It's Because I Care - MaNan TS (COMPLETED) Last part pg 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyyyaaa.. 😆
Am I reallly boring u all?
Pls honestly tell me.

Roz roz ek OS ya TS, u must all b bored. 😆

So tell me if u dnt want more, ok?


So, Manik is going replaced? Awww.
And Dhruv is replacing him (END OF YAARI)

So this is a prediction of what might happen.


OoO


Outside Music Room
Manik's POV


This Pandit.. What does he want huh? No seriouslly.. I am sure he's after my Nandini.. Wait Mr. Manik.. did u just say 'my'? Oh godd.. tu pagal ho gya hai Manik.. but ye pandit krega kya.. what did he mean abt ki he'll do something to get me out of the concert.. oh my godd ya.. i am not scared but pkka koi scene khada krega ye.. ab mei kya kru?

"Manik.." Arre wah! Meri 'maataji' mujhe bula rhi hai.. aaj konsi disha se suraj uga tha..?

"Hmm?"

"Tumne yeh dekha?" She says..

"Kya dekha?"

"You hv been replaced OUT of the Fusion Concert. You r no longer in it."

"But who the freakin' hell is replacing me?"

"The person whom you always thought will be by your side. Your Dhruv!" Crap! Dhruv? Yaar.. what the hell is happening over here? Dammit! This is not good.. I have to tell Nandini.. No.. Dhruv still has a crush on her.. He'll.. Ek taraf ye Pandit.. Dusri taraf Dhruv.. Crap ya!

"Are you sure?"

"Yes, I am pretty much." She walks away.. Crap!




Nandini's House
12:30 am at night
Manik's POV



To hell with the time! I wanna talk to Nandini right now.. I don't care alright?.. That Pandit cannot throw me out.. Whenever he wants.. My god!

"Nandini.. Come down.. Now." I hang up without letting her a chance to speak.. This is my bad habit.. But then she'd say 'can't come, go back'.. no mood for all that crap.. although it looks quite cute when she says it..

"Manik.. what the hell do you think you are-" I cut her off..

"Look, Nandini.. umm.. Your Pandit 'ji' has pushed me out of the concert.. and.. umm.. you'll be performing with Dhruv now.."

"What? How? Why? When?"

"I don't know yaa.. I just remember him blackmailing me.. how dare he?.. what do I do now.. I can't stand u with that-" I stop.. Crap! Manik Malhotra, what were you trying to say? R u freakin' crazy? You r gonna tell her just like that? Shut up.. Just stop thinking..! ... Stop thinking dammit!

"You can't stand me with?" Nandini asks me.. Now she's on her teasing mode.. God, what does this world want from me..? I'll go crazyy..

"As if u dn't know who." I say..

"No, Manik Malhotra, I don't know 'who'.."

"You.. Nandu, I am really tensed right now.. Pls don't tease me and think of a god damn solution! I can't ever let you be alone with that Pandit... Mujhe toh uske iraado pe shak ho rha hai.. You know na, what I mean?"

"Haan haan, I know Manik... But Dhruv will b with me.."

"Be with you..? He's also interested in you.. Still.. I can't let you alone.. I'll have to do something.. but think naa.. what.. what can I do?"

"Manik.. don't overthink this.. Go home.. Rest.. we'll talk tomorrow.."

"No.. I have to talk abt it TODAY! Do u want Pandit to kick me out?"

"Of course not Manik.. I-"

"Arre Manik beta." Chachi ji comes out of the house.. "Tum itni raat gye yaha kya kr rhe ho? sab theek toh hai na?"

"Ji Chachi.. woh bas-"

"Arre andar aao na Manik.. Come.." Chachi invites me in.. I can feel Nandini glarin at me.. I look away trying to avoid her glare..





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To be continued.. 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great start- so glad to see Chachi & Manik scene and I can't wait to see what happens next. 😊

PS: who said you were boring us? Not me. Iam loving it. Honestly, we only got 3 episodes this week and now it's the weekend again... I need the FFs/OSes to keep me entertained!😉 And you are doing fabulously! Keep writing... write 10 more if you can ...I'll comment on all- Nandhini promise!😃
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Great start...please continue 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyaa alll.. 😉
Since I am still a 'groupbie' m nt able to reply to all.
Bcoz if I wnna update, I'd have to save sm posts. 😆

So here you go with the FINAL part.
Hope you all like it. I am sure u will. 😳

Thanks everyone for ur beautiful comments! ❤️


OoO


Nandini's House
Nandini's POV


Ye Manik.. what is he saying? Pandit ji.. Unhone nikal dia isse? Par kyu.. Crap! Woh blackmailing... Crap! Kya zaroorat this iss Monster Manik ko panga lene ki.. ufff.. ab mei kya kr skti hu.. ummm..

