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Posted: 10 years ago
Hi dear
I'm back

Just read all the chapters back to back

Loved all of them

Navya interrogating nandu

Manan ka romance

Manik happy to loose

And abhi ki entry
Amazing

Thanks for the pms
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
update soon... Thanks fr Pm
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PART 25



nandini took abhi with her and nh3 went behind them ...fab5 too started moving towards tent ...they reached there to see abhi and nandini talking to each other ...they were sitting together and smiling and laughing at abhi's stupid jokes ...mukti looked at abhi for a minute and said "he is quite good looking "...

"Yeah I second u on that ..."said alya in a casual tone ...

"Yeah may be he is nandini's best friend "said dhruv in a sad tone looking at nandu and abhi hi5ing each other and laughing ...

"Bro its understood.. Look at them iss tarah sirf teen category ke log rehte h ...first best friends ,second bhai Behan ,third boyfriend girlfriend ...samjha topi wale "said cabir

Manik glared at all of them especially at cabir for adding fuel to his jealousy wala fire ...

"What do u think manik ...?"cabir asked him mischievously with a innocent smile ...manik glared at him ...

"They look cute together "said alya in a not so cute tone ...

"No they don't "manik dhruv and mukti said together only to get confused looks by rest ...

"May be they are friends ...stop assuming things "mukti said

"Yeah ...she is right "manik said glaring at alya ...while alya just rolled her eyes ...

"But manik dosto ke bechmein gap hota h ...yeha pe tho hava janeki jaga bhi nai h "said cabir cutely ...

Manik glared at cabir and looked at abhini who were in their own world sitting close Like cabir said with no gap for air...

"Anyway why r we talking about them ...let them be "alya said realizing maniks jealousy and getting herself jealous realizing manik was never jealous of any guy who talked to her ...


"Yeah ,let's just chuck all this ..."said dhruv and sat down and others did the same except manik who gave a one last look to nandini and abhi and went from there stomping his feet on ground ...

"Isse kya hua ?"mukti asked

"Aag lagi h ...bujhane gaya h "cabir said casually ...

"What "fab3 asked

"Kuch nai paglo tum nai samjhoge ..."cabir said sarcastically

"Pagal "fab3 said and started using their phones ...

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"Aap na ...kabhi nai sudroge ...u r still the same abhimanu ...joker "nandini said laughing at abhi who was making faces while telling about his all mischief ...

Suddenly a his phone started ringing and he got up only to be pulled down by nandu ...

"Where r u going "she asked him ...

"Arre lady hitler ka phone h" abhi said

Nandini hits him on his arms and abhi corrected himself "sorry amms ka phone h " and he went to have a nice lecture from amms ...

Nandini looked here and there and finally realized that manik was not there ...

She looked at cabir and asked him 'where is manik' with her eyes ...

Cabir just showed her the left side indicating he was there ...

She smiled and got up and went to that side only to see manik leaning on the tree ...

"Manik ...what r u doing here ?"nandini asked in cute voice ...she went near him and stood in front of manik ...

"Ohhh so miss murty u finally noticed that I was not there "manik asked

"Yeah ...actually mera dhayan nai tha ..vo bha..."she was about to say further when manik cut her in middle ...

"Oh yeah I know...abhimanu right ...u both look really close to each other " manik said clenching his fist ...

"Hmm vo tho h ...u know he didn't changed even a bit ...he is still the same joker ..."she said smiling ...

"Accha kab se janti ho usse " he asked sarcastically

"Manik ...y r u acting so sarcastic ..."she asked

"Really am I honey "he again said sarcastically

"Manik kya hua h "she asked ...

"Kuch nai "he said

"Manik bolo na "she said again
"Tumhe bada pyaar aa raha tha uss abhimanu. Vbhimanu Jo bhi h vo...y did u hugged him so tightly ...and why did u sat so close to him...and vo kya aagaya u didn't even looked at me once ,..."manik started complaining like a kid

"Manik...listen"nandini said

"No u listen ...u know how I was feeling ...no u tho were busy with ur friend right ...u ..."manik continued to say ...

"Manik shhh ...god u jealous kid ..."she said disgustingly ...

"Aaaee I am not jealous haa"he said ...

"Accha ...then u don't need to be jealous ..not at least with him "she said

"Accha why ?"manik asked

"Because he is my big brother ...Abhimanu murty ...tumhare hi age ka h ...and vo mere sage bhai h ..."nandini said trying hard to control her laugh seeing the sudden change in his expressing ...

"He is ur brother ..."manik asked with a slight smile

"Hmmm"she said

"Ohhh I love u "he said and tried to hug her but she stopped him

"Kyu ab I love u ...thodi der pehle u were taunting me "nandini said showing fake anger ...

"Sorry baccha ..I was angry tho bas I was trying to show boyfriend wale tantrums ...so sorry "manik said pouting cutely ...

"Awww...mera baby ..u were jealous "she said

"I was no jealous "he said
"Accha "she said and started tickling him ...

"Kya ...u were not jealous haa"she asked while ticking him ...and manik was laughing and saying no and stop

"Accha baba haa I was jealous bas u won "he said and pulled her near him ...

"Good boy ...ab chalo "she said and started walking when he pinned her to the tree ...

"No ..." He said
"But y "she asked ..he got close to her and said in her ears ..."you need to be punished honey ..."

"For what "she asked innocently

"For ignoring me sweetheart ..."he said and crashed his lips on hers ...

She didn't responded but just tried to feel his lips ...

He realized that she is not responding and he pressed her more on tree and kissed her more deeply and bite her lower lips ...she slowly started responding and the kiss got deeper ...

He finally broke the kiss realizing their need for air ...
"U OK "he asked
"Hmmm"she said and rested her head on maniks shoulder...


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Precap ...
Night time
Again a twist ...

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guys pls tell me do u all feel like i should end this fiction as show is ending or do u all want me to continue ...and yeah is u all did liked this part pls comment and like ...
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow superb update dea...
continue soonnn
tnx fr d pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
aww nice update Manik is so much jealousy of her own bro very funny
thanks for the update and the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow!! what an amazing update...its jus WOW!! thanks for the lovely update...the way u write is jus mindblowing...manan scene is pure blisss...i love to read jelous scene...u knw wot u rocked it...hats off dea..
i want u 2 continue...plsss do not end it...as its only the way to cherish MANAN...PLSSS dont stop writing
...already upset with ky2 ending drama...plsss continue soon dea...desperately waiting for ur update...keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
Plzzz yr dont end ths ff... Bhut jida awsm h..
I red tgus so maany tms... M waitng frm so long for ur update...finally u update.. Plzzz dont end.. Ths...
Keep smiling...
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Posted: 10 years ago

awww...jealous manik😉😉

pls continue this story...
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update
jeasouly manik
continue soon
dnt stop wrting
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update...
Jealous manik... hahaha... and our very own cabira...
Hey plz dont end this...
cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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