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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twinkle10

</div>Beautiful response my preesha! <3
I'm on my phone at the moment so I won't be able to highlight my favourite bits but I just couldn't resist replying to you. We're all left speechless. Why? Because our Manan were beautiful last night. Out PaNi shone on the silver screen like never before. I think only my heartache and tears can realistically and precisely express what a magical moment it was to see them become each other's last night. All distances crossed. All gaps closed. It was such a heavenly sight. <div>

I love how you mentioned the position of her hand on his heart. It had just experiences the most trajic of heartbreaks. And it was still vulnerable and fearful of what may lay ahead for him. So she simply placed it there to assure him that there's nothing to fear as long as she's there. She will make it all go away very soon.

As I didn't talk much about my Cabita before, I might as well express those missing thoughts. He was the angel, the messiah once again today. The point isn't that he failed... The point is he tried to help the situation when no one else stepped up. The unfortunate event that took place with mukti wasn't his fault. He had tried his level best to protect her, help her. But last night was just not her night. It all fell apart even more dramatically. And as much as everyone will try to convince my Cabir... I know he will claim to be it his fault. But perhaps this is just how everything is supposed to come together at the end. Maybe all these blunders will help Fab 5come back stronger as a group as well as individually.

I know for a fact a new roller coaster awaits Manan tomorrow. My Manik will be back to fulfilling his promise of protecting his Nandini. He will once again blame himself for the broken state of mukti. Dhruv's words will continue to sting his wounds and his actions mayeven cause more bleeding.But as long as they are together. Nothing shall be impossible.

Twinkle <3



Awww Thanks T 🤗
Not gonna lie, don't think this was my best, I'm surprised you found anything to highlight 🤣
I honestly couldn't agree more. They put there everything into these characters, which is why it upsets me when there offscreen stuff over shadows what brilliant actors they are! No one could play MaNan like they do.
Awww did you cry throughout 😔
It was impactful but understated. He bared his everything to her and she embraced it.

Exactly, as much as he tried to defuse the situation from happening he couldn't stop it. I feel bad for blaming him for not being there and I know he'll feel it himself but like you said I'm hoping this track will also open up all of there eyes. To stop being selfish, to communicate the problem and to solve it. They're all growing, they've just got stuck along the way!

A new day, a new challenge. Pandit is ready to put his plan into action, he knows what's going on. Smartly using this to get his way. But like you said, no problem cannot be solved when Manik and Nandini are together!!!

Goodnight my lovely
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pkbxo



Awww Thanks T 🤗
Not gonna lie, don't think this was my best, I'm surprised you found anything to highlight 🤣
I honestly couldn't agree more. They put there everything into these characters, which is why it upsets me when there offscreen stuff over shadows what brilliant actors they are! No one could play MaNan like they do.
Awww did you cry throughout 😔
It was impactful but understated. He bared his everything to her and she embraced it.

Exactly, as much as he tried to defuse the situation from happening he couldn't stop it. I feel bad for blaming him for not being there and I know he'll feel it himself but like you said I'm hoping this track will also open up all of there eyes. To stop being selfish, to communicate the problem and to solve it. They're all growing, they've just got stuck along the way!

A new day, a new challenge. Pandit is ready to put his plan into action, he knows what's going on. Smartly using this to get his way. But like you said, no problem cannot be solved when Manik and Nandini are together!!!

Goodnight my lovely
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That line... wow! Hats off for such a brilliant thought. Not even going to try and add anything further because you stole it away.
Oh trust me girl! You're talented and that too to the highest peak. Love reading your posts!
I shall see you again soon with another set of thoughts and feelings to discuss.
Goodnight till then sweetheart! <3
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twinkle10

DAY 18! - A new beginning!

Tears were shed. Pain was shared. Darkness was overcome.

Rare is such pure love. It's impossible to defeat, unmatchable to any strength.

Its flares are more dangerous than fire. Its tides incomparable to water. Once experienced. Never forgotten.

It's true they say. Laughter, happiness, bliss, delights. All mean love. But sorrow, pain, angst, tears. Mean no different. If everything is fair in love and war. Then the emotions must be mutual for both situations. The wounds of war mustn't be anymore afflictive than love's heartbreaks. If the victory of war is worth a celebration, conquering true love deserves jollification.

There is no heart that can't be healed. No pain that can't be numbed. No ache that can't be ceased. Everything is possible in love.

Such is her love. His love. Their love. Shadows may leave the side. But they demand to be bound forever to each other. It's a tug-of-war at times. His mind pulls her to the left, her mind pulls him to the right. But when the hearts step in, it's impossible to separate them from each other's sight.

Today they dropped the rope that held them apart. They eliminated every distancing step. He ended their exile of the temporary split.

"I need you". Fear, desolation, solitude, lonesomeness. Never had he experienced such heartache. Not even when she had fumbled upon her words at the magistrate's office. Because she never walked away. She never gave up on him. He pushed her, disowned her, divorced her. But her steps never faltered. They never reversed. They only treaded closer and closer and closer.

And today... it was his turn. Two steps, three steps, four steps. He had reached his long lost destination. His heart. His hope. His shining star. His true love. All masks thrown away. All facades discarded. All pretence packed away. He stood there. Just as Manik. Her Manik. She knew his heartache already. He was confident. Yet he attempted to speak. Just for her. She wanted him to talk. To let the pain flow. To let his tears stream. Silent sounds escaped through the quivering lips. Hands trembling. Knees shaking. Reality was playing its meanest game.

"Dhruv aise kaise bol sakta hai...it's friendship. Bhai hai woh. Hisaab rakh rahe hai woh... Maine kya kiya uske liye... Usne...kya kiya...mere liye. " Broken words reflecting the broken heart. The eyes begged for awakening from this haunting dream. Disbelief return on his face. Eyes widening in the hope of closure. Where? How? When? Why? "Someone goddam tell me the answers!" grieved the heart. Give and Take again. Is this what it's always about?

"Nahi... gallati meri hai". His head nodded in approval. His mind started losing the grip. Blame, guilt, remorse. Rooting themselves in the mind, in the soul. He had failed his brother. He had lost his brother.

The hatred in his words, the loathing in those eyes. It all replayed in front of him.

"I lost him. I lost... the most... beautiful thing. The most... Important... thing. Mai akela hogaya hoon"

And then he lost to himself. Crumbled, Shattered. Defeated.

His eyes. Unable to hold the weight of those bleeding pearls. His legs. No longer could they bear the weight of his detested soul.

Shrieking yet silent sobs. He was slipping. He was shattering . He needed to be saved.

Her tears followed his. Hear fear increased. She couldn't let him slip into the terrifying darkness again. He always protected her. Now it was her turn. She needed him to stay. Stay for her. Yesterday, Today and Forever. Never could she let him go. Never would she let him go.

She hid him in her warm presence. In the protection of her steel arms. This pain, this ache, this guilt. She wanted it all. It was all hers. He was hers. No one dare hurt him whilst she stood in front.

"Manik...Manik...Mai tumhare saath hoon".

She never found herself to be in such helplessness. Why? Why always him? If she could... she would ask her lord. Her aiyappa. Why was it all destined to be for him? The hatred, the betrayal, the disownment? But if that was his destiny. She would fight till she changed it to be hers. No pain, no ache, no affliction could touch him whilst she stood as his protector.

And so she fought today. She pulled and hauled and tugged till he returned home.

And he found shore. Her love brought him home. He found solace in her tears. He found comfort in her wrapped arms. He found life in her presence.

He let it all out. And she absorbed it all in. She let go a little to kiss him better. To welcome him home. It was for mere seconds. But even that much the broken heart couldn't bear. He pulled her back towards himself. She let him breathe. She let him cry. She let him crumble. Only with the promise of never letting him go. Their hearts joined beats. Their breaths mingled with each other. Their souls vowed to never let go. They had smiled, laughed, joyed together. It was now time to share the pain.

The tears finally came to a halt. It had been a long day. An even longer night. Calmness was seeping through the veins. Her touch was working the magic. He was at peace now. And she was relieved too. Yet something was missing. His beautiful smile. She mocked him with the memories of the past. "Dekho...benches can be useful. Unpeh gussa nikaal na theek baat nahi hai na".

