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khadupam

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Posted: 10 years ago

#711

Superb chapter
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Friendsforever9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#712

Hey dear it's been a long time u haven't updated

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sadiya51

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Posted: 10 years ago

#713

Cabir - hello mukti kaha ho tum sab

Mukti - teri beti ne rona chalu kar di hai isiliye late ho gaye hai

Cabir - kya hua kavya ko WO theek to hai na

Mukti - she's fine yaar...usko humare saath party me aa na hai...aur navya is not letting her come so isliye WO rahi hai

Cabir - oh acha...ek kaam kar usko chocolate de de aur mom ya chachi ke pass leja...WO chup ho jayengi

Mukti - ha theek hai

Cabir - aur jaldi aao tum sab...manik hotel wapas aane ke liye impatient hua ja raha hai

Mukti - yaha nandini ka bhi wahi hal hai...

Mukbir disconnected the call after talking then mukti did the same what cabir told her...after making kavya sleep...girls came out of the hotel...n the driver drove them till the club

While in the pub guys were having fun by dancing drinking crazily...manik was enjoying but he was missing nandini a lot...so he excused himself from the dancing floor n went out to call nandini...he dialled her no. But disconnected the call before it ring

Manik thought - no she must be sleeping...I can't disturb her right now..or I should just leave n just check on her...if she's OK or not

While manik was thinking dhruv came from behind

Dhruv - buddy tu bahar kyu aa gaya

Manik - WO main nandini ko call karne aya tha

Dhruv - baat ho gayi ho to chal andar

Manik - umm dhruv u carry on...I should leave now...nandini...pata nahi soi bhi hongi ya nahi

Dhruv - arre she's fine yaar...in fact all our ladies...

Dhruv was about to spill all the surprise...but cabir came out to find the duo...thank god he reached towards them on time...heard their conversation n saved the surprise which dhruv was about to ruined

Cabir - arre dhruv manik yaha party ke bahar kya kar rahe ho...let's go inside yaar...warna abhi ki izzat ek dancer le lengi

Manik - uss dancer ko aryaman se mila do...abhi ki izzat bach jayengi aur mukti se punch bhi nahi milenga

Three of them laughed on manik's joke n walked forward...but manik stopped in between n turned...while cabir dhruv got confused

Cabir - ab kya hua

Manik - I just heard nandini calling me

Cabir - lagta hai sab aa gaye

Manik - kaun aa gaye

Cabir - umm...koi bhi nahi yaar...tu na pagal ho gaya hai...thodi der ke liye nandini se dur kya hua...tune hallucinate karna chalu kardiya

Manik - cabir I'm not hallucinating...I seriously heard her voice

Dhruv - buddy agar tune nandini ki voice suni to hume bhi sunai deni chahiye thi na

Cabir - exactly...dhruv aur mujhe nandini ki awaz nahi sunai Di MATLAB she is not her

Cabir - ab fir se discussion chalu mat kar aur andar chal

Cabir dhruv dragged manik inside the club forcefully...aryaman abhi jumped on them n again started dancing

Cabir got a large size bottle of vodka n made everyone drink but manik refused n sat near the bar counter...he smiled looking at his friends dancing crazily...manik was engrossed in his when again he heard nandini's voice...he scanned the place but didn't saw her anywhere

Manik - shit man...cabir is right I've seriously lost it...

manik removed his blazer...walked at the bar counter n ordered the bartender for water...cabir aryaman called manik to dance but he looked at them n denied as he was feeling tired...he turned back at the counter to have water but what he saw was nandini standing at the place of bartender with a glass of water in her hand wearing a stylish black jumpsuit with a jacket on it...manik rubbed his eyes to confirm if its real or just an imagination

Nandini - manik...u can hug me to confirm if I'm real or not

Manik made a cute confusing pout n touched nandini with his finger...n yes she was actually their...he was not dreaming...manik climbed on the bar counter n hugged nandini tightly...she hugged him back...after sometimes nandini tried to break the hug but manii didn't let her in fact he tightened his grip on her to which she smiled

