MANAN-FF He is the storm of my life PART-31 updated pg110 - Page 57

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eymane thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
Hii
I read ALL parts just now! This ff is seriously awesome! You need to send me more of your writings they're awesome! Can't wait to know what happens next! Continue soon and please PM me if possible :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
yaar...its awesome...👏👏👏
manan awww...so cute ,naughty and romantic...😉😳😊
dishank oho...such a creepy...😡

and amazing precap...poor cabir...waiting for his reaction...🤣

pls continue soon...take care
thanks a lot for the pm...🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...!!
I loved it...!!
Waiting for next update...!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
iam speechless
it was so romantic one luved it
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Posted: 10 years ago

The manan somehow slept so that they can see each other in dreams again

IN CABIRs ROOM

Cabir was dribbling basketball in room nd accidentally it hit the jar of water falls on sunny's bed yup his roommate

Sunny-kya hai yaaar

Cabir-sorry bro galti se hogaya koi nhi iss bed pe soja lakadi jaisa toh hai tu jayada space nhi lega

Sunny-wat tumare saath

Cabir-abey dar math gay nhi hoon mai kuch nhi karoonga tujhe

Sunny gives a lite smile

Nd the night passes

Next day morning

Manik getting ready for practice

IN CABIR's ROOM

Cabir gets up nd finds sunny smiling nd feeling shying nd talking to somone on the laptop

Nd the moment he sees cabir seeing he closes his laptop

Cabir-kaun hai bolna

Sunny -koi nhi hai u have to go for practice naa toh goonaa

Nd knock nd someone comes sunny keeps the laptop on the table nd leaves to see

Cabir quickly opens it-saala apna girlfriend chupa raha hai

Cabir ons the laptop nd shocks to find a guy tat too half naked in split sec he shuts the laptop

Sunny-gets shocked to see-nd terrified

Cabir-uuu r gay. Ohhh freak I slept wid a gay nooo

Sunny-noo I didn't do anything

Cabir-shouts just shut up just shut up

Sunny-plzz don't tell anyone

Cabir-tat ur a gay aren't u a gay .damn it y didn't u tell tat

Sunny-feels -enough -yes iam gay iam gay -do you roam around saying iam straight or iam interested in girls u don't naa

Cabir-damn it because its normal usual thing

Sunny -and this is usual for me nd sits down crying

Nd with people were ear dropping at their convo nd as they se people luv to make gossip out of ones misery nd love to spread such news

Cabir storms out nd goes into wardens room

Cabir-I want to change my room

Warden -can I kno y

Cabir-I can't share room with a gay

Warden-wat rubbish u seems more gay like to me humesha uss manik se chipke rahte ho nd sunny is so quite boy don't' blabber anything

Cabir-I am shifting I dunno

Nd gets out nd changes his room to maniks

Manik-kya hua bey y sudden room change

Cabir-thinks to tell then thinks y to disclose somones sceret -kuch nhi aise bhai ke saath rehne ka maan aagaya

Manik-chal practice ke liye chalte hai

SUNDAY is basketball match organized by instutite to refresh students mind

So as it was dropper senior versus 12th fresher

So it was practice session manik ,cabir were practicing

Veebha-guys seriously girls team mein hardly anyplayers hai 12th freshers say

Cabir -kyun

Veebha-only three player we need two more

Manik-two more

Cabir-sees nandini nd navya coming -hogaya team complete

Veebha-wat

Cabir-calls bhaaab nd realise veebha mam standing-I mean nandini

Manik-areyy unko

Nandini-waves hand nd says yaa coming

Nandini-kya hua

Navya-hum jaate hai

Cabir -navya ji aapki bhi zaroorat hai

Manik-cabir r u sure

Veebha-girls would u participate for the basketball match

Navni together-wat!!!!!

Navya-hum jaa rahe hai hume basketball ka B bhi nhi aata

Nandini-mam seriously we don't kno to play . I can at max dribble tat too wen no constrictions

Cabir-don't worry mam there is still 3 days as -they said dribbling todi bhut aati haina so we can train tem

Manik-looks questioning cabir

Veebha-great than u guys r in get ready with practice

Cabir-smiles- see problem solved

Navya-problem start 3 day din mai basketball sikhane ke liye tum kaun Michael Jordan ho

I mean seriously

Nandini-navya sahi bol rahi hai cabir

Manik-3din bhi nhi hai cabir 2 din mai basics nd 1 din team ke saath practice bhi nd saath mai humara bhi match hai

Cabir-nothing is impossible guys abhi practice shru karte hai

HERE in the class sunny enters

Everyone- looo gay aa gaya

Sunny -feels bad

Dishanak-oye mere pass mat baith dur haath tera type ka nhi hoon mai

Sunny-feels so insulted he rushes out of the class crying nd goes back to his room nd locks himself

IN BASKETBALL COURT-

Cabir-manik u nandini mai iss navya ji ko sikhata hoon

Navya-humee nhi sikhna tumse

Manik smiles-its ok navya I will train you

Nandini-hwww mera devar the beshttt hai so u train me ok

Manik-reallyy

Nandini-yaaa really

Cabir-bhabhi hai kiski manik pity u

They practice

For an hour

Manik-chal break lete hai

Navya-haan hume bhut zaroorat hai isiki hum pani peene jaaa rahe hai

Nandini-mai bhi aati hoon bottle leke wait

Cabir-snatches the bottle from nandini-mai leke aata hoon u wait

Navya-gives wat the look.

