Manan FF: Lets fall in love **Discontinued** - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Manan poles apart yet going to pair up
Nice storyline
Can u plz pm me fr the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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loved the 1st part..
do continue soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow so diffrent and contrast charcters
wow
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Nice and interesting story... Please PM me when you update this :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!! A superb Start... Continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Excited for their 1st meet.
Thanks for the pm
plz update daily..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thank you so much for liking the idea.
updating next part soon :)
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Love the concept... looking forward to the next part.😊
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Part 2- first meeting

Nandini and her family reached to Mumbai, the city of her dreams and the city which gonna change her life.

Wow... this is our new flat papa... its so nice, where is my room? I will take that one she pointed towards the second floor, Sudhir nodded smilingly then she ran upstairs, Amrit shouted from behind watch out Nandu, all time jumping and running like kid, she is a grown up girl now..say something Sudhir.

Sudhir laughs come on let her be, I like my daughter like this only, her smiles are the only thing makes the house cheerful.

Nandini happily unpacking her bag, settling books on book shelf and dresses on closet. Then someone came slowly and a hand closed her eyes...she happily touched those hands to guess and shouted loud, Navyaaa...

They hugged each other tightly like bichhdi bahanas.

Wow Nandini I m so happy u r finally here, how are u my jaan?

I m perfectly fine. Hows u?

I m good and glad now we can study at the same collage Yeyiii...she threw her fist up in excitement, but u have to get the admission asap because this is the biggest college of Mumbai and seats reserves so fast here, u have to make it quick.

Oh my god, ok so let's go tomorrow. Replied Nandini.

Ok be ready at 8. I will pick u.

Yes I will, anyways how's everyone at home? Asked Nandini adjusting the last book on table.

They are fine, Hey Nandini I have something to show u? told Navya excitedly.

Nandini turned to her...han?

Navya pulled her top slightly up to show her belly.

Arohi's eyes open wide, naval ring???

Yes, I got it recently.

Nice yaar. U are going too modern, arm tattoo, naval ring, what's next??

Navya sat on the bed grinning, just wait and watch, after all its Mumbai, get ready to see the new world miss Nandini Moorthy she said and patted her cheeks slowly.

Next day Nandini was late in waking up, she changed in a beautiful short kurti and chudidar salwar with long dupatta after taking shower, tugged her silky hairs in a ponytail and put on her cute specs; she looked at the watch and sighed...aaiyappa late ho gayi aaj toh! then ran fast towards the door, Amrit screamed from behind stop stop have your breakfast, then go wherever u want.

Nandini let out a tired expression, whining and stomping foot like a child, mom I m getting late, Navya is waiting outside.

I don't care, first eat something otherwise... Nandini cut her off in middle, ok mom I m eating she grabbed a paratha and rolled it, ok mom bye... then ran out.

Amrit shouted Nandini...Uff this girl will make me mad one day.

she came out, yes yes I m here now stop pressing the horn Navya, otherwise colony people will throw us out very soon.

Navya laughed...ok ok come sit. Have u taken all marksheets and certificates?

Yes.

Navya started driving, she said in middle U r looking cute in specs, but tell me are u still a bookworm?

Nandini slapped her arm I m not a bookworm.

Navya chuckled... but let me tell u, u r looking like behanji, cant u wear jeans or something modern?

Nandini pouted, Why? I like it and still many things are unpacked so I have only few dresses.

Its ok, well its not that bad. And if Navya is here do not fear replied Navya pointing at herself, slowly slowly I will make you Malaika from Meena kumari.

Both laughed together.

Their car stopped at the parking and they stepped out, Nandini was amazed to see her new collage, its so big. They walked ahead, boys and girls smoking there, some walking wrapping hands around each other, all were looking extra modern hippies, some boys present there staring them and Navya passing them flirty smile, Nandini held her hand tight, she wasn't used to it, squeezing her hands slowly she asked Navya why they are staring us like this? then she looks down at her micro mini skirt don't u think your skirt is too short?

