Manan ss : a lifetime with you ( completed ) - Page 11

You are seriously an awesome writer.! One f d best MaNan FF I have ever read. Loving it to the bits.
And thank you for d PMs every time you update. ;) :*

Originally posted by: Mawara_Ejaz

OMG...

Seriously I am loving this SS...!

U wrote so beautifully...

A special night for both lover...

Plzzz Update soon 😊

And don't forget to PM me

So beautiful and poignant! Please continue soon

lovely part hope these two reconcile

Can't wait for the next part... The angst is killing me. I love drnidsur for creating this magic.

Originally posted by: Ladyeirin

Can't wait for the next part... The angst is killing me. I love drnidsur for creating this magic.

PART 9

Noone's pov

The sun rose ..its rays penetrated her room falling on them

The warmth of those rays glistened the two people who were entangled in each other's arms

Her face in the crook of his neck ...her hands around his shoulder

His both hands wound around her tightly

She opened her eyes ...gently ...to find herself in the most beautiful dream

...ohhh shitt!!...it wasn't a dream she realized

She was entangled in his arms

She looked at him ...

Nothing could measure upto the warmth they gave to her

She still wished that her every morning and night could be in them

Till eternity.

She looked at him for a little time and slowly got up, changed and went into her study

It was just 7 in the morning

She studied for a while , it was her exam tomorrow

And then it struck her " how would she face him ?"

She remembered all her actions last night , for it was her who stopped him from going away

Her phone rung, it was message

" ready for last day of your internship dr. murthy ?"

What ! shitt !!

Her face reflected the shock of realization

While she sat pondering at these thoughts

She suddenly sensed he had gotten up

She looked back

Nandini s pov

He was standing in the corridor looking at me

I smiled to him unconsciously

He looked at me again and strode across the living room decreasing the distance between us

" good morning " he said in his husky voice

"morning "..."coffee?"

"Hmmm..sure "

I made coffee while he was busy answering some calls and mostly staring at me with a smirk

A blush had crept on my face , the butterflies fluttered in my stomach

It seemed we had gone down through time machine to those beautiful days again

I tasted the coffee and took to it him

We both sat in my balcony looking at the greenery around

Well , u don't see it every day in Mumbai do you ?

We both exchanged glances

Those 20 minutes I precisely could tell

Our silences mingled

As we both breathed the same oxygen in each other vicinity

He broke the silence then " hmm..Nandini actually I have meetings today ...soo "

He stammered, as to not able to properly word up his inner turmoil

"yaa...sure ..manik , even I have a few things at hospital , well today is my last day at internship "

"oh "

"u said u have exams this week right ?"

" yeahh, its tomorrow "

"oh "

He threw this very uncertain glance at me , well no wonder to that

For I myself was shocked at the way life had thrown a curveball to me in the past one week

One week and my life at turned a 360 degree in rotation

" Nandini then , I should ..leave , can we meet up today evening , I mean .."

" we could , but I have loads to do ...dinner maybe ?"

I spoke trying to be as subtle as possible

"Yaa sure , u know we need to talk right ?"

I glanced at him and looked rolled my eyes upwards sending a fervent prayer to aiyappa

. The talk .

He suddenly sensed the tension and quickly gave me a hug

And before I could react he smirked and walked out through the door

Manik's pov

I went home , driving as fast as I could

I had to write it today

Yes the note

I quickly lifted my pen and wrote all the things which flowed through me

I wrote about

The soft touches of hers

Which still lingered on my fingers,

About her fastened breaths

When I looked into her doe eyes while my hands got entangled in her soft locks

About how delightfully chaotic she was ,

And yet , she was the most beautiful mess I dint mind untangling till infinity .

Soon enough,

I went in for a shower , and all the came into my mind was that I had to tell Nandini

But how ?

Would she forgive me ?

Would she understand ?

But it had to do it

Nandinis pov

He left ,

I got ready to go the hospital one last time

This was an emotional moment for me

I had somewhere tried to heal my wounds with the smiles of my patients, the cries of the new borns

I had tried to heal myself

But the wound still burned

I was waiting answers

Answers for things which fell apart 6 years back

Those 2337 days of waiting , crying for him ,

Asking myself where I went wrong

Or whether I was never worth it ?

