MaNan : Best Summer Ever? (ON HOLD) - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

26

Views

24.1k

Users

16

Likes

153

Frequent Posters

macy99 thumbnail
Groupbie Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#11
CHAPTER 1
It was the saddest day of my life how was i gonna stay away from her for so long i can not resist without he for a day, said MANIK.

It was a happy sad day for me the happy part was that i was gonna meet my aams but the sad part was that i had to leave Manik and my friends for that, said NANDU.

We both met near the stairs to say bye to each other for like more than a month, said MANIK.

SCENE

Manik : do you have to go?

Nandini : i wish i could stay here for this summer but aams is a bit sick and she needs me.

Manik : i wish i could be with you this summer.

nandini hugs him tight.

Nandini : i wish i was with you.

Manik : is there any chance you could stay?

Nandini : no.

Manik : i'm gonna miss you real bad.

Nandini stands up on her toes and kisses Manik.

Nandini : lets go i have to meet the guys and go check my luggage.

she had a pain hidden in her voice which was noticed by Manik.

Manik : you don't worry about me i'll be fine. you'll be fine too.

Nandini hugs him.

Nandini : i know.

Manik : lets go.

scene ends

you guys must have ide what that was but don't worry 'll tell you

so first

Let me introduce myself.

i'm Cabir Dhawan aap sabke fav MaNan ka cupid.

you all must be wondering that what type of college are we studying in as there are no classes or vacation.

But i'm gonna tell you people my best actually everyone's best SUMMER ever.

It was the last day off the college as we have our summer vacations from tomorrow no more canteen no more stair scenes and no more niyonika.

i know you must be wondering about niyonika.

lt me tell you she changed a little and she every time tries to come closer to her son Manik.

but as we all know Manik sabse zada ziddi hai so he wont taal to her at all.

and you guys seriously wont believe he didn't even hear Nandu.

All out tries are coming down but there was now way we can make that son go to her own mother and talk.

but something happened that last summer that got Niyonika and Manik back to a mother - son relationship.

SO, let me get this straight it wasn't Nandini Murthy you are gonna be hell shocked whe you knw who it was.

One fine day actually the last day of the 2nd year of the college all we had was one more year but summer was here. Everyone was sad especially Manik as always Nandu was gonna go to Manglore to stay with her aams.

That tiny little women some how managed to make room for her in our lives and our hearts as well. She was loved by every one. she loved everyone but summer was always the saddest part of our lives.

we were gonna miss all the tender, love, care and friendly hugs of her.

it was hard or us to live a day without her how were we gonna live for 1 and a half month?

we would some how manage but Manik! wuufff that is going to be tough for him.

we were in canteen sitting chit chatting.

we gave Manik Nandini some alone time as after 3 hours Nandu had her flight to Manglore.

they met eah othe near the stairs and you all knw what happen there.

they came back after an hour romaning and roming around the college.

But they had no idea what was cooking in my head. Actually it was Niyonika's idea.

me : so ho gaya tum logo ka lovey dovey bye bye?

Manik and Nandini stood there silent and sad.

me : knock-knock

Mukti : CAbir do u really think its time for your stupid jokes?

me : arre reply toh ker dono ka moo badlne wala hai.

Mukti : okay.

me : knock-knock

Mukti : who is it?

me : the MaNan saviour.

Mukti : what is MaNan ssaviour here for?

me : MaNan saviou sensed some tension and he has a perfect idea to remove the tension.

MaNan looked up to e with a hope that my idea would be good.

Mukti : what idea?

me: if Nandini is going to Manglore so are we all.

everyone got happy and cheered loud.

i looked up at Nandini to know if it okay.

Nandini happily : are you kidding me i'll love t have you people in m childhood home.

she hugged me and i whispered in her ear that it wasn't my plan it was Niyonika's.

she smiled and we cheered there was no better feeling than seeing my to best friends together for the whole summer.

Nandini : but there is a problem!

me : ab kya hua?

Nandini : you guys don't have you tickets and i saw the plane is full.

me : no stupid the plane is full because i booked it.

Nandini : how is that possible.

me : its Niyonika's jet and the ticket you have is a fake one so chill.

Manik more than happy : thanks buddy. but how did Niyonika get ready to give away the jet or a month.

Nandini sarcastically : cause she is your mother.

And her it comes the only topic on which Manik and Nandini normally fights ahh! but dont worry they stop it there and then.

