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nav.jot29

@nav.jot29

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Posted: 10 years ago

#521

Hey :)
As u said...jealous nandini...yes she wud be a bettr treat to watch.
Cuz jealous grls r wrth watchin haha.
Nd yayyy i ws also dere in d party..i startd readin it nd i ws like..mera naam kyu ni aa ra..i hd olredy thought to pm u :p bt dn ya my name ws dere hehe
Thnqq soo much <3
I hv to still read d nxt chptr. Ws bsy in makin sm manan edits
Bt i ll read it soon nd dn aap pe taareef ki barish hogi cuz i knw it wud b great readin it :) :)
Take care. Stay happy.
-Navjot

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Suprabha

@shaanmaan

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#522

Rocking update what a party with a bang.. Nandu's dress so stunning navya bd our soha is also too gud splash on cabir so exciting cabir's plan get flop nd aliya got drunk so funny and nandu's jealousy no boundaries to explain but she is hurt to wonderful update plzz update soon

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HTA111

@HTA111

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#523

Wow awesome superb fantastic party and update

He is still feeling jealous and become restless when saw her with aryman still she told him that they are bff he just couldn't take it her being close to someone else other than him

Now she also didn't like him to be around with aliya that's why she felt hurt and tearful so when Nandu goes from there manik has to rushed after her to see where is she going if alone then he could spend some time with her can't wait for manan romance

Lol aliya they played prank on navya but aliya drank it good one so now what aryaman will do

Continue soon and thanks for pm

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#524

FIRST OF ALL...THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR AN AMAZING PARTY...!!!😊😊😊😊
ITS FANTASTIC...MIND BLOWING...!!!!👏👏👏👏👏
I LOVE YOU SO SO SO MUCH SWEET HEART...!!!😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳
FEELING SO HAPPY ...!! BY THE WAY...I LOVED MY LOOK..U KNOW...STRAPLESS WHITE DRESS AND AN AWESOME TATTOO..
😉😉😉😉😉😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆

MY FAVORITE SCENES ...

Scene1

Manik was sitting on the sofa with a frown on his forehead.. He was thinking about Nandini.. He said to himself "where is she.. College se chali gai.. I called her two times but she didn't pick up the call.. Upar se that Maddie.. MY Nandini.. Seriously..? Damn it.."

Aaliya composed herself and nodded in a No. Cabir "iske lie new girlfriend dhoonde?" . Manik eyed him. And aaliya hit him with pillow shouting " u r such a rascal cabir". Everyone laughed again. Cabir freaked " shit.. We are late. Candy will kill us. KY2 club ka 25th anniversary h. Go get ready.."
Manik " nooo.." Aaliya " shut up.. We r going.."
Cabir " Manik u can't say No to ur EX- gf."

Aaliya " no cabir.. We are friends.. Only friends.. And will always b friends.. Right Manik..?" Manik smiled a little and said " thanx for understanding and.. m sorry".. Aaliya smiled and said " shut up.."

Scene 2

Aryamann " woh.. Woh.. sb iski galti h.." pointed at Soha.. Soha annoyingly " meri?"
Aryamann winked at her saying " yes. U didn't punch him that day.. So I had to punch him.."
Soha thought for a while and pointing on Navya said " sb iski galti h." Navya being shocked " hamari?" Soha winked at her saying " who told to give BHAV to that jerkshad ."
Navya thought for a while and said " sb Nandini Ki galti h"

Nandini's eyes got widened.. Navya " tumne hame roka Kyu nhi us Harshad k Bache se friendship krne se.." Aryamann raised his eyebrows in disbelief saying " HarshadJi se Harshad ka Bacha.. "
And everyone laughed except Nandini. Nandini" don't try to act smart Mr. Aryamann Khanna"
Nandini's eyes got widened and she said " Keep it casual.. I can't wear such clothes.. no way"
Soha with a devil smile "YES way"

FROM HERE...SCENE 3 AND 4 WAS SUPERB...MIND BLOWING...AMAZING...!!
FILLED WITH CANDY...CANDY...CANDY...
U R REALLY AN AMAZING GIRL SWEETIE...WONDERFUL...!!!

