manan ff: the love of my life - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for your wonderful comments and I do realize that most of you don't like the marriage concept, sooo I'll try my best to have them romancing before their marriage.
Here goes part 3

Manik: nandini can't I just kiss you once?

Nandini: nope

Manik: not even once?

Nandini: nope

Manik: look nyonika!

Nandini turns , and sees no one there

Manik gives her a peck on her cheeks and says,"manik Malhotra doesn't abide by the rules"

Nandini: manik! That's not fair

Manik: who said romance had to be fair? Your are still my girlfriend and I have the right to romance with her.

Nandini suddenly realized that manik did have a point. She also did realize that they had slept together many times, so kissing isn't much of a big deal.

She kne she would miss the way he left a tingling sensation wherever he touched her, she loved it.

Nandini: manik, do youthink it's okay for a girl to make the first move?

Manik: what move?

Nandini: this move, she inches closer to him. ' the best things and feeling in the world are unseen, that's why we close our eyes when we kiss and dream''

Manik grabbed her waist, pulled her close to his body,
looked into her eyes,
looks at her lips while biting his,
looked back at her eyes again,
grabbed her face gently,
and leaned his face close to hers'.

Manik realized that she was feeling a bit uncomfortable, so HE made their lips meet and focused on her bottom lip.

He pulled away first, and she gave him a pout.

When she was about to leave, he grabbed her by the waist and French kissed her. Their tounges were fighting for dominance, but obviously manik's was winning.

To be continued.
Hope you guys enjoyed and please comment on if it was better than chapter 2.
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only people who reply will get pms for the next part: also please like and reply because it motivates me to write more and also sorry for the really small update
Edited by ranveerishani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Chotu sa update
It ws great..
Cont soon wth big one pls
Natashaaaaa thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
hey why itna small small update jao main comment nhi karungi itna acha sa romance ko... its again a cliffhanger
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
nice update
but chotu sa tha
Cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Nyc update
thanx for d p.m
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Love it... can't wait for more!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Awesome..waiting for next part
Edited by lavi1612 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Nyc update
thanx for d p.m
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Posted: 10 years ago
#19
here's part 4

This chapter has mature content just a warning

She was a miracle of his life. She was the best thing that had ever happened to him,for she walked with him and not ahead of him urging him to follow. What could he have done without her?
At that exact moment he felt warm hands hug his naked chest. Her soft hands ignited him every time they touched his skin. Manik smiled and touched her fingers that explored his chest curiously. He caught her hand and brought it to his mouth..just when he was going to taste them, he felt her pulling way.
He chucked, he was not gonna leave her so easily. He grabbed her again turning around this time, so that she crashed into his chest. He observed that she had draped herself in just a cloth of silver satin. And damn, the material was thin and it was slipping away due to her silky skin beneath. She blushed profusely pulling her hand away but he continued teasing her. And then, with one hand he started to push the cloth down.

Nandini gasped. She looked at him innocently, beet red at the onslaught on her already sore body. Thanks to him again, she thought. Manik pulled her so he was hugging her now and then removed the cloth but in such a way that only he could see her front. She was gloriously naked.
Not a single piece of clothing covering that vast expanse of beautiful,sparkling skin. The desire crept up, his body hardened and it became warm, overcome by a pleasing feeling. He moaned looking up. "God you are so beautiful" he said as he covered her again and hugged her, touching her at all the right places.
Nandini could swear that her legs would give away, tension rose up from her thighs,ripping into her sensitive region making her moan. He was driven now, her moaning just accelerated his blood to infinity. He picked her up and ran back to their room. His house had 2 lavish bedrooms,2 bathrooms,a kitchen, a study, a gym and massage room, and a bar counter on the terrace.