Alya : i should we should all pack.

Dhruv : but what about aams? is she okay with us coming there.

me : as she knows about manik and nandu it was easy for me to make her in my favour and she will be happy to have us she said.

Mukti : cool then lets meet at the airport.

everyone goes home to pack.


hope you people like it.
commen your reviews please.
take care.😛😉
sosweetsumi thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#12
good start
hope we can see somethign like this in serial
please do continue
bye sumi
manya_189 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Woohooo niceee! Can please pm the updates??
macy99 thumbnail
Groupbie Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#14
CHAPTER - 2

Nandini's home :

Nandu told her chachi and chacha about everything how Niyoniika gave her jet for Manik's trip.

Chachi : Manik ha toh bada sona per apni maa se itn kyu gussa rehta hai?

Nandini : maine usse baat kerne ki koshish ki per voh mujse gusssa ho jata hai.

Chachi : kabhi na kabhi toh tuje hi bolega.

Nandini : i wish ki voh apni maa se baaat kerega.

Chachi : kerega .

rishabh was excited to travel in a personal jet.

we got our luggage and were near the college waiting for our madhubala actually my madhubala to come so that we can leave.
yea while clearing MaNan differences we got close. i don't know how that happened but we fell for each other.

and she came.

Alya : mukti did you get your summer clothes?

Mukti : alya are you kidding obio i got them it is a beach side place.

Manik : girls i know you like those types of clothes and all but aams wont like you guys in that clothes.

Nandini : you won be able to wear that there south k people are really sick. haan but ghar mein you can wear anything you want.

Alya : its ok we wont we will shop something there.

Mukti : yea me too.

we all left for the Malhotra airport which was in the out skirts of the city

we reached the airport and were in hell shock seeing the jet.

the most excited person was rishab.

servants took all the luggage and we took our seats.

Manik was talking to the pilot about our landing and everything.

me : kya hua Manik?

Manik : kuch nhi landing hamari 2 hour me hogi.

Nandini : cool lets enjoy our trip.

Niyonika had made the best arrangements of food and privacy.

Mukti was busy with rishabh playing games and guitar as she enjoyed with him.

We all felt bad for Mukti after Harshad's car accident death even alya used to miss her brother but we used to cover up but mukti used to feel lonely.

we landed safely and reached home.

Nandu's house was like a 80's palace. we enjoyed exploring her house as her aams was busy in her class.

rishabh took us to his room and showed us all Nandu's childhood pic with him and told us all how chuby she used to be.

aams arrived to the room and got happy seeing Nandu. they hugged and nandu took her blessing so did Rishabh and Manik.

aams had no problem with Manik anmore after the pandit case. she started trusting him.

It was nearly dinner time as we a went up to freshen up and get ready for some south indian dinner

we all sat in the dinning room.

Nandini was in a hell shock seeing the variety of food

Nandu : aams? aapne itna saara khana kyu banaya ?

Aams : Manik aur tere dost first time tere ghar aaye hai tph kya mein unko sirf ek type ka saambar chaval khilati ?

Nandu : but aams!

Aams : abhi chup chap khana khao.

me : but aams aap hame bolo to sahi hum kya kha rahe hai?

aams pointed all the dishes and named them.

Aams : saambar chawal, pappu, rasam, puligora annam, curd rice, handi biriyani.

me : handi biriyani?

aams : haan Nandu ne muje bola tha tum log south ka khana nhi khate is liye.

Alya : Nandini ko shayad pata nhi per yaha aane se pehle Manik ne hame south nindian food k aare me sab samjha dia.

aams : i'm impressed haan manik.

Nandini : yea even i'm impressed.

Manik : thank you my lady.

we all had our dinner and went on the terrace to sleep as it was hot in the rooms.

there were beds lied on the floor givinng some space there was a small pot of water.

we all slept there one after one.

precap : late night truth and dare.


hope you all enjoy this. comment your views.

macy99 thumbnail
Groupbie Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#15
CHAPTER 3
All were sleeping but there wore three people awake MaNan and obio me.

MaNan were all romantic and talking to each other i was a little uncomfortable and was trying to sleep but was not able to sleep so i decided to go or a walk i started moving toward the door and passed by MaNan.

Nandini : cabir where are you going ?

Me : i was not able to sleep so was going for walk.

Manik : buddy are you okay? i mean you for a walk doesn't sound like you.

Nandini : Manik stop na. Cabir you gonna go for walk?

