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Posted: 10 years ago
It's awesome. .n its getting hell interesting. ..loved MaNan. ..keep updating😃
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awesome part
just loved it
plz continue soon
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awesome update...loved it...😊
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YAy romance!!!
Accha so nayi feelin hai YAY!!
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YAY!! MAnan romance!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update loved how nandini shares all things to manik so cute precap gives me naughty naughty feeling hope u understand cont soon
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Waiting egerly for the next part
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Woohh awesome yr
Loved manan convo and nandini revealing everythng to him
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awesome update..
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PART 13
Next Day...I went for jogging...actually i wanted to be with Manik...we spend sometime there then Manik asked me for Coffee today at 3pm..I agreed as tomorrow was shadi and i will be busy in that...I accepted offer of coffee
After all the works...I went to near by CAFETINa dressing into my shorts as it was sunny day today!!
"U look Pretty"Mnaik said
He ordered his fovrite snacks and i too ordered
MANIK:"SO,U told me that u r from USA"
Nandini:Yeah!!! I returned India a year ago
Manik:Kk
Nandini:BTW u r soo monster in SPACE and here??
Manik was confused
"I don KNow"He said
"I don know i regret hurting u I love being with u...but WHY??I don know"He said
Nandini was blusing and was feeling the same after coffee i left..i went to parlour for a spa...After returning i was there in my small shorts and crop loose top...when the bell rang...i opened the door and fond manik there..i was shocked and stood there meantime Manik entered the room...
"CLOSE the door"he ordered...i did and said"what are u doing here know"
Her eyes went to his hand whcih was bleeding she rushed to hishand
"WHAT have u done with this hand?"She questioned him
"Vo there was some pieces of stones and as i put hand on table I got hurt...nothing is there...well washroom?"Manik said
"U know...i said"he went to washroom and came out with my white towel around his wound..which was turning into red
"Wait!"i said
I made him sit on my bed...he kept his wounded hand on bed and unfortuantely turned my white bed sheet red...GOD this guy...I went to my carry baga nd turned them on bed...I picked out ointment and Bandage...And fond manik looking into my stuffs which was out of bag...
"I took his hand and putted ointment..he was revealing his pain with"OOuch!!"I don know why my tears came out..because I m sensitive or what??he fond my tears in his hand...and looked my tears in my eyes I putted bandage around his wound and cleaned my tears...He went to the stuffs and picked a picture of my little family...
"Why were u crying?"he questioned me
"when?"I asked him
"Now!?"he asked
"no i was not...stop lying Nandini...i saw u doing that"he started moving near me..I started moving back...I pinned to the wall...he came near me and whisphered
"WHY?"
"I don know!"I said
He came more close to me and his nose touched mine...I again started shivering..He took my right hand and tangled his fingures with mine...
I closed my eyes...he was checking out my face...I can smell him...
"Stop shivering"he said
"Look u r not sweating"HE said
"I opened my eyes and dint felt sweat around...Then his eyes drived my attention into his eyes...I was deep inside his eyes...He dragged his head towards my hand ..and my eyes was following his...the atmosphere was changing into SMOOTH one...i was loving it though I was shivering...I was avoiding evil things which was splashing infront of my eyes..
"He dropped his petal lips on my hand...which made my eyes closed so that i can feel his soft lips...I opened my eyes and fond him kissing my hand again and then picking his head up again his eyes took me along with him...AND then the stupid Mobile rung..
GOD!!first time I was avoiding evilt hings apart and this...He moved his leg backwards...I ran to pick up phone...and fond DAD..though I was pissing the call but it was goign to be week talking to dad i jumped on the bed with the mobile
"HI dad...How r u!?I m missing u soo much...MUAH!!"I said in one line
"VOVHO!!!U enjoying there...?"
"Yeah!dad...alot"I looked at manik
Then dad handedover mobile to mom
I talked with her and manik was stunned hearing MOM from myside...after cutting the call he too climbed my bed and sat just beside me..."MOM?"he questioned
"Yeah!!step mother..."I said with a smile
"Witch one?"he said
"NO...angel one!"I said
"OOh!Lucky u!"
"WEll ur dad??he is not leaing with u?"He added
"No!!I wanted my life alone!!!"I sadi looking down to his hands...
"Is that okahe?"I asked...pointing towards his hand
"Yeah!!"He said with a smile
"Well is that okahe"He said pointing on my right hand
"yeah!!"I said blusing..
After some gossips he left...ANd i was still blushing and remembering that moment when he kissed my hand!!!



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Posted: 10 years ago
Yeppie I am First...!! 🥳
Awww...!! Lovely update...!!
Nicely Written...!!
Please update soon...!!
Edited by PrettyAaShu - 10 years ago

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