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Posted: 10 years ago
pls update soon eagely waiting...nice concept of having jealoused nandu saying all this.
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So u r bk ha black mailing shuru hogyi apki gud so nw evrybdy will comment as u r bk pehle v thought nt to disturb na ... Isliye no comment bt nw v pl do and v shld gt daily update
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plz dont delay the update its already been 24 hrs since u updated..
please update fast and haan it was a very good update...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
juz read last 3 chapz n teaser in 1 go.. it was as alwayz superb..
i wasnt able to comment earlier as my mob needed servicing.. n then being a newbie i hv limited num of commentz..
i was juz hoping dat manik nandini ko accompany kre n nt dat aryaman!! n uh made it dat :) :)
manik puked on aryaman.. one of the best thingz manik did..
dat idiot nyonika!! alwayz upto smthng to create difference between manan..
nandini taught aryaman a vry gud lesson.. pink polka dot boxer :D :D n dat guy who was in aryamanz rum (hahahahahah).. nandini was smart to click snapz.. nw he will stay away frm manan.. he also cut off nyonika..
manan convo.. love has rly changed manik.. he was so loving n caring n humble n calm.. fsog.. grr fab4.. uh r rly spoiling nandini..
gud toh knw manik is virgin.. heheheh.. he is waiting foh the ryt partner.. wow..
shuuu alya!! uh r a baddie.. get lost.. move on..
n our beautiful chachi who went malhotra mansion to wake manik up.. the best (y)
plz continue soon..
n abt teaser.. manan r getting teased or manik rly teasing mukti by saying abt fsog?? need to find out..
plz pm me..
Edited by Saisha77 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Plzz don delay yaar ... I am obsessed by ur story love ur very much u are n amazing writter ... plz post as fast as u can ...
When eva u get time
Love ur story very much ...
Continue sooon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update .. loved it...
Loved manan scene...❤️
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Loved the update ... hope u willl update fast ...loved the manan scene
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Bachi!!! Hawww
Awsum update dear
Cont soon dear
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Hey hii read all parts together they were very interesting and the teaser is also very good
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now come to the update

Manik held her hand " India gate , Chandni chowk , Qutub minar , Red fort or "

"What are you saying ?" she was confused

" where i should take you and announced you are my beloved girl friend ?' he said while google

" are you making fun of me ?" she tried to pull her hand and asked

" hello i am damn serious " he held her hand more thigh " i want to show off " he said and kissed her knuckle

"everyone is watching us " she look hotel staff looking at them

" let them " Manik said and stopped a taxi , pull her with him and seated " jaldi bolo where you want me to take you "

" first get proper clothes , and i am hungry as in excitement i didn't had breakfast " she said

" Excitement of what " he blink his eyes ,she look away he brush his shoulder with her;s " were you really serious " he didn't look at her and said

"i don't know " she look out as she knew she has giving him chance to pull her leg , he was searching her cell and smiling "what ,give me back " she tries to take it

" i want some basic idea what it is while talking to them " he said and read , she was not getting where to hide herself

" it worked :) " he text to Mukti and give her back her cell , she look at him he had a naughty smile on his face

" i am sure you have done some mischief, i dont know why i read her this mail ?" Nandini scold herself

" while i was asleep in plane you were reading this ?" he asked and she blushed . they reached Mall

Nandini thank God his confrontation ends ,she felt like a thief

" my pleasure " Mukti message her she read and look at Maink he was looking at dresses

"Nandini will you help me " he asked her .she closed her cell and walked to him

" you are looking like cartoon " she took away shirt and gave him other

" really" he look at light blue shirt

" decent " she was busy pulling out shirts from rack " i dont think you have this color" she taken out one and placed next to him " go Manik change " she asked him who was busy mesmerizing her "go na " she push him to changing room



Aryaman was following them he saw her alone he quickly grab a shirt and ran in too the next door on his way he asked the shop keeper to ask Nandini he is calling " now i will see how your Manik will tolerate it ?" he said and took off his shirt and waited

" Ma'am the guy with you is calling you there " he pointed towards the changing room

"okay " she picked out few more shirt and walked towards the room

Aryaman peep out and saw her coming " i must keep my cell ready " he fixed his his cell on auto

"Manik " Nandini knocked at the door ,he opened it and pull her in

" You " she closed her eyes and placed all the shirts on her face "Manik " she shouted as he was in next door he walked out Aryaman tried to hold her hand but at same time Manik opened the door it bang right on his nose

" what are you doing here ?" Manik pull out Nandini and asked him at same time he click the picture

" I " Aryaman look at himself in mirror his nose was bleeding

" you hurt yourself , i didn't do anything " Manik look at his panic face and said

"he pull me in " Nandini said from hiding behind Manik , Manik clench his fist and directly hit him on his stomach "stay away , this time it was accidentally, next time i will make sure it was intentionally" he said and Aryaman grab his stomach and sat on the floor


" we will see it some where else" Manik said , Nandini look at girls looking at him and smiling , she followed their direction and saw him in shorts

