KY2 Fable:[Chap 1]:|| The kid and The doll ||

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Posted: 10 years ago
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A boy is carrying a beautiful doll and encountering her mother she tries to hide it but fails...
Mother: Manik...Why do you have this doll with you? This does not match our class throw it away right now.

Manik: No mom, I won't ...this one is special for me...I know it is so tiny...but it glows when it is dark...it shines for me...

Mother: Are you listening to what you are saying? I know you...you will lose your interest in it soon...

Manik: No mom...I once gave it away for Dhruv becoz he liked it...But he did not take care of it properly and the doll stopped shining...so I took it back...I cannot live without it...it only shines for me...I'll keep it with me hamesha

Mother: I gave you an expensive guitar remember...that what you should play with most...and you also ignoring you friends I heard...I know this doll is responsible...

Manik: No mom nothing like that...you will never understand me ...I hate you

Mother Thinks (What a silly boy...Dhruv must not have charged that tiny doll properly...and he thinks it only shines for him...poor kid... you are so blindly in love with that miserable thing
I know how to make him hate this doll...you are wrong Manik...I know you..I'll make you throw it yourself...)

Manik's friend Cabir comes to visit him and finds Manik crying...
Cabir: What happened Manik?
Manik: Look my doll is not glowing any more...it is not shining...how can it not shining

Cabir is smarter ...

Cabir: Have you charged it properly...there must be some reason...you should take it for repair...
Manik: No...it does not matter...it should have shined for me ...know matter what...
Cabir: You are unnecessarily getting angry...calm down...we have find out the reason
Manik: baas...I hate this doll...It betrayed me...I'lll never play with it again...I'll throw it away...
But he could not throw it away totally...he puts it in the store room and starts playing with guitar turning all the lights

Cabir: Why are you doing this...
Manik: Becoz I don't want light anymore
Cabir leaves...

After a few days Manik starts missing his doll badly...he goes back to where he put it...but it is not there anymore...he searches everywhere...his mom says,
Mom: Manik...it was not working anymore...it must have been thrown away with all the other useless staff...anyways...it was bound to happen sooner or later

Manik feels more hurt than ever...and it's beyond repair

Moral: When you think you love someone, expect trust, but more than that, you need to accept the faults, otherwise...😭


Don't you get it Manik!!!

Edited by Manan_aRMAAN - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good one, u r rite ... we don't knw what we got until it's gone , sad but true .
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow loved it
very nicely written
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Posted: 10 years ago
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but in the show he feels she has betrayed her
he is angry and hurt right now
i am sure he will slowly cool down
then he will be in his senses
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Posted: 10 years ago
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please write more of such stories
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: rima4ever

but in the show he feels she has betrayed her
he is angry and hurt right now
i am sure he will slowly cool down
then he will be in his senses


but he is pushing away her so hard...it may make things worse...
he is acting out of anger...and act of anger always end up in regret...never differs
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Posted: 10 years ago
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well written...👏
thanks a lot for the pm dear...take care😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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such a beautiful story
i so wish in real sense the stpry ending will be diffrent and manik will soon realsie his mistake
please do continue
bye sumi
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks for the responses...I don't know I will be able to write any chap 2...a new fable... again...but I really wish...hope ky2 inspires me again...hopefully in future tracks
if any of you like to get pm for my writings and updates...please feel free to pm me...I will remember you and buddy you

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