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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys thanks 4 or lovely comments
Here is part b
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India
" madhubala meri shirt kaha hair" said cabir irritatedly
" Hume nai pata" replied Navy
Ye mad bala b pagal hai smiled cabir
" very bad popsy" a cute girl pouted
" opps, sorry my little baby ur mom is behaving like an idiot..."said cabir
Cavya pouted angrily
" OK! OK! Sorry" said cabir innocently
" that's kk, popsy" caya said


Tring trying...


" popsy phone"
" yes Darling" said cabir
" hello"
" hey Bhai Natasha here. Guess what I m coming India" replied a girl from other side
" wao dats great"said cabir
" yeah" said natss
" BT what abt ur internship" cabir asked
" I will tell u when I will reach there its a surprise" nats said happily
" fine" cabir replied
" bye Bhai will call u later need 2 attend a party" said Natasha
Bye natss
" hey popsy let's call manik uncle he can control mumma she will b scared 2 see him as rakshas is gone stare her wide his deadly eyes" cavya chuckled
" great" said cabir



So guys it was part 2 of ch1 n each chapter will have 2 parts . if u liked this then hit d like button n I will b waiting 4 ur comments
N ya Nandini's entry is gonna b in d next ch .
N don't get confused with N.M it is Nandini murty
Hope u like it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22
really excited for NM's entry
plz cont soon with long updates nt chotu ones😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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partb was awesome...continue soon...😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
interesting start...can't wait for more... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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nice part
plz continue soon
if possible plz pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Hi lovelies 😊 😊 😊
Here is d 2 ndchapter



paris
party night
"but what is the reason again that same boring party wear the great doctor n m is not going to appear weather is this party is thrown for her or not she will not come then why these jerkes always throw the party when the guest of honour is always missing" Natasha said irritatedly
" i wonder why she never come and enjoy her life she has everything what a normal person would aspire but still she behaves like hitler god this N.m .she is a personality of different layers quite complex"

Dr. Iyyer n his wife arrived-------
" God evng Dr iyyer" Natasha said happily
" God evng, young lady " he replied
I like this man he is perfect a loving husband caring part fathers responsible doctor and young great friend of nm i think she was born to be the centre of universe
Every idiot male fantasize her n some great n sensible once care 4 her if anybody WD ask me to write a essay on N.M u will completely write a book on her each day a new side n the list goes on
Finally d party is over as usual N.m hadn't appeared n her award was accepted by Dr . iyyer
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After driving 4 a while when I was passing through d dense area covered with thick trees it started raining heavily
To my surprise i heard a female voice singing her pain was reflected in her voice



Suna Suns lamha lamha
Meri rahe tanha tanha
Aakar mujhe tum than lo
Manjil Teri dheke raasta
Mudke jara aab dhek lo
Aisa Milan phir ho na ho
Sab kuch mera tum hi to ho
Bepanaha pyar hai aka
Tera intezar hair aja
Bepanaha pyar hai aja
Tera intezar hai aka


(The cool breeze was blowing so calmly n softly as if it was soothing her pain but to my surprise I found that it is N.M
N singing with so much pain made my heart cry . She looked so hurt n broken . I coi could never imagine that someday i will watch her like this if i will describe this seems to anybody no one would believe me )
Again l focussed on d lyrics it was heart touching may b she was expressing her helplessness through this song


Suna suna lanha lamha
Meri rahe tanha tanha
Bichray b kabi raasto mai
To sang sang rahungee sada
Qadmo ki awaz sunken chalungee
Tumhe dhund lungee sada
Aisa Milan phir ho na ho
Bepanah pyar hair aza
Tera imtezar hai aka
Aa aa aa ...

( i was held shocked to see her like this she looked completely broken anybody can see through her soul right now even a blind man can feel your pain and suffering the more i get to know about her she becomes more complex for me but why she is so hurt , i silently followed her in the rain suddenly she stopped singing and turned around but thanks to my stars before she could see me i have side behind the nearby tree then i saw her going away in her car )

i was surprised to see her like this but she did not recognise my presence over here she is so smart that to her perfectionist work is proudly told by others may be she was very hurt


Inside Nandini' s car

Nandini' s p.o.v
I thought there was some1 who was following me BT it may b my extra sense when ever I try not to think abt u manik I always land up remembering our old memories I knew that ur friends were imp. To u BT wt abt us u always put our relation after them it hurts manik
I know u love me BT I don't have that much courage to go through that much pain manik l miss u a lot


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Natasha's p.o.v

i was relieved that she didn't figured out that there was an unwanted person in her misery she would have felt bad ohgod ! what is happening i am talking about good about her maybe she is not that strictt and heartless and she shows the world there is a mystery her singing clearly prove that she isn t pain i need to figure it out
Yes I will figure it out

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India malhotra mansion
in a dark room a man was sitting on an armchair steering the fireflies jar which were the only source of light coming from the dark room "where are you nandini i miss you "said manik painfully "its been 9 years I miss u I know it was my fault BT I was helpless " said manik painfully

Suddenly fireflies started 2 glow as if indicating that the wait is going to end soon
" Nandini plz come back" said manik

Manik's phone buzzed

" manik come 2 d party right now" said cabir 4rm other side
" am..a..actually cabir... I was wondering..."
Cabot cut his sentence n said " stop it manik don't behave like a sadist its time u shud stop blaming urself . I will not listen ur any excuses plz manik 4 fab 5 plz"
" fab5 " manik replied with a sarcastic smile
" plz try to forget that day manik its been 9 years " said cabir pleadingly
" cabir just stop being an advice n ya she left bcoz of me n a member of fab5 , u better don't speak anything " said manik harshly
" fine dude I can understand to some extent wt u feel n wt she meant 2 u BT just try to b normal 4 her , just give it a thought "
Manik hung up d call




After some time 3 kids entered d dark room
" chachu" all said together
R u cmng or not asked cavya
" can I take this glowing jar" asked raj
" no" manik said immediately
" plz just 4 once just give us na " said rahul
" no u guys go down I m cmng " said manik
" y r u so possessive abt this as if it is very precious" asked cavya
" he is such a monster I will complain it to ur beauty than she will never talk to u" said raj innocently

A smile appeared on manik's face remembering some kinds of similar words " u r such a monster manik when Nandini pouted "


so it was part a of chapter 2 hope u like this n buddy this account if u want pm hit like n comment fast 2 get part b tomorrow
Edited by roumania - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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itna chotu sa update were is nandu yr and manik also
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Its awesome
Cont. Soon😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Poorr Nandhu... can't wait for more... 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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poor nandu...
update was awesome...pls continue soon...😊

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