MANAN OS: WRONG NUMBER : chap 14 pg 26 Oct 6 - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago
awsome update...
bt After a long tym...
nxt part update soon plzzz...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Plz update soon after long u Back
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hello guys I'm here with a next chapter...I'm sad that u guys didn't give me lamba and more comments...so this is the new chapter here..this time make sure u give me lots of comments...and I won't be able to update till Friday as I have my exams..from tonmorw wish me all the best and enjoy the story
Chapter 11:-

It had been 8 long years..since they met ...since they've seen each others face...since they looked into each others eyes..she missed him ..she knew it wasn't his mistake but yet she missed him...she never moved on...she was a broken soul inside...always caring for him...she had returned back to India ...to her parents...to her only reason of livinliving..she had done a course on management ..and he ..
Being a broken soul...tried hard to move on...but still thinking about her...hrhe was nations biggest singer...making love songs...just for her...but he hated her..he knew she has done a great mistake BT for what ...he never knew...he's there sitting in his office drinking his coffee waiting for his show to start ...and there comes his boss..his dad raj malhothra... He did love his son but never showed...he knew that hihis son was depressed for a girl but whom he never knew...

*in nandinis home*
"Nandini beta...utho tyjhe ek letter aaya haI via post...chalo jaldi aao neeche..." Nandinis bua screamed
"Haa bua mein bus aagaye " she came down wearing a beautiful kurti ...she was smiling but behind this smismile was. A pain hidden no one except him could see...
"Haa buA kaahan hai mera post?"
"Nandini are u sure ?? " her mom asked her..she knew everything about manik
"Haan mama...just because he's in that company iska MATLAB yeah nahi ki mein yeah company join nah karo...mujhe USSe koi farak nahi padtha...'
"Par nandu..tere office aaj se start higi nah..."
"Yea mom mein nikal rahi hoon bye " she kised her cheeks and left to her new office to meet her past ...
*in office *
'Dad yeah new CEO haan kon??"
Manik asks his dad tuning his guitar
"Manik...her name is nandini murthy and look she's here !!" Raj goes down to welcome her
"Nandini murthy" his fists become tighter he gets angry but he calms himself down...

" welcome welcome...nandini ji...myself raj malhothra..groove channel ka owner..." He extends his hand for a hand shake
Nandini with all her attitude " nice to meet u mr.raj..." She smirks
"Chaliye let me introduce u to everyone
Yeah hai..aliya aap ki new assistant ..." a pretty girl...shy kinda welcomewelcomes her..
"This is dhruv ...iss channel ka ek talented star .. " she extends her hand ...
"Aur yeah humare sabse favourite ...manik malhothra..mere shaan.." Raj yells...being proud ...nandini sees manik and smirks ...but she was dying inside seeing him after such a long time... Manik was feeling the same negatively ...
"Welcome nandini " he says in a husky voice they have. A handshake...
Nandini leaves for her cabin...and remember s all the moments spend with manik...she letz a lone tear escape her eyes...
Here manik is playing his song in his show..
All of them get a message on their phones..." Tommorow there will be a party...welcoming nandini ..be sure everyone's present ...
All of them get ready for the party...
The party was a grand one...all were drinking and having lots of masti...nandini was sitting alone and sipping her wine..while dhruv comes near her and starts speaking while Alta was stealing glances of dhruv...
Nandini feels someone watching her...she turns to see manik fully drunk...and staring at her...he starts coming near her and grabs her hand..
"Manik wat ua doing leave my hand " she warns him
"Buddy uske hath chod yaar" dhruv pleads ..he shsshhs them both and takes her away from there and pulls her inside a home...
She desperately tries freeing her hand ...
"Manik just leave me she screams..
Nashe mein ho tum " ...
"Nasha haan " he throws the beer bottle holding ..and pushes her and pins her to the wall...she was disguised by his breath ...
"Nasha toh mere 8 saal pehle hi uthra tha..." Lenin aab firse uss nashe ko wapas nahi aane doonga...why did u come here nandini...bohath saare companies hai why only here...because I was here to hurt me more huh tell me...
Nandini pushes manik a bit "apne app ko itne importance dena bandh karo manik...everythings not about u..."
"Toh fir kya reason ho saktha hai tumara idar aana.?
" manik just leave Me...ua hurting me..."
"Ahwww baby ko hurt ho raha hai...par jaab mujhe hurt hui taab tune kuch nahi kaha nah...now why? "
" manik ..just shut up...hurt hunesha tum karte ho mujhe ...mujhe hate u kisne kahatha?? Mujhe door rehne keliye kisne kaha tha??? Nandini asks anger in her tone
"Par mein aayatha nah ek raat pehle tumse gidgida ke ..kehthe hua ...nahi let's make everything proper { manik had told nandini before all the harsh words 8years back }
Nandini cried ...she pushed manik
"Just leave me alone manik..." She goes away wiping her tears...
Manik screams
"I just hate u nandini I just hate you "