He smiled.

But it wasn't enough. So she spread it wider. She had that right. It belonged to her after all. He belonged to her after all. "Smile karna is allowed". He couldn't help but sigh at her effort. She never gave up on him did she? Never left a single leaf unturned to shine herself for him. Guilt started to flow again. But a different guilt. He had been too tormented to realise that pain he'd inflicted upon her. His harsh words had been unfair. She didn't deserve them. And so he apologised. His anger had taken him too far for a few seconds. He had been this close to hurting her. God forbid if he had, he would've destroyed that soul for committing such a sin. Even if it meant it was him.

But she saw beyond his apology. Her delight escalated. He was guilty for his anger. For his aggression. A pleasant disbelief drenched her. It meant there was hope. Hope that he wouldn't do anything reckless from now on. Hope that he wouldn't inflict pain upon himself. Hope that he would keep himself safe for her sake. She smiled too.

She held him. Caressed him. Reassured him. It was all just a bad dream. It'll all be over with tomorrow's sunrise. She was hopeful that it wasn't hatred. Just a misunderstanding. Just simple miscommunication.

The phone rang. A news needed to be informed. Mukti's Abhi has disappeared. His need to guard her, his friend, his family, awoke again. They were all his weakness. Tears were the last of what he wanted to see in their eyes. For Mukti had loved. True love. And now he had left her before he had promised to. The mystery is yet still to be solved however. The letter still remains unread. But the damage has already been done. She faltered. Unaware of her senses, she betrayed him. Betrayed his love. She's guilty for a sin she never intended on commiting. Last night she was hurt. Today morning she is shattered. It wasn't what she had wanted. A party is all she had demanded. But a blunder is what occurred.

Unaware of his best friend's truth, he questioned the one who he had once claimed to love. True love? Did such a thing even exist? If yes, then why was his friend suffering. But she defined love using her own dictionary. "Love is selfish". Wasn't his love selfish? He wants her protected at any cost. Be it soha's saga or panditji's intentions. Her safety was, is and will always be his priority. He was left speechless yet again. How? How could she always remain so positive he wondered? Be it him, their relationship or his worries. She knew how to fight for all of it. She motivated him to hope. Just like he had done a few days ago at their special place. Hope for the best. Hope for his brother's return.

First call... "Manik keep trying. Call karo" Second Call...rejected! Third call... answered!

There was hope!

Though the words over the phone sounded anything but hopeful., her trust had given him hope. He had picked up the call. It was at least half a victory. And dhruv knew it too. His minute-filled silence proved it. Everything wasn't over yet. This brother of his that he despised with so much hatred, knew him the best. Understood him the most. There was no denial. He couldn't deny. And hence he remained silence when manik's brotherhood reminded him that he wouldn't be able to sleep with this burden.

But a broken heart lays on the other side too. And he's alone. His hope towards Aliya has disappeared. For him actually... he feels there was never hope.

It'll take time. It'll require patience. But there is a hidden positivity amongst all this bitterness. Their friendship will evolve with a stronger and deeper bond of brotherhood.

The sun was a new kind today. The morning was fresher than usual today. It chirped hope, positivity, optimism. He had her by him. Meaning he had everything. His trust in her was now restored. His buried realisations had finally surfaced. She was the meaning of life in his life. He was going to be what she had been craving all this time. The Manik that she had been longing to hold, hug, caress, kiss and love.

She had given him the strength to wake up and smile today. She had assured him that there is always hope and hope always wins. She had assured him that there most certainly would be a phone call and there certainly was one.

Once again, she became the reason for his smile. It was a full smile. A content smile. A hopeful smile. A victorious smile. His smile had no limits today. If her hope could win today, it meant it could win again. Right? And if it could win again, it meant it could win every time. So he clarified. "Acha yeh... tumhara joh yeh... hope hai... generally...hamesha? Jeet ta hai?"

He wanted to clarify. He wanted to know the results now rather than wait for his own deadline to arrive. If she answered yes, it would mean his hope would win. She would lead their hope to victory. Bring his hope back home. If she nodded in agreement, it would mean true love did exist. It would mean she was his true love.

But some answers aren't discovered with such ease.

Tomorrow, maybe his hope will waver again. Because tomorrow will showcase that the phone wasn't his hope calling, it was a false number.

But one thing will remain the same. His trust in her. His faith in her.

He has seemed to kiss his mind goodbye today. From today onwards, his heart will be the only voice, the sole narrator, the prime speaker.