Scene 3

The club was beautifully decorated with peppy eye catching decor.. Lights of different colours were flickering and Loud music was coming from powerful music system .. A bunch of beautiful and gorgeous girls were dancing on the dance floor that was close to the back wall of club. And a few people were playing card games at one corner..

Cabir entered in the club dancing and banging his head followed by Fab4.

"party all night.. Party all night.. Party all night..."
Cabir " wooohoo.. we do Party all night"
Candy saw Fab5 and screamed with joy " oh my God. FAB5.." rushing to them..
A girl to her girl gang " hey.. That guy.. he looks like parth.." Another girl "oh yes.and he is so hansome"

Aaliya and mukti came forward and hug her.. Candy gave a Hi-five to Manik and Cabir..
"sunlo saari dunia walo jitna b tum zor lga lo krege party sari night..."
And she pulled Dhruv's cheek saying " ahhh.. My shy boy.. How r u..?" Dhruv was embarrassed.. He uttered " shy boy.. tuje kisne.." and he turned his head to Cabir and gave him angry looks.. Everyone laughed loud..

"This is the puppy song.."
Cabir " What.. I didn't do anything. U all know she is so CHALU. No one can hide anything from her"
""are koi b de do black white.. Are kahi be dedo left right.."
Candy smirked saying " wo toh hai." And she turned her head to Manik and playfully said " I know everyone's SECRET" raising her right eyebrow.

" are chodo sare fight vight.. Ye LOVE DA SEASON h."

Manik gave a shocked to Cabir.. Cabir to himself " Run for ur life."
Cabir changed the topic saying " Candy.. Kisi hottie se to milwa." Manik was dumbstruck at cabir's smart escape..

"hoto ko krlo set set.. Dono gaalo ko wet wet.. Jab doge Tb u get get.. Ye love the season h"

Candy " Come guys.. I want u to meet my friend." Manik " u guys go. I'll just come ."

"chado rehna sad sad. Hojao sare happy shappy.."

Fab3 followed Cabir and Candy.. Cabir in excitement "hot h?" Candy " yes too hot.. But ladka h.. " Everyone laughed.. Cabir made a sad face.

"if u feeling bad bad. Aao lailo free di puppy."
Suddenly cabir's eyes fell on a girl who had her back towards him.. Cabir "I think she is hot.. I'll just come."
Fab3 and candy in unison " Cabirrr.." But Cabir ignored them and walked away.. Dhruv" ye nhi sudhrega"..
Mukti " but He didn't even see her.. Hot.. Seriously?.."

Cabir walked to the girl caressing his hair and t shirt.. He cleared his throat and said " excuse me. Beautiful.. " . The girl turned and Cabir was shocked.. He freaked " MADHUBALA."
Navya couldn't believe her eyes.. Cabir immediately closed his eyes nodding his head and then slapped his face.. He opened his eyes and narrowed his eyes on her face saying " Madubala. You.."
Meanwhile candy and fab3 had reached to a guy who had his back towards them.. Everyone was excited to meet her friend.. Candy patted on her friend's shoulder and he turned.. Everyone's smile had vanished..

" chado rehna sad sad.ho jao sare happy shappy"
Candy " guys this is..." She stopped seeing everyone's dull face.. She uttered " what happened guys.. Do u guys know..."
Cabir who was standing near to them with Navya sighed and said " yes.. We know each other. Aryamann. Right?" Aryamann " yes.. And u guys r The famous FAB5 ".

"gore gore chokre. Gore gore chokre... gore gore chokre"
FAB3's attention was grabbed by Navya's look.. She was wearing a black short dress with white straps.. Her PARDESI LOOK made fab4's jaw dropped.

"gore gore chokre..gore gore chokre..gore gore chokre".
"meri desi look. Meri desi look.. Meri desi look pe... oh mar gye gore gore gore gore gore gore gore gore chokre"
Soha also came there and she was wearing a bronze off shoulder short dress and was looking too hot.. Dhruv saw Soha and was awestruck. Soha and Dhruv shared a glance.

