S$- Lehrein (note on pg 8)

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@..Mellifluous..

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

Awesome update..

Aliya ufff...can't tolerate her man !!

Wow precap seems good..

Am loving it...

So update soon...

Love,

Harika..keep smiling..it looks good on you

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Niya

@N_Niya

Rocker

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

nice nice!
update soon na yaar...

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Ananya Nair

@Manan_Ananya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Amazingstory..waiting to see how the story shapes up later..

cont soon and PM me plzz

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Aliavardan

@Aliavardan

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Sorry guys.. Couldnot post 2day but hear is d PROMO for tommorow...

Scene in navyas house...

Navya's mom: Beta, listen to me... Plz get married.. Day by day u r getting older

Navya: Oh!! Stop it ma.. In one day I cant b converted from 23 to 32 so chill... I want Ranbir kapoor as my bride groom..

Manik's house..

Manik: Mom!! Mom I need 40 lakhs.. Plz can u give me...

Nyonika: wat?? 40 lakhs but why??

Nandini's home...

Nandini texting someone " baby come back soon... Missing u.. Luv u"

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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Nice start

And mission is thrilling

but after reading the promo I guess there are few hindrances. ...

Continue soon

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#36

interesting promo...
thanks for the pm
take care

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Nandini_goyal

@Nandini_goyal

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Please add an index in the beginning

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Aliavardan

@Aliavardan

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#38

PART 3

A beautiful.. Summer mrng in murty's house..

Nandini: Mamma... My filter coffee...

Aditi ( nandu's mom): Here u go... Ur filter coffee... Nd ya today I nd ur dad jv some urgent work so we wont b dere.. Nd even rishab is busy with his frnds... So take care..

Nandini: okay.. Mom

Aditi msges nyonika.. "Step one done.. Plan is on track"

Malhotra's house

Nyonika: Tinu... U have to convince ur stubborn bro.. At any cost.. Get it

Tia: okay.. Mom.. Today bhai has to do it.. Md ya even I have plan somethng for dat draculla( alya)... Tia never losses.. Bhai I m coming

Tia goes to maniks room... As soon as she enters she falls.. Nd gets shocked to c d room so messy... Hearing her scream.. Manik wakes up nd rushes to her

Manik: Tinu... U okay na.. My princess ..

Tia( angry): Bhai!! Cant u keep ur room clean I had to go to my frnds house.. I just needed d jeys of car so I had come.. Nd c wat happened.. Now u have to go.. To nandu's home nd get my lappy.. At any cost.. Get it..

Manik(irritatingly) : Okay fine... Give me d address.. I ll get u take care of ur leg.. Bye[/COL
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Manik gets freshen up nd goes down wen tia txts " step 2 done.. Now only dat everthng in murty mansion shld go great"

[COLOR=red]Manik: Mom.. Im going out.. Vil b back soon.. Bye sweety

Nyo: Bye beta.. Tc

Manik reaches murty's mansion.. He rings d bell nd servant opens d door.. Nd manik adk abt nandini.. He says him to go upstares.. Manik goes upstairs nd is shocked to c d view Nandini was in a towel nd was searching for dresses in her wadrobe.. Just den she notices manik nd runs in bathroom back..

Nandini: wat... Wat r u doing here??

Manik: I m extremly sorry.. Actually tia needed her lappy.. So just for dat I came here. Ur servent asked me to go upstares so..

Nandini: oh.. Just give me a min.. Ill change..

Manik: Sure!!

Nandini comes out in shorts nd crop top.. Manik is just staring at her... Nandini was abt to give him d laptop.. Wen she slips.. Manik tries to save her.. But both If dem together fall on d bed.. Nd were just staring.. Nandini breaks d trance nd tries to get up wen just her locket gets stuck in maniks shirt nd she again falls on him nd dis time she pecks on his lips..

Precap: same as d promo...

Guys ull get prt3 A today. .. Ill try my best my best to update by today

Edited by Aliavardan - 10 years ago