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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!!! Loved new start ...also loved the way u used the line I m ur nightmare dressed like a daydream...(taylor swift..blank space)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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next update plz.. n pm me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Manik's Pov
"Enough Mnaik. ..enough. 6 months. ..6 bloody months, I have had enough.aur nahi manik. ..mein aur chup nahi rahongi."she screamed on top her voice.

She came up to me and held my collar.

"Mein ek insane hoon manik.Even I have feelings. Mhuje bhi utna hurt ho ta hai jitna tumko. Mhuje se rhona ata hai. These 6 months I have ...meine apne feelings ko daba ke rake hai."her voice was cracking. she left my collar and took a few steps back.She wiped her tears and gave a sarcastic smile.

"Par ..tumhe yeu sab samaj mein nahi ayega."she said and ran to the bathroom and locked herself. For the first time in 8 months I have known her,I felt bad for her.I could feel her pain.

I heard her cry. I wanted to hug her and console her but my ego came in between. I banged the door and left from her room.

The next morning I couldn't find her anywhere around the house.

"Kaka..Nandini kaha hai?"I asked him hoping he would know.

"Pata nahi baba.Bithiya ko nahi dekha.Bhi tak so rahi hogi."Kaka said serving me breakfast.

I checked her room but she wasn't there.where could she be?

I was in cabin checking some files,when cabir entered my Cabin.He looked worried and anxious.

"Manik. ..where is Nandini. ?"he asked breathing heavily.

"Mhuje kase pata hoga.ghar pe hogi.."

"No manik. ..ghar pe nahi hai..aur phone bhi utha nahi rahi."cabir said trying ti call her again.

Even I was worried for her.I hadnt seen her from morning. but my ego came ij between again

"Do you think I care cabir?" I asked pretending to be least bothered.

"Tera kuch nahi ho sakta.."he said levaing my cabin in anger.

Cabir's Pov

Manik how could he? he has made Nandinis life hell.

I rushed to malhotra mansion hoping to find her.I searched everywhere and asked everyone in the house but no one had seen her.

I went to her room. I heard water running in the bathroom. I rushed to the bathroom door.

"Nandini. ."I knocked the door . I knocked many a times but didnt get a reply. I broke open the door to find Nandini on the floor.
"Nandini. ...nandini. ..."I tried waking her but in vain.

I took her in my arms and rushed to the hospital. I don't know who informed Manik but he came rushing to the hospital.

"Cabir..Nandini ..kya whoa? "He asked. it was clear her was worried.
"Tumhe kya Manik. ..woh mare ya zinda rahe? And who told you about her being in the hospital? "

"Damn it..she is my wife. .. and I had gone home tho kaka ne bataya. "he said.

"Wife...kab se Manik? Waise bhi..."before I could compete I the doctor. I rushed to him so did Manik.

"She is alright. she had fainted because if stress and she is very week.As of now she is fine and you can meet her."The doctor said and left.

Manik was about to enter the room when I stopped him.
"No Manik. .she wouldnt want to meet you."I said.

"Whatever. ."he left in anger.

I entered the room to find Nandini crying. I went her .
"Nandini. .."

She looked at me and hugged me.
"Aur nahi Cabir. .I cant..I want to go to US."she aaid crying bitterly.

"Nandu its ok. .mein sab arrange karta hon. ..dont worry. "I said assuring her.

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Hola peeps.how you doing?
Sorry for the delay. I was stuck with school and family. Here goes the 1st part. ..hope you all like it.
Ill continue my other FF as well...you belong with me.

M sorry for d delay.

Cheers
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Happy to see you write again
Congo for new story
Good start continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Awesome start. I loved cabira. <3
Update soon.
Don't disappear again please and plizz update 'you Belong with me' as soon as possible.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
nice start...
loved it
continue asap...!!!!
take care
thanks a lot for the pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
So a very good start and i hope to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
wow awsm start
loved it
cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful start..
do continue soon,..
Thanks for PM:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
Love it... looking forward to the revenge and meeting...

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