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Chapter 4b

Manik was about to kiss her someone knocked on the door...both of them stepped back n manik made nandini rest in bed n moved all the curtains n opened the door n chacha chachi n rishab was their they came inside n Hugged n congratulated manik n nandini

Chachi - beta nandu main to bata hi nahi sakti ki main kitni khush hu aur tere chacha to abhi se hone wale baby ke liye toys lena chahte the

Chacha - beta nandu amms ka call aya tha humne unhe sab bata diya aur wo bohot khush hai aur ha unhone ye bhi kaha hai ki jaisi hi tum ghar jaongi sabse pehle ayyapa ko pray karna aur thank u bolna

Nandini - ji chacha

Manik - are rishab tum kuch nahi bolonge

Then rishab made signs from his hand n said that he cant belive that he is going to be an uncle in such a young age...n everyone laughed

Chachi - acha beta dum dono bohot successful ho but abhi itne bhi bade nahi ho ki ek bache ki zimedari utha pao...to Jo bhi karonge soch samajh kar karna aur kisi experienced se advice Lena

Manik n nandini - OK chachi

Chacha - acha beta ab hum chalte hai
Kal milenge tum dono ab aram karo aur jaise discharge honga mujhe ya tumhari chachi ko bata dena

Manik - ji chacha

Then chacha chachi rishab left n dr came Inside

Dr - manik tum bahar jao mujhe nandini se baat karni hai

Manik - dr its OK apko Jo baat karni hai aap mere samne kar sakte ho

Nandini - manik agar dr ko mujhse akele me baat karni hai to karne do na force kyu kar rahe ho

Manik - OK fine aap log baat karo main bahar khada hu

Nandini - OK

Then manik went outside the room n he was standing quietly when some girls came shouting towards him n manik got scared n ran on other side n hide behind the wall n those girls were searching for him madly
On the other side dr was talking to nandini about her condition

Dr - nandini do love manik n ur baby

Nandini - of course dr ye bhi koi puchne wali baat hai...I love both of them a lot more than my life

Dr - So r u ready to chose between your love n ur dreams

Nandini - dr what happened is their any thing wrong

Dr - nandini agar tum apne baby ko normal birth dena chahti ho to pls tum delivery tak clg mat jao aur studies ka stress mat lo pls

Nandini - but dr mere clg jane se meri pregnancy me complications kaise aa sakte hai

Dr - nandini I know ki tumhe top karne ki adat hai aur top karne ke liye din raat study karna padta hai aur tum hadd se zyada weak ho u can not handle ur study n pregnancy together...it can lead u in a big trouble or ur baby can die before birth
Nandini was shocked listening to dr n tears roll down from her eyes

Dr - nandini beta itna mat socho main tumhe hamesha ke liye apni padhai chodhne ke liye nahi bol raha hu...u can continue later na

Nandini - OK dr mujhe thoda time chahiye sochne ke liye aur mujhe manik se bhi puchna honga

Dr - Maine manik se baat ki...wo nahi chahta hai ki tum clg Jana band kar do in fact he wants u to study but usne ye bhi kaha hai ki tumhara decision uska decision honga

Nandini - dr its OK mujhe sochne ke liye aur time nahi chahiye main kal hi CLG Jake baat karungi n I will continue my studies later after my delivery

Dr got happy listening to nandini decision n called manik but manik was not outside so dr send the peon to find him n send him back to the room...then peon found out manik hiding behind a wall

Peon - are sir aap yaha

Manik - are shant raho warna wo ladkiya definitely mujhe pakad lengi

Peon - sir apko dr bula rahe hai room me

Manik - acha tum mere samne khade raho main tumhare piche chup ke chalta hu

But manik is so tall that he couldn't hide himself behind the peon for a long time n those girls found him n started hugging him n took pics with him n a girl was about to kiss him on his cheeks he stopped her

Manik - sry but pls don't kiss me...that place is reserved for the love of my life

N after listing to manik all the girls went awww for him

Girl - ur wife is damn lucky to have u I wish u were my bf or hubby

Then the girls left from their n manik came back to room all sweaty

Nandini - manik what happened r u OK tumhe itna pasina kyu aa raha hai
Peon - mam wo sir ko na unke kuch fans ne pakad ke gher liya tha isliye

Nandini - aww my poor baby...come sit over hear n have some water

Dr - manik nandini maan gayi

Manik - for what

Nandini - Maine decide kiya hai ki main apni delivery tak clg nahi jaungi aur rest karungi

Manik - r u serious

Nandini - hmm

Manik - Nandini u don't need to do this

Nandini - manik I don't want to harm our baby...ab tum bolo r u OK with it

Manik - jaisa tum chahongi waisa Hi honga n I m happy ki tumne sahi decision liya khud ke liye aur humare baby ke liye

Dr - OK now sab problem solve ho chuki hai to ab nandini tum hospital se discharge ho sakti ho...


