Kabira OS part 4 page 6 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for the pm..awesome update n cabir tho gaya kaam se..cavya are hillarious n now he will get the shock of his life when he gets up 😆 want to read more ..pls continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 3


Navya shouts.


Kabir jumps of the bed.


Kabir : Why re u yelling?


Navya : Keep ur hand for urself.


Kabir : What? Have u dreamt?


Navya : Don't try to approach me?


Kabir holds her : Madhubala u will the last person that i will touch. I am not Harshad to fall too low. He leaves for the bathroom.


Navya has tears with his words.


She comes outside and sees her mom doing the breakfast.


Navya sits on the chair.


Navya's mom : Give the towel to damadji.


Navya stands up and goes to him. She puts it.


Navya' s mom prepared the table.


Kabir steps out and sits. He sees perturbed Navya.


Navya goes to bathroom.




They start the breakfast but Navya doesn't come out.


Navya's mom : What happened to her?


She is about to stand up.


Kabir : I will check her.


He comes to the bathroom.


Kabir : Navya open the door.


Navya doesn't respond.


Kabir bangs the door. He opens it and sees Navya laying on the ground.


Kabir : Navya, navya what happened?


Navya' s mom runs to them : Kya waa usko?


She takes water and throws on her.


Navya' s head in on Kabir' s lap.


Navya : Maa don't cry I am fine.


Navya' s mom : Nai beta let see the doctor.


Navya : I will go with Nandini I have already an appointment.


Navya' s mom comes to the table sad.


Navya : Kabir I will not bothered you more, I will find a job and leave soon.


She takes money from her bag.


Navya : This money is for the house rent for this month.


Kabir : Navya listen to me. I am sorry. I was anger.


Navya stops : No you are right. It's my child and it's my responsibility not yours.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
awesome...sweety..loved it
pls continue soon...take care...love u baby...😊
Edited by aavani - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
wat yr mere cabiraaa ko rude bana diya this is not fare yr
8seetha thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: aavani

awesome...sweety..loved it
pls continue soon...take care...love u baby...😊


ty baby didi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Natashaaa

wat yr mere cabiraaa ko rude bana diya this is not fare yr


he is not rude but i want to see a navy who can live with her own leg, she doesn't need of anyone. She will become a mother yaar so she has to have a stable live for her child also.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update...I loved it...!!
Please continue soon as possible...!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Awesome...Loved it...waiting for the next...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 4


She is in tears.


Kabir : U can't go like that.


Navya : Why?


Kabir : Because...


Navya : A gay and a pregnant can't live together.


Kabir : Navya please try to understand.


Navya takes her suitcase and packs her stuffs.


Kabir calls Nandini and tells the whole story.


Nandini calls Navya and makes her calm down.


She is about to leave when she slips but Kabir holds her.


They lost in each other gaze.


Kabir makes her stands he is about leave. But her chain is stuck on his button.


Navya removes it.


Kabir : Let go for the check up together.


Navya : No I don't think it's good idea.


Kabir : Dekho Navya I can't let u like that so come with me. U seems very weak.


Navya's mom is happy to see them going together.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Humzy

lovely update

loved it
cont soon



thanks humzy u are first yeahhh

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