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Posted: 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Witcher

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Posted: 10 years ago

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I hope there will be more maniks pov as i always find it very fascinating how a guys mind works 😃

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Tanvi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Wow

Awesome prt.. So many dresses fr our nandu..

Hehe

Superb

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ushmaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

it was awesome update..

plz cont soon.

want manan to meet in the wedding and love blooming

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anyta

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Originally posted by: fireflies_love
Nandini's POV with BLACK and Manik's with BLUE
Happy Independence Day
<NANDINI"S POV>
And again my morning with a call 😳"Good Morning Miss Nandu "Again early morning this voice...NOT AGAIN...but this time Nandini is not same Believe me..."Yeah!!!"I replied back and I got a good message from other side
"So,u r no more my SPOT girl...yeah u r listening right!! U r free from MANIK's side" I jumped with joy!!!it was feeling like heaven came to me!!Manik was speaking so softly to me and even abt my freedom...I SHOULD give him that slap before...I thought to myself and switched the call...I jumped out of my bed and dressed with my Black top and Jeans and went to terrace for some sun bath as it was Saturday so no college today!!! and no school for Rishabh...I was soo happy that i couldn't stop myself of taking selfies

I went to Rishabh and kissed on his forehead and hugged him tightly
"Dii...what the hell are u doing let me sleep I slept at 2 after watching Football match" I can recognize his irritated voice but i can't stop irritating him
"No u need to get up we need to go out" I wanted to go for shopping for eating!!!I was soo happy
We go ready and left for the Fantasy Palace, by KingCoupon" where we can go through everything...I love dis place
Firstly I parked the park and rushed to Food Mall,a joint with tasty food...it was soo yummy to eat my favorite momos and chowmien...Then we went to Rishabh's favorite place Game Corner -AMOIBA...we played many games...and lastly I went to FASHIONITA WORLD...aha I was in need to shop!!! Seriously!!! Firstly I went to men's corner for Rishabh's shopping and while searching his T-Shirt I bumped to someone...somone with hard chest "Oouch!" I said with my low voice by moving head upwards to see who he was and I found DEVIL again MANIK MALHOTRA...Not again please...not infront of Rishabh...Please...
"Hey,U again" he said with smirk
"Yeah!!"I said leaving that area
<MANIK"S POV>
I need some fun...haha I have an idea just wait and watch Nandini Murthy...😆