Nandini - really dr

Dr - yes ur free to go home...manik tum chalo mere saath discharge ke formality puri kar lo n Maine prescription aur medicine bhi pack karwadi hai to wo bhi le lo

Manik - OK dr...nandini main bas ata hu 2 min me

Nandini - hmmm

Then manik completed all the formalities N Came back to room n nandini was sitting on sofa as the nurse has removed the saline n packed her stuff

Nandini - ab ghar chale manik

Manik - let the security guards come then we can leave

Nandini - manik chachi ko inform kardo ki discharge ho gaya hai

Manik - ha main to bhul hi gaya tha aur cabir aur mukti ko bhi bula leta hu
Nandini - ha OK

Manik on phone - hello cabir nandini ka discharge ho gaya hai

Cabir - wow that's good yaar

Manik - ha to tu aur mukti pls yaha hospital aa jao na pls

Cabir - sry yaar manik but main abhi thoda radio station me hu kaam hai isiliye abhi aa nahi sakta...tu mukti ko call karke puch le

Manik - are its OK bro acha chal tu kaam kar main mukti ko puchta hu

Cabir - ha OK bye

Manik called mukti - hello mukti kaha hai tu...free hai kya abhi

Mukti - manik main abhi ke mom ke pass hu...tu bol na kya hua

Manik - are actually nandini ka discharge ho gaya hai to I was thinking ki tu yaha hospital me aa pls
Mukti - sry yaar manik main bas abhi ayi hu yaha aur fir itni jaldi chali jaungi to aunty ko acha nahi lagenga

Manik - its OK yaar i understand...
Acha OK fir main baad ne baat karta hu

Mukti - ha OK bye

Then manik called dhruv n then aliya n they were also busy with some work n manik got sad that no one is coming for them

Nandini - kya hua manik itne sad kyu lag rahe ho

Manik - pata nahi yaar kisi ke pass time hi nahi hai Sab kisi na kisi kaam me busy hai

Nandini - its OK manik hota hai sabki time hamesha match nahi karte hai

Manik - aisa pehli baar hua hai nandini...warna koi bhi kaam ho Sab chodh kar aa jate hai bolne par

Then nandini hugged manik n kissed him on his forehead n told him to relax then a security head came to take them

Guard - sir sari arrangements ho gayi hai aap ab Bahar nikal sakte ho

Manik - OK then let's leave...

Then manik n nandini came out of hospital n people were clicking their pictures n trying to meet them but guards were blocking them
Then both of them left for the house n manik was driving n nandini was sitting next to him


In car

Manik - oh god sometimes I feel like main kyu bana itna famous...isse acha to normal life lead karta

Nandini - manik what is wrong with u dr ne kuch kaha kya

Manik - no...actually mujhe ab unwanted crowd se frustration hone lagi hai

Nandini - manik its ok...they love u

Manik - they don't love me...they r just obsessed by me n fab5 work

Nandini - manik did u ever noticed ki jab bhi hum car me hote hai to hamesha media nahi to tumhare fans ke bare me hi baat karte hai

Manik - ya ur absolutely right I never noticed this thing before

Nandini - so then let's change the topic n talk about something else

Manik - nandini tum to medical student ho na to tumhe dr ki zarurat kyu padti hai

Nandini - manik main medical student nahi hu science ki student hu

Manik - ha to dono ek hi to hai sab kuch science me hi to ata hai

Nandini - nahi manik main chemical field me hu...tumhe to sab malum hai na fir kyu itna puch puch kar tang kar rahe ho(she turns herself n start hitting manik)

Manik - nandini be careful ur not alone now...sit properly yaar

Nandini - what yaar manik ab to tum sirf humare baby ka hi khayal rakhte ho aur mera kya

Manik - are baba main tum dono khayal rakh raha hu

Nandini - are baba mazak kar rahi hu

Then both of them reached home n entered n saw a poster written welcome back home n balloons n flowers decorated beautifully

fab4 navya n abhi cane n shouted in unison - surprize

Manik - wow guys tum sab yaha aur ye sab kya hai

Nandini - wow guys this is so cute

Manik - but tum log to bohot buzy the na

Cabir - are main aa jata tha but kya hai na ye log mere bina kaam time par khatam nahi kar sakte the

