MaNan One Shot - Through Your Soul. - Page 2

RES.

Awesome..

You wrote this for your exams. Wow I'm sure you'll get full marks. Love to read it from Nandini's pov.

Originally posted by: MaybeSomeday...

RESERVES!!

editing.

you know I love reading anything you write because it's so poetic and beautifully penned. Not only do you write with such precise clarity and depth and beauty, but the words you write just strike a chord in us, they hit so hard and make us feel, they're so soulfully penned, they're so serene and so so pure, so innocent yet so deep, the pictures they conjure of pain and silence and love. WOW.

^^^^^And you know that your day will go just amazing when Rida fangirled over your words :') How much I love you Anaconda 🤣 Your words do make me feel good about my writing too :') Matlab there is real world where no one finds my writing good enough, its atmost average for them and there is you people who restore my faith in my own capabilities. matlab I don't even know what to do with myself sometimes toh! Sigh! Such pathetic life I have sometimes. But then you people are here making me forget about my own life. I wish you all were here for real instead of the ones I live with :')


Budhhee you know how much I really love anything you write but that amplifies when it be about our boy! Wow, AHH I love reading him when you describe him because you do it with so much beauty and purity and you do it so on spot.

^^^^Same dude! When you do Manik na, it feels as if you're living him, like really, additively living him which I always fail to do with my words. I understand my characters but you LIVE them and I fall in love with you all the more because of your words.

You not only described Manik but Nandini too and I adore adore adore it! This is one fine masterpiece and just gets through my heart and make me all fuzzy and warm inside.

^^^YOU KNOW I AM HAVING THIS DREADING FEELING that I might loose my grip on Manik with the way I am indulging myself so much more in Nandini. Its creeping me out. Also the way MPS be trolling MPS is astounding😲


The whole mention of eyes throughout was so intense, his eyes, damn and how beautifully you penned all of it. I can't think of the words to describe it because it's that that good! I BE SO PROUD OF YOU.

^^^DUDE I LOVE MY LANGUAGE PAPER FOR ALWAYS COMING UP WITH TOPICS I CAN DO WONDERS ON Eyes be my favourite part of human body beside skin ❤️

Babies are so beautiful and you got Manik and Nandini both so spot on here!
He loves her so so much, and so does she. Their love is so beautiful, you just want to keep floating amidst it.

I know right? Tabhi even after so much done to storyline and their character we are still sticking here :') Babies are pure love :')

AHH WORDS BE FALLING LESS. THIS IS SO SO GOOD and the way you described his vulnerability, the beauty of their relationship, the reasons she's fighting for him, the wonderful poetic usage of words. SO SO BRILLIANT. And always love the starting quotes you use.

^^^^ EEEkkksss, Thank youuu 😳 I don't even know how did I fall in category of poetic. When I see my hubby writing na all I can do is worship her words because she is THAT good. What she writes is what I'll call poetry I toh don't write kuch bhi uske saamne 😆 AND ME TOO LOVES THE STARTING QUOTES I WRITE!!!! 🤣

You've described him so perfectly and her that i can't add anymore.
JUST SO HAPPY AND PROUD OF YOU BAE. ;')

^^^ *Parties around coz my second half be so proud of me* :')

LOVES YOU KAY?

Originally posted by: rubys07

Res coz padhai.😭

Edited.
Let me dance first.

On your face Suha!

She Edited!

She loves me more!

MY BRO BE AWESOMESAUCE 😎

Sigh. One of the best things about your writing is that when I read, I don't feel like I'm reading, I feel like I'm living them. They are just buzzing with this life and whenever I read it's like they are crawling slowly into my heart and leaving a permanent mark right there. Scary what mere words can do to you. But this is what happened here too. My baby, mera Manik, through Nandini's eyes, through her words- I feel like I can feel her thoughts, I can touch her words. Brilliant.

Just abhi I said to Rida that I don't feel I live them and here you come and say this. Oh what Irony 🤣🤣 I loves you so much Bro, okay?

Kay I tried to be poetic and failed. But I tried.

You gotta try harder and more harder! You can do it, just the right pressure and you'll get to the highest level.☺️

SiStah it's LOVE. It's so, so, so beautiful I wish the creatives of the show could read this and know there is this awsometastic writer and get you to write scenes like this. Seriously.

Eeeksss, you know just right how to flatter me bro :') best BRO EVER!

I'll make sure you smile the smile that brightens up your eyes.

And I will make sure that it is I that resides in your eyes.

Can it be anymore perfect?

Originally posted by: KaShforever06

Awesome..

Each and every word describe their emotions perfectly..

Every feeling is coming straight thorough the words...
Absolutely Amazing Os..