Modern fairy tale ### manan Chapter 15 (part 1)page 69 - Page 24

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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW AWESOME UPDATE
LOVE IT

CONTINUE SOON

GET WELL SOON

THANKS FOR THE PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great update...loved the discovery about their initial meeting and the littlr marriage joke was super sweet...wonderful job..
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Posted: 10 years ago
that's soo cute of Cavya...
hehehe Manan ka band bj gya lol 😆
woo manan mean to be together always..
awsm blossom superb part
ty for pm
keep smiling 😊 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 10 (part 2)

Cabir shouted form outside "If your romance is over you can come outside,abhi is waiting for nandini.Manik and Nandini broke their hug ,smiled and come outside.Nandini said "Cabir,next time you will ask for my help,I will tell you then and looks to navya."Abhi ,Nandini ,navya said bye to all and leave for their home.Abhi was going to drop both of them at falls and he has already given instructions to manik and cabir now don't go to falls as their semester is ending so they all have to concentrate on exams.On the way to falls Nandini was sleeping at back seat.Abhi and navya was in front.Abhi said to navya "I am very happy to see you and Nandini happy."Navya replied "yeah manik loves him lot,the hole she was having in her heart,manik fill that out."Abhi asked " r u happy with cabir"? Navya replied "Abhi,I don't want to think yeah me an dcabir will get married and all that,you know how cabir is,yeah I do like him but I can't force my decision on him.so both of us will try to work out and will see how it works." But you tell me what about you and mukti,you guys should get engaged now".Abhi smiled and said "No,I already had told mukti that until both of you get settled down,I am not getting married or engaged.

Abhi looks through mirror at sleeping Nandini and thinking that her life must be like this now always.He and navya and Nandini has seen so much struggle and they had bring nandini so far to make her smile.

Evening:

They guys reach falls and abhi left as he was having job next day but he gives instructions to them to concentrate on their studies now.Navya and Nandini were tired so without eating both of them went straight to bed and Nandini has already texted manik.

Whereas manik was lying down in bed and thinking how much he loves Nandini and he can't survive without her now.He just wants to introduce Nandini to his family now asap.He was looking thorugh her pictures and looking at her cuteness and how much she effoet put in their relationship.how she trusts him after everything he does in past.How she waited for him.she believed in him and now its manik responsibility to always make her smile.He open his facebook and texted his cousin"Where the hell are you,I wwant you to meet her.Call me asap."And he went to sleep thinking to talk with Nandini next morning.

Navya wake up and let Nandini sleep for some more time as she was preparing for breakfast.Manik called her"Morning baby, i love you".Nandini smiled with hi sleepy eyes and replied "Baby guess what ,I don't love you".Manik jumped from bed "what,what happened now baby.did I do any mistake again"?Nandini smiled and she replied "No baby,I mean I love you more and more".Manik relaxed and said "Don't ever say it to me again.I am not let you go anywhere.You are struck with me now for whole life."Nandini said "Okay,go have your breakfast and go to college where your dad has paid fees and now we gonn atalk only once in day and less texting as exams are coming and I don't want abhi to think that you are bad influence on me."Manik cried like baby and said "No, never only one time in day and less texting.How will I survive."Nandini replied "okay then I will call abhi right now and you gonna talk with him".Manik knows abhi would get mad at both of them and he suddenly said "Nooo,I am not gonna talk to your hitler guardian.I will cheat sometimes then."Nandini smiled at his name for abhi and said "No,he is not hitler,he just loves me lot."Manik said "Not more than me".Nandini replied"More than you baby,you have to understand both of you have different places in my life.Abhi and navya Is with me since I am kid and we are together since 6 months."But you know abhi is like my parent to me.Manik smiled and said "I know Nandini,I know how much both of them meant to you and how much I meant to you.I am just possessive for you."Nandini smiled and said "I know.okay go now.cut the call."Manik tease her and said "no,you cut first."and for 5 min both of them were playing like this and by mistake manik cuts the phone and Nandini texts him "You don't love me,you cut first" and send him wink smiley."

Navya and nandini had breakfast and went to college.Whole day all 4 of them were busy in assignments and preparing for exams.Manik texted her in afternoon"Make sure to eat and text me wen you eat something."Nandini replied "Copy that and send him kisses". Manik replied "Just kiss".

Meanwhile navya and cabir were also on phone as they were new love birds so they can't resist each other.

When college finishes and they guys reach home.Nandini calls manik and he just pick up in first ring.Nandini laughed and said "Oh,missing me so much baby".Manik replied "no,no at all,rite now I am in club enjoying with cabir".Nandini said "Okayy,then I think I disturb you,so I can cut the call an dlet you and enjoy and then I am gonna switch off my phone."Manik suddenly shouts "Noo,I was joking,you are so bad,now you know I can't survive without talking with you,you always tease me.Ofcourse I was missing you and was holding my phone and waiting for your call." Nandini asked about college and did he eat something.Manik replied "Yes mam,everything done on time.And I need your permission to go to my friends house today with cabir".Nandini smiled and said "Manik our relationship is different.I would never like to interfere in your personal life and you never need any permission from me to go anywhere.Its your life baby".Manik replied "Nandini may be you would never ask me ,but for me my life is your life,we are connected and for me you are more than girlfriend.so yes I do need to ask you".Nandini smiled and said "Okayy go baby but don't get so much drunk and text me wen u gonna sleep".

Navya and Nandini were sitting on couch and Nandini asked her"so hows everything going with cabir"? Navya replied "you know,we talk,so it's going good".And I adjusted myself not to connect yourself emotionally because he is very good friend of mine and if in case if we didn't workout I don't want our friendship to be spoiled. So,both of us are taking it slowly.Listening to this Nandini lost in thoughts somewhere and navya asked "what are you thinking now"? Nandini replied "What if me and manik got separated some day,you never know what future has hold for you". And manik is so emotionally attached and you know me too,If I was old Nandini I can survive but I don't know now.

Navya gives her strength and said "You and manik are forever couple made by god,connected by destiny.you will always be together."Nandini smiled and both of them had dinner.

Okayy guys this time it is little update..Do like and comments guys.I need your support to encourage me to push me to write down further story.So,please please leave your big big comments and

what do you think about manik cousin?.Any idea you guys want to share,all open for you.😊😊😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update 🤗
yapee I m first to comment 🥳
I think manik cousin is nandini's ex boyfriend 🤪
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Posted: 10 years ago
I think it's nandini's ex buh I hope cause of him they don't get separated 🤔
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow awesome update
love it

I think manik cousin is ariyaaman nandini's ex boyfriend then please don't separate them

continue soon thanks for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
awsm...Thnks for the lovely update...jus loved it...u penned it beautifully each and every part...
The way u write is outstanding...
i am totally in love with ur writing...ur such an awsm writer...try update soon dea...eagerly waiting for next part...continue soon..once again tnks for the wonderful update...plsss don seperate manan...manan scene is awsm..i jus loved it.. 😊 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nandini ex boyfriend or kono. Etni twist mayto may hi twister banjaogni
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Posted: 10 years ago
Its awesome
I love their long distance relationship
I think manik cousin must be nandini's ex i think soo

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