Mukti hits cabir - ae chup tu joker...
Khud to kuch kaam nahi kar raha tja bus sofe pe aram se baith kar chips khate hue order de raha tha

Aliya - so guys did u like the surprise

Manik - its amazing

Dhruv - buddy apni halat dekh thoda...go n change we will party tonight

Manik - that sounds great

Dhruv - house warming party

Nandini - what? but yaha kuch ready nahi hai...how can we have a party

Navya - nandini everything is ready...jao back garden dekh kar aao
Then manik n nandini went to back garden n it was looking breathtaking
With the Small fountain n food counter for all of them beautifully decorated by flowers

Manik - acha guys main aur nandini fresh hokar ate hai...fir sab masti karenge

Cabir - tu khud to fresh ho ja aur nandini ko yahi rehne de wo fresh nahi bhi hui na to bhi achi hi lagengi not like u junglee

Nandini side hugs manik n make a cute face - hey mera husband hai ha don't call him junglee

Manik pecks her n touches her forehead - bol bol cabir ab kya bolenga

Cabir - wah wah bhalai ka to zamana hi nahi raha...nandini ek to main tumhare liye bol raha hu aur tum iska side le rahi ho...(cabir turns around) jao main nahi baat karta tumse

Manik - wah kuch kaam nahi aya to emotional blackmail karo hai na

Nandini goes to cabir n keeps her hand on his shoulder - sry cabir maan jao na

Cabir - acha chalo maan jata hu n now don't waste time n just get fresh
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nice update..
please i want some cute manan scene...
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lovely update
very sweet and cute
loved it
cont soon
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Nice update
Continue soon plz post nxt part soon
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Sweet and cute update
Continue soon
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aww sos weet fab and anvay and nandu chemistry awesome
nandu expecting wow
please do continue
please add me in the PM List.
bye sumi
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Awsme loved it continues soon 👏
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Chapter 4c

Then manan comes in hall n nandini was about to take a step on stairs manik lifted up her in his arms

Nandini blushed - manik kya kar rahe ho sab bahar garden me hai...koi dekh lenga

Manik - I don't care what they think OK

Nandini - Manik chodho mujhe

Manik - kabhi nahi chodunga tumhe main

Nandini - manik don't try divert the topic ha...neeche utaro meko

Manik got inside his bedroom n putted nandini on bed n placed himself on her tangled his hands with hers

Nandini - manik pls sab neeche wait kar rahe hai

Manik - hmm to karne do (while kissing her neck)

Nandini - manik hum baad me continue karenge na pls

Manik didn't listen to her n kissed her passionately n she responded him with same passion n then manik pulled her more close n kissed on her neck n She clutched his shirt tightly n moaned his name...He slided the strap of her top n kissed her shoulder n then kissed her throat she hide herself in his chest he smiled looking at her n her eyes were closed n she was blushing then manik kissed her forehead eyes then cutely pecked on her nose n cheeks n he was just mesmerizing her

Manik - nandini open ur eyes

Nandini blushed n looked into his eyes n kissed on his cheeks n he touched his forehead with her n she hugged him thightly n manik rolled n she was on top of her then both closed their eyes n again kissed n manik was opening his shirt buttons while kissing her then both got up n she removed his shirt n again smashed her lips with him n he removed her top n turned her n tucked on bed n came on top of her n he kissing from her neck he came down kissing her belly n she pulled him up n turned him kissed his chest...but then only someone knocked on door n they got disturbed n got up with a jerk n manik got irritated

Manik - kaun hai

Mukti - are main hu manik...kya kar raha hai jaldi neeche aa nandini ko lekar

Nandini - ha mukti bas 10 mins main aa rahe hai

Mukti - ha ok main neeche ja rahi hu tum dono jaldi aao

Then mukti left n nandini picked up manik shirt n she was about to wear it manik took it from her hand

Nandini - manik kya kar rahe ho tum

Manik - are kapde nikalne hi hai to pehen kyu rahi ho(pulled her more close)

Nandini - manik enough now sab neeche wait kar rahe hai

Manik makes a sad pouty face - acha ok ...jaisa tum kaho

Nandini - OK get up now let's get fresh

Manik - sath me fresh ho jaye

Nandini - bilkul bhi nahi...tum dusre room me jake fresh ho jao main tumhare kapde waha rakh dungi

Manik makes an angry expression - no need of it main apne kapde khud le lunga

Nandini - manik we will continue later OK pls na ab chalo ( pecks him on his cheeks )