He needed her yesterday. And today, she gathered each and every spec of him to keep him protected within herself. Reassuring him, but mainly reiterating her promise to herself. The vow to always keep his hope alive.

~~~~~~~~~~

So my fellow mananians! As the heading suggests, time is still ticking, days are still passing but no longer does a battle of the mind and the heart remains. So it's time I farewelled the old tales and wait anxiously for the new plot to unfold.

Hope you all enjoyed today's episode!

Twinkle <3


Today was the day when Maanik's heart really healed.. Not just from the broken pieces of shattered faith in *feelings he once felt towards Nandini* but also for words that his brother like friend uttered... His helplessness, his guilt, his loss of words, his pain everything was cured by her by just being there.. Providing shoulder to cry on.. But more than that he came to her.. She let him come to her.. She knows exactly what he needs at what time.. Understands him better than him.. And as usual he will find her right again... When he cries and finds himself lonely she says she is always there for him.. Shining like a star... Actually she wasnt star today.. She was sun.. Brightening inch and inch of his soul.. It was because of that, first time in his life he apologized for anger towards her.. And i take it with deeper meaning.. It is not just the anger he showed when she asked him to talk after dhruv's outburst but it was for all the anger he showered on her since valentines day..

What amazes me is that Maanik is now in Nandini's shoes and Dhruv is in Maanik's shoes in this Mind vs Hope scenario now.. He has seen her hope break down the walls of his hatred.. So he is hopeful he can do same for dhruv... He is learning the biggest lesson of love... What it means... It is to forgive and accept the other person just because you need them in your life.. And thats what he learnt through this.. Dhruv will learn that too.. Just like maanik it will take little bit of time for him to shed away all those insecurities and complexes he has been gathering.. But Maanik will be there.. Because Nandini taught him to be patient.. Because just hope is not enough.. Just forgiveness and saying sorry isnt enough.. Patience is also important.. trying to understand what person infront of you needs is also important.. I feel like Manan's break has prepared Maanik ready to fight for his love for dhruv.. He has learnt from best.. He has seen the victory take place right against himself.. Right infront of him.. right for him.. Apart from patience it has taught him to not shy away from person even if he says he doesnt want to be around you.. wasnt that what maanik told to nandini.. And see now she made her way back to his heart.. He will do same thing for dhruv.. The situation might not be exactly similar but enough to use all the learnings.. And thats what his hope is all about.. And thats why he wants her hope to be successful all the time.. Because his hope is attached to hers.. He can win any battle with her by her side.. To shine, to guide, To shed tears, to laugh.. Today he really understands what it means.. It isnt just sacrificing.. it isnt just protecting.,. Its also about sharing.. He learnt to share today.. And see his half pain already seems to be gone away.. And even though the battle is long and painful, he will fight it because he needs his buddy back..

Oh one more observation.. remember earlier dhruv - maanik firghts.. Nandini would always go to Dhruv and give him advice.. Show him way.. But today she is Manik's nandini.. Nothing is more important to her than Maanik.. Isnt it amazing journey of these characters, relationship, priorities, time changes... that was time when she blamed Maanik for the fight, today she stands by him to mend the friendship he values so much.. Sometimes its hard to believe but once you recollect their journey everything seems organic and thats the beauty of their journey, their love.. I feel like they should reminiscence old times sometime... They would laugh, cry and tease each other.. :)

Another observation.. when they hugged, did you notice her looking skywards.. I felt like that was the time she was praying to her aaipaa to give her strength and help her ease his pain... and i was so glad you pointed that bit in your post ⭐️

Yes the whole scene with them on the bench was beautiful.. The peace that came from being with her.. It was evident on his face and as you said he did smile a little when she joked but it was as if he thought it was not allowed.. given what went down last few hours.. It was as if she read into that and told him it is allowed to smile... And after that showing him positivism in every bad things around .. It was indeed beautiful.. She taught him to hope.. No one had showed him that.. And tough life had made him not to hope anything but seeing her hope, he learnt that.. he wants that.. Isnt it amazing that he wants all those things for himself.. Wasnt it why she had told him Love is selfish.. Wow that dialog seems so wrong but it has such a deeper meaning that i love it :)

Oh i love the hightlighted parts on mukti in your post.. yes she chose wrong way to heal herself.. She never wanted that but now she has to face all that.. I am curious to see how she brings herself out of this mess.. And offcourse theere is that unread letter... Btw i completely agree on bit about nandini being so worried about mukti just because she means so much to Maanik.. Wow what a pure love.. She cares for all things precious to him.. Helps him understand and cope with those things.. She sure is strong.. Maanik and her are not so different.. When they care for a person they are for their entire world.. Remember navya's expulsion.. Maanik was so ready to help her just because she is nandini's friend.. Today it was her turn to worry for mukti.. she has done that in past but today it was more than that.. She helped him understand abhimanyu's love too..

Did you see him looking at smile on her face when they entered that audi and saw dhruv.. I think he wanted to see her to witness her hope win.. Small gesture but it was more than just dhruv calling him.. It was the feeling of genuine happiness that he was sharing with her.. He was showing her, he has learnt his lessons.. He has his hope back.. His hope will be as powerful, as hopeful as hers from now on..

My heart broke when dhruv didnt hug him back but i expected that.. For his insecurities, overnight is not enough to goway.. he needs that freedom.. Maanik has been there for him all the time but now he wants to grow up.. I am not saying Dhruv is right.. I am saying his way of expressing is wrong because he feels inadequate.. Maanik has been taking care of him like a parent.. Protecting him from anything and everything but i think its time to back down a little.. And thats what they both need to learn... Maanik doesnt need to feel guilty.. it isnt his entire fault.. Nor is dhruvs.. Its their broken families and lack of normal love in their childhood.. They have been parents to each other.. But now they need to learn that important lesson of parenthood - to let children fly on their own, to trust their capabilities.. Let them fall, let them learnt.. But be there when they ask for it.. As i said its important time for Fab5... The friendship isnt changing.. Its meaning is changing.. Every relation has to change with time and its that time.. They are growing, experiencing so many new things so its time for them to rely on this friendship for support rather than living only through the friendship.. Time to explore other relationships.. People outside fab5 and yet rely on each other..

Panditji is precap.. He found new partner for nandini.. I wonder if he took the test for dhruv or not.. Will maanik learn importance of guru and discipline with this replacement.. Because till date he was able to get whatever he wanted in this college thanks to give and take with Niyo.. But i want him to understand not everything can be bought.. And you need to have discipline, respect along with talent to succeed.. Tomorrow is the day when i will know if my optimism about panditji is in vain or not.. 😊

Update: Omg just realised the length of this reply :) day by day its increasing.. Is it the growth thats impressing me or your posts.. I think its both but good job on penning down all these thoughts.. Helps me express mine too.. These days i am not even able to go back and proof read because if length so ignore the errors and disconnects please.. :)
Edited by anotheranfan - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: anotheranfan

Today was the day when Maanik's heart really healed.. Not just from the broken pieces of shattered faith in *feelings he once felt towards Nandini* but also for words that his brother like friend uttered... His helplessness, his guilt, his loss of words, his pain everything was cured by her by just being there.. Providing shoulder to cry on.. But more than that he came to her.. She let him come to her.. She knows exactly what he needs at what time.. Understands him better than him.. And as usual he will find her right again... When he cries and finds himself lonely she says she is always there for him.. Shining like a star... Actually she wasnt star today.. She was sun.. Brightening inch and inch of his soul.. It was because of that, first time in his life he apologized for anger towards her.. And i take it with deeper meaning.. It is not just the anger he showed when she asked him to talk after dhruv's outburst but it was for all the anger he showered on her since valentines day..
What amazes me is that Maanik is now in Nandini's shoes and Dhruv is in Maanik's shoes in this Mind vs Hope scenario now.. He has seen her hope break down the walls of his hatred.. So he is hopeful he can do same for dhruv... He is learning the biggest lesson of love... What it means... It is to forgive and accept the other person just because you need them in your life.. And thats what he learnt through this.. Dhruv will learn that too.. Just like maanik it will take little bit of time for him to shed away all those insecurities and complexes he has been gathering.. But Maanik will be there.. Because Nandini taught him to be patient.. Because just hope is not enough.. Just forgiveness and saying sorry isnt enough.. Patience is also important.. trying to understand what person infront of you needs is also important.. I feel like Manan's break has prepared Maanik ready to fight for his love for dhruv.. He has learnt from best.. He has seen the victory take place right against himself.. Right infront of him.. right for him.. Apart from patience it has taught him to not shy away from person even if he says he doesnt want to be around you.. wasnt that what maanik told to nandini.. And see now she made her way back to his heart.. He will do same thing for dhruv.. The situation might not be exactly similar but enough to use all the learnings.. And thats what his hope is all about.. And thats why he wants her hope to be successful all the time.. Because his hope is attached to hers.. He can win any battle with her by her side.. To shine, to guide, To shed tears, to laugh.. Today he really understands what it means.. It isnt just sacrificing.. it isnt just protecting.,. Its also about sharing.. He learnt to share today.. And see his half pain already seems to be gone away.. And even though the battle is long and painful, he will fight it because he needs his buddy back..

