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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 1



" It's not only a concert but also someone hope, two souls will be unite too. "


Am's forbidding Nandini to meet Manik since she met Manik in his house late night.


Manik stops himself to meet Nandini in presence of her Am's while that Pandit is very happy to see this.


Kabir comes to Manik : Manik don't worry for Nandini, Navya hai naa? She will take acre of her come to meet the girl. She will be here in some seconds.


But Manik can't leave his shining alone.


Mukti runs to them : Hey buddhu she is here and you are here please come fast in one hour the concert will start.


Mukti holds his hand drags him in parking.


On the other side Dhruv wants to meet Aliya before the concert. So he goes to search her.


Navya makes Nandini wearing her dress.


Navya : It's amazing dress everyone will glare u tonight.


Nandini gives her dead smile.


Navya : Don't worry you will perform with Manik I am sure so please don't be sad.


Navya makes Nandini sits and starts to make her ready.



Manik sees the girl she seems anxious.


Girl : I am sorry I think it's an bad idea.


She is ready to leave but Aliya stops her.


Aliya : The girl that we want tos save it's an formidable girl who always was with us. She makes us change. Before meeting her we are terrible with everyone, we can make someone life hell. But she had the audacity to stay against her. Because of her we understood that such relation hadn't any future.


She sees Manik.


Mukti : Yes she was here in right time for Kabir or me.


Kabir : She is perfect. She changes her monster on a positive man.


Manik : They are right. Every time she was here for everyone but now when she is in danger the unique person who can help her standing here in front of me. so it's not a crime to beg for her.

So please help us to save an innocent girl from an evil man who has not good intention on her.


Girl : My bad luck when I met Pandit, I hadn't friends or boyfriend like u to prevent or help me.


Manik : But hua kya hai?


Girl : So when I met Pandit I was a talented singer who worship Pandit like a god because of his reputation. He did strange things like strange exercises. But this was not the worst thing.

He finds any excuses to touch me. In the beginning I didn't think in bad manner but later he comes very closely to me. One day he comes to my house by himself and stays for a dinner. My parents find him very good. But one day he tried... he tried to...


She breakdowns girls tries to comfort her.


Manik : I am very sorry to make u rethink about this moment but it's very important.


Girl slowly calm herself and restarts : He tries to abuse me. But I was successful to throw him and run way. But the same night he comes to my house and asks my hand to my parents.


Girl makes a pause.


Girl : My parents didn't believe me so I ran away. It's one year and half that I don't meet them and don't leave my house by fear.


Mukti hugs and consoles her : Don't worry today he will be in behind bar.


Aliya : Yes we are with you, a man like him can't be movement easily like that. He has to pay back.


Girl : But...


Dhruv comes here : But how Pandit ji can do that? It's unbelievable?


All are shocked to see him.


Girl : See even him he doesn't believe me.


Aliya : Dhruv pls jao from here.


Dhruv : No she has to prove her words.


Manik : What?


Dhruv : Yes so if u say the truth you have to go and see Pandit right now.


Girl : No I can't.


Dhruv : Listen me first.


Girl stops and lets Dhruv finish. He makes a little plan. Kabir puts on her a small camera in her bag.


They accompany her to Pandit cabin.


Manik : We are behind the door don't worry.


Girl takes a breath and knocks.


Pandit : Come in.


He is shocked to see her.


Pandit : What are u doing here?


Girl : Why you are so shocked?


Pandit : Leave from here right now.


Girl : Panditji : I think a lot and I accept ur proposal.


Pandit smirks : I never wanted to marry you, it was a tactic to prevent you to report against me. And I love someone who is more talented and elegant that you. And her grandmother was my guru and now I am her guru. After the concert I will ask her hand to my guru maa.

so leave from and if u tried to create some drama I will call ur parents here.


Girl : But can't do that, because of you I lost my parents, my studies...


Pandit pushes her : Stop your nonsense.


She falls down and faints.


He opens the door Fab5 hide themselves.


Mukti makes her conscious.


Dhruv : I am so dumb that I trust a psycho that my own friends, my buddy. He makes my life hell.


Dhruv has tears : Because of him I lost my love, my brother, my friend and my best friend. How I can insult her and in this way? I cross all the limits.