"Meri desi look. Meri desi look..Meri desi look pe... oh mar gye gore gore gore gore gore gore gore gore chokre"
Candy uttered " I think u guys have some... issues.. "
Aaliya "Relax candy.. We don't freak at others unnecessarily" looking at Aryamann.. Anger was clearly visible in her words.. Aryamann ignored her. Soha noticed it.. Mukti said sarcastically " Exactly.. Anyway.. It was nice meeting u all.. Candy excuse us. " while plastering a smile on her face .
Candy with a lame smile " okay.. Cool" and Mukti dragged Aaliya from there. Dhruv and Soha were exchanging glances stealing their looks whereas Cabir was staring Navya annoyingly.
"Navya " ghoor kya rhe ho " clenching her teeth..

"main jhumka lga k nachu. Main tumka lga k nachu..Main jhumka lga k nachu. Main tumka lga k nachu. NA MUJKO TOK RE"
Cabir changed his expressions from annoyed to smiling and said " waise MADHUBALA . Ye dress tumpe bahut suit kr rha h.." Navya being confused looked at her dress and it took her no time to understand that he was making fun of her BLACK and WHITE dress. She gritted her teeth .

"Dhating dhating dhating dhating nach.. Dha dha dha din din.. dhating nach.. "
Cabir laughed loud saying " BLACK and WHITE MADHUUU.. " but he couldn't complete his sentence as a drink had been spilled over his t shirt by Navya.. Everyone was shocked. Cabir couldn't believe that. Navya " awww. Kya hua. Tumne hi kaha tha aj sara din DRAMA hoga "clenching her teeth..

"dhating nach...dhating nach...dhating nach..."
Soha who was trying to stop her laughter couldn't control and laughed out loud. Soha was laughing like crazy and Dhruv was just adoring her . Cabir fumed but just then Dhruv grabbed him from behind and dragged him from there.. Navya smirked and boasted " are PATNA wale kya Mumbai walo se kam h".
Aryamann sighed and nodded in disbelief saying " Zara b nhi".

Scene 4----( near the bar 8.50pm )-------------

Manik was moving towards the bar suddenly he saw a glimpse of Nandini at the other side of dance floor. He stopped there only.. Manik surprisingly " Nandini.. !! " .. Colourful lights were flickering in the dark club.. He couldn't see her face again as it was damn crowded with BEAUTIFUL GIRLS.. Manik's eyes were searching Nandini.. Manik murmured " aisi jagah Nandini.. Impossible.. Manik stop DREAMING."

" duniya me.. logo ko.. DHOKA kbhi ho jata h.. Ahhah ahahaa..ankho hi.. Ankho me. yaaro ka dil kho jata h"
But now he was getting restless thinking about Nandini. He couldn't control and took out his phone and dialled Nandini's number but it wasn't reachable.. Manik to himself with a frowny face " damn.. not reachable. Kaha h ye ladki" . He again dialled her number while moving backward and bumped into someone. A girl flinched " ouchh.."

"duniya me.. logo ko.. DHOKHA kbhi ho jata h.. Ankho hi aankho me.. yaaron ka dil kho jata h"
Manik turned immediately and saw a girl kneeling down.. Her face wasn't visible as her hair was falling on her face as she had knelt down to adjust her heels.. Manik " ohh.. M really soo.." and he couldn't utter a single word after that. He was awestruck..

"beeraaa.. tara ..tara.. para para.. para.. tarrr taaaraa taaraaruu."
Music was loud but manik wasn't able to listen anything.. He felt as if the whole world had stopped there.. Everything seemed freeze to him.. The girl was Nandini.. She was wearing a bluish green halter neck shift dress that ended on her knees.. She was looking breathtaking gorgeous.. Nandini was also dumbstruck seeing him. He was looking too hot in a deep v neck sky blue t shirt paired with a deep blue blazer. .

" aj blue h PaNi .. PaNi.PaNi.PaNi.. PaNi.. PaNi.. PaNi.."
Nandini immediately straightened up herself. Manik was blinking his eyes in disbelief.. He rolled his eyes over her from head to toe.. That brought blush to her cheeks. Blush rose from her cheeks to ears as she felt his intense gaze.. She was stealing her looks..