Oh one more observation.. remember earlier dhruv - maanik firghts.. Nandini would always go to Dhruv and give him advice.. Show him way.. But today she is Manik's nandini.. Nothing is more important to her than Maanik.. Isnt it amazing journey of these characters, relationship, priorities, time changes... that was time when she blamed Maanik for the fight, today she stands by him to mend the friendship he values so much.. Sometimes its hard to believe but once you recollect their journey everything seems organic and thats the beauty of their journey, their love.. I feel like they should reminiscence old times sometime... They would laugh, cry and tease each other.. :)

Another observation.. when they hugged, did you notice her looking skywards.. I felt like that was the time she was praying to her aaipaa to give her strength and help her ease his pain... and i was so glad you pointed that bit in your post ⭐️

Yes the whole scene with them on the bench was beautiful.. The peace that came from being with her.. It was evident on his face and as you said he did smile a little when she joked but it was as if he thought it was not allowed.. given what went down last few hours.. It was as if she read into that and told him it is allowed to smile... And after that showing him positivism in every bad things around .. It was indeed beautiful.. She taught him to hope.. No one had showed him that.. And tough life had made him not to hope anything but seeing her hope, he learnt that.. he wants that.. Isnt it amazing that he wants all those things for himself.. Wasnt it why she had told him Love is selfish.. Wow that dialog seems so wrong but it has such a deeper meaning that i love it :)

Oh i love the hightlighted parts on mukti in your post.. yes she chose wrong way to heal herself.. She never wanted that but now she has to face all that.. I am curious to see how she brings herself out of this mess.. And offcourse theere is that unread letter... Btw i completely agree on bit about nandini being so worried about mukti just because she means so much to Maanik.. Wow what a pure love.. She cares for all things precious to him.. Helps him understand and cope with those things.. She sure is strong.. Maanik and her are not so different.. When they care for a person they are for their entire world.. Remember navya's expulsion.. Maanik was so ready to help her just because she is nandini's friend.. Today it was her turn to worry for mukti.. she has done that in past but today it was more than that.. She helped him understand abhimanyu's love too..

Did you see him looking at smile on her face when they entered that audi and saw dhruv.. I think he wanted to see her to witness her hope win.. Small gesture but it was more than just dhruv calling him.. It was the feeling of genuine happiness that he was sharing with her.. He was showing her, he has learnt his lessons.. He has his hope back.. His hope will be as powerful, as hopeful as hers from now on..

My heart broke when dhruv didnt hug him back but i expected that.. For his insecurities, overnight is not enough to goway.. he needs that freedom.. Maanik has been there for him all the time but now he wants to grow up.. I am not saying Dhruv is right.. I am saying his way of expressing is wrong because he feels inadequate.. Maanik has been taking care of him like a parent.. Protecting him from anything and everything but i think its time to back down a little.. And thats what they both need to learn... Maanik doesnt need to feel guilty.. it isnt his entire fault.. Nor is dhruvs.. Its their broken families and lack of normal love in their childhood.. They have been parents to each other.. But now they need to learn that important lesson of parenthood - to let children fly on their own, to trust their capabilities.. Let them fall, let them learnt.. But be there when they ask for it.. As i said its important time for Fab5... The friendship isnt changing.. Its meaning is changing.. Every relation has to change with time and its that time.. They are growing, experiencing so many new things so its time for them to rely on this friendship for support rather than living only through the friendship.. Time to explore other relationships.. People outside fab5 and yet rely on each other..

Panditji is precap.. He found new partner for nandini.. I wonder if he took the test for dhruv or not.. Will maanik learn importance of guru and discipline with this replacement.. Because till date he was able to get whatever he wanted in this college thanks to give and take with Niyo.. But i want him to understand not everything can be bought.. And you need to have discipline, respect along with talent to succeed.. Tomorrow is the day when i will know if my optimism about panditji is in vain or not.. 😊

Update: Omg just realised the length of this reply :) day by day its increasing.. Is it the growth thats impressing me or your posts.. I think its both but good job on penning down all these thoughts.. Helps me express mine too.. These days i am not even able to go back and proof read because if length so ignore the errors and disconnects please.. :)

Wow... so many wow moments right here! And why do I have a feeling this is just the start. Like you said, day by day the lengths are increasing. We seem to be able to discover those words within ourselves that can help express all our emotions precisely. How? I think Manan are in fact evoking those emotions with us. We seem to be connecting with them like never before. It all seems to real. And the credit undoubtedly goes to Parth and Niti for growing as actors day by day.

And then of course. We have been building on these thoughts, these ideologies for almost 18 days now. Everyday a new episode is aired but we have so many questions, emotions and sensations lagging behind from their previous episodes that our mind starts thinking faster than we can pen it all down. But likewise... I'm enjoying this ride. And the credit doesn't only go to me but to you and all the others who take their time out to add to my thesis and share their opinions and I think that's how we always manage to map out and analyse the episode always to its core. An applause is a must for all active on this thread! Hug haha

I'm going to start with very last point I highlighted and then make my way back towards the top haha

I'm glad you brought the words of discipline and respect. I feel that's one learning which still remains unlearnt for Manik and has to realise that it is in fact not just about the worldly norms of giving respect and behaving with discipline to those elder to you... he needs it despite all those morales and ideologies. Remember at the time of Soha and the music contract and how distracted Manik was when it came to rehearsals? I feel he is still yet to learn that opportunities in life mustn't be taken for granted. When they come, you must give it your best shot. This opportunity by pandit. It's just not any opportunity. It's an opportunity which as he's challenged, can decide the furture of him and Nandini. And you know I think this is where this learning will start. He will realise the importance of respect and discipoline and focus and once again it's going to be nandii's love which will take him to thir realisation. He will learn that this opportunity to perform with Nandini is one he can't afford to lose and take for granted and so he will do the required practice for his music and additionally he will let her researse her music too. Somewhere he has to realise to match his pace with panditji and follow him on this path rather than become the leader himself.

Whilst we're on this issue of realisation, I might as well talk about another wonderful point you brought up. That paragraph you wrote about dhruv and his relationship was absolutely marvelous. Exactly... dhruv's approach of expression may be wrong but in a sense this was necessary in order for manik to realise that his brother has grown up now. To some extent I feel Dhruv's frustration is with the whole of the Fab 4 because they've always treated him with a similar tenderness and nurtured him like a baby too just as they saw manik did.And somewhere in all of this, they forgot too that he has an identity himself as well. Just because he was more quiet and reserved in persoanlity, it didn't mean he was incapable of voicing his own opinions. He had been more sensitive and vulnerable then the all of them yes... but whilst manik protected him from every danger, every essence of pain.. it was his duty to teach him to fight with the cruelties of life as well. And I think that's what dhruv means when he says he feel suffocated. The suffocation isn't due to his manik's unselfish friendship... it's because he is facing his personal turmoils inside him and he just doesn't know how to handle the crumbling down of his own world. He just wasn't nurtured how to. And you know what else I have been feeling. So Dhruv vented at Manik. And he unleashed everything he had, Why? Because he knows he has the right to. He is a brother. They are both brothers. If he has the right to love him, he has the right to be angry with him too. It was just a simple act of letting everything out. Yes it was quite hurtful but he knew he was talking to his brother. He had the least to lose.
Likewise it's time for my manik to let go of a little bit of the burden he carries on his shoulders. He indeed does act as the mother of these four but he has to realsie that they are all grown up now. They need to learn how to fall and then rise once again so they are able to succeed later in life. Because as unforunate as this idea may be... but manik won't be there every single time to save them from a heart break or the miserabilities of life. He needs to learn to let go and they all need to learn to stand upon their own feet. As my cabira had said to manik a few days ago Manik isn't responsible for all their hurt and pain. He shouldn't be guilty everytime one of them sheds a tear, He can't live their lives and take their decsions for the rest of their lives. Some experiences they will need to learn on their own. And with this growth Fab 5 will learn about their unbreakable bond again. No matter where they head off to in life, they will always remain first to each other.And with that they will also learn that their friendship isn't their life. It's just a part of their lives and very beautiful and certianly one of the most vital parts.
