OS:A journey towards musical bliss ( chk pg2 and 4)

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😊 Hi guys I am new to this forum and this is my first OS here on Manan ofcourse .Hope you guys like it .😊
Nandini's residence : 8:00PM ( Two days before fusion concert)
A drop of tear escaped from her eye and made its way along her cheek while the resplendent moon cast his soothing light on her innocent face ." Why am I doing this?" her heart questioned ." I am not worthy to be called a musician" slammed her brain .It was quite painful for fragile Nandini's stooping will power to battle against her mental turmoil .
" Jagadodharana ..."a subtle melodious voice echoed and the veena played felt ethereal in her head phones adding to her mental turmoil.
" Aams always told me that music is Saraswati and look at me I don't know to respect it I am loosing the sandhana ..I am lost in Manik's thoughts while performing .I cannot perform without him which means I am disrespecting this art form".Her mind said it all in one go .
she wept against the window pane she was being gazed by that Monster whose monstrous deeds often left her blushing pink and red .His glare managed to distract her .
She ran to his car " Manek I wont be able to perform for the fusion concert" she exclaimed while he kept staring at her dancing eyebrows without letting his eyelids veil her cuteness . She kept staring at the ground mentally preparing excuses to convince him and finally managed to raise her head to continue just to look at her Mr.Sauve driving away the steering .
" Was I rude? May be I should have told him my issues before passing judgement " She snapped her head saying " I am such a fool" .."What should I interpret from this reaction of his ? Is he annoyed? Irritated? SAD? Or did he give up trying to explain me everything?" Her eyes assumed a round shaped in utter horror.She kept walking up and down along the stairs in confusion .The owl of her clock ticked 1:30AM when the evil Monster came back to execute his dubious plan .
"Nandini " uttered a harsh voice she trembled for once .He held her hand and pulled her in his direction.
Within no time she was in his car and flooded with questions she choose to shoot all the questions in one go .But the monster remained a monk and hadn't answered a single one.
He closed her eyes and while she struggled to open her eyes she was enjoying being with him.He slowly let her witness the surprise breathe warm air against her neck from behind and said said " Surprise Miss Nandini Moorty" and slowly uncovered her eyes ...
Her eyes witnessed the white chopper landing from the dark velvet clouds .She was left amazingly astonished .
"Where are we going Manek ?"
"Oh Lord!! Save me from this question bank " Manek raised his head facing the sky .
" Well miss Nandini Moorty please google the meaning of surprise while you follow me " he said with an iconic smile followed by " NOW" loudly with branching red iris and protruding sharp jawline .
She mumbled " Monster" while she was forcibly being pulled towards the chopper .
...TBC
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: PrettyAaShu

Nice Start...
Continue Soon Please...!!

I am glad u liked it sure will continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Humzy

awsm start

cont soon

Thank u 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: frappie

I am glad u liked it sure will continue soon


I m waiting for it...😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow.. This ws awesome..
I loved it.. Chopper n all na.. Loved it
Cont soon yar 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice start...would love to read more...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i hv one www question lati kaha se ho itna awesome idea plz tell me its sooo gud nd well written plz continue soon
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Part 2
As they ascended the chopper Nandini's cardiac movements seemed running marathons .It was evident on her face ."Manek I have never travelled in a chopper " trembled her voice . She began pushing herself inside so as to stay away from the corners ..
" If you wish to stay close to me you dont have to struggle and find reasons " smirked manek.
He then noted an annoyed disgust on her face.He bent forward towards her face and brushed his nose against her .On her cheek he placed his lips and said" I know it is a cold midnight , your toes are involuntirily dancing with heated cheeks I can somehow hear the voice of your innerself you dont have to feel guilty " he winked ..
Nandini couldnt contain her Soul being ripped into peices while his lips ran mercilessly on her cheeks , his hot breathe was adding fuel to the fire .
Before she could compose herself to add to the disaster was a thunderous sound of the chopper taking off made her hands clasp Manek tightly .
" Manek I am not lieing I am really scared of take offs" she hugged him even tighter.
He gently caressed her soft tresses with his unbeleivably long fingers and in husky voice said " Dont worry Nandu I am here you wont fall .I wont let anything happen to you" .Nandini found her body loosing control over herself as he held her in his warm grip and spoke in such a tempting manner.
She suddenly let herself off from his masculine grip .He looked at her amazed shockingly .He sensed a sort of embarassment with a questioning look .
Sense knocked rather gate crashed his bizzare brain and quickly he realized what had just happened falling short of words he said " well ...you know ...what I said was ummm...actually ..."
" Shit " he mumbled " focus Manek " his ego shouted .
He moved away from her and said " Well Miss Nandini all I wanted to say is that with Monster Manek around you nothing can harm you as Only I can harm you" his brain slammed him by saying that was such a poor joke Manek yet he tried maintain a sane logical expression on his face.
Nandini looked away from him to sheild the increasing blush of her cheeks and her eyes encountered a marvel she witnessed the exemplery beauty of Mumbai city from quite a height above sea level .She grasped manek's hand and began saying " wooow Manek just look at that beautiful lighting its just fabulous!!! And the sea!! It looks so tiny tiny !! .Whereas all the while Mr.Monster kept staring at her changing adorable baby like expressions and his lips adorned a smile aswell.
"Uhm Uhm " he sat straight ammending his spine away from leaning towards Nandini..
" Tinier than you?? " his eyebrows rose amused and left Nandini pouting leaving him craving for her lips.
" Manek distract yourself you are freeking falling for her every second ; god help you" said Manek's egoistic brain ..
" Well you know what Miss Nandini I have better stuff to do rather than listening to your nonsense " he finally said and pluged his ear phones.
Nadini's mouth opened in an awe she was aghast ..
She tried her best to sound loud and irritated in her soft voice while she said ..
" Look Manek you bloody forcibly bring me Oh sorry! Pull me into this chopper without even bothering to inform me where are you taking me!!! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA HOW WOULD MY CHACHI REACT IN MY ABSENCE ."
" Please stop shouting Nandini" rorared Manek clutching her wrist tightly..
" Aaah its hurting Manek " he quickly left her hand bearing red scars of his long fingers.
" But I thought you were listening to music " Nandini rebuked back with head held high.
"Hmmm well !!! ...Actually I was " Manek looked away ." But your bloody thunderbolt loud voice is louder than my music " he shouted ..
Nandini closed her ears and as he completed shouted " FINE".
For sometime they remained silent it was indeed soothing after their battle of words.
Nandini slowly began sliping into her monsterous dreams as she slept on his broad shoulder while Mr.Irresistable gazed constantly at his sleeping princess...
Edited by frappie - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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guys thank u for your kind words I am glad you guys liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Natashaaa

i hv one www question lati kaha se ho itna awesome idea plz tell me its sooo gud nd well written plz continue soon

woh toh manan ka jaadoo hain btw I am greatful that u liked it ...

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