Aliya hugs him : Dhruv it's not ur fault u was manipulated by this Pandit.


Dhruv : But at least I have to trust you, for our love.


Manik comes to them and embraces Dhruv : Nothing happen by ur fault but by this Pandit.

I will handle him now.

Dhruv : No Manik not now, first perform with Nandini, lets her win her hope. Rock this fusion concert not only for your love but also for me. Please Buddy.


Kabir : He is right topi wala, play this concert for ur love.


All laugh.


Mukti : Wearing ur dance and come to the stage ur shining star wait for you.


Manik blushed.



Navya : Please Nandini stop crying.


Someone knocks on the door it's Am's.


Am's : Navya come we will sit, Nandu's family is waiting.


Navya leaves with her.


Nandini : Aiyyappa please let a miracle happen.


Manik enters in the room.


Manik hugs her by back.


Manik : Don't stress, we will be together even if we don't sing together. Please sing for Ams and us.


She looks at him.


Manik : when u will perform just close ur eyes and think of us.


She nods.


He pecks her forehead, he tries to move but she hold his collar and her lips crush on his.

She puts all the love on this kiss. Despite the shock he responds back.

They need breath so after a touching hug she leaves the room.


Manik after her leaving : I want to see, the happiness on ur face issliye I hide that I perform with you.




Nyonika announce : Welcome everyone for the FUSION CONCERT. And I am glad to invite our celebrity Emraan Hashmi and Amyra Dastur who will judge the concert tonight.


All applauds for their venue.


Amyra approaches Nyinika and takes the mike : Hi Space thank to welcome us, seeing the crowd I am exciting for the performances also.


The concert start with the first contestants.


Kabir : Only one couple played very well.


Manik shots his shoulder: Better than Manan.


Navya is happy to see him : Manik I am sorry for my stupid kasam please broke it and saw Nandini before the performance she is so anxious.


Manik : Madhubala she will rock tonight.


He sees Am's.


Am's : Why are you looking at me?


Manik : No nothing.


He leaves.


Nyonika announce Nandini and Dhruv names.


Nandini comes in stage. she starts playing the veena, waiting for Dhruv lyrics.


Manik starts to sing and also the light turn on :



" Lamhe..velle lamhe

Velle pal yeh

Idhar udhar tehal rahe "


Nandini has tears to her love, her Manik sings. He signals her to continue.

She sings :


" Sehmein..sehmein dil bhi

Keh rahein hai

Bina tere

Mar jayian

Tere bin mar jayian

Mar jayian

Tere bin mar jayian re..

Mar jayian

Tere bin mar jayian

Mar jayian

Tere bin mar jayian re..

Dil mein..koi rug yoon

Dhadakti hai

Ki jaise bijli si daude

Saansein..teri saansein

Jagaati hai bina tere

Mar jayian

Tere bin mar jayian

Mar jayian

Tere bin mar jayian re..

Mar jayian

Tere bin mar jayian

Mar jayian

Tere bin mar jayian re..

Girhon ko suljhaao

Tere bin kya jeena

Bata mujhe..bata mujhe

Girhon ko suljhaao

Tere bin kya jeena

Aa bhi jaa..aa bhi jaa

Aa bhi jaa..aa bhi jaa

Lamhe..velle lamhe

Velle pal yeh

Idhar udhar tehal rahe

Sehmein..sehmein dil bhi

Keh rahein hai

Bina tere

Mar jayian

Tere bin mar jayian

Mar jayian

Tere bin mar jayian re..

Mar jayian

Tere bin mar jayian

Mar jayian

Tere bin mar jayian re... "


They sing very well but three persons are very unhappy : Nyonika, Am's and Pandit.


Nyonika comes to them : Manik u sing with her?


Manik : Yes why?


Nyonika : But yesterday you said that you will ruined her performances.


Panit interrupts : You knew already yesterday that your son will sing.


Nyonika : Not at all.


Pandit : Don't play clever with him.


Nyonika : With whom you speak Mr. Trilock.


Pandit : You the egocentric Mrs Malhotra.


Nyonika : Maybe I am selfish but don't wants a student as a wife.