" weird isn't it , no one ever had warned me

That when you fall in love,

you give away a piece of your heart that , you ll never get back

No matter how many nights you scream into the pillow

How many places you avoid

How many times you lay on the bathroom floor crying till your throats goes raw

And your eyes sting

No ! no one warned me that when you fall in love ,

You lose a piece of yourself that never was yours."

I went out to the hospital, bid my goodbyes to most ,

although I still wasn't shifting for a week or so and would definitely come around

But now my tenure was over

And my career would take a leap

I wondered whether it was downward or upward sensing my shattered emotional self now

My phone rung

" hi doll ..."

" hi dadda "

"Soo my doll is upset ..hmm?"

"No , nothing like that "

"I know you since childhood , n u r lying to me ...chalo bolo kya hua ? I ll sort it out "

"No nothing ...its just but dadda you called naa ... Matlab u are coming back ?" I said excitedly

"Yes, I m in Mumbai now ..i just reached and the first person I want to see is my doll ..."

"Omg !!!after 3 months finally you are here "...saying that tears dropped from my eyes

" Just message me your place , I ll be there "

I said trying to wipe my tears which dint stop at all

"Of course ...I m waiting , be fast "

"Yeahh "

I pulled up a set of clean clothes and wore them in a hurry and drove to the address he had messaged

Manish uncle , my dadda

yes !

He was dad's best friend , a businessman

He was one of the most humblest people I had ever seen , he treated me like his daughter

although I never knew of his family , as he said they lived in India

It was weird indeed that how he had left one fine day leaving his business in US back to India

I was a 5yr old girl at that time

Even in such tumultuous conditions he had hugged me and gifted me small wish bottle

"my doll ...remember whenever you need something naa ,

just say your wish and blow a little of this fairy dust ..."

"but dadda what will happen then ?"I had asked him innocently

"magic "saying that he kissed me and left

. Forever .

After trying to find him for years , just 3 months back a patient unknowingly told

about him as a businessman who had helped him a lot .

.he in excitement showed me the photo of the businessman

It was him

I had finally found him

And since he was in Amsterdam for these months , I couldn't meet him

But now he is here ...!!!

I slowly entered a huge house , a servant stood there

Ma'am sir is upstairs , he asked you to go up itself

I smiled and went in , while going in suddenly I remembered I had promised to meet manik

Shit !!

I messged manik a huge apology stating I was meeting someone really important

He agreed with a smile emoticon

"So manik " I thought

I entered a room

Seeing him sitting there I screamed "dadda ..finally !!"

I hugged him tight

we talked for long , I wanted to ask him loads of things

and he wasn't any less , he too wanted a list of answers

but the happiness couldn't be contained

as after soo many years I had found my father figure back in life

I remembered those days when I wanted to ask my dad

"About why skinned knees were easier to heal than hurt heart !"

But I had none

" Nandini ...you sounded upset today "

" kuch nahi dadda ...wohh ...shitt!! Its 10 ...I should leave naa ...you must be soo tired

I m soo silly sometimes ..."

Dadda sensed that I dint want to talk about it ,

he knew that ; that time of my life was gone when ,

whenever I cried he would give me a candy floss

and promise me trip to disney land and i would be fixed like never before .

this life was hard

hugging him once I promised him to meet tomorrow after exam and left

manik's pov

Nandini's message hurt a little , but I knew she would have genuine reason to cancel

Suddenly my phone rung again

" I m back ...I want your complains fast !"

I smiled

"I ll be there with my list ...have a meeting ..sry "

I had a meeting soo by the time it was over ...it was already 9

I drove and went in

" baba ...aaap ...saab aaj bohut khush honge ...itne maheeno se woh aapse milna chahte the "

I hugged kaka , when suddenly I saw Nandini leaving from the house

Before I could run behind her , she was gone

It intrigued me

" was it her !"

" what would she do here ?"

" baba ...jaldi jaaeye ...malhotra saab aapka intezar kar rahe honge "

i m srsly very very sorry for this extra long update ...that too a very emotional one ,

but since now they both have to overcome a pain of 6 yrs ..it was important .

also i m a manan shipper ...soo they will come together {like many asked me }

n yeahh ! i think now most would hav already guessed the future cupid ...n relations ...if not then next update will ..😉

awsm update

wow

yehhh..