SPACE mein pyaar and dosti pt 17 page 16 29/9 - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
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chapter 11:-
its been 6 months since manik and nandini were together ...SPACE adored them as a new couple ...
<the night before musicana > manik and nandini were in maniks bedroom she was sleeping in his arms like a doll and he was protecting her..."nandini"manik moaned her name ...hmmm
nandini i wanna marry you mein kal sabke saamne tumhe propose karronngi hamri aakhri din hey space mein so kal in musican i will propose you...nandini waas blushing listening tto this she placed her lips in his they were kissing each other ...he took of her kurti and then her jean she took of his shirt {its not like they didnt sleep together before but they always had protection..this time in excitement they slept together without protection] manik gave a lovebite on nandus neck...she moaned...then u all know wat must have happened😆😉...after some hours she took her bag wore her dress and left from there...telling she will go in a pink note...he woke up and saw it at the same time nyonika had come there she saw him smiling "omg..manik ua smiling after a long time...i just came here to tell you that tommorow when u win musicana u gonna announce that ua getting married to soha khuranna and u a even gonna make her wear the ring...i know u leave that desi but i am warning you if u wont get married to soha then u very well know mein andini ki life spoil karoongi ..."she smirked and went from there manik was blank it was one of his best night till nyonika had come and tommorow he have to tell those things which he never even dreamed offf he has to hurt his life,she will be shattered,but its better i hurt her then seeing her get hurt by some b***** ...
next morning:-
all were getting ready for musican ...nandini had already informed every of her friends that manik is going to propose her...she couldnt stop smiling the whole day she saw manika nd went and hugged him "hiii baby good morning ..."she was blushing he hugged nandini very tightly she sensed somethings wrong but she thought maybe he was nervous ,then she left from there to her dressing rooom and he for his room all the girls and boys were teasing him abt nandini he controlled his tears and gave a fake smile...so they all were getting ready with their dresses
...mukthi wore this:-
alya wore this //;-
navya wore this/;-
rose wore this:-
and last bt not the least andini wore this:-

and in the boys : cabir and harshad wore this:
abhi wore this:-
dhruv wore this :-
and manik":-
the stage was being decorated at it s fullest :_

the first competitor was the girls they sang desi look

Gore gore chokre
Gore gore chokre
Gore gore chokre{mukthi strted the song playiong her guitar }

Meri desi look
Meri desi look
Meri desi look pe
Ho mar gaye gore gore...
Gore gore chokre (x2){alya contnd }

Main jhumka laga ke naachun
Main thumka laga ke naachun
Main jhumka laga ke naachun
Main thumka laga ke naachun
Na mujhko tok re..

Meri desi, meri desi
Meri desi desi desi..

Meri desi look
Meri desi look
Meri desi look pe
Ho mar gaye gore gore...
Gore gore chokre (x2){nandini sange this part with full confidence }

Le chal apne naal soniye
Le chal apne (naal)
Le chal apne naal soniye
Le chal apne.. (x2)

Mera sohna saha mukhda
Hai moon ka tukda
Kehnde ne taare, kehnde ne saare
Kehnde ne taare, kehnde ne saare
Marte hain mujhpe ho yaar kanware{navya sang this }

Ek aankh mujhpe, dooji kurti ke hook pe..
Meri desi, meri desi
Meri desi desi desi...

Meri desi look
Meri desi look
Meri desi look pe
Ho mar gaye gore gore...
Gore gore chokre (x2)

Chudiyaan khanke (oye hoye)
Haath mein chamke (haaye haaye)
Chori se sunte yaar tham tham ke (x2)

Ye karna chaahe sign vign dil wali hook pe

Meri desi, meri desi
Meri desi desi desi..

Meri desi look
Meri desi look
Meri desi look pe
Ho mar gaye gore gore...
Gore gore chokre (x2

the song ended the judge stood up and started clapping their hands the girls were all veyt happy the boys were the next competirors they sang aao na from haider they to sang very perfectly now was the resuly time,,,nandu was so excited not because she would win but because manik would propose her...all the girls were holding her shoulder in exciotement the judge announced the winner and the winner was boys ...nandini was hppy for manik and so were other girls...manik went in the middle of the stage took the mike and told "hello people thanks for liking our song...today is the day when im gonna propose my fiance ...she is very hot and beautiful he had a smirk in his face and my fiance plz come t the stage nandini had kept her foot suddenly manik talked "my dasrling soha khurana where are you !!everyone put ua hands for soha my fiance"soha entered the stage manik looked t nandini nandu was blank she didnt no what to tell tears rolled down of her eyes...manik was hsattered seeing her he tried to make her understand through his eyes why did he do all this but it was to late she had left from ther cavya mukbhi dhrulya and harose was very angry on breaking the dolls heart nandini ran out hlding her dress as it was a gown..she couldnt control her tears..she kept on running until she reascheed parking lot,
she overheard two guys speaking