Nandini - manik main 2hrs ke liye kya dur thi tumse...ab bas bhi karo sab dekh rahe hai

Manik - u know na that I can't stay away from u for a long time...WOchahe 1min ho ya 2 hrs

Nandini - offo!...kya karu tumhara main

Manik - kuch bhi mat karo bas aise hi khadi raho...mare pass...I'm so happy to see u here

While manan were lost in each other embrace...their friends were just admiring them...for a moment they spared their teasing session n let the couple be peacefully

Nandini - manik tumhara 2hrs me ye haal hai to jab main Mangalore chalk jaungi tab kya karonge

Manik - pls aisa mat bolo...I'll come with u...warna what will our baby think...that dadda doesn't give his love enough time

Nandini - acha so u will come with me only for our baby...not for me?

Manik broke the hug n said - no I didn't mean that way...actually I want to be with u both all the time

Nandini - Mr malhotra...if u have forgotten let me remind u that u have lots of work to do in mumbai...ur office n music...how will u handle all these things

Manik - don't worry about that...I have a special team to handle everything n about music...fab5 hai na

Nandini - ab thoda justified lag raha hai

Cabir - oh hello ab bas bhi karo...tum dono ne ache khase romantic mood ko emotional me change kar diye

Mukti - ha yaar kaha ki baat kaha pohoch gayi

Manik - lekin what are u girls doing over here

Mukti - wahi Jo tu kar raha hai party

Manik - oh I thought apne boyfriends pe nazar rakhne aye ho

Aliya - manik it was all cabir's plan to party together...

Dhruv - aur ha except for u...hum sabko pata tha ki our ladies are goma join us

Cabir - so kaisa laga mera surprise manik

Manik - thanks bro...aaj tu kuch bhi kar main tujhe marunga nahi

Cabir - oh ho shukar hai mata rani ka

Aryaman - wow bro...tu to bilkul navya jaise sound karne laga hai

Navya - hum hai hi itne kamal ke ki thoda asar aa hi jata hai

Aryaman - yo navya...come on guys let's resume our party

Fab4 abhi aryaman navya hit the dance floor...while manan were just engrossed in each other talking n whispering sweet things

Manik - nandini

Nandini - ha bolo

Manik - ye black jumpsuit kafi suit kar raha hai tum pe

Nandini - don't u think aaj kal...mujhe ankh bhar ke dekhne me tumhe kafi time lagata hai...tabhi itna late notice kiya na tumne

Manik - ohh taunt n all ha...to tumhe lagta hai main bas bahane deta hu late compliment karne ke liye

Nandini smiled n turned her face on the other side...manik moved away from her n went out...nandini got worried

Nandini - ayyapa ye to bura man gaya...ab kya karu...aisa bhi kya bura bol Di maine Jo WO itna naraz ho gaya

Nandini thought n walked to find him...she searched him on the corridors n some room but he was not their...she went toward the parking lot n suddenly a know pair of arm pulled her behind a car

Nandini - manik what is this...main dar gayi na

Manik - tume waha se yaha lane ke liye karna pada sorry

Nandini started hitting manik on his chest angrily

Nandini - don't do these king if silly drama with...warna next time I won't follow u...agar kuch ho jata to

Manik held her hands...hugged her tightly n kissed her hair

Manik - I'm sorry...paka next time I won't do it

Nandini - har bari pareshan karte ho fir bolte ho next time nahi karunga...ur such a monster manik

Manik - WO to main hu

Nandini tiptoed to reach manik's height...circled her arms around his neck n within a fraction she kissed manik...he was taken aback a bit but soon replied her...this time she didn't let him take the charge n kissed him like a hungry lioness...she bit the mole above his lips n he hissed in pain...after getting out of breath they broke the kiss...

Manik - wow that was great...I never saw this side of urs

Nandini - even I didn't know...may be its coz of my ranging hormones

Manik picked up nandini...made her sit on the car bonnet...he side hugged her after sitting next to her

Nandini - Mr malhotra...humare sare friends andar hai

Manik - so..!