"Nandu..!" Chachi broke my train of thoughts..

"Haa Chachi?"

"Manik ko andar lija ke zara fresh toh kra aa." FRESH?

"Fresh? Bt Chachi woh abhi abhi toh.."

"Bas Nandu, kuch nahi sunna meine.. Jao Manik beta, upar jao."

"Ji Chachi.." Manik honestly obeys her and walks into my room... Hello? Room kiska hai? MERA Marzi kiski chalegi? MERI! Aur Manik kiska- Chahe jiska bhi ho he can't walk into my room like that! Oh crap! Meine woh cheez toh sambhali hi nahi.



Nandini's Room
Nandini's POV
1:30 am in d morning


"Manikkk..." I snatch my DIARY away from him.. Crap ya! Why Nandini? Why couldn't you for once, once! Put your things back in place.. This is so not good.. Manik ne agar ye padh li toh meri be izzati pkka.. For I dnt knw how many YEARS..

"Arre Nandu, show it to me naa.." He snatchs it back..

"Why do u wnna read it.. ? Pls waapis do.."

"I wanna read it bcozzz.."

"Bcoz?" I raise an eyebrow.. ahaan, caught again!

"Bcoz I just wnna read it.." He runs around the room... I hit my leg against the bed and fall downnn.. He rans beside me and takes my leg in his hands.. "Are you alright, Nandini?"

"Manik.."

"Hmmm?"

"Bana dia na ullu!" I ran up again and take my diary from where he had kept.. The bed.. He runs behind me.. "Maan lo, Mr. Manik Malhotra, tumhe bhi bahaut se log ullu bana skte hai.. K?"

"Shutt upp.. Diary do.."

"Kyu du? On top of that.. tumhe pdhni kyu hai?"

"Tumse matlab? Just give me.."

"Jao na Manik.. why do u even wanna read it..?"

"Pls naaa.."

"Ok chalo we'll make a deal.."

"What 'deal'?"

"You'll tell me a PROPER reason WHY you wanna read MY diary. If I find the reason worth me giving you MY diary.. I'll happily do that.. But if the reason is not proper.. so.. u know.." Hence, he starts to think of a reason..

"Haan toh hai na.. reason hai.." He says..

"Kya hai woh.. 'reason'?"

"Woh.. ummm.. wohhh.."

"Haaan. woh?"

"Ummm.. haan.. mera umm.. mera mann hai padhne ka.."

"Mann hai? That's all u cud think of.." I start laughing.. He looks at me for a while and a small smile crepts up his face.. I stop laughing.. He comes closer.. And closer.. And closer.. He comes close to my face.. I can actually feel his warm breath fanning over my cheeks.. He comes more close..

"Nandini.."

"Manik.." I close my eyes..

"Ha ha!" Crap! I open my eyes to see Manik standing away from me with my DIARY in his hand! Freakin' hell!

"What..? No.. Manik this is cheating.."

"Everything is fair in love.."

"Love..? It's 'everything is fair in love AND war..'"

"Haan toh..? No one is having a WAR here.." He chuckles..

"Then love..?" I say..




Next Day College
Nandini's POV


"Kya btau mei.. Whenever he comes in front of me I feel my heartbeat stop.. He is like the most wanted person.. Every girl.. Every girl wishes to be with him.. And he.. Ek mauka nahi chodta mujhe satane ke liye.. Bt I like his tender and care.. I love that he cares for me.. And I care for him too.. Uss din.. hospital mei.. It was like I died a thousand deaths.. And a soul woke me out of my death bed.. A soul whom I LOVE with all my heart.. Yes, I.. Nandini Murthy.. Aiyappa r u watching? I have fallen in love! And I am so happyy todayy.. Aiyappa do I tell him tomorrow? Bt.. ummm.. will he reject me..? Is he even interested in me..? Help kro Aiyappa.. Bt ek baat toh crystal clear hai.. That I... love.." Manik reads out of my diary.. Crap! Crap! Crap! Don't read further Manik!

"Manik.." I snatch my diary away..

"What the..? Whom have you fallen in 'love' with Ms. Nandini Murthy?"

"Non of ur business.."

"Of course it's my business." He scootches closer to me..

"Look.. your closeness can't make me conscious.."

"Oh really? Tell this LIE to someone else..!"

"I am NOT lying! I no longer get affected by you.."

"Means you used to?" He snatches my diary backk.. I snatch it back again.. We do it a couple of times till someone interrupts us..

"Nandini, Pandit ji is calling for practice.. Come asap.." Dhruv comes and says..

"Oh right.. I'll be there in 5.. I'm coming.." Dhruv nods at my statement then taking a glimpse of Manik and then our hands touching holding my diary.. he walks away.. I look at Manik who is still looking at Dhruv..

"He's acting so weird.."