Manik who was lost in her uttered " r u real?" Nandini was dumbstruck at this question not knowing what to say. Suddenly she realise that her cell was ringing. It was Manik's call.She gave him a confused look saying " Manik. Why u r calling me.."
Manik came out of his trance and uttered " Wo. I called u.. Ahh.. I called u.. .." He took a pause still being lost in her saying " I forgot ... why I ...called u.".. He was totally lost in her.. This made her more conscious. She caressed her hair stealing her looks... Her face was glittering due to the little makeup she had done.
Manik slowly bent on his knees leaving her surprised.. Nandini " Manik..What. What r u doing..?"
Manik didn't reply and touched her foot softly.. Nandini held her breath.. Manik adjusted her foot in her heels.. Nandini's heart was racing too fast.. She stretched her dress a little low from knees being uncomfortable. Manik noticed this and immediately stood up.. Manik sighed and uttered " tum .. Yaha... "
Suddenly Navya came there shouting " are nandu.. Kitna maza aa rha h.. Aur tum yaha Ho.". She ignored Manik's presence intentionally and dragged Nandini from there..
Manik " are.. Suno.. Nandini.. Wait listen.." He was feeling disgusted..

"aaj blue hai pani pani pani pani pani pani.. aur din bhi sunny sunny sunny sunny..."

TAKE CARE
I WILL COMMENT SEPARATELY FOR PART B...!!!

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candy1990

@candy1990

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: HTA111
Wow awesome superb fantastic party and update

He is still feeling jealous and become restless when saw her with aryman still she told him that they are bff he just couldn't take it her being close to someone else other than him

Now she also didn't like him to be around with aliya that's why she felt hurt and tearful so when Nandu goes from there manik has to rushed after her to see where is she going if alone then he could spend some time with her can't wait for manan romance

Lol aliya they played prank on navya but aliya drank it good one so now what aryaman will do

Continue soon and thanks for pm

Hey HTA111..
hehehhe.. I hope u enjoyed.. But the party is still not over..
Manik and Nandini are still not Manan.. Bna dun?
Hehhe.. Love u a lot girl for ur analytic skills .. R u science student?
Heheh.. Don't say thanx for PM.. it's cool.. And I promise u next update will be awesome.. Most romantic till date (of course in my story)

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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#526

Awesome update
Loved it
Update the next part soon

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#527

part b was awesome...
loved manan scenes a lot...so babies r burning in jealousy...its gonna explode soon
loved aliya...aryamaan
soha...dhruv
navya..cabir
a lot...!!! our future couples...!!!
so my favorite scenes...

Scene 5

Cabir was fuming. Suddenly Manik came and dragged him to a corner.. Manik in excitement " cabir. SHE is here .. SHE is here."
Cabir annoyingly " who so ever is here yaar. U know what SHE did to me.."
Manik annoyingly " cabirrr... NANDINI.. NANDINI is here.. And m not dreaming this time."
Cabir annoyingly "SHE spilled the drink on my clothes.." still lost in his thoughts..

Manik " I.. I.. I met HER.. I was talking to HER.. and..and then Wo MADHUBALA aai. And.and she took her away.." making an angry face.
Cabir clenching his teeth " YES .. MADHUBALA.. Exactly.. She is the problem .. But i'll show her that m no less" and he walked away leaving Manik's mouth open.
Manik " cabir.. Listen.. Cabir"

scene 6

Aryamann " hey.. U okay..". Aaliya saw him and being annoyed turned her face away still coughing badly.. Aryamann" hey. Listen. What's ur name?"

Aaliya " do u even interested..uh.uh. Knowing.. Uh..uh. My name. Uh.uh"
Aryamann annoyingly " r u always like this?" Aaliya annoyingly " yes.. But with u only.." And she left..

Scene 7

Aaliya act to think and said "ahhh... I need ADVICE.. And that too from the wisest man present here.. Do guys know who is he?"

Everyone chuckled and shouted " NO.".. Aryamann held his breath. Fab3 rushed to her.. Aaliya pointed on Aryamann saying " there he is.." and laughed. Mukti " aaliya get down.. This is not ur style."