Me : haan.

Nandini : okay then i will show you the best place chal get Navya too we will do a love test.

Manik : love test?

Nandini : Manik stop asking questions and Cabir get Navya.

Me : okay.

I got Navya and they all went to a open place where Nandini used to go with her mom and dad.

Me sarcastically : all i can see is grass and rocks.

Navya hits me playfully : Cabir Nandu hume kuch soch ker hi yaha lai hogi na so usko tang matt kero.

Nandu : thanks Navya.

Manik : what are we here for?

Nandini : what is the time right now?

Manik : its almost 2 a.m.

Nandini cool just wait for five mins then we can go.

Manik : okay.

we waited and were talking.

Manik : Nandini whats that?

Nandini : what ?

Manik : turn back and see.

Everyone turns to see what it is and they find.

They see a lot of Fire Flies shining brightly and beautifully.

Nandu : this is what i wanted you guys to see.

Manik : i haven't seen fire flies live.

Me : they are so mesmerizing.

Navya : its the most beautiful thing.

Manik : what about the love test?

Nandini : this is the love test Manik . Mom humesha kehti thi ki jaha bhi true love hota hai vaha Fire flies humesha aate hai.

Manik got close to Nandini.

Manik : you know na that we already know that we've got true love.

Nandini : i know ye toh cabir aur Navya k liye tha

Me and Navya were looking at each. We just wanted to kiss but MaNan's presence was a hurdle so we just hugged tight.

Nandini : Chalo guys lets go home.

We went home and were shocked to see ur other friends awake.

Alya : where the hell were you guys we were all worried.

Mukti : stop staring at us and and speak up.

Me : we went for a walk we were not able to sleep.

Dhruv : guys actually i can't sleep too.

Navya : hamare pass ek ekdum mastt idea hai.

Nandini : kya ?

Navya : truth and dare.

Manik : okay we can play that.

We all sat dow in a circle. starting with Manik beside him was Nandini then Me ,Navya , Dhruv , Alya and Mukti.

sry for a late update replies plzz..

sosweetsumi thumbnail
20th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#16
good part
please do write more
bye sumi
pooja123456 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Nice!!
Continue and update soon
cutypie04 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Lovely update dea. ..
Continue soonnn
If possible pm me nxt time
macy99 thumbnail
Groupbie Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#19
CHAPTER 4
We were all sitting in a circle. aur hamari nautanki mukti ho gai chalu.

Mukti : guys let me give this a twist.

Nandu : what kind of twist?

Mukti : in the first round every one will get a chance to rotate the bottle aur bottle ka tip jisko point karega they have to switch places. okay?

Navya : okay.

i was like why is she soo annoying sometimes. i wanted to sit with Navya.

Dhruv : so let me start.

Dhruv's bottle turned to Nandini. they switched places.
Manik switched lace with himself as his bottle turned back to him. and the sme happened with Navya
alya switched with me.
mukti swthed wiith nandu and luckily she again got to sit with Manik.
it was my turn and was strongly praying to switch place with Mukti or Alya.
and i switched Navya

so our places were like me - mukti - navya - nandu - manik - dhruv - alya.

Nandini read my face and was the first to tease me : Cabir jo hota ha achhe k liye hota hai

i gave he a whatever look.

And the GAME began.

As Navya was the most excited one she started the round.

her bottle landed at Manik so as she was always scared of Manik she looked at him innocently.

Nandini : dont worry Navya you can ask him anything you want i'll make sure he will act proper with you.

Navya was relived.

Navya : truth or dare?

Manik : truth.

Navya after thinking for a moment : What's the dumbest thing you've ever done on a dare?

Manik after thinking for a bit : i remember Mukti made me do that i was supposed to crack and egg onn my head and sit like that for a round of questions.

Everyone laughed and it was Nandini's turn.

Nandini's bottle landed on me.

Nandini : cabir ab me tumse pure saal ka badla lene wali hoon.

Me : muje zinda chodd dena bas.

Nandu : u have to dance for us on a item song wearing my skirt.

Me : no no no no.

Mukti : stop being a baby cabir u have to do it.

Me : no one is gonna take my video.

Nandini gave Me a skirt and i was made to dance on munni badnaam
and trust me i did my best.

others were lauging on me soo damn hard looking them so happy i did the same.


they rest of the Game in chapter 5 bye bye



cutypie04 thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Lovely update dea..
plsss continue soon

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".