OS BASED ON PRECAP!!!! Part5 page 7....

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Posted: 10 years ago
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What if listening to Dhruv,Nandini reacts like this.
Dhruv: Teri help ko koi zaroorat nahi, Aur meri help karke Mahaan banna bandh kar.
Fab4 are completely stunned.
Navya helplessly looks on.
Nandini's anger boils up. She walks to Dhruv and slaps him hard.
Manik : Nandini...
She gestures him to stop.

Nandini: Tum manik ke baare mein aisa sochte ho? Wo tumara buddy hai Na? Tumari help karke mahaan ban raha hai woh? Jisse tumhare attacks ke baare me sunnte hi apna Saara kam chodkar tumhare paas dodh aata hai, use baare mein Tum aisa sochte ho? Tumhe stable karne ke liye woh puri mehenath kartha hai, Dhruv. Why can't you look through all this?
Tumhare attacks ke baare mein jaane ke liye, to bring out a solution, ussne mujhse maddad mangi, help from a girl he hated so much.
Yahan tak ki, he almost gave up on the girl he cared the most about, just because you loved her. He gave up me for you, Dhruv!!
Tears stood in her eyes as she spoke this.

Manik looked away from the crowd. Cabir had a proud expression about how she stood up for him. Alya and mukti were shocked.

Nandini: as soon as he came to know that I rejected you, he came running behind me. He asked why I had said no, he pestered me about what was wrong in telling yes to you. He made you look like the perfect guy in my eyes through his words. All that all this for a girl he loved too. He felt guilty about sabotaging your plan of proposing me on the musicana opening night. He regretted that night. The night we had our first kiss. The night when we promised to stay with each other forever. The day we confide in each other. He regretted hat night because of you. He lied that it was a fake mission of taking revenge on my punch. But actually the reason was your love Dhruv. Your love for me!!
On the day of the album, you created a Hush about standing behind. He gave his place,where he always stood for years now, just for you. Dhruv!! He did everything for you. You were nothing less that a brother to him.

Dhruv was flabbergasted. He turned to Manik who looked down.

Nandini: I can't believe you said all that Dhruv. The truth is all of you just can't see the good in him. You just know the bad of him. And trust me, if not for him, Fab5 would not have been fab5. It would have broken several times. For the ego and problems who have, fab5 would have broken down in more than 5 pieces.

Cabir walked to Manik and placed his hand on his shoulder. Cabir passed his handcerchief.
Cabir: aasu bhaare hain. Kabhi bhi nikal sakte hain.
Manik wiped out a lone tear off his eye.

Nandini: TO HELL WITH THIS PARTY!!
She walked away. As she walked past Cabir, she looked at manik. He rolled his eyes, she could sense his pain. The wound Dhruv's words had created. She wanted to take away all that pain.
Cabir walked towards her and hugged her.

Cabir: I'm proud of you. Jo tumne kiya, that needed a lot of guts. Waise yeh speech Tum kal raath se prepare kar rahi ho Na? It was too good, u see!

Dhruv was feeling guilty. He felt too bad.
Alya walked to Dhruv and slapped him too. He just closed his eyes, taking it as a punishment for the words he spoke.
Alya(soft voice): I can't believe I loved you.
Mukti nodded her head in disgust and both the girls walked to Manik.

Dhruv turned to leave.
Manik: buddy!
He spread his arms gesturing for a hug.
Dhruv fell on his knees.
Dhruv: maaf karde
Tears rolled down.
They remembered their childhood fun, high-school pranks, their jokes, chasing, teasing and their love for each other. All the memories gushed in..

Manik too fell of his knees
Manik: maaf kardiya

Cabir: ab yeh maafi bhi kaafi ho gayi, utho dono.
Both of them stared at Cabir.
Cabir: kya propose karna hai kya? Manik, Nandini tujhe zinda gaad dallegi! Aur tu Romeo, dussre gaal par bhi thapad padegi Alya se...
Mukti and manik got confused.
Cabir: Alya se, mujhse , muktii se.. I meant generally humsa se. Lips ka kiss hogaya... I mean tounge ka slip hogaya...
Alya and Dhruv blushed.

Cabir: hello, challo Nandini mathe ki manan baki hai.. Jitna ussne sunnaya hai Na, use ke likely pehele 5 packets glucose le chate hai..
Manik punched his shoulder and the rest smiled.




Index
Part1: above
Part2:page 3
Promo: page 4
Part3: page4
Part4: page6(18+ content)
Part5:page 7



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Soumya.mufc thumbnail
Posted: 10 years ago
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I really hope this happens. Manik needs to realise that Nandini is always there to protect him.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Soumya.mufc

I really hope this happens. Manik needs to realise that Nandini is always there to protect him.


Ikr... This happens, then probably Manik and Nandini can get back together!!?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great job! You should continue further :')
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Posted: 10 years ago
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👏 loved it... but our cv s r unpredictable ... bt i really want Nandini's tht side towards Fab5 specially tht
"Nandini: I can't believe you said all that Dhruv. The truth is all of you just can't see the good in him. You just know the bad of him. And trust me, if not for him, Fab5 would not have been fab5. It would have broken several times. For the ego and problems who have, fab5 would have broken down in more than 5 pieces."
part... its needed to show tht fab4 xcpt Cabir tht this FAB5 tag they r carrying so prodlly is actually due to manik's selfless efforts..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this was amazinggg lovedd it cabir yahan bhe rocked ... hope nandini says all this .. and manik realizes his love for her
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awsm
Loved it
U shud continue this
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Posted: 10 years ago
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How I wish this happens it's so good :) :) :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Rocking os! Luv our Sherni. I also want nandu to give dhruv an earful.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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If Nandini did anything like that Manik will eat our Nandu alive...but if anything like this happens i will be over the moon.
im desparatly waiting for the day Manik will stand up for Nandu in front of Fab 4.
Manik loves Nandini but in front of his friends his love for Nandini takes the back seat.So far it has been friends before love.

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