Manik gets happy - acha OK chalo ready ho jate hai warna sab upar aa jayenge

Then both of them got ready...manik was wearing black T-shirt n dark blue jeans n nandini was wearing white short kurti with black jeans n left her hair open on one side n manik was just mesmerizing her...he came close to her n kissed her forehead n then bent down n kissed her belly n nandini was jst admiring him then they came holding hands in the garden n everyone was shouting at them

Cabir sarcastically - wow itni jaldi aa gaye tum dono...khatam ho gaya kya kaam

Manik - shut up kabir

Nandini - are navya...kavya kaha hai

Navya - wo to uske dadi ke pass hai

Manik - kya baat hai aaj kal tum dono bada enjoy kar rahe ho kavya ko aunty ke pass chodh kar

Cabir - oh pls main roz uske saath time spend karta hu n main usse apni adult party me nahi la sakta

Abhi - point to hai boss apni private party kabhi kabhi kafi bold ho jati hai

Alya - OK guys now sab yaha hai to let's play some game

Dhruv - yaar kyu na koi bacho wale game khele...hey abhi kuch idea de na yaar tu to waise bhi aise games khelne me mahir hai

Abhi - ya actually dhruv good idea kyu na hum run n out khele

Manik - no guys hum ye game nahi khel sakte...think about nandini also na yaar

Abhi - OK then how about hide n seek

Manik - no woh bhi nahi

Abhi - but why yaar usme zyada bhagne ki zarurat nahi hoti hai

Manik - don't ask me reason bas ek baar nahi bol diya to bol diya got it

Then mukti saw manik face he was annoyed after listening to play hide n seek she then messaged to abhi

Mukti msg - abhi last time manik n nandini ne hide n seek khela tha aur pandit ne nandini ko kidnap kar liya tha so don't force them to play that game

Abhi - OK I m sry

Then mukti with eyes told abhi to calm down

Mukti - acha manik chal tu bol kya khelna hai hum sab khelenge

Manik - OK then let's play some adult games like truth n dare or we can play never have I ever

Cabir - tune sahi bola tha abhi apni party ki plannings start to bacho ke naam pe hoti hai but khatam adult way me hoti hai

Aliya - to let's play never have I ever

Navya - ha OK fir yahi game start karte hai

Then everyone sat on grass making a circle n there were 2 bowls of drink one with vodka n other one without alcohol

Cabir - to sabse pehle abhi start karenga

Abhi - main kyu tu kar na

Cabir - OK then main hi start kar deta hu...to never have I ever abused anyone

Then cabir manik mukti navya dhruv takes a sip from the bowl

Cabir - wow aliya nandini n abhi u also never abused anyone...mujhe to laga dhruv roz aliya ki gali sunta honga

Dhruv - acha next turn kiski ye to bata
Cabir - aliya

Aliya - never have I ever been in a car accident

Then aliya cabir mukti manik dhruv n nandini had a sip of bowl

Abhi - kya baat hai pura fab5 ke saath nandini tum bhi thi car accident ke time

Cabir - actually humare ye manik ji drive kar rahe the raat ka time tha aur drive karte unki ankh lag gayi aur usne gadi ek tree se takar mar di n hum sab marte marte bach gaye...ha but nandini tum kab car accident me thi

Nandini - bachpan me main aur rishab mom dad ke saath long drive pe gaye the n

her eyes filled with tears n manik saw it n he was rubbing her shoulder n wiped her tears

Manik - calm down its OK u don't need to say anything more...OK aliya next name pls

Aliya - mukti

Mukti - never have I ever blackmailed someone

Abhi - wo to tum roz karti ho

Mukti - acha to main blackmail karti hu haa?

Abhi - acha sry nahi karti ho

Then all of them got confused whether they blackmail or not n then one by one they took a sip of drink

Navya - acha agar sab blackmail karte hai to unke partners se acha aur koi nahi janta ki hum sab kaise blackmailers hai to manik aur nandini tum batao ki tum dono blackmail kab aur kaise karte ho

Manik - nandini na hamesha khane ke liye blackmail karti hai

Nandini - same here also...manik bhi hamesha khane ke time blackmail karta hai

Navya - ok aliya aur dhruv tum batao ab

Dhruv - aliya hamesha shopping ya long drive par jane ke time blackmail karti hai

Aliya - dhruv why did u took the sip man...I never saw u blackmailing me aur anyone else

Cabir - kya baat hai dhruv...tune sip liya hai to tu khud bol tu blackmail kab karta hai

Dhruv - jab mujhe koi kaam hai to main last moment par bata ta hu n then Jane ke liye blackmail karta hu

