Let's walk! - NOTE!! (Manan FF); pg 40

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ticktock

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Posted: 10 years ago

#91

OH MY GOD! this is the best ff have read so far👏 it is sooo painful yet romantic and beautiful. You have potrayed manik's concern and nandani's love so perfectly that I am speechless jut amazing and thanks for the PM or I would have missed this amazing ff!!! and ofcourse update soon 😃

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twinkle10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#92

Originally posted by: vihaa
OH MY GOD! this is the best ff have read so far👏it is sooo painful yet romantic and beautiful. You have potrayed manik's concern and nandani's love so perfectly that I am speechless jut amazing and thanks for the PM or I would have missed this amazing ff!!! and ofcourse update soon😃

Girl you're so talented yourself that I really can't agree mine is that great! But i thank you from the bottom for the heart for such sweet words and all the appreciation. <3
Will try my best to post soon!

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RaindropsNRoses

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Posted: 10 years ago

#93

read all.3 parts in one go
it is just awesome
hope nandu will be fine soon
ur writing skills r fabulous
u nailed it dear
plz continue soon
if possible pm me too

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twinkle10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: nimarious
read all.3 parts in one go
it is just awesome
hope nandu will be fine soon
ur writing skills r fabulous
u nailed it dear
plz continue soon
if possible pm me too

Awww...thankyou so much for the lovely praises babe! Will surely pm you once I update the next chapted :)

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twinkle10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#95

CHAPTER FOUR - TEASER!!

The bright light pouring in through her net curtains woke him up. He stirred a little in the warm bed, but soon he froze. She was still sleeping.

Her head cozily tucked against his warm chest and her breathing so calm, so composed.

Manik reached across her face and started plucking away locks of her hair which were restricting his view. She shifted a little in his arms and his fingers froze straight away. He didn't want her to wake up just yet. She burried herself deeper into his scent and he encircled his left arm around her to keep her warm and safe against. him.

Manik pinched himself with his right hand. "Ouch", he whispered. This was no dream. She actually was laying so peacefully in his arms and he didn't want this morment to end Such a beautfiul morning. He had woken up to his shining star amidst the broad daylight. Yet her radiance could whitewash any source of light. Her sweet scent filling every corner of his lungs. He slowly placed his right hand upon her soft hands which were snuggled against his hard chest.

His heart stopped beating for a second. Worry flooding the mind. He quickly reached up to check her forehead. Then her left cheek. And then her neck. He should have known better. How could he be so careless?

"Shit!", he muttered under his breath.

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Stay tuned for the rest of chapter four soon!

Edited by twinkle10 - 10 years ago

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Tanvi

@manan58

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Posted: 10 years ago

#96

Woohoo.. Awesome

So nandu has got fever.. Shit noo

Nw manik will worry like anything..

Aww.. Pls update the prt na.. Waitin

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ticktock

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Posted: 10 years ago

#97

this is so cruel!!! i can't wait to read what has happened to nandani... maybe fever😭😭 because of the rain!! OMG hope she is alright... please update soon

ps- the way manik held her just too good😳

Edited by vihaa - 10 years ago

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twinkle10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: manan58
Woohoo.. Awesome
So nandu has got fever.. Shit noo

Nw manik will worry like anything..

Aww.. Pls update the prt na.. Waitin

Will have it up very soon promise! :)

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filter.coffee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#99

arrre yeh kya?what torture is this?

come on dude post the full chapter!please post today

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twinkle10

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Posted: 10 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: vihaa
this is so cruel!!! i can't wait to read what has happened to nandani... maybe fever😭😭 because of the rain!! OMG hope she is alright... please update soon
ps- the way manik held her just too good😳

Promise to update soon!
Thanks for the praises... I just love that episode in the show when they woke up in each other's arms at soha's farmhouse <3