OMG yayyy! you noticed that too! That was such a beautiful moment. Just how yesterday you were saying you had missed Nandini talking to her aiyappa and that wish was fulfilled today :D After all she had always promised to keep him in her prayers. So today when she saw him in such writhing pain she wanted to question her aiyappa as to why was he no longer answering her prayers. Truly a wow moment.
Also I want to add more on that bench scene, I absolutely loved how one hand was on his heart, assuring him of her presences and reassuring him that he needs to be not afraid at all. And then the other hand was caressing her forehead. See a sort of connection there? the heart and the mind? Today they both belonged to her. They both yearned for her touch because they were both in unbearable pain. His mind throbbing with the echoes of his words and his heart aching with the piercing accusations. But now they were both in safe hands. She would protect them in every situation.
Oh also also... the peaceful expression he just had throughout that bench scene was just so heartfelt. I was simply struck by the magic of that moment. Like even when his phone was ringing, he didn;t twitch or reach for the phone because he had completely handed himself to him her. He trusted her with himself. He trusted her to protect him and he didn't want to be anywhere else at that moment. The homely feeling in her lap was his heaven. It was unbeatable.
Aaasand still continuing with the bench scene lol. You mentioned that his sorry was in fact for all the times he had drenched her in th tears that were caused by his anger and harsh words.So absolutely true! And did you see when he says that getting angry on you isn't allowed, he was looking in the other direction. His guilt was such that he knew he wouldn't be able to face her in the eye.Oh what true love.
Now onto my last point because this essay has already become way too long. Him in her shoes and dhruv in his shoes. Bang on! His faith in keeping hope was further strengthened by her continuous positivity. And he knows that her hope is thrashing his supposed hatred now so it will be a clear victory at the end. He knows that his advantage lays in being hopeful for his brother's return. And he knows that if her hope can bring him ack to her, his hope will reunite him with his brother. And that's exactly what that content and beautiful smile meant in the audi. His complete trust in hope. Now it's just dhruv's turn to listen to his heart and mute out the words of the mind. And it will be rather easy for him because he has manik. Manik has gone through it all with Nandini. So Manik will fight for dhruv's heart against dhruv's mind. He will be able to heal that heart before the mind aggravates any further damage.
Alrightey so I think I'm done. Sheeesh. What a hardcore discussion sesh haha
Beware of the spelling mistakes lol
Twinkle :)
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Originally posted by: maankigeet4ever

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Okies...i am here. Damn another emotional coaster. And Parth and Niti like nailed it bro. In fact Charlie too. KY2 has such a talented cast and epsisodes like this, they simply excel. So judus to the actors and the team.👏

There shall be a lot of bold lines, simply because it was all so beautiful, i would have bolded the entire thing but seriously..so so so well written. 👏

where shall i start ? Actually let's start with Mukti. Poor Cabira walks away thinking his friend is safe and sound. Heartbroken, but atleast she is in the safe comfort of her home. Wrong ! Mukti isn't safe, she has taken a fall into the deep end. So blinded by her pain, so desperate to numb her pain; she has made mistakes..mistakes she now regrets as a new day dawns. Poor Mukti, i wish Abhi could see the state he left his girl in...sighs..i actually can't seem to find the words right now..i type and i stop..delete. All i can say is Mukti's life is making me depressed because she gave all she had to Abhi, started living through him and now that he has abandoned her, she has died. The Mukti that Abhi brought to life has died, she died the moment she crushed those yellow flowers, the flowers were the memento of the Mukti that once was, the alive Mukti,the vibrant Mukti, one that smiled openly, loved honestly..one that lived a very short life. Now, a shell of a person remains..and nothing but heartache for this broken soul.
Cabir seems to have taken on Manik's role and is now making sure all his friends are safe, taken care of. Absolutely found it adorable that he called Manik as soon he thought Mukti was alright. He was worried and he would have came to his friend had Manik been alone but he knows..no one heals Manik better than Nandini. So now he can breathe in peace..when he finds out Mukti made mistakes last night..he shall be disappointed in himself.


Now onto our Manan. As much as i am saddened at this defeated state of Manik, In a way i am glad because now they know there is a problem to be solved. I talk about the significance of communication often, and Manik and Dhruv haven't opened communicated and haven;t shared in the brotherly way they use to, that's why Manik is so shocked because for him, this all seems sudden but in true reality,this has been a long time coming.


Manik..all heart today..all broken pieces of his heart cried out and only one person heard, his Nandini, his shining star. His light. She is truly his guiding light in this darkening world. "I need you.", he didn't have to say it, she already knew it. He starts to talk..slowly as if the words are now sinking in...as if he is finally beginning to understand what has actually happened. And he talks, shares, because he needs to let it all out, needs to say it aloud to finally acknowledge the bitter words his buddy has spoken..He also did it more for her than himself..She said: talk to me because she knows, he needs to share..he needs to let his emotions out. But this broken state of his, it breaks her heart too.


And he blames himself ! God, we had feared it yesterday and it just broke my freaking heart to hear those words " it's my fault." no baby, it isn't, it truly and honestly isn't your fault...because it doesn't surprise me at all because that just how selfless this twisted soul is...somewhere he feels that the fault lies in him, and that's how he grew up. He grew without his parents' love and he thought it was his fault. And since then, whenever someone wrongs him, deep down he feels as though it is his fault.

"i am alone", he says...he feels so alone..he seems to have lost it all but he soon realizes that he isn't alone. He has his shining star...she wiill burn but she won't let him get engulfed in this depressing darkness. "You are not alone..i am here for you." and then she proves her words. She shares his sorrow, cries with him..she cries for him And shields him in the cocoon of her petite arms..her delicate arms but they hold all the strength of the world right now. She gives him a safe place to let his tears out, she knows she will need to wipe them away but she lets him cry. Because she vows, she will protect him. And she will heal him. She kisses his forehead, with such tenderness, wishing she could kiss away all the hurt his fragile heart has suffered. And he...he needs her to catch him as he falls apart. He crushes her into his arms, knowing she will hold him with all her might. She holds him while he cries his heart out, her hold tight as if she wanted to absorb all his pain..she draws apart for a few seconds but he can't bear it..on his knees, he pulls her close again. That tug, that was probably my beautiful moment simply because he literally needs her to be able to breathe. Even a a second apart, his heart can't stand it.

And because only she can provide the comfort he needs, they don't head in their own directions after she manages to settle him. Rather they find a bench, one that serves a more useful purpose than to be thrown around in a fit of rage..and she teases him about. I actually found that bit quite adorable..how she doesn't cut him any shackle because he is upset. He lays there, with his head on her lap as she caresses his hair, soothing him, as if her touch is healing all the hurt. With her, the pain has eased. Her hand laying over his heart, feeling his steady heartbeat, such a warm comfort that he even dozes off for a few minutes.
She wants his smile back, she said a few days ago...not just a smile...but rather his honest, beautiful smile, so she tips his lips up, and in return, he gives her what she wants, because frankly when has he had the power to deny his girl anything ?
'Sorry.", A word not said often by Manik Maltorta but since Nandini Murthy entered his life..she has taught him how to acknowledge his own mistakes. Another beautiful change Nandini brings and i am so glad it was highlighted,
"That means there's hope." Nandini should be ambassador of 'hope'..Her thoughts today i felt defined who she really is and why is so perfect for Manik. She manages to find positivism even in the most negative situation and he, he can hardly find any positivism even in a positive situation..For her..the glass is always half full and for Manik, it's usually half empty. Yeah, maybe this was a better way to put it


The buddies really have a hard road ahead of them but as long as there is love in their relationship, it's fixable. Dhruv too is suffering, he is hurting his buddy but he can't see right at this moment, relying on his resentment to cope. But eventually as he hurts Manik, he too will hurt. This is friendship. This is their brotherhood. Dhruv just needs time to figure it all out..to see how wrong he is...someone to guide him..and no, unfortunately is not that person.


She has taught him to hope.."Don't give up..keep trying." That's why Manik and Nandini got this far in their relationship after Manik's 'I hate you.' because she chose to not give up on him. And that's why despite a phone call that didn't go his way..he still says: "I hope so."Oh how far you have come, Manik Maltorta.
A new day. A new Manik Maltorta..One who hopes..one who is all heart now. He follows his heart. Her hope wins and her belief holds true: Dhruv does call. Manik Maltorta has even more reason to believe in her hope now..becaause her hope...it always wins. His happiness..he wants to share his happiness with the girl who has taught him to hope.
He will take another solid hit tomorrow but this time, his hope, his companion, his partner, his best friend, one girl who is his everything is standing next to him. She won't let him fall this time.
