TRUE LOVE NEVER BE SEPERATED (PART 50 a&b POSTED ON PG 75&76) - Page 39

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Posted: 9 years ago
Sooo cuteee
Loved Manan moments
The endless kissing part was funny
Hope Manan are able to participate in the competition
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
aww!!!!!! how cute!!!!!!
kissy mila raha hae small girl & then manik...
repeat kissy...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Excellent update...
Manan's moments were awesome...
D girl is so adorable...
D kissing part was cute...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome dear
Specially the small girl and manik kisses were cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update..
Maniks care 4 nandu..
Manik nd small kid kissing nandu
I hope thy reach on tym..
Luvdit..
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART:47


Part: 47

A small girl near manans seat comes near manik
Small girl: Uncle aunty ko kya hua
Manik looks at the girl
Manik: Kuch nahi vo aunty ko neendh arahi hai isiliye vo so raha hai
S.G climbs on seat beside manik nd stands near manik
Manik sees her nd kisses her cheek
S.G: uncle why u kissed me
Manik: U are looking so cute
S.G: Uncle aunty bhi bahut cute lag rahi hai
nd telling this small girl kisses nandini's cheek
S.G: uncle aap bhi kiss karo na aunty is looking so cue na
Manik then bends nd kisses nandini's cheek
S.G again kisses nandini's cheek
Looking the girl kisses nandini Manik also again kiss her cheek
Seeing manik that small girl also kisses nandini's cheek
Then manik
then Small girl
Then manik
then Small girl
Then manik
then Small girl
Then manik
then Small girl
Then manik
then Small girl
Then manik
then Small girl
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Like this continue for sometime
Nandini who is just pretending to sleep shouts at them
Nandini: Ye tum dono kya kar rahe hai, what are u thinking about me
Both manik nd small girl gets shock by listening her shout
S.G: Uncle aunty to cute hai but she is big angry bird
Nandini who is listening their talk laughs loudly, seeing her laughing both manik nd small girl also smiles
Nandini sits straightly nd tooks that small girl into her lap
Nandini: What's ur name
S.G: Sapna
Nandini: Cute name

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At competition:

Cabir: Ye to abhi start hone wala hai, ye dono to abhi tak nahi aya kyu
Alya: Vo log ajayega
Then the host come and announced that the competiton begins
Till now 6 teams completed but manik nd nandini still they dont reach there
Now the chance goes to Alya nd dhruv, they both performed then they called mukti nd abhi even they performed




Manik: Then where is ur house
S.G: Near the bus
Manik: What
S.G: Ha ye bus na mera ghar ke samne hi rukega
Manik: Oh!
Then the girls mother comes and took her that their destination comes
Manik: How are u feeling now
Nandini: Better
Manik: Did u take the medicines
Nandini: Ha, vaise tum kya kiya abhi abhi, vo sapna tho choti bachhi thi aur tum
Manik: Mai ne kya kiya batao na
Nandini now understands he was teasing her
Nandini: Vo kya hai na tum tum...
Manik: Kya mai
Nandini: Tum na mera neend ko disturb kiya
Manik: What? When?
Nandini: Abhi
Manik: FYI I know that u didnt slept and u are prettending
Nandini: tume kaise pata
Manik: aise hi vaise bhi maine tujhe yahpar mara na isiliye nd caresses her cheek, tujhe bahut dard hua na
Nandini: Nahi manik galti to mera hai kuch soch ke bina vaha chal gaya tha and becomes sad
To lighten up her mood
Manik: Vaise maine isiliye kiya kyon ki vo tujhe merese jyada kiss kiya
Nandini: What ??? Manik tum ek choti se bacchi par jealous ho rahe ho
Manik: Nahi to
Nandini: Then what u did
Manik: Chance aya to use kiya nd kisses her cheek
Nandini blushes listining this



But now still cabir is waiting for manik
Now its time for cabir and navya, even they performed
After them there was other two teams
Host: Now its time for last performan Manik nd Nandini
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Host: Lagta hai ye dono abhi idhar nahi hai, Ok we will wait for 5 minutes, if they dont come then according to rules we will eliminate them

PRECAP:
Manan are running on the road
Host: Its a final call for manik nd nandini


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Posted: 9 years ago

PART:48

Host: Lagta hai ye dono abhi idhar nahi hai, Ok we will wait for 5 minutes, if they dont come then according to rules we will eliminate them
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Manik: Nandini i think we cant reach there in time
Nandini: Manik i think time to hogaya

Manan are running on the road

Host: As per rules we are removing this team for further rounds

Manik: Let it be what if we dont participate
Nandini: Then why are we running
Manik: ok then we will walk slowly
Nandini: ok

Soon they reached concert area

On stage:

Host: So now we are announcing the results who are going to the next round
The teams moving to next round are
abhi- mukti
Navya-Cabir
Alya-dhruv and other three teams

Next round will be begin after 30 mins so be ready for it
Cabir: Ye manik to abhi tak idhar nahi aya ab kya karu
Navya: Usse phone kar
Dhruv: But his phone is switch off
Then manik nd nandini comes there

Abhi: Tum teek ho na nandini
Nandini: Ha bhai
Mukti: Nandini where u went without informing
Nandini: Vo..
Manik: Ye sub ham bad me discuss karlegi ab tum sab jakar prepare karlo for next round
Dhruv: Par tujhe kaise pata
Manik: Who will win over us, see final winner will be one team among us
All smiles
After that the competition begins
All the six teams performed
Host: Now time for the final round and the teams qualified for final round is
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Krishna-radha
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Mukti-abhi and
cabir- navya

All clapped for them
Alya goes from there in angry
Manik: Isse kya hua
Dhruv: I will see

Then the final round begins and all sings and finally Abhi-Mukthi win the competition
They come down after receiving the prize

Manik congrats guys and hugs them
After some time all left from there to their hotel

Precap:
Manik to explain them all what happened


Mukthi: Alya are u ok with manik nd nandini
Alya: If am in nandini's place even i will go to that place without listening anyone
Mukthi: Not that alya i think nandini loves Manik nd are u ok with it because u love him even now i know it

Nandini hears all this and goes from there





Aaj do parts update kiya nd as my exams are postened to next week so i cant able to update next part till my exams are completed so, i updated two parts

give feedback on story nd take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome story. Read all chapters in one go.loved the way u penned this story. Manan's moments were beautifully penned.Manik and small girl rocked.precap was interesting.Looking forward to read further.do pm me whenever u update.
Keep smiling
Stay blessed😊
All the best for ur exams. Do well
Edited by archu_asok - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update


:p all the best for exam :p
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
Manan gt eliminate.
Mukbhi won..
Alyas feeling..
Luvd it..
Thnkz 4 d pm

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