I know baby but its fashion here, see around all girls wears like this, not a big deal. Replied Navya blowing her nails.

Nandini smiled nervously yeah they are, my previous town people are much better than them, this place is weird, thank god Navya is here with me, oh god if mom come to know about the atmosphere of the collage, she'll never let me study here.

Suddenly everyone started going to one direction, they were looking hell exited, Navya and Nandini both seemed confused, then Navya asked to one boy, what is going on? Don't you know the bike race is about to begin in few minutes he told them.

Navya jumped and excitedly grabbed her hand, let's go Nandini, this is gonna be fun.

But where? What bike racing?

Just come with me, she dragged her to the racing ground; all bikers were ready in position, everyone cheering and screaming with top of their lungs. Nandini and Navya took their place, Navya too screamed loud, Nandini rolled her eyes, what is fun in it Navya?

Ahh... just wait yr. replied excited Navya.

A sexy looking girl wearing extra short dress which cling on her body like a second skin dropped the red flag and race begins... they were riding as fast as storm, faster and faster, suddenly Nandini's dupatta flied by the air, Nandini ran behind to catch it, but dupatta entered inside the racing ground, Nandini stopped, that dupatta stickled to one of the bikers helmet, blocking his view, he was about to fall but controlled it by stopping his bike, he could pulled it out and start his bike again but during that time someone crossed the finish line. He was very angry at that moment, clutching the dupatta he was about to throw but Nandini held it... wait this is mine and then she snatched it and wrapped around her neck... everyone cheering the name of winner and some are sad also because he was the all time winner but this time lost it... all surrounding has only one name Harshad... who is his big enemy, all friends comes to him running and stood around him they were about to say something but he stopped them by raising his palm, took off his helmet and looked at her with rage of anger, he was wearing blue jeans with leather jacket and black leather hand gloves. his deep brown eyes were fuming red, she gulped her saliva in nervousness, opened her trembling lips to say something, but before she can utter a word he shouted on her... it's all because of u? who the hell are u? do u know I lost the god dam race??

she was very scared, opened her mouth by gathering some strength, I m sorry.

Sorry?? he shook his head, u r saying sorry, can your sorry change anything?

She took a deep breath and said look I know u lost this race because of me but it's not my fault, If you really want to blame someone then blame on air which caused my dupatta to fly and stick on your helmet, she finished her sentence in one breath, trying to look confident but inside she was really scared of his angry eyes.

He looked at her in disbelief, so his friends, how dare this girl talk to me like this? Nobody dares to do this in this whole collage.

But instead of being angry he smirked on her, she was confused by his reaction before she can say anything he put on his helmet back and rode, his friends followed after him.

Navya came to her, what r u doing here?

Nandini narrowed her eyes, oh really? Where were u btw?

Vo actually I went to congratulate the winner, Nandini he is so hot.

She rolled her eyes, yeah yeah.

Now answer me your dupatta flied right?

Yes and you know what, where it stopped?

Where?

On the face of a biker.

Navya's eyes widen then both burst out in laughter. See Nandini I told u wearing salwar suit was not a good idea. Both walking to the main office... but I hope he hasn't scold u much.

He scolded me, his eyes were red with anger, I was hell scared but tried my best to not show him.

Navya giggled, u will always remember your first day here.

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He walked to his room still angry, threw his bike keys on the table and college bag on bed, sitting down ran his finger through hair, I can't be beaten, no! never! And that Harshad, he could never win if that girl...agrrr... can't these girls take care of their own cloths? Losing anything is not in Manik's dictionary but what bothering him more is, that he lost this to his biggest enemy Harshad.

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They reached college in next day, Navya and Nandini both are in different classes, because she was arts student and Nandini was commerce. Navya was telling everything like a teacher to her, see Nandini u r new here so follow only my direction, my classes are downstairs and yours in second floor class room no. 41. Here's the time table, only last one class we will be share together, that's Foundation Course, she pointed to the time table and today we have computer in FC.