Manik will figure out the divide and rule game Pandit is playing and he shall be in another dilemma. Caught between wanting to mend his relationship with Dhruv and needing to protect his Nandini from that Pandit. I would really like to see Nandini give it to Dhruv in her style..put some sense in his head...or rather smack his head so his screws can fall back into place..lol.

This got far too lengthy so sincere apologies for that..but you know i need more words to explain myself..lol. Not everyone can be like Miss.Twinkie, who are gifted with such a flair for words..but in seriously thou, really wonderfully written today..

Okies..now you may read it.

- Reya aka Your Sunny <3


So me is finally here!! Aaah the bliss of reading a long, content and fulfilling post by you! :D haha
Alright let's start from the bottom actually and I shall make my way up.
So yus... the day has finally arrived where Panditi has played his trump card. Dhruv. And let me tell you, if it's all to get back at Manik and has absolutely nothing to do with Dhruv's music talent, I must say i will be rightly disgusted, You're right... he is adding fuel to this fire but he seems to be fogetting something. His favourtie student; who has been overlooking all his mistakes, all his unexplainable actions, still hasn't had the chance to voice her rebuke. She may be throghly valued and might now how to respect her elders. But she is the same Nandini who can't stand a single word of lie, single moment of cheat. And if he's playing with the lives of her lover and her best friend, he should think twice because she isn't going to keep mum. She knows hows to raise her voice against worng. She has done it before and won't hesitate to do it again. I warn this panditji. Manik may be a threat to him but Nandini can spoil his whole gameplan. All she needs to do is step back from this fusion concert and he won't remain the guru the mentor he claims to be.
Alkternatively it will be intersting to watch what my Manik has learned so far from this dilemma of the mind and the heart. Again and again he has faced the situation of chosing between his friends or his love. Who to protect? Friendship or love? Family or life? I'm actually eagerly waiting how will he manage to finally bring that state of equilibrium into his life.
Oh that audi scene was simply marvellous. I think he's actually never smiled so wide, so wholeheartedly. And he wanted her to see it. She was the reaosn after all. Today he proved his own theory wrong. He had said to her that music is the reason of his smile. False. It's her. It was always her. And he isn't at all shy to accept his defeat. It's almost a gift to her. For making him believe in hope. For making his hope win. He has gofted her the goft she had been craving for days. His beautiful smile.
I think I forgot to share my favourite moment of yesterday's episode. Never fear I shall do it now. That whole bench scene? I absolutely loved it! Every smile, every caress, the way she teases him, the way he looks away whils apologising to her. It was all just too beautiful. I can;t help but re-mention that position of her hand on his heart. Such a deep scene. She was holding his heart in her own hands. And the magical bit was he was trusting her to not let it fall. She was consoling him that there was no need to be afraid now. He was in safe hands. She was never going to let go of the grip. And her other hand? So flawlessly caressing his forehead and hair? I actually thought too deep into this scene I think. Because for me... her one hand was on caressing his heart and the other was soothing his forehead, his mind. Today they had both surrendered their game to her. They both were tired of fighting with each other. They both were aching from the accusations, the trauma, the tragic loss. They needed her the most today. And so she welcomed them wholeheartedly and along with them, welcomed all the ache and pain too. She was going to make everything better in no time.
And then of course the apology was spoken. So softly. So guiltily. He didn't know how to look her into the eyes and so he said it to her whilst facing the other side. He was sorry for all those times he had errupted at her. All those times he had refused her entry into his life. But today he had finally accepted that no, he did need her indeed!
He really is her source of life isn't she? I loved how you described how he tugs her back into himself. Sheer brilliance. His desperation was so evident there. The first time he had let his heart cry and tears fall, it was for her. But the second time when the last of him shattered into countless pieces, those were his tears for hinself. He needed it to pour it out. And words weren't needed at all. She was glad all the pain was flwoing through those tears. If it had been just silence, she would've been beyond scared. But now that he was letting it all out, she knew he was going to be all okay. She had saved him from falling into the dark well. Again, least to mention that it was an outstanding performance by Niti and Parth!
My heart aches for dhruv too. And I;m glad you mentioned that he is suffering just as much as Manik. Manik at least has Nandini. But dhruv... he has no one. Manik had been the definition of his world ever since he could remember. But time had brought some differences. Some miscommunications. Some cracks. It was needed of Dhruv to express himself that very day when Aliya refused to reveal openly about her and Dhruv's relationship. He shouldn't have let it all bottle up. It was actually hurting him more than Manik atm because there was still so much that needed to be said. He wasn't wrong for him, it was just that the circumstances and the timing wasn't right. Neither was his approach. Accusations weren't needed here and I know that for those words he will definitely be guilty in the time to come. But it's all part of their learning and growth. A little taste of the harsh reality of life that no matter how much you prevent pain from entering your life, it cannot be hindered. It's a part of life just as much as laughter is. So the smartness is in sharing it all with your near and dear ones.
Oh poor mukti was a mess today. A mess so messy that no girl should find herself in such a helpless situation. And your right... my cabira will feel it all as his fault. In fact I know for a fact when Manik finds out about it , he will too blame himself for her blunder. But that's the thing. Some things are incontrollable. Life is always about falling and the rising again. And this is something all of Fab 5 still have to learn. ILife can't be lived by playing the blame game. Even god only helps those who help themselves. So they all need to look inside and figure out what it is that they are searching from life? Who are they? What ar etheir idenitites? And the day they will all find the answers to these questions, no heart will remain broken. They will all be healed because they were the reason of their own healing.
Woaahhh... I seriously didn't expect myself to write so much but I started typing and then it all just came flowing lol
But here it is and I could only write so much more because like always your response gave my thoughts a new direction. So thankyou my sunny!
I shall see you soon :)
Love
Twinkie <3
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Originally posted by: twinkle10

Sheeesh! Hell yeah! I woke up... read this post and I indeed had a smile-filled morning!

I shall await your comment eagerly! And you know I love you too! hehe The support and praises you shower me with is so heart-warming. I swear I'm like the manik and you all are like the nandini of my life. Making me hopeful about my writing and bringing me back home to be showered with so many praises haha

See you soon sweetheart!
Twinkle <3

I am glad I could make you smile.. Mission Accomplished..😊
The comment is posted with my own gibber-jabber in between. can't help it..😉
OH MY GOD!!! itna bada compliment... I wish to stand by this "the manik-the nandini" connection... You made me smile like thiiis HUGE.. thank you for your love "wink".. I hope i can call u that from now on...

Lots of love to my new friend 'Wink'
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DAY 19! - Don't fail her!

Fear filled her heart once again today. She stands on that crossroad once again today. And the final decision doesn't seem to be in her hands.

"What about us?"
She is not afraid to ask him today. She won't take silence as an answer this time. She demands these answers! She has these rights on him!
Yesterday she proposed her definition of love to him. "Love is selfish". If loving him means she's selfish, then yes she is selfish! If wanting to spend every moment of the day in his presence is selfishness than yes she is selfish! If selfish is wanting all his kisses, hugs, tears, aches to herself then yes yes yes she is selfish!
She wants him to fight for her for once. She wants him to fight for himself once. She demands he fights for them!
She fears that dark night will return once again when she won't be able to explain to him the relevance of her firelies. The reason why they glow.
She already dreads his unspoken words as to who he is going to choose this time. But she won't let him go so easy this time. She's always listened to him. Be it when words of anger were fired or when a needy plea was made. She never gave up on him. Then how can he just give up on them so easily? Give up on her hope, his hope, their hope?
She must be stupid she thought. She must be mad to love him to this extent. It makes absolute no damn sense for her to love him so immensely! Yet it makes just the perfect sense.
He has pushed her to the limits today! No room for tears today. Answers are what she demands and the only answers which are valid are those that mirror hers.
So she waited.
But all he could voice was "Tumhe lagta hai keh maina iske bare mai socha nahi?"
If you have then why not tell her what she wants to hear?!
You had once asked her to say what you wanted to hear. "I want to hear that you'll always shine for me. That you'll always be my star. Hamesha. I wanna hear ke mai hamesha tumhari prayers mai rahoonga. And I wanna know ke tum hamesha mujh par trust karogi...Hamesha."

Now it's your turn...tell her what she wants to hear! Tell her that you'll always let her shine for you. Tell her that she will always be your star. Hamesha. Tell here that you promise to always remain in her prayers. Tell her that she will always be able to trust you. Hamesha.

Tell her. Just please. Her heart is begging you. Just once. She promises to not ask a single question afterwards. She promises to never question your trust ever again. But today she needs the much-deserved closure.
Yesterday you needed her.

Today she needs you.