" kya " she stand in front of Manik and cover him " you haven't seen a guy before " she showed them her eyes , and push him backwards , Manik look at himself

" oh God i was checking pants when you scream " he held her arms and shield himself and walked backward

Aryaman walked out of room he see them coming he quickly ran back in room

"You change " Nandini was standing in changing room

" you will stay here " he hides his face with his hand and bite his lips like her

"very funny " she pinch him

'Aaah " he shouted

"Manik behave " she placed her hand on his lips he wrap his arm around her waist and pull her to him

" i love when you being possessive for me " he peck and took trousers from her hand and tried "what you say?" he asked her

" i like you in every dress "she smiled


At same time Cabir called them and inform them they have reached Delhi

" now real drama is going to start " he winked , he quickly picked up all the dresses which she had selected for for him and walked out with her

" oh i didn't bought anything for you " he said

"Manik it is not must " she look away

" wait " he gave her the bags and ran in a branded shop

"what he is buying ?" she saw him point towards her .with in 10 minutes he came out

" you went in ladies shop " she poke him as she saw bag's in his hand

" so i went to buy for my girlfriend any problem " he said and winked "by the way you were too in gents shop few minutes back " he said

" i dont want to fight " she give up


In hotel

"where were you both ?" Cabir asked them

" shopping " Manik waves bags that were in his hand

"since when you have started shopping for Victoria secrets " Cabir asked him

" for us " Mukti came forward and tries to take it from him

" no for her " he hides behind him

" and you did from Allen Solly "Cabir winked she didn't said a word

"Nandini you are glowing " Mukti said

Manik hug Nandini from side "thanks Mukti for your help FOSG really helped us both " he smirk and Nandini blushed she played with his shirt button

"uff Nandini you told him " Mukti in surprise look at her

"actually we don't hide or keep secrets " Nandini said and blush they look at them their fingers were entwined and both were smiling looking at each other ,she was not expecting this from him in middle of hall

"What " Cabir look at them in surprise

" bacho kai baat nahi hai " he kissed Nandini head

"you know the college staff has inform us the concert is at night " Cabir said

"really " Manik look at them in surprise

"what to do ? it is so hot in hear " Mukti said

"i have heard they have very nice swimming pool we can chill there " Aliya said

' good idea " Cabir said and look at Navya

" hum ko to sona hai " Navya said and yawn

" i " Nandini wanted to say when Manik press her arm " we will join you guys there " Manik asked her to walk with him

" you both will stay together " Navya asked in surprise

"girlfriend hai meri " he said and look at them . Mukti look at Aliya

" Nandini you can stay with Navya as you both are scared of pool " Aliya said

"no i am not scared " she said and look at Manik they both walked away

"what is this FOSG?" Cabir asked

"You send them that " Aliya asked Mukti she nod

"Hai kya yeh " Navya asked them and look at Cabir who gave a blank look

"Mukti how could you do that ?" Aliya poke her

" i was only helping her she was nervous , i didn't had anything else at that time i forward her that , and she had shown it to Manik " Mukti bites her lips

"what he is doing here ?" they all saw Aryaman coming with a bandage nose



In room

"sorry it was bit awkward " Manik said as he closed the door and gave her the bags

" i guess it was needed " she peep in the bags

" i can make a excuse and we can stay in room " he said

" no i will go i am not scared of water as far as your are with me " she pull out a black draped

https://www.victoriassecret.com/swimwear/one-pieces-tankinis/draped-one-piece-secret-by-victorias-secret-swim?ProductID=216775&CatalogueType=OLS


He look at her she stand and place it next to her " are you sure it will fit me " she asked

" the lady there said it will " he smiled

" i will try then " she said

"are you sure Nandini ?" he asked ,she nod and walked in changing room "Manik close your eyes " she said as she step towards the door he could see her bare leg

" done " he closed

" now open " she said and stand in front of him . he opened his eyes and he drop his jaw "kya " she look herself in mirror and asked him , he stand and walked towards her stand behind her and look at them in mirror at same time door opened his hand was no her waist . he pull her back to him

" oh sorry " Aliya said

"What "Manik asked in irritating manner pull Nandini more close

" washroom is preoccupied can i use your's " she said

" yes sure " Nandini moved Manik hand from her waist "coming " she quickly peck and walked towards the changing room to get the bags ' you can use now " she walked out with the bag saw Aliya staring at Manik he was busy looking at Nandini

" go before you ruin our room " Nandini said and wink she taken out more dress from the bag and look at it

" you can try them later " he took the bags and kept it in wardrobe and lock it


" Aliya lock the door and bring key " Manik but the wardrobe key in Nandini bag and saw her wearing the robe

"Chala " she walked to him

"yes sure " he offer her his arm


"today for the first time Aliya is looking like Harshad " Manik said as they walked away " how i was not able to see that " he said she smiled

"i guess after today she will understand we are in relation"Nandini whispered

"hope so " he smiled and walked ahead


To be cont

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Edited by naddiya26 - 10 years ago

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