Nandini - so Mr...hume andar chalna chahiye...yaha akele hum dono car pe kya karenge

Manik - waise kiss ke alawa aur bhi bohot kuch kar sakte hai

Nandini slapped his shoulder n said - ayyapa...why did u made manik so shameless

Manik - stop complaining to ur ayyapa n concentrate on me...got it

Nandini placed her palm on her belly n said - no I will concentrate on my baby

Manik also placed his palm on hers n said - acha ab humare baby se tumhara ho gaya...not fair Mrs malhotra...maine bhi kafi mehnat ki hai..

Nandini - well no doubt on that...as u have worked so hard for it...

Manik kissed on her belly over the fabric then wrapped his arms around her shoulder n rested his head back on car glass...they kept on talking n coochicooing till they heard their friends voice calling them

Nandini - manik maine kaha tha na tumhe andar chalo ab dekho sab hume dhund rahe hai

Manik - OK let's go to them now

Manan moved down from the car n walked out of the parking lot...they saw aryaman mukti calling their names at the corridor

Manik - guys we are here

Aryaman - hey were u guys...aur itne der se the kaha

Mukti - manik tu pagal ho gaya...Nina infirm kare bahar aa gaya...aur mobile kaha hai tera...kam se kam call to receive karna chaiye

Manik - sorry yaar wo hum dono bas walk pe chale gaye the...aur mobile silent pe tha isiliye pata nahi chala

Aryaman - OK let's go inside

Nandini - guys I think hume ab hotel wapas jana chahiye...tomorrow is the wedding day aur sab rest nahi karenge to thak jayenge

Mukti - ya ur right...aur fir subah haldi ceremony bhi hai to jaldi uthna padenga

Aryaman - OK then u guys move forward...I'll get others from inside

Manik - OK to fir nandini aur mukti ko lekar main nikalta hu...aur do cars hai to tum sab direct hotel aa jao

Aryaman - ya cool...bye

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Sorry for the late update guys...I was busy coz of my exams...but as now its over so I can update properly
But I'm highly disappointed with the response for the last two updates...I don't know if I'm writing bad or ur loosing the interest in it so I've decided to convert this ff into ss...so after the wedding sequence I will finish it up as soon as possible...I will take a leap of 5 months n then show the delivery part soon...then it will be over

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ann14

@ann14

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Posted: 10 years ago

#714

sorry but ssriously its worth reading plz don't pack up

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Friendsforever9

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Posted: 10 years ago

#715

Awesome update dear

Plss don't wrap it soon

Cont soon...

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Chinmayi

@Chinmayi_11

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Posted: 10 years ago

#716

Finally you updated waited lyk hell missed your story so much
Amazing update manan coochikoo session was awesome
Please yar don't make it into ss I just love your story plzzz don't pack it up
Update soon

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divtan

@divtan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#717

awww...2 ghante oso manik cant stay away from nandu...
and nw usko ammms mangalore le jaayegi...
plzz not away from manik...
nandu oso cnt stay away from manik...
plus nandu is pregnant nh..she needs manik to tk cr of her !!!
and the baby...baby oso needs dadyy !!
but update was great :) :)
dnt be sorry !! ektoh time nikalke ur giving us story free mein...
toh late update hua for jo bhi reason toh sorry bolne ke jarurat nai :) :) :)

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kay12

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Posted: 10 years ago

#718

Originally posted by: divtan
awww...2 ghante oso manik cant stay away from nandu...
and nw usko ammms mangalore le jaayegi...
plzz not away from manik...
nandu oso cnt stay away from manik...
plus nandu is pregnant nh..she needs manik to tk cr of her !!!
and the baby...baby oso needs dadyy !!
but update was great :) :)
dnt be sorry !! ektoh time nikalke ur giving us story free mein...
toh late update hua for jo bhi reason toh sorry bolne ke jarurat nai :) :) :)

Awww such a cute update
Continue soon
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