She begged, pleaded and hoped. But you didn't give in.

She was expecting an answer from the heart. But you spoke the mind's words.

And now she's angry. Beyond upset. Almost fuming.
You're impossible!
A humble request...a simple hope...Declined!
You've left her questioning her own hope today. You've left her confidence to waver yet again.
Yes it is your fault! You promised to protect her for the whole of your life. You're going to have to fulfil it till eternity. There's no backing out. You have no choice.

"Are you seriously asking me to leave?"

Are you Mr. Malhotra? Because if yes, then you're really going to have to prepare yourself for some tedious labour ahead. She's walking off beyond upset with you. You'll have to do something beyond this universe to get her to smile again.

She thought of you as her fate and her fate has let her down today. You have let her down.
Disappointed, she walks off.
But surprise surprise! What is this we have?

A blocked exit. No way to leave.

You're lucky Manik Malhotra. Fate seems to be in your favour today. You didn't want her to walk away.
I get it. We get it. You messed up.
Your words betrayed your thoughts. You had wanted to stop her and assure her that her hope wasn't going to falter. That this fight was long over. That you are ready to welcome her home this minute.
But we get it. You messed up.
It's okay. Only humans make mistakes. And the best thing about mistakes is they can be reviewed.

Fate is giving you a chance. Go stop her! Enlighten her! Tell her that you're going nowhere. That you're bound to her forever! That her hope has already won!

Tell her that she is the air you breathe. That she is the heartbeat of your heart. That she is the dream you dream every night.

That she is the reason for your existence...

Teri saanson ki saans mein
Jo hoon toh main hoon
Tere khwabon ki aanch mein
Jo hoon toh main hoon

Tere hone se hi mera hona hai
Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon

I'm glad you helped her as she needed you. You made room for her, yourself and for the both of you. It means you won't let her down. You will fight for the both of you. Pushing all hindrances back, you will make room for your love and your relationship to blossom.
I'm happy. But is she?
However whilst you could review your mistakes, reality isn't always that kind. Some blunders can't be reversed... some souls are just not that lucky. You'll meet one such tomorrow. You'll witness the consequences of a lonely and broken heart. Your friend. Mukti. She'll be unrecognisable tomorrow. A complete mess.
But I have a request. Don't blame love for this heartbreak. Don't curse love for this blunder. Don't question love for these consequences. She just slipped at the wrong time in the wrong place. It's not her love's fault. It's not her fault either. It's just the fault in their stars.

Not everyone is as lucky as you to have true love. Have true love forever. Don't let it slip. Don't lose it. Many dream for this wish. But only some wishes are fulfilled. You're lucky you have her. Your Nandini. Fight with her. Fight for her. But just don't let her go.

Also. Can I request again? Don't blame yourself tomorrow. I know you well. You'll behold yourself guilty for this infortune. It's not your fault though. You've always tried your best to protect them. Your friends. And those attempts have been quite successful too. But always remember. Preventions are in your hand. But destiny isn't. No one can control fate.

Your brother Dhruv. I know you miss his presence. You miss his smile. You miss his company. You're also worried for him. Beyond concerned. Your eyes express it all to me. I can hear it all in your silence. You want to be able to talk to him, I know. You want him to return to speaking terms with you, I understand. But right now he needs room. So give him that space. He is in need of some air. He feels as if he has just been re-born. Let him learn. Let him experience life. Let him struggle a little. Let him fall and then learn to rise again.
You have her. Nandini. He has no one. He had you... but he himself pushed you away. He needs you but he is in denial. Ever wonder why his eyes remained lowered today? He was speaking to you but why wasn't he facing you? Because he has already started feeling that guilt.
When he thought he had found love, he thought it was going to be the most beautiful thing ever. You had yourself assured him of that. You had said his love story would be one of a kind... simply beautiful. Beyond magical. But it didn't turn out as he had hoped.
Hope.
His hope has shattered too. He had hoped for a beautiful life with her. Aliya. He had hoped she would understand him like no one else. But his hope crumbled. It failed. It lost.
Now he doesn't want to hope. He doesn't believe in such ideologies. Love, friendship, trust, hope. It's all a joke for him. Why? Because he's become a joke himself. Look what she has changed him into. He doesn't hate you. No! He simply hates friendships. He loathes love. He detests trust and can't bear the idea of hope!
But be patient. As the fruits of patience are always the sweetest.
He will return. Let him experiment a little. Let him experience himself. He wants to be like you. This bluntness, this harshness, this bitterness. It all used to be a part of you once. Before your shining star had arrived. It was when your mask could conceal your reality perfectly. When you used to claim to be the monster because that's what your facade used to reflect. He wants to see if he can be the same monster. He's drowning in inferiority complex at this stage. Let him surface to the shore on his own. You were never the monster you had claimed to be. So how will he manage to pull off this pretence for long? He will realise soon. Sooner than you think. And that day he will return home.
So I hear your opponent is quite intelligent? He knows how to play this game well. But don't you always play it the best? Because you like playing it dirty!
You need to fight him. Fight for her.
His hands reached upto her hair today did you know? I was afraid he was going to replace you here too. As far as I remember only you have the right to tuck the locks of her hair behind her ear. For a second I thought he was going to substitute himself instead of you here. If that had happened, god forbid this world would have to face your wrath. But you understand what I'm trying to say right? She needs protection. She needs you. You're irreplaceable according to her. Whether it's this fusion concert or whether it's her heart. No one can be as perfect for her as you. No one can replace you.
You weren't there to question him today so she questioned him on your behalf. But she wishes to see you back in that room tomorrow; questioning him of his intentions. She expects you to question him how dare he touch her where only your touch is allowed. She is hoping you to return tomorrow to question him of why you were replaced. She is still awaiting your return. She is still expecting you to protect her. She is still hoping for you to fight for her.

Don't fail her!

Twinkle <3
Edited by twinkle10 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I dont know what to say!!
Speechless.. completely and utterly speechless...
I LOVE YOU for your talent...😳
my heart is breaking for Nandini...
I'll comment bada wala later...
But for now, Hats off to you 'Wink'...👏
My heart is gonna fail someday while reading something that you write which is magical in itself..will explain you the reasons later... u r superb.. yet again brilliant piece of work...

Love
Pankhuri

P.S. Cant help but point out.. Yay!!! I am the first one...😆😆
Edited by riddhima11 - 10 years ago
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DAY 19! - Don't fail her!

Fear filled her heart once again today. She stands on that crossroad once again today. And the final decision doesn't seem to be in her hands.

"What about us?"
She is not afraid to ask him today. She won't take silence as an answer this time. She demands these answers! She has these rights on him!
Yesterday she proposed her definition of love to him. "Love is selfish". If loving him means she's selfish, then yes she is selfish! If wanting to spend every moment of the day in his presence is selfishness than yes she is selfish! If selfish is wanting all his kisses, hugs, tears, aches to herself then yes yes yes she is selfish!
She wants him to fight for her for once. She wants him to fight for himself once. She demands he fights for them!
She fears that dark night will return once again when she won't be able to explain to him the relevance of her firelies. The reason why they glow.
She already dreads his unspoken words as to who he is going to choose this time. But she won't let him go so easy this time. She's always listened to him. Be it when words of anger were fired or when a needy plea was made. She never gave up on him. Then how can he just give up on them so easily? Give up on her hope, his hope, their hope?
She must be stupid she thought. She must be mad to love him to this extent. It makes absolute no damn sense for her to love him so immensely! Yet it makes just the perfect sense.
He has pushed her to the limits today! No room for tears today. Answers are what she demands and the only answers which are valid are those that mirror hers.
So she waited.
But all he could voice was "Tumhe lagta hai keh maina iske bare mai socha nahi?"
If you have then why not tell her what she wants to hear?!
You had once asked her to say what you wanted to hear. "I want to hear that you'll always shine for me. That you'll always be my star. Hamesha. I wanna hear ke mai hamesha tumhari prayers mai rahoonga. And I wanna know ke tum hamesha mujh par trust karogi...Hamesha."

Now it's your turn...tell her what she wants to hear! Tell her that you'll always let her shine for you. Tell her that she will always be your star. Hamesha. Tell here that you promise to always remain in her prayers. Tell her that she will always be able to trust you. Hamesha.

Tell her. Just please. Her heart is begging you. Just once. She promises to not ask a single question afterwards. She promises to never question your trust ever again. But today she needs the much-deserved closure.
Yesterday you needed her.

Today she needs you.

She begged, pleaded and hoped. But you didn't give in.

She was expecting an answer from the heart. But you spoke the mind's words.

And now she's angry. Beyond upset. Almost fuming.
You're impossible!
A humble request...a simple hope...Declined!
You've left her questioning her own hope today. You've left her confidence to waver yet again.
Yes it is your fault! You promised to protect her for the whole of your life. You're going to have to fulfil it till eternity. There's no backing out. You have no choice.

"Are you seriously asking me to leave?"

