MaNan FF : Fusion Concert (Part 18-pg38) - Page 11

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rish_manan

Awesome update..
By the way hi I am rishita and I am new to this forum and I love your ff so much...!!!



Thankyou so much Rishita 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 12

ManBir left ...

Nandini : dhruv vo..
Dhruv : han bolo ?
Nandini : mujhe Manik aur..
She wanted him to know bout them , that they are finally together
But he snapped her!
Dhruv : oh god! Smjh ni ata tmhe.. Mjhe baat ni krni Manik k bare mei... Mjhe uski shakal.. Uska naam .. Kch ni sun na aur na hi dkhna h! 😡
Nandini has it enough! She was boiling with anger now..
Dhruv went out in full anger .. She followed him..
He went inside Jam room and she followed him..
Dhruv : kya baat h Nandini ? Bola na ..
But she shut him up..
Nandini : Sunna pdga tmhe Dhruv! You have to..
She said that pretty loud!
Fab4 were just bout to enter and they heard her..
They opened the door and saw Dhruv and Nandini looking at each other in full anger.. Well Nandini was more red so 😡 .. Anybody could tell hiw angry she was.. Manik was going to inteript but Cabir stopped him.. They stood there..
Nandini : kyu Dhruv? Why are you being such a jerk? Hu? Manik pe itna gussa? Bhai mante the na tum dono ek dsre ko !! Isne kya ni kiya tmhre liye?? And tumhe suffocation hti h usse? Bolo Dhruv??!
Dhruv: oh pls maine bhi kia h uske liye!...and pls ab tum mt shuru hojao
he was bout to leave but she stopped him..
Nandini : He sacrificed me for u! Isse bda sacrifice tum kya kroge Dhruv??
With teary eyes she looked up and found Dhruv with a questioning face!
Dhruv : kya matlab?? 😲
Fab 3 were also looking at Manik with questioning face!
Nandini then narrated whole story to Dhruv how Manik on the Opening night of Musicana left her because of him.. He was dumbfound.. Alonf with Fab3..
Manik had tears in his eyes.. But controlled himself.. Cabir could see his pain.. Alya and Mukti were also shocked ..
Dhruv: Buddy ne tmhe chrha mere liye?? Par kyu..
Nandini : because use lgta h vo Monster h and you are far better than him and tmhre sath mai khush rhti.. He didn't realise that love can never be forced.. Usse realise ni hua tha tb .. But he still left me .. Jo bhi feelings thi usne sb dabba li kyuki tmne usse kaha that u love me!
Usne mjhse friendship pta h kyu ki? Tmhri vjh se! Taaki tumhre n Rishabh k attacks ka kcj solution nikal le.. Vo ktna hate krta tha mjhe but sirf tmhre liye.. Usne mjhse dosti ki and pta ni chala when we fell in love ( she gave a pale smile )
Manik was watching her.. All he wanted to do at time was hug her tight n tell her that he loves her but he couldn't...
Nandini: Dhruv how can u call such a guy selfish? Hu. ?? Tum aisa kaise kr skte ho? Vo tut gya tha uss din .. He cried Dhruv! For u!! Manik Malhotra ...tum logo ki Backbone.. Koi ni tha uss din! Mai thi.. i saw him how he broke down.. Kitna shock lga usse jb uske Bhai ne usse bo sb kaha!
Dhruv had tears in his eyes ..
Dhruv: I'm sorry Nandini (he hugged her) .. Meri vjh se tm dono ko itna pain sehna pda.. Par mai.. alya k liye jo feelings feel krta hu uss vjh se i felt insecure.. And it's very difficult for me to see Manik everyday and feel like that I don't exist..
And he started to leave .. Only to see fab4 standing there ...
He went ahead.. Saw Manik and went..
Manik was bout to leave but Cabir stopped him ,"Time de usse .. Phle Nandini ko smbhl le"
Nandini sat on the chair..crying ...
Manik went and knelt down ,"Nandini shhh.. It's okay.."
Nandini : No it's not! Manik.. Main tmhe smjhaya tha! Tum sbko hmsha protect nhi kr skte..vo sb smbhl skte h apne apko! But nhi and dkhlo ab ..(she cupped his face) i know tum bht pyaar krte ho inn sab se.. But I can't see you like this ...
Manik kissed her forehead and hugged her.. He had tears in his eyes.. "i love you"
Was all he could say...
Alya and Mukti were shocked to see this side of Manik..
Three of them went to them..MaNan broke the hug..
Alya : wow! Nandini tmne pura badal dia h Manik ko.. You know I was wrong bout u.. Maybe you made things better for us ( and she have her a friendly smile )
Mukti: right! Nandini yaad h uss din Cabir k ghr pe you said that you want to bring the best side of Manik.. Well you have ( and Hugged her )
Cabir : wow! To bitches be friends now?
All of them laughed and hit him...
Manik : guyss thankyou..
Mukti : thapad hi aega... Agr thanks bola to..
Alya : Manik you have got your true love.. Don't ever let her go.. And hugged him..
Nandini: Don't worry Alya you'll get yours too .. Soon :)
Alya : idk maybe i lost him forever..
Cabir : aisa ni kehte Alu.. We'll figure smthg out filhaal bhuk lgi h chale..
And they all went to canteen ..
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Hope you all liked it.. Next part will be all bout Concert so stay tuned 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
First to comment..!
Again it was so awesome.!
😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rish_manan

First to comment..!
Again it was so awesome.!
😳



Thanks babe 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part, but a little short
Really loving all the manan scenes <3 <3
And not to mention the great beera too 😆
Thanks for the PM :D
Do continue soon (:
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome loved it update sooon hope
Now druv got some piece of mind in him
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Posted: 10 years ago
This is a lovely update... Finally everyone knows about Manik's actions... and loving the MANAN love, looking forward to the next update...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Standing ovation. ...
Awesome parts. . Superb. . Mind Blowing.
I really want nandu dhruv confrontation. It's much needed. Don't know we will get that epic scenes or not in the show. But I m vry happy to get it now Through ur Ff. Love it. ... vrrryy muchhh👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update
thanx for the pm and double dose
plz update soon
Edited by nimarious - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
No words to say
Wonderful

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