Manik nd nandini alone in the ground

Manik-hws it going

Nandini-tum bhi toh yaha the dekha toh hoga

Manik was dribbling the ball

Nandini -show off haan

Manik-smiles -ofcourse aapni girl ke saamne hi toh show off kar raha hoon ny problem

Nandini-blushes with tat

Manik hormones start working in jet speed wen he sees her blushing uff her shy smile

Manik pulls her to a corner

Nandini-gets surprised

Manik-ye tum jaan bhuj ke karti hoona

Nandini-asks cutely wat manik

Manik-tis nd leans in close nd was in mood

Nandini interrupt-aah manik tum itne lambe kyun hoo I always have to struggle

Manik-smiles nd sees the basketball nd puts it down

Nandini-wat is dis

Manik -stand on it

Nandini-I will fall down

Manik-mai hoona

Nandini-fine manik if I fall down iam gonna break ur legs

Nd keeps her leg nd was about to roll but manik catches her nd she clutches his t-shirt nd shuts her eyes

Manik-dosraa bhi rakhoo

Nandini-manik gir jaungi

Manik-trust me

Nandini -keeps the other leg too first imbalance but later stands on it

Manik-open ur eyes

Nandini-opens her eyes nd the sees straight into his eyes-manik yaha se tum zayda ache dekhte hoo

Manik-smiles -nandini-u r pagal nd hold her waist tightly

Nandini-takes her hand from his shoulder to his face nd cups them

Nd both were about to kiss


Cavya-*cough* cough*-kuch toh sharam karlo

Nandini-trembles nd manik lifts her up so tat she doesn't fall

Cabir-nandini r u fine

Nandini-gets down iam

Navya-manik ke hote hue nandini ko kya hoga

Manan-both together practice start karee

After practice both go for attending classes

Manik nd nandini parallel to each other

Nandini opened the notebook nd saw a paper

Nandini-opened it nd started reading

Nandu ,kaisiho tum I know achi hogi ,iam very happy to know tat u r into engineering.

I really wish u get into in iit ,I kno u would be wondering who iam .i nandu I miss you very much

Each nd everything u cribbing while studying together . (nandini's heartbeats were increasing with each line)

u hate to play basketball .wen I use to compel u for company .i kno u were hurt to kno I was in such

situation but seriously I never thought to hide it from u but I knew he would destroy ur life too. Thats y !!

I kno I was wrong about leaving everyone nd going far I realise now .but its too late to realise .

I was scared tat I shouldn't effect you nd ur career .and I didn't want my parents to get embrassed by me

.i knew tey to cann't imagine a teacher culd do lyk tat to a student.

i can't meet u nandini I can't because iam no more

That sujata who was u r friend .iam bad now nd I don't want u to even see me like this.

Nandini please forgive me .on the first place I shouldn't have wrote this letter at all .but culdn't help myself from talking to u aleast by the letter.

.nd u will be always there in my prayers miss you

Yours

Sujata

P.S-plz don't even try to find me . I don't want to hurt u more

Manik-sees nandini crying

Nandini-takes her bag nd rushes out of the class .

PRECAP

Nandini slaps sujata

Sunny tries to commit suicide

Navya blames cabir for being so

here is todays update double dose ican't promise but shayad midnight post ho sakta hai.
nd next update is too much dhamaka .

and haan comments plzz😃 and likes too😳


Edited by aryapk1997 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
omgg dis is sooo...precap was
m speechless...sorry...thoda tim agega normal hone me...bt seriusly well done ...

nice update
do continue soon...if possible today plsss😃😕😉😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
will try for sure if happens will post it after 8PM only
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Posted: 10 years ago
OMG! can't believe Cabir's rxn to Sunny... and the precap is so sad... but loved the cute MANAN moment and the letter frm sujata.. very curious.. can''t wait to see what happens next
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice nice..
but chhotu tha bht!..
itna chhotu update koi karrta hai writer!!
waiting waiting..
ek aur...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: RomComFan

OMG! can't believe Cabir's rxn to Sunny... and the precap is so sad... but loved the cute MANAN moment and the letter frm sujata.. very curious.. can''t wait to see what happens next

but cabir never wanted to disclose his secret but it the boys outside the door spread it.
cabir's reaction was like tat as his character was shown to be flirt kinda he use to joke around but wen he really had a situation like tat he culdnot take it

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