Inseparable love ~ MaNan SS Chapter 6 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for the PM. Interesting!! Continue soon..
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Wow this is something really gud and fresh
M sure by the end of it I'll learn shudh Hindi and Urdu words as well 😃
M liking it..dnt change anything 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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the episode is like fannaah...
based on previous birth...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg..wat a story.. Tum mujhe ek alag duniya mai lekhe Gaye ho..awesome story continue it ..pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: KewlaniGarima

Awsm parts!!! loved it!!! plzz pm me if possible!!!

Thanks your comments means alot to me keep commenting good or bad.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooh2015

Wow this is something really gud and fresh
M sure by the end of it I'll learn shudh Hindi and Urdu words as well 😃
M liking it..dnt change anything 😉

Never hoped that someone will even like it. Thanks for liking.
Even i will try to deliver you good shudh hindi and urdu too
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: AN1993

the episode is like fannaah...

based on previous birth...

Yeah it is based on reincarnation. Not seen fanaah😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow awesome update i love it please continue soon and write on daily base aur pechle janam me kya tk ne un dono ko mar diya tha aur iss janam me un dono ko kuch yaad kyu nehi hai, please iss jaan me manik ko pahel nandini ke bare me sab kuch yeed dilo this my small wish please accept it and thanks for the pm 👏 and this for your story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Lovelylav7

Omg..wat a story.. Tum mujhe ek alag duniya mai lekhe Gaye ho..awesome story continue it ..pm me

Yes i will pm u. Yes will continue soon. Thanks for liking it.
Guys i will try to update as many chapters as possible till Saturday coz m going on Sunday for vacation n will return till 30th or 31st. If i will get some time i will surely update the chapters.
Once again thanks.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 3

Scene 1

Nandini: Chachi kya soch rahe ho aap?

Chachi: Kuch nai beta? Tu aaj naste me kya kha rai hai?

Nandini: Chavhi bhuk nai hai. College me canteen see kha lungi.

Chachi: Ok beta. Lekin kha zarur lena.

Nandini: Chalo chachi me chalti hu. Bye!! And bidding chachi bye she leaves for college.

Scene 2

Nyonika: Beta! Today, college is reopening so we cannot go together. You come to college with your friends.

Manik: Ok Maa! But just today ha. Kal se we will go together.

Nyonika: Ok beta. Get ready, finish your breakfast and come to college. Now bye.

Scene 3 (College)

Nandini enters the college. She senses familiarity around her. Here Manik enters from the back side of college after the parking car with his friends, Cabir, Dhruv, Mukti and Aliya, FAB 5, one of the most famous bands of Mumbai.

Nandini goes to first year class and they cross each other's paths. Nandini is about to fall but Cabir saves her from falling.

Nandini: Sorry, i didn't see the water. Thanks for saving.

Cabir: Watch it dear!! Be careful.

FAB 5 was shocked seeing the generosity of Cabir for someone else than them.

Nandini: Thanks once again... BHAI!!

Cabir and rest of FAB 5 including Nandini were shocked hearing word BHAI.

Nandini thinks: What I called him? Bhai? What is wrong with me? He just saved me.

Nandini: Sorry it was just a slip of tongue.

Cabir: Ahh!! It's ok...

Manik thinks: Do I know this girl? Who is she? I think I know her very well. Manik ignore it happens. Ignore the thoughts.

Nandini notices the rest of FAB 5.

She thinks: The boy in cap, he seems sweet. The girl besides her looks like a model. Ah!! The other girl, gothic princess, feathers, dark clothes and dark makeup, I like her. OMG!!!! That tall boy!!! He looks like a prince. But wait, why am I attracted to him? Control yourself Nandu!! But I have seen a lot of good looking, charming boys, never felt such strong attraction towards anyone. Forget it just move from here you are having class.

The bell rings and Nandini runs towards her class.

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I am short of post so edited my previous post and written it here. Please comment. I know it is boring, but I have to write to make a base. Sorry for late update i was busy packing. Will try to update as soon as possible Thanks😉

Edited by a_minion - 10 years ago

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