Precap:- new entry of mukthi ...cabir mukthi nandini and manik to go out for a lake ...all memories coming back...nandini trying to stay away from manik...but he creates more trouble for her

Done guys dont forget to comment
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful update😊
luved it
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous
it remind me the show of starplus Badtmeez Dil
haha
plz PM me when you will update nxt part
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful...hope Manik finds out the truth soon... loved Nandhu's re entry and her attitude with Manik...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nandini just decided something without giving any explanation to Manik
She couldnt just tell him? I would be angry Even if i was at maniks place

I am happy that You didn't turn Manik into a manw***
I personally don't like that
I like the Way You write
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice story dear
It's tooo late yarr...
Chlo koi nhi I can understand & yea all d very best for ur exms..
Cont soo...
Sol thnks for pm
Lots of love ..
Pankhuri
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chapter 12:-
She reached her flat...remembering the moments spend today...she placed her bag ..changes her clothes...and locks the door of her room...she sits in balcony crying ...
"Manik why don't u understand...tum toh ...u know everything about me rite...fir aise hurt kyun kiya...manik ...I'm here to save u...aryamaan tujhe marna chhatha hai ..I am here to protect u manik...mujhe aise punishment kyun de rahe ho...ithe nafrat mere liye...manik I don't knw the reason...ki why does he want to kill u...but main aisa hone nahi doongi...manik...I still love u...please mujhe wapas apnao.." She. Cries until she sleeps there...
Next morning :-
"Bachaooo..." A girl screams...on top of her voice...she was running inside the office like a retard...beind her was a guy ..." Mukthi tujhe naho chodonga mein..."cabir yells...
Mukthi dashes nandini ...she was wearing a simple yet elegant yellow churidar ... "Nandini tum yaaha..." Mukthi yells and hugs her ..."I missed u so much yaar "
" nandini...cabir sees her and is astonished ..." Cabir has tears in his eyes
Nandini hugs cabir too ...
" nandu..mere baby doll...mein nah aaj apne anniversary ki party de rahi hoon...aoo nah ...saab aarhe hai..dhruly...cavya...saab ...tu bhi aana pleaseee..." Mukthi pleads...nandini agrees..and goes to her home in the evening...all of them except nandini was fully drunk...manik was also present ...
All of them retired to their rooms..leaving back nandini and manik...manik was so drunk that he pulls her inside the room
" manik wHat ur doing? " nandini asks!!
Shshhsss ...
Manik touches nandinis cheeks softly...she feels him each and every time...she wants him...but there was a huge barrier ...standing...
He kisses her cheeks ...her eyes her ..neck..she started shivering...he comes closer to her lips...while realisation strucks her...she pushes him but he pulls her and smashes his lips against her...she responds equally...after 8 long years ..they were tasting each other...her strawberry lip gloss still was his favourite while his alcohol mouth was still her fav ...he pushed her as they both were breathless...he picked her and placed her in the bed...she turns...her back..to hide her tears of joy...he unzips her ...and kisses her back...she was cold ...he removes his shirt and starts undressing her...but then ...she moves back...she couldn't do this...she zips herself up and goes back to her room...crying the night out...
Next day :-
Nandini wakes up early and start packing she had to leave today...as she moves out she sees aryamaan...and gets scared as what he's upto...he doesn't notice ..her...he does something to the car...and leaves...nandjni insists that she sits in this car and manik on some other...manik and the gang were driving back in a jeep while nandini was sitting in the car scared of her life...she drives ...until at one point the car skids...and gets crashed to a tree manik who sees this gets a shock of his life...his lady love...met with an accident right in front of his eyes they rush towards the car she had hit her head...and was trying to get out...manik comes and pulls her out...and holds her hands tightlyb
"Are you out of ur mind...teek se nahi chala sakthi...agar tumhe kuch hojatha tho?" Msnik yells ...still scared
"Toh?? Kya I wld die...dats all " nandini replies casually but inside her heart was hurting ...
"Manik let go of her...they reach the office back...
Precao:- nandini ..and manik confrontation...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice..
But Iam confused 😕
Pls continue soon

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