Pandit was shocked : Stop it. And you Manik?


He comes to him : How dare you to sing with her?


Manik : Oh poor boy you lost naa?


Pandit grabs his collar. Policemen come on stage.


Inspector : Who is Pandit Trilock.

Kabir shows by finger Pandit.


He comes to him.


Inspector : I had an complaint against you.


Pandit : What me?


Inspector : Yes


Pandit : I think Am's it's Manik plan.


Am's slaps Manik.


The girl comes on the stage : No it's me, actually Ma'am he saves your daughter live.


Pandit starts to panic : You get out.


Inspector : Why?


Kabir puts the video. All are silent. They see Pandit and the girl conversation.


Chachi steps on the stage and holding : How dare u to play with girl lives? U try to touch my Nandu?


Pandit : Leave me.


Girl's dad : No it's truth that before to come here he ruined my daughter's life.


Girl sees Manik.


Manik : Yes I called him, to make ur parents understand that force wedding it's not good.


Girl's dad : I am sorry beti we did a big mistake to think Pandit is a true guru.


Girl hugs his dad.


Pandit : Am's they are lying.


Am's slap twice him : First slap to make me fool and second one to approach my family.


Dhruv punches him : U make me insulted a purest friendship, by your wors. I lost everything today because of you.


He comes to Nandini : I'm so sorry Nandini. I was out my mind.


Nandini : It's happen because of me also, when I fought to make my hope win I didn't care of Pandit's gestures. Being a girl I must be more careful and don't believe him blindness. I thought it's because of Manik's jealousy that he blamed Pandit. But no the truth is that a guru had a wrong on his shishian and the shishian didn't prevent him.


She cries : Just imagine if Manik wasn't stubborn, maybe Pandit will be successful to win over me.


Manik can't support her tears : Nandini it's not ur fault totally fault, when a coward make everything around to make him good. All was planned by him, my excitement, Dhruv and my quarrel, Am's venue... But his partner was my own mom who helped him very well. The Mrs. Malhotra.


Nyonika was shocked.


Manik : Nyonika u are fool, like really you think you will win over our love. First u manipulated Soha's dad now Pandit. U think I am so stupid to not see ur game. Just be away from Nandini otherwise I will forget that you are my mom, samji?


Nyonika was stunned to see her son words.


Pandit : U will pay me Manik. U never can't be happy with her.


Nandini comes him : Just shut up, I am shameless to believes a evil like. How a student of my Am's can be so bad. U ruined her name today but thank god not her granddaughter's life.


She removes her sandal and beats in his face : I never want to see you in my life again.


She starts again to beat him. Manik holds her.


Manik : Stay him away inspector. Relax Nandini.


She hugs him.


TO BE CONTINUED OR NOT


Chap 1 page 1

Chap 2 page 4


Edited by 8seetha - 10 years ago

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nits_viratholic thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#2
but do continue 😆

Omg...hahahaha...Nandu ne chappal se maara? Lmao but that jerk deserves it...😡
Continue with some manan romance and Fab 5 - Nandu scenes... It will be good..😆
Edited by nits_viratholic - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nits_viratholic

res

but do continue😆



No I am crying 😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
This is lovely... love how you incorporated everything, including Dhruv and Ams... looking forward to more.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yeay another story ye bhi koi puchne ki bat hai ovio cont soon I loved it hopefully show mein asa kuch dkh jaye
Thnx for the pm dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#6
awww awsum!!!
lovd it wish it could happen dis way n Lov the "wish i was lucky to have a bf" lyk u part!!!!!
Awsum j=how u shuld how manik threatened nyonika!!!!
pls cont
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: 8seetha



No I am crying 😭


why? 😲 what happened? Dont worry about my Res..I will Unres soon...exams on so quite hectic schedule.. 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow..seethu...its awesome...
loved it...u connected all dots ..so beautifully...
pls continue soon...take care...love u
thanks a lot for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hahaha mujhhee to bas kiss and pandit ko slaps achaaa laga manik se v ek punch to milna chahiya tha yr that's not fair offfcourseee u hv to continued this
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Posted: 10 years ago
#10
congo for new story
thanks for the pm
awesome start
continue soon

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