manan ss : the spoilt brat

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Manan ss : the spoilt brat

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Manek had always been the golden boy with the silver spoon in his mouth why wouldnt he be as he was of the only heir of the malhotra clan he had always got what he had desired whether it be toys in his younger age or the desired fast cars as he grew older , he always had the aura to attract girls with his good looks and his fathers wealth and status there came a time he felt he could buy anything in his would even humans with his wealth

And on the other hand we had our ms moorthy aka nandu who was total opposite to our monster she was a simple girl with simple aspirations in life her only dream was to make her appa proud of her achievements and her other dream was to become a professor

What will happen when these two opposite poles meet ?????????? there would be explosions and fire works and much more

This ss does not have any resemblance with the shows track and it is completely my brain child

Character sketch :

Manek malhotra : 24 yrs old spoilt brat and only son of mr and mrs malhotra

Nandini moorthy : 22 yrs old completing her masters in history and a very cheerful girl with stong moral beliefs

Rest of the characters will be reveled as the story progresses.

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Chapter 1 : pg 1

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Prof nandu.. Lol
Awesome idea
Cont soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thnx guys for all the encouragement and I would try to construct the first chapter as soon as possible
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 1 : nandu meets the monster

"nandu beta zaldi karo internship ke phele din late hona hai kya"

Nandu: amma two minute pls

Amma : kk jaldi karo

(and our dear nandu is again of to sleep lost In her dream land)

Nandu : ahhh amma not again (trying to wipe the water from her face)

Amma : maine tumse phele kaha tha zaldi utto aur tumne time dekha hai 8 bajne wale hai

Nandu : ohhh lord amma couldn't u wake me up earlier (and then our princess wakes up and starts with her morning routine)

Today was her first day of colg as a assistance lecturer and she was quite excited about it

An hour later in colg

Principle: MS Moorthy ur wor here is u assist the students with their colg work and see if they have any problems with it and u also have to note down their annual progress

Nandu : yes maam

And then she is off to work

Scene 2

An hour later in malhotra mansion

"manek baba uthoo apko sahib bula rahe hai"

Manek : kaka kyun disturb kar rahe ho itne subhe subhe

Kaka : baba 12 baj rahe hai aur sahib apko kuch kaam ke liye niche bula rahe hai

Manek : ohh lord mujhe yaha koi chain se sone bhi nahi deta

And then he gets up and freshens up to meet his dad

Mr m : aaj colg se kuch log aane wale hai colg fest ke bare mein baat karne ke liya toh mein chahata hu ki tum utne attend karo

Manek : ohh pls papa why are u torturing me like this u know I cant handle all these things they are not my cup of tea

Dad : MANEK I don't want any more discussion on this matter and u are going to meet these ppl and that is final u get that

Manek : alright dad (and then mr malhotra walks off )

Anne do unn logo ko phir dikha ta hu

At the same time in colg

Nandu : mam u had called me

P : yes yes come in I had come work with u every year in our colg we have our cultural fest and which is generally sponsored by the malhotras so I want u to go and invite them on my behalf kk

Nandu : kk mam but when do I leave

P : say about in an hour

Nandu : alright mam

Now lets see what happens when fire meets the storm

Pls guys don't just read but comment as well so I will come to know whether I should continue or no

Edited by RK-ki-Kaneez - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome
plz cont soon..excited for their 1st meeting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely update..guess there will be fireworks at their first meeting..looking forward to it..please continue soon

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