Now go fast first period is about to begin. Meet u after this period.

Nandini was walking fast to search her class but the college is very huge, she asked with a boy who has piercing in eye brows, big tattoo in arm and ear plugs in ears... excuse me, can u tell me where is room no. 41?

He took off his ear plugs, looked at her up to down and asked new?

She nodded.

Ok then go to the third floor.

But my room no. 41 is in second floor right?

No newbie that was old, now room numbers are changed, u go and check third floor.

Thanks she muttered and started climbing to the third floor, after reaching, she got more confused, labs, library, reading room, but room no. 41 was nowhere, then she asked with a girl, excuse me I m looking for the second year class of commerce, can u tell me where is it?

That girl again looked at her head to toe and smirked. No babes its a senior class, u should look at second floor.

Yes but someone said room numbers are changed.

Don't know may be u should check the notice board and time table.

Thanks she replied and she turned to go to the notice board, already tired by climbing up and down now she has to go back to the ground floor to check the notice board.

She looked at the time table, Second floor, which means that boy lied, finally she managed to her class but 10 minutes late, may I come in sir?

The teacher was fat and looking in age about 45. He Looked at her then glanced to his watch. Do you know what time is it? u are late.

I m sorry sir.

Keep your sorry with u, make sure it won't repeat, otherwise I will not allow u in, now come and sit. He said rudely.

Nandini entered and took seat beside a girl, still breathing fast. The girl beside her whispered hi I m Mukti. Nandini smiled to her hi I m Nandini.

Hey don't be sad on his remark, he is just like this, the most strict teacher here. Replied Mukti with a polite smile.

Nandini nodded smiling back to her.

After another 10 minute some boys entered in class, they were 5, all looking handsome, well built and rich, they entered confidently inside, Nandini noticed two boys, this is the same boy who misguided me in searching the class and second one... wait... no, he is a same biker, oh no, he is in same class with me?? but wait he and his gang is late, no super late 20 minutes, now this strict teacher will throw them out from the class and also they entered without asking, yeyiii now the fun is about to begin, an evil smile placed on her lips.

But teacher was busy in teaching pretending like nothing happened. She confusingly looked at Mukti then those boys.

They came and started looking for a seat, then biker's eyes stopped at her, she quickly looks down to hide her face, he smirked and made his way to her. He ordered Mukti to get up by hint of his fingers; she got up by giving her a look sorry I have to' and took seat to the other row.

He sat beside her so close, 2 boys seated on the front desk and 2 seated at their back seat. She gulped down Oh lord I m trapped. He was passing evil smile to her, hi gorgeous he waved front of her, she is not responding and pretending herself busy in study, not even looking at him, he smirked and kept his foot on the table in front.

She looked at him and then his shoes on table, thought now he will definitely get scold, she smiled slowly, he noticed and leaned closer, she can feel his warm breath on her ears, he whispered don't smile sweetheart he'll not gonna say anything.

She pushes him little, how he'd know what I m thinking, she nervously adjusted her dupatta, he was enjoying making her uncomfortable.

When the bell rang, she collected her books and walked out as fast as she could, not even looking back.

When she reached out bumped with Navya.

Oh oh watch out girl, why walking in hurry? Asked Navya adjusting her skirt.

She took a sigh of relief to see her, then Mukti came I m sorry Nandini but I had to do that.

Nandini looked at her it's ok, that's my friend Navya and Navya she is Mukti my class mate.

Both exchanged smiles. We have 15 minute break before the next class let's have some tea. Suggested Navya.

No Navya wait, then she turned to Mukti, tell me who is he and why that so called strict teacher allowed their actions? Asked Nandini crossing arms over her chest.

U don't know him Nandini, he is Manik Malhotra, rules over this place, he is like king of the college.


PMs tomorrow :)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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now its gonna be intresting.

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