"Di u know that guy?"Rishabh asked me.
"Yeah!!chal we shd do it fast"
I took his T-shirts and jeans and asked him to trial those while I will be going through watch centre...And then again he came to me
"So,u want a dare isleye yahan??No wait i have an idea let it be last dare for urs!!!what say??" He said me with smirk
"No!!U said me that it's over that's why i m here"I said and was abt to leave when he holded my wrist "Wait nandu!!not like this!! If I said then u have to do this...!!"
"Do what? and please leave me" I asked and pleaded him while struggling to get rid of his grip
"Come to the ladies corner in just 10 minutes or shd i take u...don even think of getting rid of me"He said by leaving my wrist
Why???I will toh go from here...
After paying bill we were leaving the place and suddenly he came and again
"Hey!! U r her brother...Oh so u must be knowing abt her college days..."
"No No...I mean yeah he know...actually i think Rishabh u shd leave and tell Raju Uncle(our driver) to come with the car to pick me up" I stopped him saying
I dint wanted Rishabh to go through these things
"Now What??"I putted my arms against my waist and asked him
He took me with him to ladies corner he asked a staff to collect the thinks he will ask for He took some kurtis,Frock,shorts,tshirts jeans and some skirts as well as some wedding collections...i don know what is he upto he came near trial room and asked for a chair from a staff he chose last trial room from the row and he said the watchgirl of the trial room that I m his girlfriend and he need to see what am i wearing??Like seriously Hiss GIRLFRIEND???Never I looked him with my wide eyes...and he sat there and asked me to take one kurti and change it...I took my tshirt out and went to that Kurti!!And came out He nodded no and then I took a gown with crop strips at back and came out with that!!And he asked me to take a round...
SHE LOOKS PRETTY OMG SHE HAVE A GOOD FIGURE!!😳
.and i think It was not soo good but he nodded yes!!No way??What am I doing??
I entered the trial room with shorts and tshirts...I was not able to unzip my Gown's Zip...I tried but...I dint wanted to ask for help as it was quite embarrassing but
"Hey!!Is there anyone please come in I need to open my Zip!!!I asked for help and opened the door
Oh!!No I gave money to that watch girl and asked her to be out of this path no what??Shd i go inside??No how can I??
Someone entered the room And suddenly the light went off...I took a relief
"Challo at least I cant be more embarrassed"I thought to myself
"Dii Kya app uss chain ko thoda niche kar sakte...mujhse khul nai rha...please!!"I asked
What shd I do??
I then felt a touch at my back and thought that it must be dii and suddenly the light came back I looked at the mirror and found that it was MANIK!! What what is he doing here??
And he was struggling to open my zip!! I turned around to pin myself into the wall and suddenly I got a cut because of his Car's keys which he was holding in his hand
"OOuch!!"I said with a pain and closed my eyes!!
"Please go away!!"I said
"Wait it was just going to be open I will do it just wait "and he turned me around and opened it and touched the cut I got at my back...It was bleeding
Oh!! Shit it's a deep cut!!
"Please leave!!"I pushed him and said with a hasty voice.
I opened the gown and went into the shorts and t-shirt and came out he was shocked to see me in shorts!!He widened his eyes and was focussing on my legs
OMG!!she have a sexy leg!!😲
"What??"I shouted
"Nothing take these and change it fast"
He gave me 10 clothes I was sweating in these only
The AC was not working on my sweating I was soo tired it was 13th dress and there were 5 more I was in no mood of changing more I cameout and said"Please i m really tired"
"No there are just 5 more go and change"He said...he was enjoying this!!
I came out with the 14th one and fainted!!and felt something holding me through my waist!!

I staped her chicks and asked her to open her eyes I searched something and found her water bottle in her bag and gave it to her!!!She was okay now...
"I cant take it anymore!!" she said to me
she was in her shorts and pink T shirt
"If u r not comfortable in this go and change"I asked her
She looked at her and said "No i m fine with it"
I collected dresses and paid the bill and asked them that she is wearing the dress to!!! After giving the bill I asked her if I shd drop her...I was quite worried now for her but for what??
"No..Thanks my driver is coming and now i m hungry I m going"She said and went to food court
I followed her with the shopping bags she sat and i sat too
she gave me a questioning look??
"What??Is'nt ur dare complete...look i m really tired and i don want any fight'She cleared it
"Look these dresses are for u and i m too hungry soo"
"What??No i can't take these dresses"
"So i will wear this"
"Ya if u want u can" She replied
Waiter came and she started her order
"Okahe!! 1 plate momos with green pickle and 1masala coke "And i too gave my order after having our snacks we started leaving
She handed me 7000 rupees and said she is giving money of these clothes if he want her to take it
I took the money and saw her leaving with the bags in her black car
I smiled!! and then thought to myself
Why am i smiling??Am i turning mad or what??
I went to home and got message from Arpita dii...my cousin regarding her marriage in Rajasthan after 2 weeks..

I Reached home with a surprise waiting for me...I went inside and looked at a gift present on my bed...I hurridly opened it and fond lots of choclates and wedding card of Arman bhai!!!Hurrah!!it's gonna be fun I said to myself and went to the shopping bags and Took my diary out and started recalling today's day!!!How he dare touch me???Seriously??
I took out my diary and wrote how many new dresses do i need for bhai's wedding and was really excited

Mehandi Night- Suit
Sangeet Night-Lehangaa
Bachelor's Party-1Piece
Dude Night-Gown
Game Night-Jeans Top
Marriage-Lehangaa
And some more dresses with bhai's gift

And then i remembered today's shopping...and got a gown and jeans top there...I will wear as I paid...I thought
And I rushed to my Lappy And booked our flight ticket from MUMBAI to Rajasthan on 7th April!!!