"Hmm.. Chalo I hv to go.. My diary?"

"No I wnna read it.." Manik says like a cute baby pouting.. Haan haan saari cuteness iske andar hi bhar do.. Taaki agar kabhi KABHI meine apni chalani ho toh mei na chala pau.. Because he is shoo cuttiee.. Aiyappa, thoda sa fair toh hona chahiye tha na!

"Pls Manik.. I'll give it to you later.."

"Promise?"

"Promise.!" I say as I talk my bag and walk into the music room..




Music Room
Nandini's POV


"Dhruvv.. Ye kya kr rhe ho? Aise kroge toh tumne toh perform kr lia.. Dhang se reherse kro.. C'mon! You knw u r nt like that Manik Malhotra.. Pls.. acche se kro.." Pandit ji says.. Dhruv is not that good.. I come to a conclusion..

"Ji Pandit ji.." Dhruv says n tries again.. Bt fails..

"Dhruv!" Pandit ji shouts on Dhruv..

"Pandit JI.." Manik comes inside..

"Manik?" I say.. He looks at me and then bck at Pandit ji..

"Pandit JI.. You wr so sure na.. Dhruv wud b MUCH better than me? Phir ye sab kya ho rha hai hai, huh? Ohh.. right right.. Over confidence.. Bt Pandit ji .. You CANNOT talk to mah friend like THAT! Do you understand? If u cannot respect my friend.. Neither can I or nor will he.. So get this STRAIGHT in your head.. You pushed me out RIGHT? So yeah.. You'll pay for that.. Itne kam dino mei u can't find any new replacement.. Dhruv.. tu chal.. I'll nt make u stay here for even a second more!" Manik comes and holds out his hand for Dhruv to hold.. Dhruv hesistates.. He looks at Pandit ji and then Manik.. Pandit.. Manik.. Then finally holds Manik's hand.. I smile..

"Dhruv.. You're missing out an opportunity.."

"I don't care.. I am gng.. I don't wish to b here anymore.." Dhruv walks out.. Manik looks at me and then at Pandit..

"Manik.. you.."

"Request me, Pandit JI.. I might as well HELP u if u do.."

"Okay.. Manik.. will u cm back for the fusion concert?"

"Ummm.. I'd have to ask my consultant for that.. " He turns to me.. "What do you say Ms. Murthy? Shall I come back?"

"I say.. why not.." I smile at him.. He smiles back..




Manik's House
Manik's POV


Oh thank god! Pandit ko THODI toh akal aayi.. Chalo problem solved.. Wait a second.. The promise! Nandini promised me to give me her diary.. It's already night.. Hawww cheater!

*bell rings*

Is wakt kon hai? I come down and open the door... Oh Cabir!

"Hey.. whaddup bro?" Crap! Is he drunk?

"Tune pi hui hai Cabir?"

"Pi? Naaahhh.. I don't drink Manik Malhotra.." I was about to close the door when someone stops me.. NANDINI! Oh mah god! She's drunk too!

"Hiii Manniikkk babbbyyy.." She hugs me tightly.. Crap!

"Get a room u guys.."

"Shuttt uppp Cabir.." She turns back to me.. "Manik.. I remember my promise.. Here you go.." She hands me the diary..

"You came to give em THIS?"

"Yeahh.. and one more thing.."

"What..?" She smacks her lips upon mine.. I get startled but join in soon too..

"Chhiii.. bhagwan ji.. kya kya dekhna padhta hai.." Cabir laughs at us..


"Bt.. ummm.. will he reject me..? Is he even interested in me..? Help kro Aiyappa.. Bt ek baat toh crystal clear hai.. That I... love.. my MONSTER Manik.. I love Manik Malhotra! Aiyappa r u listening? I love my Monster.. My monkey.. I love MY MANIK!" I read out.. Aww.. I hug her tightly..

"Can I join for a group hug?" Cabir asks..

"Sure.." Cabir joins in too.. I am about to close the door again when the Fab 3 walk in.. Dhruv, Alia and Mukti come in and join the hug.. Crap! Why r they all freakin' drunk?

I look at Nandini...

Ahhh.. I don't care about anything now..
I love Nandini.. She loves me.. :)




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Khatammm! 😆

Hope u all liked it..
Leave ur comments and likes.. 😳

I wish m a Senior Member asap..
Then I'll reply to all one by one.. 😉


Lots of love,
Naina

Edited by _Naina15_ - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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both parts are awesome..do write more😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome part...
Write some thng new soon😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it was damn AWESOME😳 drunk nandhu cute
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awww... I love it. The diary makes a comeback...YAY! Loved the way that was revealed and your little MANDHRUV situation as well. Looking forward to your next piece!😉
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Awww...Both parts are Awesome...👏
Please Write something new Soon...😃
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awsm ts
loved it
very nicely written

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