Manik - OK cabir aur navya ur turn now

Cabir - are navya ki dhamki bohot zabardast hoti hai agar main uska koi important kaam na karu to wo sidha amma ko Bihar se Mumbai bulane ki dhamki deti hai ya mom ko complain karne ki

Navya - aur cabir tumhari blackmailing to jalebi jaisi sidhi hoti hai haina?...ye to hamesha over drink karne ke liye blackmail karta hai
Nandini - abhi mukti ab tum bolo

Abhi - are kaha se shuru karu yaar itni sari hai

Mukti hits abhi - acha tumhara batau...hamesha mere saath long drive pe Jane ke liye kitna blackmail karte ho

Abhi - aur mukti apne hatho se banaya hua khana khilane ke liye blackmail karti hai

Manik - kya baat hai mukti tu khana banane lag gayi

Cabir - ha aur wo bhi itna bhayankar ki usse abhi ko taste karwane ke liye blackmail karna padta hai

Mukti - shut up cabir...aur abhi tumhe to main baad me dekh lungi...next dhruv now

Dhruv - never have I ever got married

Then manan n cavya took a sip n then dhruv also take a sip n aliya looked at him suspiciously

Aliya - dhruv u r not married

Then dhruv got up n came in front of aliya n bend down on his knees n took a beautiful diamond ring from his pocket

Dhruv - I m not married but I want to get married...aliya will u marry me

N aliya n everyone stand up in shock

Aliya - but dhruv

Dhruv - yes or no aliya

Aliya - yes I will marry u

Then dhruv stood up n hugged aliya n everyone clapped for them n hugged them n congratulated also

Cabir - but all of a sudden ye sab

Dhruv - actually main kafi din se himat kar raha tha bolne ke liye but bol nahi pa raha tha but kal manik aur nandini ko itna khush dekh kar mujh me himat aa gayi

Nandini - I m happy for u both

Manik - finally isne bola to warna aliya ko hi bolna padta

Then everyone giggled n continued their game n in between they all teased dhrulya n then manik realised that nandini has to take her afternoon medicine n eat something

Manik - OK guys chalo ab kuch kha lo
Cabir - are yaar manik itna maza aa raha hai lunch baad me kar lenge

Manik - no way its 4pm n nandini has to take her medicine so everyone getup n eat something

Nandini - manik its OK main lunch baad me kar lungi

Manik - bilkul bhi nahi...abhi utho n kuch khao n ur not alone now humare baby ko bhi bhuk lagi hongi na uska to socho

Nandini - hmm ur right

Then manik called all the servants n then everyone sat together to eat n servants served them food n manik was making sure that nandini eats double than she eats

Nandini - manik ab bas karo na bohot ho gaya

Manik - nandini pls na ek last bite bas khatam ho hi gaya

Nandini - manik tum khao pehle fir hi main ye last bite khaungi nahi to bhul jao fir

Manik - nandini this time I won't let u trick me...chup chap finish karo nahi to main khud nahi khaunga n ayyapa ko complain karunga

Nandini - ayyo manik

Manik - what happen

Nandini - manik amms ne kaha tha ghar jate hi ayappa ko pray karke thank u bolna...aur main bhul gayi

Manik - ok so pehle ye last bite le lo pls pls pls fir pray karenge

Nandini - OK fine

Manik - very good now chalo pray karne ...guys hum dono abhi ate OK

Nandini - but manik tum kuch to kha lo pehle

Manik - nandini hum hamesha saath me pray karte hai tumhe malum hai na

Nandini - no first u eat something then we will pray

Manik - nandini why do u always have to be so stubborn

Then nandini didn't listen to him n took his plate n made him sit n started feeding him

Manik - acha ab lunch ho gaya hai to chalo ayappa wait kar rahe hai

Cabir - jaldi ana yaar pls...dhruv aur aliya ke wedding bhi plan karni hai

Manik - ha aa jayenge

Then manik n nandini went to study room n stood in front of ayyapa picture n like always manik back hugged nandini n took her hand in his and n joined together

Nandini - thank u so much ayappa to bless me n manik with a beautiful new life n pls give me strength to be good n to be good to others n always take care of manik amms rishab chacha chachi n my baby also

Manik - n ayappa pls take care of my nandini n our baby n I wish we always be like this only

Then nandini looked at manik n kissed on his cheeks

Nandini - I love u

Manik - I love u 2...now chalo ab nahi to fir sab tease karenge

Nandini - hmm chalo
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Amazing update
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continue soon...
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