Thanku for reading
do tell me in comments
ANd Manik's POV is in BLUE
Nandini' In BLACK

please,next part

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naina_raina

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Nice FF.. Add me to PM list please...

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deactivated_bye

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Awsum update!!👏

Kya baaat hai Manik ko Kuch hone laga hai!!😃

Loved Manik Babys attempt 2 unzip her!!😳

Cute day loved it!!👍🏼

Jaldi update karna!!! 🤗

Thanks 4 d PM N take care ❤️

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blookfericon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Waiting For My Vacation!!

It was Sunday today and I woke up with little pain at my back and i remembered the cut I got yesterday in the FASHIONISTA...I putted bandage on my cut and went out for jogging while changing myself into tracksuit...I climbed my bed and started movie THORN after that I ate some icecreams...Today i was living my life alone!!I went to the boutique so that this time I can't find manik there 😆😆I bought White lehanga with black blouse and some more dresses!!I was all set and this is how my Sunday came to end

I woke up with the call from Ramesh kaka and it was 10 am I woke up and called my frnds to come for partying at my place...we practiced and partied and before going to bed I booked my ticket for Rajasthan on 7th April!!

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It was normal morning...I was praying to god that I shd be far away from FAB5 specially Manik...I left for college after dropping Rishabh!!It was our Guitar CHamber where we got a task to check out 2 songs

SUNO NA SANGMARMAR

and

DIL AAJ KAL UNplugged

It was easy for me to prepare Suno na sangmarmar...but I was facing problem in DIl aaj kal so sir asked me to go to LEARNERS WING where he is sending someone to help me out in that...I was struggling with my chords alone in that room when someone entered the room and he was DHruv I welcomed him with a smile and he too responded!!!He came to me and started explaining me...I was not able to understand but i dint wanted to make him down so I said him that I will figure it out after doing practice!!Meantime I received a joke from one of my friend and I shared it with DHruv we went through lots of gossip and laugh!!ANd finally I offered him friendship prpose He accepted that by shooking hand with me but asked me not tell this to anyone!!

The day ended peacefully I must say!!!

Next day in the college before my Guitar class I was sitting on the stairs struggling with my chords...same!!And then I heard voice from behind saying something to me..."Look u r taking those chords wrong and strumming shd be quite slow...take G minor after B..." I turned and fond Manik who was patiently moving towards me and was giving me suggestion...I was quite shocked but now wanted to go through what he was saying...he came near me and sat and started saying while placing my fingres on the correct way..."Look u need to do this"he said whille moving my right hand striking strings of the guitar through Pick...Then he said me to sing while playing I never sung this song so I tried with the first paragraph and it came out well!! Then he took the guitar and played it...I was quite impressed!! He gave me my guitar back and started leaving when I said

"Manik...thanku for helping" By delivering a smile to him and he returned me his Devil SMIRK!!? But why??

She have a good voice...I must say she is talented!And ya i liked the way she said my name...wait !?Manik what are u thinking??

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PRECAP- MANIK NANDINI SITTING BESIDE IN THE FLIGHT!!

NANDINI FIND MANIK IN THE SAME HOTEL WHERE SHE IS STAYING

LOTS TO COME!!!

SOrry guys for small update actually i wrote everything till they reach UDAIPUR RAJASTHAN but somehow by mistake i deleted everything and it will take again long time to write those again...i promise i will write it today itself and will be posting!!

If ANyone want teaser too do comment and I will post teaser sontaing MANAN scenes

DO COMMENT UR VIEWS

Stay blessed

THanku for reading

RIYA 😊

Edited by fireflies_love - 10 years ago