Manan ss : a lifetime with you ( completed ) - Page 44

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: musicialtie

it was a fairy tale for me...

ohh man... so beautiful epilogue...
in love with its evry alphabet...
and mostly she went to his apartment rather thn hers just to mk herself blessed with his warmth...
so loving.. so caring... so cuddling manan...
yes they r the partners for eternity.
they will share " A LIFE TIME WITH EACH OTHER"

nidhi thanks for such a fairy tale...

tysmmm😳
yes ! she went to relax herself in his arms
tysm for reading and loving it 😉
tc ...n hope ur exams go well 👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hey it was an awesome beautful pretty ending⭐️⭐️
I just loved it
Loved all the surprises how beautfifully u penned down each nd every emotions of love of togetherness
Loved ur way pf wrotng
Esp last lines made great impact
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: susmitha.s

its aww yaar.the epilouge is super no one will think that its ur first ff after reading it.i have a small doub how u imagined the seven surprises its really.great.really all ur suprises touched my heart.i think every girl will love dream abt their true love after reading ur ff.i dont know how to.express.my exact feelings but u have done a great job.i hope i will read more from you.bye and keep writing

tysmmm
yaa those 7 surprises ...well they just came to my mind as i started writing and seeing things here n there
i m happy that u liked my work
tysm once again
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful ending to beautiful story... loved the way you divided it and the fact that Cabir organized the engagement...the way their families and friends came together and the engagement was beautiful... please do come back and write again once your exams are over, you're really good at it.😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW! 😲
I read the whole thing in one go and it is superb...very very well written.. 👏
and those lines in Blue are so damn good.. 😃

girl, You've got some great ideas for surprising a person...😆 The tree house thing..lanterns..bottle wishes...awww...it was all so cute... and our dearest Monster Manik can do it all..

Keep writing.. 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
A beautiful epilogue...for a beautiful story..loved it a lot...
u penned it so beautifully...
thanks a lot for writing such an amazing ,brilliant and beautiful story...
pls try to write more stories like this...
take care...and thanks a lot for the pm...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Mjraha

no long conments...jst one word A.W.S.O.M.E ...I'm still craving to read more!!ci.e again with another one :)

ohhh
tysmmm 😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zaroge

Awesome ending

U did n amazing job
M fan of ur writing already
Will be waiting for a new story

tysmmm
hope i will write one soon 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Kuushi

A beautiful epilogue...for a beautiful story..and you are an awesome writer..so keep writing more beautiful stories on manan

tysmmm
hopefully yeahhh😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: pavi_

Beautifully penned.
The surprises were very impressive.
MaNan are at home , indeed A LIFE TIME WITH YOU.
Thank you for this nice work looking forward for more.

tysmmm
i m glad u liked my work 😉

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