Are you Mr. Malhotra? Because if yes, then you're really going to have to prepare yourself for some tedious labour ahead. She's walking off beyond upset with you. You'll have to do something beyond this universe to get her to smile again.

She thought of you as her fate and her fate has let her down today. You have let her down.
Disappointed, she walks off.
But surprise surprise! What is this we have?

A blocked exit. No way to leave.

You're lucky Manik Malhotra. Fate seems to be in your favour today. You didn't want her to walk away.
I get it. We get it. You messed up.
Your words betrayed your thoughts. You had wanted to stop her and assure her that her hope wasn't going to falter. That this fight was long over. That you are ready to welcome her home this minute.
But we get it. You messed up.
It's okay. Only humans make mistakes. And the best thing about mistakes is they can be reviewed.

Fate is giving you a chance. Go stop her! Enlighten her! Tell her that you're going nowhere. That you're bound to her forever! That her hope has already won!

Tell her that she is the air you breathe. That she is the heartbeat of your heart. That she is the dream you dream every night.

That she is the reason for your existence...

Teri saanson ki saans mein
Jo hoon toh main hoon
Tere khwabon ki aanch mein
Jo hoon toh main hoon

Tere hone se hi mera hona hai
Tujhko khona jaise khudko khona
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon
Tu jo hai toh main hoon
Yun jo hai toh main hoon

I'm glad you helped her as she needed you. You made room for her, yourself and for the both of you. It means you won't let her down. You will fight for the both of you. Pushing all hindrances back, you will make room for your love and your relationship to blossom.
I'm happy. But is she?
However whilst you could review your mistakes, reality isn't always that kind. Some blunders can't be reversed... some souls are just not that lucky. You'll meet one such tomorrow. You'll witness the consequences of a lonely and broken heart. Your friend. Mukti. She'll be unrecognisable tomorrow. A complete mess.
But I have a request. Don't blame love for this heartbreak. Don't curse love for this blunder. Don't question love for these consequences. She just slipped at the wrong time in the wrong place. It's not her love's fault. It's not her fault either. It's just the fault in their stars.

Not everyone is as lucky as you to have true love. Have true love forever. Don't let it slip. Don't lose it. Many dream for this wish. But only some wishes are fulfilled. You're lucky you have her. Your Nandini. Fight with her. Fight for her. But just don't let her go.

Also. Can I request again? Don't blame yourself tomorrow. I know you well. You'll behold yourself guilty for this infortune. It's not your fault though. You've always tried your best to protect them. Your friends. And those attempts have been quite successful too. But always remember. Preventions are in your hand. But destiny isn't. No one can control fate.

Your brother Dhruv. I know you miss his presence. You miss his smile. You miss his company. You're also worried for him. Beyond concerned. Your eyes express it all to me. I can hear it all in your silence. You want to be able to talk to him, I know. You want him to return to speaking terms with you, I understand. But right now he needs room. So give him that space. He is in need of some air. He feels as if he has just been re-born. Let him learn. Let him experience life. Let him struggle a little. Let him fall and then learn to rise again.
You have her. Nandini. He has no one. He had you... but he himself pushed you away. He needs you but he is in denial. Ever wonder why his eyes remained lowered today? He was speaking to you but why wasn't he facing you? Because he has already started feeling that guilt.
When he thought he had found love, he thought it was going to be the most beautiful thing ever. You had yourself assured him of that. You had said his love story would be one of a kind... simply beautiful. Beyond magical. But it didn't turn out as he had hoped.
Hope.
His hope has shattered too. He had hoped for a beautiful life with her. Aliya. He had hoped she would understand him like no one else. But his hope crumbled. It failed. It lost.
Now he doesn't want to hope. He doesn't believe in such ideologies. Love, friendship, trust, hope. It's all a joke for him. Why? Because he's become a joke himself. Look what she has changed him into. He doesn't hate you. No! He simply hates friendships. He loathes love. He detests trust and can't bear the idea of hope!
But be patient. As the fruits of patience are always the sweetest.
He will return. Let him experiment a little. Let him experience himself. He wants to be like you. This bluntness, this harshness, this bitterness. It all used to be a part of you once. Before your shining star had arrived. It was when your mask could conceal your reality perfectly. When you used to claim to be the monster because that's what your facade used to reflect. He wants to see if he can be the same monster. He's drowning in inferiority complex at this stage. Let him surface to the shore on his own. You were never the monster you had claimed to be. So how will he manage to pull off this pretence for long? He will realise soon. Sooner than you think. And that day he will return home.
So I hear your opponent is quite intelligent? He knows how to play this game well. But don't you always play it the best? Because you like playing it dirty!
You need to fight him. Fight for her.
His hands reached upto her hair today did you know? I was afraid he was going to replace you here too. As far as I remember only you have the right to tuck the locks of her hair behind her ear. For a second I thought he was going to substitute himself instead of you here. If that had happened, god forbid this world would have to face your wrath. But you understand what I'm trying to say right? She needs protection. She needs you. You're irreplaceable according to her. Whether it's this fusion concert or whether it's her heart. No one can be as perfect for her as you. No one can replace you.
You weren't there to question him today so she questioned him on your behalf. But she wishes to see you back in that room tomorrow; questioning him of his intentions. She expects you to question him how dare he touch her where only your touch is allowed. She is hoping you to return tomorrow to question him of why you were replaced. She is still awaiting your return. She is still expecting you to protect her. She is still hoping for you to fight for her.

Don't fail her!

me me...

Well here i am..very late buy hopefully this won't become a habit..lol

Okies..WOW. This analyiss was really different but in a good way. I feel like your writing style changed a little with this analysis..and i really liked it..it almost seemed like a conversation with Manik, a unique style and i think it was just as amazing.

Me...i just keep the same ranting style..lol. You Ready ?

we shall start with Dhruv. You did an amazing job with analyzing him..simply superb. How Dhruv so desperately wants to be Manik and now he is being everything Manik use to be before Nandini entered his life. His life, Alya has failed him. She never gave him the priority he deserved so now, this indifference is the new Dhruv, a new person no one other than Alya will recognize. And this indifference shall cost him and time itself will teach Dhruv important lessons..He shall stumble but his friends, his buddy still won't let him fall. Manik, he loves this boy like a brother, like a son. He has made sacrifices for him...and he seems to have made another one today: walked away from the fusion concert..the same concert that meant so much for his relationship with Nandini. He shall find ways to be 'happy for him'. because that's how selfless Manik Maltorta is..Alya...this girl is the only one who knows Dhruv now, mainly becuase she has part in making this new Dhruv.

Where there is love, there is always fights..Fights mean there is something worth fighting for..and that applies to both friendship and love ( Manan's relationship).

Oh Pandit. Divide and Rule you are playing." I am replacing you, Manik Maltorta." My Manik Maltorta sees right through you. He has been part of these games long before you even learnt to play them, oldie. Where young kids ran around and played kid games, his mother taught him how to play mind games. So be prepared, to lose ! But my lad likes a strong oppponent..makes winning all that sweeter for him. And here you are toying with the two most important people in his life..his love and his brother. If my Manik finds out you are touching his Nandu where only his hands belong..you shall have a problem, bud. Pandit pulled this stupid move for this anyway. Had Manik been here, he wouldn't even let you touch his girl...that's why you used Dhruv, his resentment towards to give him the chance to be 'Manik Maltorta'. I worry for you Pandit, I truly do.

Just yesterday, she taught him to hope. To not give up. To keep trying and today hope itself seems to be failing them both.. Lying other the stars, he tells her "Hope karti raho" but Manik, you have seem to given her no reason to hope. Are we back to the love vs,friendship sacrifice ? Are you going to give up on your Nandini again for your buddy ? Manik knows what this fusion concert means to Nandini, it's the battle for their hope to survive and come out on top. This Fusion Concert is suppose to be their victory. Manik and Nandini's victory. But Manik has walked away from this concert ? walked away from their chance to win ? Nandini has every reason to worry...and she has the right to ask him these questions. Yesterday, she gave Manik what needed the most: herself, her support. Today, she needs his words, his reassurance and he won't give up to her, on them ! So she doesn't want to feel the hurt..so instead she chooses anger. He can't give her answers even when he has thought about it..and even today, Dhruv takes priority.

She thinks fate and Manik don't them to be together, and fate answers back in a humorous way : it locks them in and gives Manik a chance to fix his mistake. Fate tells Manik: prove your girl wrong. Use your strength. Use your power. I think you analyzed their lock in really well..Manik has a chance to prove to Nandini that he can and will fight for them.

Okies..so i shall pick Cavya and Mukti in my next post..so let's end this one here..

Great work as always my twinkie bear.

- Reya aka Your Sunny <3



Edited by maankigeet4ever - 10 years ago
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OMG this is just beautifully written. What a ride you took us on with your Words. AMAZING. LOVED Reading every single word of it. Hats off

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