MaNan New FF -Just Married UPDT (part21 pg144)) - Page 68

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awesum as usual..it has such a simple storyli9 yet i fall in love wid evry of its part..plz do pm nxt tym n ya update soon plzzz...

Superb!!

Awww... This part was so cute.. Especially dat one in which nandini confessed her feelings.. Omg u r such an amazing writer.. N yes thanks for pm..

Awesome

Amazing...
U never miss a chance to amaze us...
That was superb...
Very emotional...
Keep writing...
Cont soon...

Thanx for pm...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

Beautiful update

wow lovely update

This was Heartfelt!!
Bravo!!
Full of emotions.. Theur connection is so strong that its so hard to see them apart..
Great update!!

Oh my god!!!!!!!! It ws awsm as evr!!!!!!!!!!!! Loved it so to d core!!!!!!! It touched me deep inside!!!!! Am really vry touched by it!!!!!!
U penned d emotions so well!!!!!!
If i cud na...i wud hav given u an award fr ur amazing story!!! It stole my heart!!!!!
Hw they slept ws cute...
Nandu woke up so late(lyk me:p) n started panicking ...called manik n manik-good morning jaan...n nandu instead of wishing him back started throwing bunch of questions on him...y didnt u wake me up...n all...it ws aww..fr me..
N then...wt ws written made my eyes grow wide as evr!!!!!!!! Y haan? Y did u do this to nandu?? Y did u make manik cry soo much??? I ws left wid no option...i cried...;(...
Mukti is an awsm sis...!
U knew dat wt u wrote will make some1 or d other cry...so u gave d best thing to us...
THE LOVE CONFESSION!!!!! Finallyyy...!! U potrayed their love so well!!!
MaNan...they r d definition of LOVE!!! U defined it vry well too! Gud job!:)...
Wish fr some more romance b/w them ;)...
Update soon n plzzz atleast lyk my cmnt plzz;)...
Thnks fr pm...n update soon
i love u!!

Very well written ...one of my fav ff ! Keep up the good work...love reading ur ff 😊😃