Manan FF : Our Love Story ( last part pg 48 ) - Page 27

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Posted: 10 years ago
gr8 update yaar .
manik is sooo awww.i wan him my life too anyways woh chodo .
ur ff is awsome .so is ur writing .i don't mind if u r ending as its ur story u must have planned the ending .
but i want u too be back with a new ff if u end this .nd will PM me about it.
but culd u extend this one if possible 😳.lol me
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Posted: 10 years ago
read all parts in one go n believe me they are just amazing...
u penned everything so beautifully..
loved their beautiful confession...
its just mindblowing..Manik understood Nandini so well...
loved it completely...our love story..the title is just so apt...amazing n good choice..
u took ur story very well...
u r finishing it..its K because good things come to an end...
well over all its just awesome..stupendous...
well update soon..waiting for it..
love,
harika..keep smiling..it looks good on yu.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Woww yaar!! Manik undrstud nandu so well
sad abt d end bt u hav their love story beautifully...plzz keep writing more ffs on manan..cont soon
21July2014 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
U hav written their love story*
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Posted: 10 years ago
chapter 19
manik-so guys woh man gai hai so chill and dont need to worry

cabir could sense that manik was a little sad

cabir-manik tu tikh hai na

manik- ha mujhe kya haua hai

cabir-manik mujhe pta hai ki tu kabhi bhi hamein show nahi karta ki tu dukhi hai par hum tere friends hai tu humse kabhi bhi koi bhi baat share kar sakta ha aur i can sense that u r a little sad but 7 years ki hi toh baat hai tu usse milne ja sakta hai phone pe baat kar sakta hai technology kab kam aayegi mere dost

manik-tu sahi keh raha hai but mein nahi chahtha ki meri wajah se uska dhyaan batke i want her to be the best aur woh apne papa ka dream pura kare

cabir-ha toh tu konsa uske haat baandhega tu toh bas usse baat karega aur experiment na haath se hote hai muh se nahi

manik-very fuuny acha tu ruk mein aata hun

manik leaves from there

cabir-guys hamein kuch toh karna hoga we cant see him like this

mukti-cabir kyu na hum in dono ke liye ek date plan karein nandini ke jaane se pehle

alia-great idea yaar

dhruv -so lets get started so cabir tu manik ko busy rakh aur alia tum nandini ko waise toh nandini packing mein busy hogi but phir bhi aur me and mukti will see the preprations

fab 3-ok done and they all leaves

manik was feeling low and suddenly he remembered what that radio person says
kabhi kabhi hamein apnese pyaar karne walon se dur hona padhtha hai bhu due hone se hamara pyaar kam nahi hota balki aur badh jata hai
which cheered him up andhe knew what he has to do

nandini was busy in packing and manik words were echoing in her mind
tumein apne papa ka sapna pura karna hai u cant back off because of mee
and this cheered her up

every thing was plaaned and everyone was ready

manik-cabir tu mujhe kaha le kar ja raha hai

nandini-alia kya kar rahi ho tum

and they both saw each other and were lost in each other so cabir and alia left from there so that their best friends can enjoys their moment and nandini broke the silence

nandini-ye alia bhi na pehle nahi bta sakti thi

manik-cabir bhi na

and they both saw that they were standing near by the beach on the same spot and with the same arrangements whhich was done by manik at thier confeesion

mnaik-how can it be the same

nandini-i think yeh hamare friends ne kiya hai mein alia ko pics dekhai thi toh she knew how it looks

manik-u know i am gonna miss u

nandini-mein kya tumhe miss nahi karungi i will miss u more

manik-nahi mein jyada miss karunga

nandini-nahi mein

manik-nahi mein

nandini-nahi mein

and they burst out in laughter when they realized that they were fighting like idiots and which had no end

nandini-hum ajj bhi ladh rahe hain

manik-ha toh ladai karna toh hamara birth right hai

nandini-ya right

manik-nandini do u remember ki the day i confessed my feeling to u and we were returning from thier toh us radio walien ne kya kaha tha