Aaliya on mike " are.. Kya style yaar.. Style ko maro goli.. Dhish-keyuun" and she laughed again.. Cabir to mukti with a horrified face " Navya is fine.. And aaliya... Shit man.. "
Mukti " cabir tere planss..." Clenching her teeth..

continue soon...eagerly waiting for our candy special manan update...
take care

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candy1990

@candy1990

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#528

Originally posted by: aavani

part b was awesome...
loved manan scenes a lot...so babies r burning in jealousy...its gonna explode soon
loved aliya...aryamaan
soha...dhruv
navya..cabir
a lot...!!! our future couples...!!!
so my favorite scenes...


Scene 5

Cabir was fuming. Suddenly Manik came and dragged him to a corner.. Manik in excitement " cabir. SHE is here .. SHE is here."
Cabir annoyingly " who so ever is here yaar. U know what SHE did to me.."
Manik annoyingly " cabirrr... NANDINI.. NANDINI is here.. And m not dreaming this time."
Cabir annoyingly "SHE spilled the drink on my clothes.." still lost in his thoughts..

Manik " I.. I.. I met HER.. I was talking to
HER.. and..and then Wo MADHUBALA aai. And.and she took her away.."
making an angry face.
Cabir clenching his teeth " YES .. MADHUBALA..
Exactly.. She is the problem .. But i'll show her that m no less" and
he walked away leaving Manik's mouth open.
Manik " cabir.. Listen.. Cabir"

scene 6


Aryamann "
hey.. U okay..". Aaliya saw him and being annoyed turned her face away
still coughing badly.. Aryamann" hey. Listen. What's ur name?"

Aaliya " do u even interested..uh.uh. Knowing.. Uh..uh. My name. Uh.uh"
Aryamann annoyingly " r u always like this?" Aaliya annoyingly " yes.. But with u only.." And she left..


Scene 7


Aaliya act to think and said "ahhh... I need ADVICE.. And that too from the wisest man present here.. Do guys know who is he?"

Everyone
chuckled and shouted " NO.".. Aryamann held his breath. Fab3 rushed to
her.. Aaliya pointed on Aryamann saying " there he is.." and laughed. Mukti " aaliya get down.. This is
not ur style."

Aaliya on mike " are.. Kya style yaar.. Style ko
maro goli.. Dhish-keyuun" and she laughed again.. Cabir to mukti with a
horrified face " Navya is fine.. And aaliya... Shit man.. "
Mukti " cabir tere planss..." Clenching her teeth..


continue soon...eagerly waiting for our candy special manan update...
take care

Hey thnku sweety... Was waiting for ur post only..
Hmmm . Today I wont say anything.. Bcz next chapter is not a candy special update but aavani special updte.. I love u so much..
God bless u..

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nav.jot29

@nav.jot29

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#529

Finallyy..i hv read it.
I.loved 1st scene. Deir frndshp is so pure.
Cool Cabira nd mukti d evil twins...dey r awsmm.
Nd finally alya nd manik hd a much needed talk.
2nd scene ws equally good. The way dey were blaming each other haha. Dt ws funny!
I dun lyk soha callin her bhabhs pta ni kyu :p
Ndd party on full swing. Ahan.
I loved d way u put up d sng lines in between. I ws imaging evry scene.
D bst one ws patna vale mumbai valo se kam ni h. .srslyyy :p
Blck nd white madhubala rocked.
Cool cabiraa shocked. :p

Manik's reactn ws epicc seeing nandini. He ws srprised...shocked...stunned!!! Bt yeh nvya distrb krti hai yr...aaj k epi mein bhi kiya :p

Nd wowww..ek hi scene mein jealous nandini nd jealous manik. Mzaa agya.
I thought nandu wud drink dat.bt alya did. So r dey gonna tok nw...alya n aryamann..i think dey shd.

Nd m eagerlyyy waitin fr d manan update <3 <3
Update sooon ya :)
I enjoyed readin it... It ws awsm :)
Bt i wnt nxt chptr bht jldi :)
Take care. Stay happy. :)

Edited by nav.jot29 - 10 years ago

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Asha_25

@Asha_25

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#530

Awesome Update.
Rocking Party.
Loved it.
All scenes r Amazing.
But waiting for manan romance.
Manik reaction was seeing Nandini Superb.
Drunk Aliya also funny.
Both r Jealous very nice.
please continue soon.

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