Manan FF : Our Love Story ( last part pg 48 )

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Humairaa

@Humzy

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#191

fab update

very nicely written

loved the song choice

cont soon

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ushmaaa

@ushmaaa

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#192

it was awesome..this is somewhat like dream date..

rain created more magic...first kiss

plz cont soon ..

can't wait for more updates..wonder if they meet what'll happen...

plz cont asap...it is very romantic,fun and enjoyable..

fab 5 and natasha's reaction are the highlight to each update..

n missed it ornot dont no but want to know relation betn nandani and natasha😊

Edited by kristii - 10 years ago

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AAVANI

@vani86

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#193

this is fantastic dear...loved it...
u penned it beautifully...especially .manan kiss scene and the surprise scene...really amazing...
the song u selected for their date was also mind blowing...beautiful lyrics...
pls continue soon ...eagerly waiting to read more...
thanks a lot for the pm...
take care...

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RaindropsNRoses

@RaindropsNRoses

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#194

marvellous update
just loved it
the whole was executae and penned very well
the choice of song was very good
I too love that song
I'm really glad that u gave us a simple yet perfect confession
but when we will get manan face off?????
plz update soon

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RaindropsNRoses

@RaindropsNRoses

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#195

marvellous update
just loved it
the whole scenerio was executed and penned very well
the choice of song was very good
I too love that song
I'm really glad that u gave us a simple yet perfect confession
but when we will get manan face off?????
plz update soon