guy 1:-manik ne nadini ko chodo they were an awesome couple yaar or usne

guy 2:arre rich ladke aise hi hothe hai kya pata manik jab nandini ke saath nahi tha thab soha ke saath maza kar raha tha

nandini couldnt listen to any of this she wont home changed and ran away from her home catching the next fllight to us '

precap:-nandini and maniks full life was changed manik didint get marrieed to soha ...nandini in us as a doctor a new entry of a kid !!!!guess who??

sorry guys for the short update dont forget to leave long comments bye

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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
amazing
the girls' dress are so beautiful
plzz continue soon
i want to see how manik gets to know about his son
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Amazing ... u took great effort to search for the dress n they're awesome... the last bit is a bit emotional .. Poor nandini .. continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54
CONTINUE ASAP!!!!! JUST CAN'T WAIT!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Plzzz continueee. ...plzzz
Can u plz update ur chapter index...
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
so nandu's gonna get pregnant and all those accusation will start on nandini...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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DEKHO AB MUJHE GUSSA AA RHA HAI JUST TELL ME THAT WEN WILL U UPDATE THE NXT PART? PLZ PM ME OKAY??
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58
chapter 12:
"After 5 years ...the day was still the same to me dull and dark..though the sun was shining brightly , it was still dark for me ...like everyday i had to wake up and get ready for a new challenge ...i had to deal with my life worries" nandini completed the sentence woke and went to the room next to hers ...it was filled with toys , she went near the bed a kid of 4 was sleeping holding his batman as tightly as he could..."arjun ! baby wake up son!!!u haveto go to school come on baby get up"screamed nandini ...though she hated her son as he was reminding her of manik whom she dosent even wanna think of for a second but she had to deal with him, she gives him everything but even hurts him as much as she can whenever she is upset "...arjun woke up as he knew his mom would hurt him if he wouldnt wake up either he would not get his breakfast or he would have to go to school walking which he didnt want...in the past 5 years nandiniz life had changed she had become more cruel than ever...she used to shout at everyone in the office,though she succeded in becoming very rich she started becoming heartless as her heart was still wih him ...he whom she never wanted to see again , she got herself ready and made her son get ready too,she drove to his school in her new jaguar car, "be a good boy!!mamma dosent like bad boys and dont bring ua friends home !!got it "she warned him with a smirk...though nandini hurts him a lot he loves his mother a lot he is 4 but he was matured enogh to know that his mom never want to do these things with him and she does all this bcz of his dad ...he always wanted to know his dad his mom used to alwayz taunt him saying that he is like his father , he always had this curiosity of knowing his dad , "
as we all know if destiny has choosen two people to be together then even if they stay away from each other they come close one day
the same thing happened to nandini and manik,
it was almost noon when nandu was busy with her paperworks in office while she got a call from the principal of arjuns school...she picked up the call "hello mam,this is arjuns principle as u know arjun has scored high marks in his maths exam ...the board wants him to participate in a exam,if he passes in the exam he will get a direct upgrade in his class..."told the princi
nandini was over excited "sure mam...arjun would love to participate in any maths exam , "
"i knew u would tell yes!!so i have booked three tickets for u all u arjun and a teacher will go to this exam.it will be conducted in MUMBAI,INDIA "princi replied
nandini was shocked listeneing to principle she never wanted to visit india after all this but she had to go for her son,she cant let a mere breakup destroy her sons life, the breakup was major but ...no we should go to india "nanduu just told the mam yes the mam rold her to pack her bags to go to india ,
she rushed back home packed all the necessary things they had like 4 suitcases ...she picked her son got him changed and off to airpot they were accompanied by natasha a teacher almost nandinis age ...they boarded the flight reached their detination nandini had booked a resort for them she didnt mind nats <natasha>staying with them as she was really a good friend ...'
