try to remember and said "Yeah there was one girl crying at falls,but how do you know about it."Nandini "Because that girl was me",I am living in Niagara falls and that day I was crying out after 2 years and venting all out.Manik was smiling and said "ohh baby that was you,see I always hold you.I will always always hold you in my arms." Nandini teases her and said "Seriously I was crying and you are smiling".Both of them were sitting, holding, tangling their fingers with each other and looking at water,Nandini was looking at his eyes,he was laying with Nandini hairsAnd this was their time spent together alone for first time .Then manik drop her and kisses on her forehead and leave for his house. Nandini type text :"Goodnight baby,love you" and she was not sure to send or no but then se close her eyes and click the send button .Manik smile at her message and reply back "Love you too always".Both of them dozes into sleep then with a smile on their face.

Next morning navya and Nandini leave for falls .Before leaving Nandini went to manik home to meet him. Manik was said and promise her that now he will come next weekend to falls and they would go for dinner.Nandini and navya become busy in classes but still every day Nandini and manik would talk, they will talk in text whole day and then they will do video call at night,they talk like as couple.Manik would make sure that Nandini has her food at time,sleep at time.Nandini would make sure that mnaik is getting up at time for job, college,she would call him and she loves to listen to his sleepy voice.Neither of them accepts love for each other but still they hold special place inlife.Even manik and navya also are becoming good friends. Navya spoke to cabir on phone twice but both of them were having no idea that they have already met with each other. One night Nandini grabs navya hand and both of them went to falls. As soon they sit navya asks "So, let's talk now, you are ready to share ".Nandini look at her "Yeah my mom I am ready. You are the best." I like manik,may be I am felling for him,but I still want to wait for some time to go into relationship".Navya"I am happy that you will not rush yourself into relationship now. Let your heart accept him whole and then go for it."Nandini hug her and they went back to room.

Its weekend. So free time.Navya and Nandini were hanging out at their place when manik called her and when she picks up manik said "Heyy baby ,look through our room window."Listening to this Nandini rushes to window and manik was waving at her.She runs to him and when she stands in front of him she smiles an dthey hug each other.Nandini was missing his hug so badly.For 5 min they were like this then manik said "Missing me so much".Nandini punches him and said "No, never, just hugging my friend." And they both went upstairs. Manik meet navya and they talk for so long time ,when manik said suddenly "Shit,cabir is still outside,I forget to tell him to come upstairs. Nandini said"You sit,I will go and get my crime partner and she went downstairs to get cabir.She saw cabir in the car and they both hug each other.Cabir to Nandini"Now my friend got girlfriend,I am all alone single. Nandini smiles and said "We are not couple".Cabir "Yeah dats why you guys talk whole day like couples,behave like couple and still not accepting it,great.!

Nandini and cabir went to apartment.Cabir was at back of Nandini.When Nandini move aside to let navya and cabir meet each other.When both of them saw each other ,they shouts together "you???"😕

Okayy guys here is next update..Show your likes and comments on this one too😊.remember my secret regarding this ff.Next update i will share secret with you..

Enjoy and good india to you people and morning to me😉😉😉

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