nandini-ha i remember

manik-mujhe ajj samaj mein aa raha hai ki aisa kyu kaha gaya tha aur ab mujhe itna bura bhi nahi lag raha i just want to spend this time with u aur jab tum ek scientist ban kar lotogi tab i will be the most happiest person kyu ki meri gf will be the best scientist in the world lekin tum mere liye meri wohi pari rahogi na u wont change na

nandini was in tears-mein bilkul nahi badhlungi aur na hi tum badhloge tum bhi mere wohi monster manik rahoge na

and after that she just came closer to manik and crashed on his lips manik was surprised but responded and the kiss was getting passionate and deep by each passing second and they broke thier kiss when they were out of oxygen

nandini-chalien meri kal flight bhi hai i have lots of work to do

manik-ha chalo i will drop you

they both reached home and met everyone

manik-thank you guys

mukti-ismein na thank you kehne ke kya baat hai we r your friends yaar

alia-manik tum nandini ke liye kuch lines hi ga do

mukti-great idea

manik said ok and took his guitar

Dehleez par mere dil ki
jo rakhe hai tune kadam
Tere naam pe meri zindagi
Likh di mere humdum
Haan seekha maine
Jeena jeena kaise jeena
Haan sikha maine jeena jeena mere hum dum
na sikha meine kabhi jeena jeena kaise jeena
Na sikha jeena tere bina humdum

alai-oww so sweet

nandini-lets sleep kal jana bhi hai and its 4 in the morning yaar

Next day

nandini-guys 3 baaj gaye hai and u all are sleeping like beauties jaldi karo i have my flight in 3 hours

mukti-what itna time ho gaya uthaya kyu nahi

nandin -ikab se utha rahi hun but u guys

alia-btw manik kaha hai

nandini-idk

cabir-woh tumhare liye kuch lene gaya hoga aa jayega woh shayad hamein airport pe mile

nandini-ya i think u r right

and everyone goes to airport but couldnt find manik it was 4:30 and there was no sign of manik

nandini-hai kaha yeh

cabir-sorry to say nandini shayad woh nahi aayega he cant see u going

nandini-cabir dont say like this woh aayega

mukti-nandini i think cabir is right aur 4:50 ho gaye u should go now

nandini-guys i know woh mujhe kaha milega aur mein usse mile bina nahi jaane wali

and she took the car and went toward college

music wing

nandini-mujhe pta tum mujhe yahi miloge

manik-nandini tum yaha kya kar rahi ho i thaught u must have left

nandini-tumse mile bina kaise jaati

and she hugged him

without breaking the hug

manik-nandini plz dont go

nandini-manik agar tum aisa kahoge toh kaise chalega u only said na i need to ful fill my dad dream aur tumhe bhi toh apne dream pure karne hai bit if u say i wont go

manik-nahi nahi u should leave and i promise i wont surrender aur i will become the best singer aur chalo let me drop u but 1 sec time to nikal gay

nandini-i told u na 7 o clock ki bhi flight hai

manik-so lets go

they both reached airport and nandini bid bye to everyone and gave a small to manik on his cheeks

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thanks guys for your comments and sorry i cant cont this ff but will surely come with another ff when i will get time ...

your Dhariya


Humzy thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely update
was this da last part

manan58 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow
Awesome update..emotional..
Nxt ort will b the last one? I hope u give it a magical ending
Superb
Cont soonsoon
firefliesstar thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
heeyyy plsss dnt stop...its fabulous plss do write...if u dnt hv tim u cn upload small updates bt plss dnt end it😭
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Humzy

lovely update

was this da last part

next will be the last...
Dhariya_ thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: firefliesstar

heeyyy plsss dnt stop...its fabulous plss do write...if u dnt hv tim u cn upload small updates bt plss dnt end it😭

sorry sweetheart but for one month I don't have time so I don't want U all to Wait...

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