Their bedroom was just luxurious and comfortable. She obviously had permission from her chachi saying that she was with navya, but her chachi knew she was with manik..He quickly dropped her onto the bed, but carefully so that she didn't get hurt. The fall made the satin skip, and there she lay below him naked, from head to toe waiting to be taken on by the love of her life. Manik looked at her for a few moments, gazing at the beautiful woman in front of him. God made her from all the fine things, he thought. Nandini blushed and tried to cover herself only to be stopped by him. "You are beautiful Nandini, don't cover yourself, I want all of you". Man, that sounded good. Really good.
The vibrations went down there, to that spot and she closed her eyes. Manik climbed on top now, careful not to put his entire weight on her,he blew hot air on her face. The close proximity of his face and the curiosity lingering as to when he'll touch her made Nandini go wild with pleasure. He was blowing air at all the right places but didn't touch her. That made her mad.
Manik was happy seeing this effect on her. He was very pleased and so, he decided to entice her more. His mouth moved south, blowing air on her belly making her breasts go up and down due to anticipation. And then he moved down, and that made her grasp the sheets and she let out a moan. This time it was loud and needy. Manik felt energized and so he fell on her and crashed his demanding lips on her.
He held her waist while kissing her passionately, his tongue circling her mouth, she tasted delicious as always. His other hand cupped her breast. Her nipples hardened under his touch and she was so aroused. She dug into his skin due to the unbearable pleasure that travelled her body. He stroked her nipples fast making her lift up due to pleasure.
His erection was growing and she could feel the tension on her private. He then pinched her nipples and she moaned loudly into his mouth. And with that he broke apart and looked into her. She looked deliciously divine. He kissed her forehead with pressure and her breathing touched his neck. Nandini pulled him back and then threw him to her side and climbed on him.
Manik looked aroused and surprised looking at his wife all in action. He smiled naughtily as she placed her lips on his chest. She kissed him briefly, everywhere, his chest, his neck, his face and his swollen lips. Manik just enjoyed his to-be-wife take advantage of her. he liked her like this, he liked the equality they shared while making love. And now due to the rising hormone levels. He couldn't take it and therefore looked at her and said. "I want you. Now. Badly."
Nandini looked at him with desire and said "Take me, then" smiling a little. And there she slept on the bed, her heartbeat go faster,she felt her heart would smash out of the rib cage. He positioned himself on her, never breaking eye contact.
The fact that the lights were on and the cool air from outside trickled her bodies now and then increased the excitement. He looked at her once again as confirming if she were ready. He slowly bent down and planted a kiss on her lips. This time, he kissed her longer, he kissed her with love pouring out of his heart.
He then touched her, there, while kissing. Nandini almost jumped due to the unexpected invasion. His probing hands moved up and down, slow at first and he picked up pace. Nandini hugged him tightly, her mouth open due to the explosions of pleasure. He could see that she was nearing her peak.
He could see that she was going to explode any moment and therefore he picked up his rate. His skilled fingers rubbed against her moist pink skin, the most sensitive area of a woman's body. He liked seeing her like this, he liked it when she enjoyed him, he liked it when she was happy and satisfied.
He would never do something that she didn't like, he knew she knew that. The best part about lovemaking is that, the new feelings,emotions, revelations that come with it. The innocence at first, the pleasure at the end.
What a journey! God had created a perfect method of uniting two souls,physically and mentally. Where they completed each other in every true sense. It exposed many hidden vulnerabilities, fears of any couple. They then joined in a synchronised rhythm of love in order to abolish those fears and inhibitions to establish a bond that was unbreakable.
Nandini's face went higher. She felt the world slip away, she felt a sort of a volcano build up inside, the lava travelling up the narrow opening to be released into the world, to be free. And then she came, wonderfully shouting into the air as she fell back with Manik on top of her.
She panted heavily and she looked at him. Her eyes were almost pleading. She wanted more. And her dutiful to be-husband was more than happy to oblige. He entered her moaning her name looking up. Ishita pulled back her head in pleasure. The feeling of fullness was the thing she liked. He was into her, completely. He filled her. He went slow first and then started picking up pace. And then, he went really fast making Nandini go mad due to the nerve-racking pleasure she experienced.
She shouted his name all the while turning him on further. And finally when they seemed to lose their consciousness if they don't stop, he fell on her panting. Their breaths intermixed and they looked deep into each others' eyes. It always felt like the first time. Always. He smiled at her and kissed her lips, sucking it in this time. She responded by touching his face to get support while he kissed her.
And then he fell next to her. It took some time for their breathing to halt. They stared at the ceiling. It had a beautiful painting of two lovers kissing passionately against a backdrop of the dark sky filled with endless lamps of love. Manik and Nandini looked at each other. They both turned towards each other. Manik quickly pulled a sheet to cover them. Nandini nuzzled closer. He hugged her tight. She kissed his chest and then slept on his chest, keeping her face on his heart. She heard the rhythms, sounded similar to her's.

Please like and comment
(This was origionally a raman and ishita ff)

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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
one word 4 this its sooo hottt
BTW in this update manik and nandini married ???
Edited by Natashaaaaa - 10 years ago

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