Kabira OS part 4 page 6 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
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LOV U!!🤗
Awsum idea n lovely concept n kabya chemistry iz sizling❤️
Cutiee Kabir LOv u !!🤗
LOL lov kabir reaction in d Baby part!!😆
Asum 3sommm👏
Looks like Navya's mom has become cupid in d cupids life!!🤣
LOv D new idea!! Brilliant!!!👍🏼
HOpe they fall in lov SOOON!!
I didnt recieve a PM dis TYM!!😭
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
aww...
nice concept...😊

wasie bhi i like cabir and navya very much...😊
they look so good together almost like bff...😃

n u got that chemistry in between them...😳

y r awesome...seethu...😳
loved how u put manan in between their part...they laugh n I too laugh😆..

bye...
take care...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Read all four parts in one go! You are an amazing writer. Just maybe try and make the parts a little longer, and more detailed.
Part 1: Lol, Cabir fainting... I don't know why, but I just find that to be hilarious.
But seriously, he made a pregnant woman run?
Aw, Cavya holding hands...
Part 2: Ooo, Cavya in the same room...
On the same bed?! Damn!
Oh my god, Cabir's hand is around Navya's waist! I repeat, Cabir's hand is around Navya's waist!!!
Part 3: Ouch! That was cruel Cabir...
Oh my god, Navya fainted! Cabir fainting is funny, but Navya fainting is SCARY!
Cabir, bohot papad belne padenge Navya ko manane ke liye...
Part 4: He held her!!! He's going to the hospital with her! The amount of care Cabir shows for Navya and her baby is just amazing!
Update soon, and please PM me when you update.
Edited by White_Flower - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
omg wow a cavya os
loved it.pls do continue and pls add me in pm list
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
hi i am new to this forum ky2 and specially cavya or say cabeera bring me here 😳 the first forum i read here is of u and its amazing so please do continue 👏👏lovely start
Edited by mkakkar93 - 10 years ago

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