they all reached the resort it was named as "della resorts in lonavla" it was a beautiful one nandu tok her sons hand and went to the room nats room was next to theirz, nandu bent down to her sons height "i know we have come here forua exam but today igive u a day off go and enjoy !!just dont get lost u have ua cell call mumma wen u nedd anything i will be here itself k ..take care of ua self baby " nandini smiled and kissed her sons forehead .."i love youy mamma "he kissed her cheeks and went away to change and off to swimming pool...nandini went to natz room she saw her exhausted and sleeping she woke her up"natz listenn mein todhi kaaam se bahar ja rahi hun ..tum arjun ko sambalna usse ko maath dena ok"natz barely heard all her sentence but jost nodded as nanu went out natz slept ...she didnt even care for arjun sometimes ...arjun wore his swimming costume and ran away to the pool he saw 9 people therre 5 guys 3 tall 2 short and 4 girls all wearing swimming costumes and chilling in the pool first he got frightened seeing the guys then he saw the girls and their perfect shapes made him go gagagaa<though arjun is 4 he loves girls and he goes gaga ovre themjust like his dad> he went near the pool slowly in his tip toes...he went silently and asked calmly "cann i please ply with all you guyz ??"he asked with a cute face he was mostly to look like his dad on the out but sweet from inside "he was trying to take a glimpse of manik who was facing the barcounter manik still had tears in his eyes due to what he had done 5 years back...mukthi sweetly replied to arjun"baby we have booked this place for us today !!can u plz enjoy in the kids pool"though they saw him for the first time all had the feelings that they had seen him somewhere that he is one of them ...arjun started crying plzzz can i plzzz???manik got hell irritated and turned back to look who he is as his eyes met arjuns he felt like it was his part ...that boy was his but suddenly he ws like what nonsense is he thinking arjun got hell seeing maniks angry face ...he made a sad pout manik smiled seeing him all his friends were surprised seeing him smile like after ages cabir ran and hugged arjun"boy whatz ua name u have done a miracle u have made manik smile " the 4 year old was so hell confused why is this guy hugging me is he mad he though to himself "my name is arjun im four years and my mothers name na"navya interuptted him arre betha chalo hum tumhara saath kelenge : navya bought a small dog and arjun was so happy seeing it he started playing he had everyone were in the pool no one got to know what time is ot its almost 3 hours since all were in pool and chilling at the time nandu reached and saw natz was sleeping she woke her up and askd her where the hell is arjun natz didnt have any cue nandini started getting worried she ran to the lobby asked the manager where is the play area and the pool manager showed her the directions nandu searched everywhere she was crying due to fear ..she felt she will loose her son.."where are u baby ? plzz ajao "she tried calling him but his phone had switch off ...she was sweating she had bad thoughtz thinking if someone had kidnapped him if he had got hurt ...she ran to the lobby agin and asked if there was some other play area or pool heremanager replied "mam there is a private pool but someone had booked it its close to ua room"she thoughht maybe arjun is there,she ran to the pool "arjun !!sweetie..mamma ke paas ajao " as she saw the pool she was numb for a moment ...she saw manik with her son wih their son...she was stunned seeing the scene as for manik he couldnt stop smliling seeing nandini after ages he came there walking slowly sloely from the pond near her she was still numb seeing him as he came closer there was a glass piece wich cut his leg he was hurt nandini saw him and was about to run but stood there watching as she hated him now...manik smile had no ends that day ,,,nandini was still sobbing ..manik didnt stop walking he still came closer to her , he was about to hug her...but she took a step back and replied to manik "not this time manik..not this time im not gonna let you hurt me "...she told in the saddest tone possibke ..manik frowned listening to this .."chalo beta arjun !!!i dont want u to stay with losers"she gave a death glare al"were stunned listening to tyhis they couldnt beleive their eyes ...manik was still looking at her ..."but mom.."arjun moaned ..."tumhe india mein ek haafte rehna haina bas chupv chap aao mere saath she pulled his hands and was about to leacve while she turned back and replied"manik malhothra dont u dare come near me or my son!!!u disguist me and i hate you !!!"she warned him and keft from there holding arjuns hand in a tight grip ...all were shocked seeing nandinis rude act ,the girl who was like flower petal now become a rock ..tears rolled down maniks eyes he fell on his knees and screamed as loud as possible all ran to him for his help he was heartbroken he was confused he was scared and for her she was blind and scared tooo


thatz it guys ...a long one just for u dont forget the long comments ...
-loads of love
manasa 😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
So Intense.. So good ..
Update next part soon And a little longer please :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#60
Nice and as I said a baby arived :p

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